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^lol thank you!
And I know! I asked PD the same question, and this is exactly what she said "No comment" LOL
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Posted: 16 years ago
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DONE! Gimme 2 mins, posting right now!
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Part 2

- At Excel, the next day

The day was busy, students walked in and out of the campus. Everyone was split into their usual cliques; there were the Goths, the punks, the preps, the nerds, the populars, and the freshies (the new students @ Excel.)

Samrat and his friends sat near the steps, they're usual hang out spot. As always, they were surrounded by hundreds of girls, all of them claimed to be Samrat's girlfriend.

Samrat:

The spring dance was coming up, and all the girls wanted me to be their date. My phone was crammed with text messages from practically every single girl at Excel! Why couldn't they just stop wasting their time, and leave me alone? Don't get me wrong- I love the attention! I could never get tired of being in the limelight. But being the practical person I am, no matter how much I tried, I couldn't ever possibly take all of them to the dance. There was one of me, and thousands of them!

So, to help me out, Benji called upon the 'most happening' girls from Excel, and presented them to me. I was supposed to choose my date from one of these girls.

Benji: How about her?

I took a look. "You call her hot and happening? Dude, are you blind!?" I whispered into his ear. I guess being deprived of girlfriends for years caused Benji to turn to anyone.

Benji: Uhm… okay, how about her?

"Too tall."

Benji: Her?

"Too short."

Benji went through the whole line of girls, but none of them caught my interest.

"Benji, we've run out of girls! Looks like I'll have to go with Dia… again."

Benji stared ahead, half listening, half not.

"I wonder why we even wasted an hour doing this, when in the end, I'd end up having to ask Dia!"

Benji nodded, still spaced out, and staring ahead.

"Hey Benji! Are you listening? Let's leave dude. Basketball practice awaits us."

I was walking away when Benji grabbed my shoulder.

Benji: Dude, there's still one left.

"Huh?" I replied, clearly confused.

Benji: DUDE! There's still one girl left!

"Yaar, it's a waste of time. Let's leave!"

Benji: You haven't even seen her yet! C'mon!

He yanked on my arm. "Okay! Who? Where?"

I looked around; trying my best to 'look interested' just so Benji wouldn't feel that his desperate attempts went in vain (even though they did.)

"Dude, I don't see any other girl! C'mon, let's leave!"

Benji turned me around, and pointed towards her. My jaw dropped open. I tried suppressing my laughter, but it got the best of me.

"Benji! GUNJAN? You can't be serious!"

Benji didn't seem to think it was funny, and if he did, he was very good at keeping a poker face, an expert for that matter. Just when I was about to think that Benji had actually meant it, he burst out laughing.

Benji: Dude! Of course I'm not serious! You and Ms. Don't touch me? Hahahahah, that'd be priceless! Even if she was the last girl standing, I bet you wouldn't give her a second look.

We both shared a last laugh, and then raced off to the basketball court.

Gunjan:

The spring dance was coming up, and everybody was out hunting for his or her date, everyone- except me. I don't get why people waste so much time worrying about things like these. Take my di for instance. If she spent the amount of time she takes watching movies, gossiping, and reading Maya-pari, and replaced all that by actually studying and reading worthwhile novels, not only would she be smarter but also have a better academic future.

But what's really saddening is the fact that the only person who ever seems to agree with me on this is Mayank. But once di gives him one of her killer (and I'm not being sarcastic, I seriously mean KILLER) looks, he just ends up shutting up, leaving me alone and without anyone to support my opinion.

I walk into Excel, and right away, Dia hands me a box of who knows what, and tells me to go take it down to the storage room. Figures. She was probably waiting for me to get here just so I could be ordered around like her man slave. Okay, may be not a man slave, more like a woman slave.

"But Dia, I have to go get some books-"

Dia: C'mon doll! It won't take you long.

No! I always have to do EVERYTHING for Dia. Today, I will stand up for myself. I will NOT listen to her orders any longer.

"I'm sorry Dia, this is more important." As I say this, I feel so lighthearted. Wow. Standing up for yourself really does make you feel better.

I'm about to walk away when she grabs my arm.

Dia: Oh Gunjan! Please honey! I've been walking up and down the stairs ALL day, look at me! I think I chipped my freshly manicured nails… OH and my hair, it's a mess, but I'm not complaining! Anything for Excel! Please babes! Just this one last time.

And then she gave me her famous puppy dog eyes. "No Gunjan! Don't fall for it!"

