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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: zgerl

Hey di remember me lol..not sure you stil do lol..that was fantastic simply superb ..totally different..


just love this story version wow Abhimanyu and RIddhima being husband and wife..okay i donnoe why par i want Armaan RIddhima to together lol...at last when the story ends..

par u are the story teller and you always write simply great stories..

haven been reading a lot of stories..but actually i was reading your AK FF which hook me and finding out theres an AR version of this story i cant resist to read this..

love how you give a detailed description of the characters who they are..what are their thoughts,what do they feel..so that we wont end up being confused with the characters actions as the story proceeds..great job DI..well done

keep rocking Di with your story..
take care



Thanks zgerl....of course I remember u and I am glad u have liked the characters so far...well u know in my ff the main leads always end up together😉

[quote=SunainaTM007]hey di...
so u are back with another AR fic...
the first part was just fantastic.👏.👏.
i just loved the character descriptions...
rahul is such sweetie.😉.😃.riddhima the perfect bahu.😊..
and armaan...just waiting for him to come to india to find his 'pehchan'...and i hav a feeling that he is shashank's son...newaz i m as excited as he is to come to india...
waiting eagerly for the next part.😉.😉.😉.[/quote]

Thanks sunaina.....good guess for sure. I know we all know armaan is shashan's illegitimate son...let's see how the story begins now😃

Thanks Ridsss, aarora😊

[quote=Kaj!]Hi Di. This seems like a very beautiful fan fic in the making. I'm already curious to know what happens in their life. Atul seems like a sweetheart. As for Anjali, well i actually feel bad for her. Though she may seem to be full of arrogance and pride, but she seems like a wounded lioness to me. I know for a fact that i dislike Abhimanyu already. Red-blooded male! Has no shame what so ever.
Ridhima seems like a very nice, devoted Indian girl who has been very selfless and given unconditional love to everyone in her sasuraal. But it's about time she started to think about herself too, because her husband doesn't care, all he cares about is satisfying his own desires. Hopefully Armaan will liberate Ridhima.
Armaan...I'm assuming is Shashank Modi illegitamate son. I'm eager to know how Padma reacts to this when Armaan comes over. Armaan deserves to be happy, especially after all the confusion and flack he has faced all his life. I'm assuming...or hoping rather, that he finds solace in Ridhima and also gains a family that he never had in the Modis
Gosh you've got me into this 😆 Waiting to see what happens nexts. [/quote]

Hi Kaj. How are u doing? How's ur family? I know u left to meet ur family for some emergency last year...hope everyone is well. I am surprised to see u on the AR version as I usually see u on AK stories. BTW, I have an AK version of the same story too....ur welcome to pick ur fav couple😊 Yes, Armaan will achieve both things u have predicted😊

[quote=nidha1983]woah di🤗 really a nice one⭐️ but here AR stands for Armaan Ridhima😍 or Abhimanyu Ridhima😕😕😕 as she is married to Abhi plz continue it soon😛😉[/quote]

Thanks Nidha...yes love is indeed like magic😊 AR will always be Armaan-Ridz and that too KASH for me😊
Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
Hey sangita di
i m glat thata ur back with ur ff
OMG what a intro i just love it i cant wait to read moer from this story u know from ur storry its like the saying in india "silents water is more depper" i think that ridz caracther is some what like this but with ur ff u never know
i m glad they u remeber one of ur crezzy ff reader n thnxs a ton for the PM
luv
nruti
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii do u remeber me i m ash(ash_rajat00)
wowwwwwwwwwwwwww what an different ff i really adorable ur ff all have diff story line exciting n very realsitic

first of all the the title PEHCHAN is sooooooooo perfect for the ff 👏 hatts off to ur creavity


the story line starting from shashank to armaan the character line is perfect shashank is amy'z father when he discovers this he will be really shocked poor him i hope his identity does not reveal soon he will be hated by many i want first ridhima n armaan to be in love then reveal the secert 😆i know i m crazy dramatic person

but seriously all character in a house are having mutiple personality which will be fun
but plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do pm me when u u[pdate plzzzzzzzzzz i don't usually visit this section
so plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz plz don't forget to pm me when u update and yea plz update fast can't wait to read the first part plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hey sangeetha di
glad to see u back with a new concept
which is truly amazing
liked the idea
its a mature subject
would love to read more
n what i guess is that armaan is shashank's son rite???
update soon di
n yea if possible plz pm me



