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Rohit86

@Rohit86

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Posted: 16 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: aish_punk
reserved 4 nxt part 😛

😲🤔🤔...for next part😆😆
have to keep it for 15-20 days😛😛
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🤔😲🤔

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Sunaina

@SunainaTM007

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Posted: 16 years ago

#192

hey rohit...

thanks for the pm...

the second part was really nice...enjoyed reading it...

and loved the way riddhima was cursing muskaan abt having her marriage in the states...it was funny...

really liked the way riddhima was having thoughts abt armaan and armaan was flirting with her...and the way he went abt calling her different names to see her reaction was really cute..

and its good to know that they are attracted to each other...

and well nikki-armaan and abhi-riddhima...will be interesting to see how the story proceeds and how AR end up together...

the part was superb....continue soon...

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kunwar_rey

@kunwar_rey

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+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#193

aww it was a wonderful part!

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Riddhi

@Riddss

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#194

heyy dear,
nice part
continue soon
thanks for PM.
do continue soon
with ur other FF.

love
Riddss

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piyasa

@asmani

Dazzler

+ 8

Posted: 16 years ago

#195

very nice part dude..

do continue soon..

piyasa

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Prit_0987

@Prit_0987

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#196

Great part again Rohit,

Thanks for the pm

update soon😛

Plsss update contract too

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Tahira

@cutie13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#197

gr8 part

omg ar scene is really funny

hmm so niki is overly possesive about armaan.. interestin

cont soon

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Surbhi_rox

@Surbhi_rox

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#198

wow!! dat was a nice one.....

so finally AR met each other.....and armaan flirting as usual....

he was irritating her a lot.....both of dem were attracted to each other......n armaan not being himself......hmmm.......

and nikki, she has to come in between dem.......always....

n AR will also meet at Rm's wedding....coz Muskaan and Rahul are Riddhima and Armaan's friends respectively.....

n dat teekhi mirchi.....hot dog....hot chocolate was nice!!😆

it would be fun.........waiting to see what happens next......

gr8 update as usual.....

u know ur a fantastic writer......

n very small part?? n ur gonna give small one ......y??

i know its very difficult to manage 4 ffs.....ur doing a gr8 job....keep it up!!
thnx 4 d pm....

n continue soon!!

-love sanjana

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Soni

@Dreamy_Girl03

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Posted: 16 years ago

#199

Thanks for the pm rohit & sorry for being late was quite busy.

AR scene was funny.

Love it.... Great part.

Continue soon

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ritu

@janu1610

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Posted: 16 years ago

#200

Rohit U wrote this part nicely. Ultimately they met.
Armaan can't control himself in front of her.

Tum pe bhi koi to marta hoga,
ek pal bhi tumse bichadna is se koi to darta hoga,
tumhare gamo ko apni khushi se koi to bharta hoga,
tumhare liye duniya se koi to ladta hoga,
tumhare dil me bhi koi to rahta hoga,
tum pe bhi koi to marta hoga.

Love has such power to have faith in some one unknown.

For me--------> "its like a plunge in the dark not knowing where u will land'.

He moved one step ahead and further i think so many hurdles would be in his way .
first one is Nikki How he get rid of her?
Candy - lollipop.Both r too sweet ND u need some spice to rejuvenate ur life.

I love their conversation .Ridzi's Anger has some special effect on him .
His names hot burger,chocolate. tikkhi mirchi all were good but Teekhi mirchi suits her more.
I m looking for their interaction in marriage of R-M.
If he already have his life, his love Nikki than why he felt a chill in his spine when he touched her bare back.
Yeah be Ridz ki tarhan confuse hai ya phir lying to himself.
I wrote this for Nidha's blog. Hope u like this.
from Ridhima to Armaan
**************

"Har ek lamhe mujhe tera sath mehsoos hua,
Har waqt tere pass hone ka ehsaas hua,
Phir kyon aankhon mein nami si hai,
in tanhaiyon mein, udasi ki gehraiyon mein,
hum kyon fir doobtein hain,
Shayad isliye aaj phir ,
"TUMHE CHUKAR"
dekhane ki khwaeesh jaggi si hai."

love the way u wrote these scenes.
It was like watching GOLDEN MOMENTS of DMG again.
I always love to cherish memories of those days.

It's always nice to get a hug,
when we're feeling out of sorts or a little down,
or maybe as a reminder that we're cared about.

So I thought I'd send a great big hug,
to accomplish all those things.
And don't forget to pass it around,
to someone else who may be in need.

thanks for pm
love n hugs.
ritu,

Edited by janu1610 - 16 years ago

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