FF: [SG] Dare You To Move- Last Part P.143

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sayli

@saylithegreat

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

#811

GS1!!!!!!!!! ur exams rtye

all d very best huh👍🏼

do well!!!!!!n yeah i hope u dont forget anything lolz😆

anywasy cuming back to d update!!!!!!

1st of all looking at rv's name i was all red wid ange😡r

i wanted to cum n slap u lolz

but than looking at tht guy,i was like

GREAT!!!!!!!!!LOLZ😆😆

u knw i always wanted this to happen in d show,i wanted sam to feel d pinch by leting gunjan go

i wanted to see his anger by watching gunjan wid sumone else(rv)

looking at wht is happening in mjht

i dont think so this will happen lolz😆😆😆

but then it is rtyely said

jab saare doors bandh ho jaate hain,koi 1door zaroor open karta hain

n tht koi is U!!!!!!!!😆😆

LOVE U FOR THIS!!!!!!!

this part was amazing

i hav felt them smiling,laughing,enjoyinh,falling in love

n this update

made me see them crying!!!!!!😭😭

n trust me by the way u hav written i had tears in ma eyes!!!!!!!😭

lovely effort👏👏

loved d diary thing!!!!lovely wrds

n yaeh liked d way gunjan feels so good wid nupuz!!!they r like d best sis ever!!!!!!they even beat me n ma sis lolz😆

n yeah loving sheena so much!!!!!!!

i never thought tht i will love rv n sheena so much ever lolz😆

n yeah tht line which gunjan said to sam was so heart breaking😭

how do u think abt such lines yaa??????

n yeah lastly MaJan scene

wonderful!!!!!👏

so all in all a great n touchy update!!!!!

now i am so exicted for d last part!!!!!!!!

but its really goona be d last part kya??????😕

anwys lastly thank u for all d AW2R stuff

u make ma life so special

love ya🤗

GS2!!!!!!!(SEE i remember this tyme)😆

all d best

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#812

lovely finally samrat realize gunjan's worth.
god i am surprised at RV
he is good man.
do continue dear
bye sumi

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@thejazzgal

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#813

hey mimi dear!! awesome!! update!! totally loved it dear!!

sorry for not commenting 4 such a long tym....

plzz do cont soon...

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mimi0295

@mimi0295

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#814

Aweeh, thank you all so much!

I'll be late replying to ya'll [i blame school] LOL but I will reply to ALL of you! *blows a kiss* thank you guys SO much!

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Knowalot2

@Knowalot2

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#815

thanks 4 introducing RV😳
and oh oh!! i read a RV-samrat fight😆
btw RV has realised that she's her GF..wot's taking Samrat so long?!?😆

i loved the first sister part😳

totally rocking update😃 can't wait 2 see the last parts

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gunjan

@crystal angel

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#816

mimi my luv....m sooooo sowwiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeee 4 da xtremely late comment....😭 bt i was pretty busy wid college n all.....so pls 4give me...😭 now on 2 da actual comment......da second last part was amazin....call me weird bt i thot dat majan frndship was da best part of it....i especially luvd it wen gunjan confessed to mayank dat she luvd sam....m kinda sad dat dis fic's comin 2 an end tho.....sowen u wrie another 1 pls do in4m me...cheers gunjan

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astha

@Asthuox

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#817

*Shakes head *

Late comment.

* Holds ears *

Im so sorry dude!

@ Update.

This masterpiece is beyond words once again. Seriously whats the secret. Your FF is always beyond expectations. 👏 👏 👏

Januable +Grandilicously Fantabulous+ Wonderfully outstanding + Cweetilicous + Brilliant + Traffic + Action pack + Perfect = Beautifully written + Enjoyable + the best update.

@GunPur. Like I have mentioned before I love the way you laid out the characters bonding. Its one of the best parts of your FF and your writing skills reflect on the words to. From Nupur's concern side to Gunjan hiding her pain inside, its was very beautifully written. Typical Gunjan. Wants to keep all the pain inside. 😭

@ The diary. One of my Favourite bits in the parts. The love quote truly defined loved. It's so beautiful. I was watching AW2R. Jamie-Landon wedding. *sobs * 😭

@ the canteen moment. Sheena is such a bubbly sweetheart by god. Cant help but adore her in this FF. She knows what buttons to press at what moments. The whole teasing scene was really cute. 😳😆

@ Samrat POV . *glares * Ugh he makes me mad at times. Heck I still loved reading his pov. It ROCKED!👏 You expressed his feelings so brilliantly. Wonderful job. The audience can understand his mind state. His attitude towards gunjan and all. Very cool dude types. 😳

