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Robin

@Robin_M

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#81

"like chocolate sauce pouring over French vanilla ice cream"
ahhh what a yummy metaphor!
jia im slightly drooling, ok maybe a lot drooling...not sure if it is because of this mouth watering description, or because of armaan hamilton...most probably a combination of both!!! hehe
armaan+french vanilla ice cream+chocolate sauce=robin wants!

awesome begnning girl! you know when i saw u had updated, the first thing i noticed was that "short" was missing from the title...i cant say im surprised! lol but im proud of you for accepting facts ;)
i LOVE the characters! u already know what im going to say about riddhima...do i really need to repeat myself?! lol but yes, she is awesome! caree oriented and dont give a damn about men :D
armaan is a sweetheart! being rich and famous u would expect him to be arogant and cocky, but im so glad to see you doing something different with him in this ff. its so refreshing to see him so down to earth! so thanks for the pleasant change :)
i already dislike his father, hes just blahhh. im actually reading this novel right now and the relationship between armaan and his father really reminds me of the father-son relationship in the book! why is it that rich successfull fathers are so arrogant and treat their sons like the are never good enough? and whats with them having to have the 'suitable' daughter-in-law...its the son who has to marry and live his life with the bride, not the father! shesh
so very well done in portraying this typical rich father-son relationship jia!
k enough of me...looking forward to the development, continue soon!

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#82

woah jia mam ji🤗 its rocking one⭐️ so he is a well know business man😊😊 and she caught his lie awesome😎 bachara Armaan🤪 ohh his father want him to marry and he don't want to marry the girl of his parent's choice😆😆😆 and who's his choose Ridhima😉😍 who is not Interesting in him🤣 really sound gud👍🏼 so will he fall😛 or pay back his father for rasing him up😳 and what's about Ridhima😊😊 plz continue it soon😛😉 & thanks for removing short word😆😆

A Loving Relationship Is One
In Which The Loved One Is Free To Be Himself -
To Laugh With Me, But Never At Me;
To Cry With Me,
But Never Because Of Me;
To Love Life, To Love Himself ,
To Love Being Loved.
Such A Relationship Is Based Upon
Freedom And Can Never
Grow In A Jealous Heart.
He is '~One In A Million~'

Edited by nidha1983 - 16 years ago

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Sunaina

@SunainaTM007

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#83

hey jia...

~reserved~will be back in a moment...

*edited*...okies back now...

ah well...part one...hmmmm...wat can i say abt it...it was awesome, fantastic, fabulous, superb n much more....*i know they hav become standard words of praise now...hehehe...*

okay...loved the start...riddhima's thoughts were very beautifully described....her frustration was explained really well...and whoa...riddhima---a budding model and armaan the CEO of a mobile company....sounds sooo much like the movie Ghajini but with a difference...the fake identity didnt go too well...and m sooo happy that she knows the real him...

and then loved the way her thoughts kept drifting to armaan...and also how she used to drive them away quickly as they were, in her words, upsetting her equilibrium...and so, her sole aim is make her mom n herself proud...well guess this explains to a certain extent why she has a permanent frown....

The flat two-dimensional images had in no way alluded to Armaan Hamilton's sheer animal magnetism or overwhelming masculine presence.

totally agree...pictures can hardly capture the aura in them...

and then,armaan....i really like him...*well not that i ever hated him..but guess this character is really getting interesting*...a man with a thirst to prove himself to his father...hmmmm...interesting...very interesting...and thinking abt riddhima already...

"You still need to grow up son." His father would say every time they talked.

and his father...gosh...looks like a self-centered man...even though he thinks that armaan is not ready but still wants an heir...man...dont like him one bit....

feel sooo sorry for armaan...he really is lonely...not sharing a bond with any of his parents...and m happy that he is gonna loosen himself up...and hope he proves that he has grown up to his dad...

and then the convo between armaan n his dad...gosh...how could anyone ask their children to repay for bringing them up...guess theres lot to be unfolded....

and oh so riddhima has refused for the dinner date...and armaan is not gonna let go that easily...

getting interesting....

and then...well..riddhima's story...

her life revolved just around her mother and her career.Riddhima had decided to leave no stone unturned to make her mother proud of herself.

awww....she really loves her mom...thats sooo good....well...the protagonists hav totally differents parents..one has a mom who is soo supporting and the other has parents who dont even care what their son wants or likes...