Dia: Pretty please Gunjan! If not for me, then think about Excel. If I go, then all the preparations will come to a halt! And if that happens, it'll be a total disaster!

"Fine." I muttered. So much for standing my own ground.

There it is- the story of my life. Taking orders from Dia. Sometimes, I really wish I could be like Di. Outgoing, bubbly, brave, and most importantly… someone who can actually speak up for themselves and stand out.

Samrat:

"WHAT? CANCELLED!"

Benji: Haan yaar! Basketball practice is being called off today.

I stood there, feeling extremely pissed off. This wasn't fair, our practices were already cut down to three days a week, and we were entering the championships this year. Frankly speaking, we needed all the practice we could get (not that I needed it of course.)

"So is there a particular reason why our valuable session is being axed?" I asked Benji as if he had all the answers to my questions.

"SAMRAT!" I watched Uday run towards us. "SAMRAT! SAMRAT!"

Benji: DUDE! We're not deaf!

"Chill Benji, let him speak."

Uday came panting. "YAAR SAMRAT, BENJI! Woh… new. Teacher. Drama. Hot. Hayyee!!"

Benji: Dude speak in full sentences!

Uday: *clears throat* Actually, what I meant to say was… THE NEW TEACHER IS A BABE YAAR!

Everyone stopped and stared at us. Uday could be so embarrassing to be around sometimes, no scratch that. All the time! And typically, as soon as the word babe was heard, all the boys magically disappeared. During a game, they were slower than a turtle, and now look at them. Disgusting.

Uday and Benji were about to make a run for it too, but I grabbed both of them by their collars. "Hold up. So what were you saying about this teacher exactly?"

Uday: Arre where should I start? I was walking to the basketball court, when suddenly… the wind began to blow lightly through my hair. The sky split, and down came an angel from heaven. There she was, as soon as I set my eyes on her, I knew she was the one. Yaar! The Ding Dong bells in my heart began to play out loud! Tujhe dekha toh yeh jaana sanam! Pyaar hota hai deewana sanam!

Benji: UDAY! Cut it out! Get to the point, who is this teacher?

"And what does her coming to Excel have to do with OUR basketball practice?" I added making sure that my point was clear.

Uday: I was getting there! Anyways, so my heart went DING DONG DING DONG, and I walked towards her…

Benji: And then?

Uday: And then Deed's entered the picture.

We all knew how Uday's story would end. But unlike most of the time, this was actually interesting news. A new, apparently hot teacher. This I had to see for myself.

"C'mon dudes, let's go see who this teacher is."

Gunjan:

"New teacher?"

I just made my way back upstairs from the storeroom, and already we had a new teacher join Excel. This is how it was, everything happened in the blink of an eye.

Nupur: Haan! A new drama teacher, Ms. Tamana! By God, kya naam hai! CHAL NA! Let's go see!!

I followed behind di. I guess going to the library would have to wait yet again.

"Ms. Tamana." I thought to myself. How was I supposed to know that this new teacher would change my life forever?

Edited by mimi0295 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74
AAAAAAAAAAAA

OMG!!!

You're one cliffhanger lover are'nt you?

BY GOD!! Kya baat hai!!

😍😍 I want this to happen in the show!!!!!!!!

Samrat is sooo perfect as the college stud and Benji as the erstwhile best friend!
AWW poor Gunjan, just when she wanted to be forceful, its okay everyone falls for Puppy Dog Eyes!!

and yayie MAyUr!!! Killer looks!!


Overall a 10/10!!

ahhhhhh, I'll die waiting for the next part!!!

Mimi!!! You're awesome hun!!

Edited by sedna - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice Update Cake Chor!!
But u gonna make Sammy's character lovable later on na??
Cz I'm not liking this one...too attitudy =( Hopefully Gunji gonna change him...
But glad he is interested in any other girl either
And awwwww poor Gunjan, she is being bossed around by Dia and Benji/Sammy making fun of her =(
And oh Uday likes Ms Tamana 😆 And everyone gonna go check her out lolz!!
Wooow she is gonna change Gunji's life!!!
Can't wait for the next part!!