@ Tam. I love her. Sajan rehearsal moment. Awkward walls. LOL samrat finding the lines cheesy🤣🤣 . I wonder what he will say when he will confess. Erm. Yo chashmish I feel that thing for you? Aweeehhh but it will still seem adorable. 😆😳

I had this awkward wall thing 😆. We had a science mock and my crush was beside me. Distraction I tired to just look down on my paper and was doing a good job till i felt his gaze on me. and aweehhh he kept like putting his head down on the table and closing his eyes. He looked so cutee 😳😳 and my friends around me where like with there eyes look 😆😆 i was like stopppp *blush*

Back to the update 😆😆

@ 3 weeks later. RV and gunjan. Now that's what I want to see in the show right now then him being all-evil. I love the guy and all but I seriously don't want him to hurt dia man. RG..There friendship is seriously so cute 😛. Loved how you expressed gunjan thoughts on RV. I adored there bonding. And aw he even asked her for the spring dance. 😲 Whooaaa the guy is fast 😆😆

@SD. SAY WHAT??? Dia and samrat dating. Oh gosh couldn't this guy do something else to distract himself. 🤢

@Fight. Before it, talk about being jealous sammy😆. Cant even stand a guy asking her for dance. Then the fight. Loved the way you penned down this scene. Very realistic. Samrat feeling uneasy and when he sees RV touching her he loses his patience. 😲

That's it, I completely lost it! I push RV against the lockers, "Dude, get OFF her!"

I loved this line. Its reflects samrat feelings so well. He is jealous, he is angry, he loves her beyond anything. Its simply pointing out he cant stand some next guy with her. God knows when the heck he will realize. 😡

@ Gunjan's words. "He was just being a good friend!" she cries, "Something you could never be."

OUCH! The pain could be felt for samrat. I loved how you described his feelings. The whole.. it felt like I was the one who got punched. Aweeehh. You penned down his emotions in such a fantastic way. You did a awesome job once again mimi. 👏

@ RV-Sam. Can we please have this in the show then the creepy eye locks? There little bonding session was so cute. They seemed like those angry brothers making up. Oye oye. Them talking about gunjan. Oh of course she is worth fighting for. Thank god at least Sam realized this. 😳😆

@ Majan. We need to have a majan scene like this. Have you pmed pd yet?? Oh also I love you for adding it. It was simple and beautiful. Mayank understands the situation so well. I hope he can knock some sense in samrat. The hug was really cute. I liked how you portrayed there bonding. Beautiful done mimi. 👏

That was one breathtaking amazing update. Everything was perfect. You balanced it with all kind of scenes. 👏😳

Thanks for the pm 😳

Love you 🤗🤗

P.s p.s i miss yu. where is you?

Edited by Asthuox - 16 years ago

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mimi0295

@mimi0295

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#818

WIll reply to you all in a bit =)

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mimi0295

@mimi0295

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#819

Originally posted by: PaNa4ever
Lovely, LOVELY update!
Mims, I simply cannot believe that this is almost over! *cries*

Hey Borna!

Aweeh, thank you SOOO much for the lovely LOVELY comment 😆

AWEEH, dont cry *hands you box of tissues*

Thank god for RV, yaar! I LOVE him in this story.

😆 I've got a HUGE crush on him 😆 The FF wouldnt be complete without him, and plus, I needed a certain someone to end up with him 😛 *lips are sealed* And im SOOO glad you like him heree 😃

The way Samrat reacted to Gunjan and RV's friendship was awesome...Loved every bit of the "protective Samrat" scene, but at the same time, poor RV! He was only asking her to the dance, and he ends up facing Samrat's wrath...Aww.

Aweeh, I know what you mean. =(

I felt bad for RV while I was writing it, and honestly, the fight scene was so random... you'll see why I needed that in the end 😆

Mayu comforting Gunjan when she needs a shoulder to cry on (literally) was so sweet, one of my favorite scenes from this part!

AWEEEH really?!! 😳😳

Thank youuu, I never realized how many MaJan fans we had here. I added in that bit because of Jenny di 😳 I know she's a die-hard ArNayaian. 😛 Plus, I had a vision of this scene, Gunjan needs other friends. 😊

I have a feeling that Samrat isn't going to feel awkward during the play by the time the next part is up...Not after all of the stuff that has happened, I'm sure! The SaJan chemistry will be seen and felt, and I can't wait!

Aweeh babes, I hope I do justice to the last part. Im actually nervous, and excited at the same time. Nervous because the end will literally mark this FF...and excited because I have NEVER finished writing a story beforee!! 😆

Great job, hun!

Love ya!

Thanks sweets, right back at ya 😉