Superman might have X-ray vision, but he was fiction and no real person actually had the ability to touch someone else with a look. Only, she felt touched. Caressed even.

gosh...jia..how do u come up with such lines...and guess that superman is armaan hamilton..

She had not even seen his face yet and felt as if they were intimately acquainted.

awww....

like chocolate sauce pouring over French vanilla ice cream.😳😳

how jia...how..how..how do u come with such awesome comparions...love it....and btw this is combination that i love in my ice-creams...

and u deserve a big hug for such comparions.🤗.🤗

on the whole...awesome part....

and update soon[guess sensuous affair is next...right??? .....]

p.s. u removed the word short from ur fic!!! m not complaining, infact m really happy that i would be getting to read this story for quite a longer time now...anyhow, i was wondering abt that while reading the part, there is so much to be unfolded and jia says just three or four parts, how is that possible???? anyways...awesome part...

waiting for the next part...

Edited by SunainaTM007 - 16 years ago

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suvi_rox1

@suvi_rox1

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#84

hello jaan.........i was srsly waiting fr ur updates ....i never minded which one u will update though i was honestly waiting fr desire...bt this was also long due...never mind i can understand when u r handling 4 at a time...gosh how u managed ha...cause reading 25 ff at a ttime is nt that hard a task to do..bt to write a single appreciative prt is altogether different..ok coming back....riddhima knows abt armaan.....n here he was trying to fool her...a model n a rich millionare...sounds too much interesting n 1st prt u did enough justice cause it was a long prt i agree...revealed much abt the nature of the character..loved armaans dads control freak nature n attitude n armaan bouncing back with same force.poor armaan...
.bt wondering armaan is taking interest in riddhima at just the sight of her ..ufcourse he had held her n felt her body too...bt now i am srsly wondering if ridz will fall back fr him so easily or armaan had to manofy his employee cum model...cum career oriented womenl..to agree to date with him..

i dont know what it is in u..ur writing that just makes me love ur prts more n more altogether...srsly u r 1 of the best writers on IF..i m nt kidding..i mean that...hugs fr that.....n i am as usual desperately waiting to read more of this n tje other too

bye tc
n ya u didnt pm me...
so better do it nxt time or i will lag behind
hugs....

Edited by suvi_rox1 - 16 years ago

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saira

@.x.Saira.x.

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#85

amazing update jia👏

plz cont soon!

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Kaj!

@Kaj!

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#86

fabulous concept. im hooked already jia 😉

Edited by Kaj! - 16 years ago

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aravi

@aravi

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#87

reserved .. umm well dats it

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Soumya

@lilangel_soumya

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#88

hey jia,
nice part yaar
poor armaan, his father's bugging him so much
so now its gonna b idzi's 2nd encounter wid armaan
waiting 2 no wat'll happen
cont soon

luv,
soumya

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#89

Haww...😍...wt a part..! ❤️

So Ridz works as a model 4 Armaan's company's ad..kool..😉...well she's clever enuff 2 catch his white lie..😉...n she also adores him..so der r chances of her fallin 4 him..!

Armaan is aldready lyk in love wid her..n he thot he can fool her..😛...lol..but his Dad is mean..i mean he definately deserves some fatherly love..😊...but he cant get it! 😳...i hope his father realises wt a wunnerful family he has..soon..😊....Armaan has done a lot 4 his company n his dad still thinks he's immature n needs 2 grow up! 😲...

Armaan finds Ridz intresting 😉..gud 2 noe...i guess she did a gud thng by not acceptin his offer den..😛

Ridz had a dream 2 bcum a model..n m happy she got 2 fulfill it..n very mch wid her mom's support..! 😊...d way Armaan whistled wen she smiled was like 😉....too gud!....she must hv felt quite cautious bt it was Armaan afterall!...n she tuk time 2 realize tat too 😛..lukn fwd 4 more AR moments..😉

so it's not gonna b a short fic afta all..😛...well never mind..bt still it's gud..😉

Update soon

-Aish