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Posted: 16 years ago
good one
samrat didn't want to be seen with gunjan.
oh ho but i am really liking this fic. i have read A WALK TO REMEMBER so i can guess where the story is leading.

do continue dear.
bye sumi
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Posted: 16 years ago
thnx for updating!!!luved it!!plz pm me and do cont soon.luv your ff.
ynaiita
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Posted: 16 years ago
mimi.. hi dear... First of all hugs for this ever charming part!!!!😃😃😃jaani u are an awesome gurl!!!😃😃 By the ways PIC, loved each and every single word of part5.. PIC me too infected by Nickelback band...so i'll be more than happy if u include more of their songs!!!😃😃 and hold on for 1 min...wats it?? sammy admits that Gunjan is different and that he loves spending time with her😳😳wow!!!⭐️ Gunjan was so adorable!!!!😳 so Mimiikutty, that was all in all 1000/100 and do rock with another stunning eppi!!!😳😳 loves Jaanu aka PIC PS::
Dear..ur ROKA siggy is just WOW!!!!😳😳
and its okkie u decieded to discontinue Opposites..it hurts😭 but its okkie!!!😃😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey i am new and i just caught up with your ff and I ended up reading it 3 times. I am officially a fan of your ff and i am waiting desperately for the next part (i know it takes time to update i am writing a sajan ff and i write it down on good old paper before i type it on MS Word which is a long and time absorbing process so i totally understand why you take a long time to update).I love how you did not change gunjan's character it's really difficult to understand gunjan and hence writing through her POV is also difficult so kudos to you. 😃⭐️
PS - i love the song you chose i keep listening to it my freinds are freaked with my fixation with that song
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Posted: 16 years ago
sry i knw u gonna kill me for such a late reply
this is so nice!!!!!!!!!!!👏
u brought back all d memories of landon n jamie😳
tht awkward silence,diff convo n yet such a lot of unshown love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳
it was awesome mimz
i felt like i was rtye dere observing them!!!!!
the way both of them r mingling wid each other,brings a smile to ma face😊
loved thier whole ride,the park thing
i was actually imagining sajan on swings!!!!
gosh they looked so cute!!!!!😍
mimz i feel like giving u a tight hug!!!!!🤗
u made ma day!!!!
loved this part more than any thing
i already re read it so many tymes!!!!!😆
thank u for this!!!!
keep updating
n yeah howz u btw?we dont meet only in d mansion
love ya.......🤗
sayli
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Posted: 16 years ago

O-M-G?? You updated. YAYYYYY!! * Jumps up and down *

Asthu gone technically more Krazyy?? I write some random stuff! 😆

Miimii babes🤗. Omg omg omg First thing a tight jadoo ki jhappi for you🤗 for writing such a beautiful update. I cant tell you dude how much I LOVED it!!😳😳

It was Breathtaking wonderful + Brilliant + Grand + Traffic + Amazingly Awesome + Outstanding + Cuteeeee + Extra Januable + Beautiful + Enjoyable = PERFECT UPDATEEE!!😳😳

Grr, I will be mentioning this in like every komment now; im so jelling as in jealous. How can you FREAKING gosh make your updates so enjoyable to read and extra supercilious. THIS is NOT a Lie!! I officially claim this statement in BOLD GOLD LETTERS! That you are God Dam Out of the world FREAKING grand + suitable + bright = ideal WRITTER😳🤗 This FF it's worth a read every single time. Its actually unbelievable😲 and I honestly mean everything little bit and small praises im saying for this master piece🤗. Seriously you should get this FF published. GIRL you gonna go famous with this baby!! 👏😳

LOL what a hilarious car ride! Samrat is so over protective about his reputation; It took me time to digest the fact that GUNJAN?? Ms don't touch me ( yes I still remember that line )😆😆 is driving the Mr. Cool dude Samrat HOME😲😲?? Pinch me someone im in shock. ROFL 🤣🤣
He was like omg what is this?? This krazy moment.😆 It's a drive with goody goody gunjan bushan! LOL and OMFG how dare gunji speak a word and say she hates Nickelback song😲. Awh but she is so innocent. I wont shoot her any dirty glares😆. I'll be nice. * Angel dropped from heaven * 😆

Omg whats this?? Talk about manners; Samrat didn't even invite gunjan in. Poor thing. Chalo atleast Parent Unit 1 came in hand. His daddy total rocks. AWWWWW! Future saas- Bahu moment😛. I could feel gunjan pain there😔. Bechre; misses her mommy. * hugs * Loved the way you wrote the scene. It's quite touching😭! I wonder if sammy was jealous😆😉. Aw, but oh my goodness his parents are angels😛. So nice at heart. Loved the way they treated gunjan. Really nice.This makes asthu wonder why sammy doesn't like his parents. Hmm?? I aint gonna put stress on my brain; I know mimi got something in plan😳. Plus my business homework is gonna chew my brain up when I start🤔. Story of life, searching for freedom, really hate business company.😆😆

Hehe, showing the house bit was cute and funny at the same time when it came to Ms detective gunjan who wanted to know who's room was that the one she wasnt shown. Then criminal 😆 samrat saying "Mine. But nobody's allowed inside. Off limits, sorry" I really knew this was coming😆😆. Gosh the guy is obsess with his privacy😆. Well thats not a bad thing, but its gunjan?? Adorable Little delicate doll. She wouldn't of cause a harm.

