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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

wow yaar lovely yaar samrat made her sing in front of all.

Aweeh, thanks! And yep- he sure did 😳
good man and what we are not even friends. etc.
Sorry about that. But this is supposed to be one of the BIGGEST turning points in the fic 😆
surely everything gonna change after play.
You can bet your money on that one 😉
and sheena knew it yaar that they love each other.
good going yaar
do continue dear.
bye sumi.
Thanks a ton Sumi! *hugs*

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsarah13

aww mimi 100 pages?kya baat hai!😆
Congrats! jus loved ur ff! its awesome!😊

Hey Sarah!!
Aweeh, Thanks!! 😆 Im so shocked, I cant even explain it!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: thejazzgal.s

awesome part!!!! tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good!!!! plzzz cont soooooonnnnnnnnnnnnn

Thank you so much!
I will 😉
Thanks Anjalika Khanna and pragya 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

*giggles* Mayank and Nupur are way too cute. I love how he called Gunjan his saali! And then the two began bickering again. Too cute.

😆 Aweeh, thanks so much! I'm glad you liked their little scene. I didnt know how else to fit 'em in 😆

But, again, SaJan are going to lose that friendship because both are just so insecure, about themselves and about their statuses. It's so sad, and sweet at the same time.
Sadly, that's EXACTLY the case. Samrat's just a tad bit too insecure about losing his image, but then again- you can't really blame the guy, because being cool is all he has. He doesnt have a "real" family, or any "real" friends (Give or take some)

I cannot wait for more!
Aweeh, I wont keep you waiting! 😛

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago

heyy mimi!!

hows ya??

firstly congo on 100 pages......that was really fast!!

secondly plzzzzzzz don't end ur FF soo soon....i mean it like just started and i'm addicted to it (i'm sure everyone else is too).....soo plzzzz write more than just 2 updates. ur FF is THE BEST i've read and i swear i don't want it to end…ever…..soo plzzzzz continue!!

ok coming to ur update it was fantastic, awesome , wonderful, superb, great, amazing, mindblowing, tooooooo good, fabulous, rocking, terrific................:)

loved the the hug from gunjans POV......it was beautifully written and considering that she is gunjan it was extremely realistic.

LOL at dia-uday.........she bullies him all the time.....poor uday

nupur came to know abt gunjan bunking classes and her being too friendly with samrat......she does have many sources...lol. Loved her showing so much concern for gunji.

Dia threw a party for sheena....wow!!

awww.......sam can't get his mind off gunji....soo cute

loved the sam-sheena convo for a change....lol

mayur r sooo cute......i loved their nok-jhoks abt the haircut.....lol

and the saali line.....OMG too good!!

awwwww.....sam is sooo januable....the way he made gunji fulfill her last wish....OMG!! and u wrote it extremely well!!

loved the gunji-sheena convo.......they way she made gunji believe that she and sam r more than frnds.

even benjis realized that sam and gunji r more than frnds.....when will they themselves realize so??

awww.....sam wanted to go and meet gunji when he saw her go into her room......so sweet!

lol.......sam used to get pissed when benji borrowed his clothes before but now he doesn't........and hes on time for lectures....OMG....gunjan has soo changed him and that too alot!

sam gets angry hearing the truth from benji.....lol

wonder how he'll be when he officially realizes that he loves gunjan....

once again awesome update....loved it completely!

thanks for the PM

continue soon.......

P.S.- thanks for making the part so long......

luv ya.....*hugs*

drishti

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: saylithegreat

oh god!!!!!!!😲😲

wht did u say GS1
ff will be wrapping in next two parts!!!!!!!
Sorry GS2 [btw, you remembered this time 😆... are you feelin' alright? 😕]
Sorry babes... it's just how things are na? It'll have to end eventually!
NO plzz dont do this
so soon????
no yaa plzz
Im sorry!!
I did mention when I started this fic that it was gonna be short! Initially, the game plan was about 10 parts.. but then I went over that 😆 That, and the fact that I can never stick to oen story. I dont want to discontinue this FF like I did to my other one... and let you all down, so I'll give this a nice/sweet/proper ending. 😊
include sum more stuff but plzz dont wrap it so soon
i am deeply attached to this ff
u knw in ma free tyme i just cum n read all d parts again
Aweeh!! It's not like I'll never write another fic again babes 😆
I will, pakka promise. I actually have a few things planned out, I'll let you all know more about that when it's finalized 😉
always i decide"GS1 ki jyada tarif nahin karni hain,warna woh fly karti rahegi"😆but u knw ur creativity always makes me appreciate u👏👏
AWEEEH!!!!! *hugs* You're CHOO CHWEET GS2!! You never forget to leave a comment- that's HUGE for us GS's 😆
And yeah, they make my FLY HIGH IN THE SKY 😳 Love you! <3
plzz dont wrap it so soon
loved this part
this is gonna be d major realization rtye😉
Right! 😆 You'll see what happens next 😉
liked d way sheena talks to gunjan,tht gal is of full use here lolz😆
I KNOW 'EH? 🤣🤣🤣 Damn Sheena, if only you were of any good in the show!! 😆
Do you KNOW how painful it is to write GOOD things about her in the Fic? 🤣🤣
n yeah benji-sam's convo is also great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you!
sajan must realize everything soon,but no then u will wrap up d ff
then take more tyme lolz😆
LOL aweeh, you're so sweet!! 😆
MAYUR r great!!!!!lolz mayank's 4th love 😆
very cute!!!!!!
LOL thank youuu!!!! I think my next FF venture will be on MayUr 😉😆 I just adore them!
n Dia-Dodo r too funny!!!!!
hahha, thanks!! 😳
liked d whole singing thing
this all only sam can do for gunjan
very sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!😍
AWEEEH!! Thanks a ton sweets! LOVE YOU!!! *hugs*
GS1 dere r certain eye catching lines tht brought tears to ma eyes!!!!!!😭😭😭
HAWWWEEEE!!! No crying!!!! 😡 Varna I'll get Sheena after you 🤣🤣