O no I'm working on my project at the same time so I'm here but I'm not here! Get it 😆
Edited by trouble_maker - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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MAPLE LEAF! I thought you LEFT! LOL
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awwww! Mimi, that was such a great part!!! I am still "Awww!"ing at the very last line...Gunjan is SUCH a sweetheart! I just love her...The poor girl is always being bossed around by Dia, and just when she tries to stand up for herself, she backs off...I can imagine everything so clearly, and that takes talent, yaar!
And hey, another glimpse at Sam's inner-feelings...He is so cute, despite all the attitude! He and Benji, gosh...For once I thought Benji was serious...He even fooled me! LOL!
Keep the writing going, Mimi! Can't wait for the next part!
Love ya!
~ Borna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sedna

AAAAAAAAAAAA

OMG!!!

You're one cliffhanger lover are'nt you?

😆 You caught me! I'm always one for suspense! ahahahahah

BY GOD!! Kya baat hai!!

😍😍 I want this to happen in the show!!!!!!!!
Hayyeee... I want EVERYTHING that happened in AW2R (except the ending) to happen in the show 😍 So to fulfill that dream, Imma revive the memories through my bakwas writing 😆

Samrat is sooo perfect as the college stud and Benji as the erstwhile best friend!
Aweh!! Im glad you think so! *trying very hard to develop characters*
AWW poor Gunjan, just when she wanted to be forceful, its okay everyone falls for Puppy Dog Eyes!!
LOL I fall for 'em every single time 😆

and yayie MAyUr!!! Killer looks!!
hehehe I knew you'd like that 😉😆

Overall a 10/10!!
😲 REALLY? WHOA! That's my FIRST ever rating on this FF! 😆 Thank you *takes a bow*

ahhhhhh, I'll die waiting for the next part!!!
hehe, don't die! PLEASE!

Mimi!!! You're awesome hun!!
Aweeeh Janu! No im not, you are! 😉 *hugs*

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: SRK-Kads4ever

Awwww! Mimi, that was such a great part!!!

Bornaa! *hugs you* 😆 Yaar, you all are spoiling me.. and im only on my 2nd part 😆 Too cutee, thank you!!
I am still "Awww!"ing at the very last line...Gunjan is SUCH a sweetheart! I just love her...
Aweeeehhh, Im still aww-ing after reading your comment! You're SOOO sweet! Thank you!
The poor girl is always being bossed around by Dia, and just when she tries to stand up for herself, she backs off...I can imagine everything so clearly, and that takes talent, yaar!
Ooh Borna, thank you!!! I'm so glad you liked that bit! Mwuahz! (oh, and please yaar.. Talent+Mimi goes in a sentence together once 'is not' is in the middle 😆
And hey, another glimpse at Sam's inner-feelings...He is so cute, despite all the attitude! He and Benji, gosh...
😆 I lovee how you all see right through Sam's 'hard cord' behaviour and find the sweet dude inside! Just wait and read, I'll make sure he lives up to ur expectations! Promise!
For once I thought Benji was serious...He even fooled me! LOL!
hehehe believe it or not, while writing.. I actually fell for it 😕 Dont ask how that works 😆
Keep the writing going, Mimi! Can't wait for the next part!
Hehe, aweh, I will hun! Thank you!!
Love ya!
Right back @ ya 😉
~ Borna

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: trouble_maker

Nice Update Cake Chor!!

Hehe, thank you Maple Leaf! 😉😆
But u gonna make Sammy's character lovable later on na??
Hehe, of courseeee I am!!
Cz I'm not liking this one...too attitudy =( Hopefully Gunji gonna change him...
LOL thank God SOMEONE notices he's loaded with 'tude! 😆 Don't worry, he'll change 😉
But glad he is interested in any other girl either
lol well.. atm 😛
And awwwww poor Gunjan, she is being bossed around by Dia and Benji/Sammy making fun of her =(
Poor Gunjan! I was trying really hard to get into her character.. 😆 (I know that's creepy) LOL But it's SO hard to write from a guy's perspective.. and her perspective, esp. when Im NOTHING like either of them 😆
And oh Uday likes Ms Tamana 😆 And everyone gonna go check her out lolz!!
LOL Imma try to keep the future storyline the same in this FF. Uday/Tamana will have like the Main Hoon Na storyline (b/w SRK-Sush) 😆
Wooow she is gonna change Gunji's life!!!
hehe, isnt that the perfect way to end off a part? 😆 I was running out of ideas. lol
Can't wait for the next part!!
Aweh, wont keep you waiting! Next part will be interesting (I hope) the play preps will start... SOOOO loads of SaJan together parts 😃
O no I'm working on my project at the same time so I'm here but I'm not here! Get it 😆
LOL I get it! I always do that 😆 Im writing the script for the Red Carpet @ the mansion! *sigh
Im tired.

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