OMG?? 😲😲
Is there something embarrassing there he is trying to hide ey😆?? LOL!! I got so much in mind. I mean if it is how bad it can be?? He wont have a pair of heart print boxers on his bed🤣😳, ya phir something girly😲😲 or any old classical music which some people find off, boring and embarrassing. I love Old Hindi tracks. They are so beautiful😎 or she wont rob his basket ball if that what worry's him😆😆 Can you imagine a chor gunjan🤪! LOL in a catwomen outfit. LOL i bet sammy would go forget the basketball, chore me🤣😆😳, Well chalo lets forget about that. Im sure soon Gunji is gonna enter it soon.
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE☺️! Hand touch?? Omg their hand's brushed! Ting-ling feels started sparkling kya?? ☺️Seriously this moment was so JANUABLEEE!
* every time was touch I get this feeling * This sound shoulddd of been playing in the background dudee! Awesome likeee.😳
Still loved the way you wrote the moment to bits; the awkwardness could be felt. 😳😆


HAILA 😲 Another janubale moment🤪. Sammy dropping gunji home. AWWWW! 😛
DAMM! What a shhame her khatara was not working😆. The
hippie old school car😆. Have I mentioned how much I love the car right now! But Aww poor gunjii didn't want to go on the bike. This scene reminded me the old gunjan. Sajan first bike ride😍. UFF! Cant get enough😳Dohh gunjii still went on the bike. I could sense the lil weird happy feeling sammy got, the smile said it all man.. Well im glad you didn't use the bike right now. It seem's a little early?? Get me?? 😆

But Still Broken car + No bike = walking + Cute walk = Walk to remember. 😍

And it truly was a treat to read the whole scene. AWWWWWW! Sammy showing his soft side by offering her his jacket😳. Usually some guys don't care; allowing the girl to freeze😲. Chalo Sammy didn't turn like one of them😆. I seriously don't want to hate him😒! I LOVE the samrat in your FF 😛. I like how you portray his character. He's got a arrogant side just to keep his cool image but the soft samrat can sometimes seek out. Now that's what I call super adorable. Hats off to you girl! 👏😊

* faints *

* wakes up * 😆

I always knew you wanted to kill me?? Im scared😭!
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE☺️ you gave a januable moment again! PARK TIME!! YAYYYY! 🥳

EEEEEEEEEEE ☺️adored the beginning. He touched her again🤪?? He touched her. I like how you wrote the way he grabbed her arm 🤪and took her to the park. Really cute indeed😳! I could sense the childish samrat here and I LOVEDDD IT!! Park wala sammy is the BESTTT! So lovable 😃

Ehehe he calls her over to the swing and them noticing each other's different sides😛; I like! I simply adore every little bit you add. Its makes your FF seem even more grand and januable😳! The whole convo was so cweetilicous!🤪 * dead * AHHHHHHHHHHH Sajan krazyy! 🤪

AW, Swingy time. LOL typical for samrat to win. HAHAHA?🤣 Gunji let him😳. * Shakes head * I love this gunjan man😛. She is such a darling like. So different!😳 The way you penned down the whole moment. So clear to picture rise. Im blown away completely. Its WOW! The childish side of them its really adorable.😳

LOL the girl was meant to get home early and what does sammy do?? Keeps her out till 11: 30!😲 Totallay shows he loved the geeks🤓 company😳😆. HAHA!😆

Samrat and Gunjan's last interaction was a little magical😍. Don't ask why I used this word. The word was swinging around in my head and screaming to be used for that one feeling samrat went threw. I don't know how to say it man. Gunjan giving his jacket and him not want to take it 😲, he didn't want the time he was spending with gunjan to end😳. Special unique feeling of waves flying by samrat. Interesting😆. Very interesting. 😉

I didn't want to take it back. That meant that my time with Gunjan was over. And for some reason, I didn't want it to be. Time flew when I was with her. She was different.


🤪EEEEEEEEEEEEE!🤪 My favourite line. I LOVE IT! Cuteeeee! ☺️

You ended it so supercilious fine girl. Your FF is got me so hooked. im really addicted!!


Update soon! 😳

love you bre!! You simply rock! 😛🤗🤗

^^ woooooooooooo😲. It looks like i wrote some kind of eassy. HAHA! Well you FF is like a drug! I can wrote 100 pages about it! 😳😆

P.s P,s OH OH ..Congo on 50 pages🥳. Im sure this baby is gonna hit 150 pages soon⭐️ with flying colours
Your FF is tooo famous man!! 😳😎
Edited by Asthuox - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: khushali16

mimi,..u killin me day aftr day from ur updates........theyr awesome.....continue sooner dan dis tym nd plss give some precaps....dey'll keep me goin on for a few dayz.....

Hey Khushali!
😆 lol yaar, don't die on me! Pleaseee....
And aweh, thank you!! I'd update sooner, but I have school yaar. And then volunteering, so weekends are the best for me. I'll defo try giving out precaps from now on 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: hemasharma36

mimi phele toh THANKS for updating

Hey Hema!
Hahahha, aweeeeh no problems yaar! Sorry for keeping ya'll waiting
i was waiting ok now about the update it was awesome yaar !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you so much!
no words for it u are killing me all i can say is i have become so much addicted to ur FF and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz mimi continue soonnnnnnnnnn a simple word for u .................. "U ROCK"
AWEH! That's soo sweet of you hun! Im so touched! Thank you a billion gazillion times! That means so much to me!
luv ya
hema

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

good one
samrat didn't want to be seen with gunjan.
oh ho but i am really liking this fic. i have read A WALK TO REMEMBER so i can guess where the story is leading.

do continue dear.
bye sumi

Hey Sumi!
Aweh have you? I'm still waiting to read the book, the movie was just amazing! I watched it SOOO many times 😆
But yeah, the scenes are similar, but the track will be different, NOTHING like AW2R's ending. I'd cry too much if that happened.
But thanks so much for liking yaar!

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