Then why did it hurt so much when I imagined my life without him? Why did my heart ache?

Somehow, I feel that it's my responsibility to make her happy.
GOSH!!!!!!BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN👏👏
AWEEH!! *takes a bow* Thank you so much!!! 😳
very well done👏
thank u once again for giving me JL memories!!!!
n yeah u got d book rtye?
read it soon
Anytime babes!
Nope, not yet. The library will call when the book comes 😆 Im SOOOO excited for it!
u will fall in love wid JL all over again!!!!!😍
*sighs I love them more then anything atm, I wonder what'll happen after reading about the ORIGINAL J-L 😳
lov ya🤗
sayli/GS2

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Cutie_tajju

Hey Mimi !!!

Hi sweetie! 😊
I have been reading this FF for a long time but never got round to comment on it.. :) But now i cudnt resist.. :D
Aweeeh!!!! LOL you know, it's always nice to discover new readers! *hugs* I'm so glad you've been reading my fic 😊

And I must say WOW !!! i mean fantastic job ! That last part has me completely and totally shocked... I mean i know Sam's lying about him and Gunjan being just temporary friends...or IS IT???

OMG were you really? 😲 *does happy dance* I was hoping to get more shocked reactions 🤣
Hmm, about your question, you'll just have to wait and read to get the answer 😉
I mean, i never thought he would say that... I mean, just think aboout Gunjan yaar... I mean even if she is "relieved" at the moment, m surrrreeee she wud be ecstastic when sam says he loves her... which i hope they both realise soon ... :D
Haha, aweeeh!! 😆
They'll realise soon, promise 😉 Let's just say their little declaration will be cliched {no lies there} but it will be unique aswell. Something SO expected that it'll be UNEXPECTED 😆 Hope I made some sense.
Anyways....
Continue soon.. :D
I hope this is one happy ending story.. ::D:D:D:D:D::D:
Aweeh, no deaths- guaranteed that! 😉]
Thanks so much for reading/commenting babes!! *blows a kiss*
tc
Tajju/Cutie

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Posted: 16 years ago
coco....how do u do it...like really...if sam's POV on the hug gave me shivers...gunjan's POV gave me the flu.... 😆 ...
can u get a little more vivid about them next time...coughs...take the cues from Naz 😆 😆
but yeah the 🤬 tension gave me pneumonia...

u had to show a screaming dodo...lol..runs to save him...but no strength...thanks BB nups comes and saves him...dia u on my hit list too after the kameena...

which brings me to the next one...WHAT HAVE YOU DONE.....after pneumonia u gave me SHOCK....U ruined Sheena's character...completely..she aint Kameena anymore... 😒 hey GB wat will happens to my songs...u took away my job in recession.... 😭

finally...sam's execution of the PLAN....with our fav Benji sent me in coma.... 🤢

but then I hear some sounds on my death bed..thinks its the yamraj (god of death)..but no its a familiar voice...saying a familiar line..ballo ko mat chuo /9dont touch my hair)...and nups saying u need a haircut...oh no my mayu needs me...jerks up..takes all the IVs off me..and runs to save my AB...and his hair...and that is the story of my life..or rebirth per se... 😆

well as usual dint make sense and dint stick to the topic..o well but i can take such liberties only in yer post...hugs...
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: khushali16

lovd it.......tooooooooo good.....but dis iz gonna wrap up in 2 partz???........why mimz why???..........why do u like to kill me???.....but m happy dat dey r gonna fall in love sooooo soon....happy n sad......lolz.......so,update soon...byeee...gtg

Hey Khushali!!
Thank you so much! And yeah babes! Aweh no- Im not killing anyone 😆 Honest!
It's just that ... I cant drag this story forever, it's gonna have a cute end babes!
And it's not like I'm not ever gonna write again! I'm NOT quitting, I'll be back with more... 😆
Plus, you never know- I may write a sequel to this FF 😛 [no promises]
Dont be sad!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: _Monu_

heeey mimi!!!

Hey Monuu!!!
love the part!!
Aweeh thank you!
but the ending was too sad!!
pls next updt make a happy ending!!!
LOL aweeh, sorry! Next part will be kind of sad/happy... last part will be ALL happy (maybe some emotional scenes here and there)
great job !! full of scenes!! lol!!
LOL thank you! 😆
ok and babes...
4 ur 100 pages!!!
AWEEHH! thank you so much!!!
LOVE THE UR FF!!!
Awee 😳 Love you babes!
SEE YAA!!!
AND...
^ LOL I cant see that 😕😆
But thank you so much!

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