Thanks Prerna....yes this is a mature and sensitive subject. Good guess😉 and yes I'll PM u😊

[quote=suv.patki]Hey Bheegi ... great to have u starting a new AR ff. And the storyline seems great. In hustle-bustle of real-life, we end up losing our identity. And the concept sounds really great. Am myself in some soup I can say and hence looking forward to reading your ff. Request u to PM me if u planning for the same. I have bookmarked the page as well :)
Cheers,
Suvarna[/quote]

Thanks suvarna....yeah we all lose our 'pehchan' over time but let's see how our main characters find themselves over the course of the story😊

[quote=afifa2]heyy!
wow that was beautifully written, im so excited to read part 2 hope thats soon!!
its been a while since a new FF of urs have come out its like waiting for a new movie to come out on DVD lol!!
it sounds really exciting
cant wait to read more about everyones life!!
love
Fahima[/quote]

Thanks Fahima....UR too funny😆 but thanks 4 that honor😊
Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
Bheegi🤗I am sooo glad you are back with an AR FF!! Missed reading your AR FF's.

What do i say about this FF?!! It's already sooo AMAZING!!

I absolutely LOVE how you introduced all the characters!! It was very unique and different!

So im guessing Armaan is Shashank's illegal son?! I wonder how Padma will react when she finds out?! and if Shashank will immediately know that Armaan is his son?!!

Ridz seems too nice and innoncent, and i feel bad for her 'cause she has the most self-centered, mean husband ever. Can't wait to see how Armaan changes her life!!

Rahul's character is sooo sweet!! It's soo sweet how he lovessss Muski soo much, I hope Muski loves him a lot too!!

I feel bad for Anjali, but she does not need to be all rude and depressed and it's really mean how she wishes bad for Ridz.

Atul seems sooo sweet!! I feel bad he has a wife like Anjali, but it's nice to see his son, Kavya, as his support!!

I lovee how you have such different concepts in each one of your FF's. Right from Tera Mera Rishta, which i have recently read, to Definitely, Maybe Yes, to this new FF, Pechan!!

You already have me hooked on to this FF, and can't wait to read more!! Thanks for the PM, and plz do PM me when you update. Plzz update soon!!


Miloni
Edited by chocogurl - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: KASH_rocks

wow!!!! gr8 to have u back...its been very long since i last read ur awesome ff definitely yes,maybe....
part 1 was indeed gr8 .......
will b waiting for u to cont.
yashoti



Thanks Yashoti😊 I have not written a ff in a long time, so this is my new AR ff after DYM😊

[quote=suvi_rox1]hey bheegi this is suvrati
u started a new ff n i am unaware of it babes ...i am sure u wud have pmed me on my old id ....bt hey this is my new id .........u know i have become a newbie frm a goldie cause this sick IF is giving me major problems......ok this ff has a grt story loved the introduction bt i am sure it will nt be a saas bahu drama as the original serial u got inspired with...that was preety slow so i had left watching that show so earlier i had started to see.........ok i know u will concentrate on AR more its a request n advice too plz dont mind .........as much as i had loved "def yes may be"i wud want to love this too so plz add the spice n make melove this one too.hope u never disappoint me.lol..ok add my new user id to ur pm list
update soon
congratulations on starting this one
i wud love to see a bachelor armaan having an affair wid a married riddhima so plz continueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee soonnnnnnnnnnnn
bye tc[/quote]

Thanks suvi.....yes i will add ur new ID to my buddy list for sure. No, this won't be a saas bahu drama😆 In fact, I will focus more on the AR friendship and then love story instead of the husband wife track as the original show is doing these days😕....yeah for a change a bachelor armaan will woo a married Ridz😳

[quote=aish_punk]

Hey bheegi..lng tym..n m so happy 2 c u bck wid a bang 😉

I really loved the concept..n since i c Jaane Kyaa Baat Hui..i can relate 2 it too...but then i hope u make it a bit different n add ur own style 2 it😃 I prefer 2 read the AR FF..bcuz AR r more closer 2 me than AK..hope u don mind..😊
Hi Aish...u watch Jaane kya baat hui too? Yes, I will make it a little different as I'll focus on AR more than the husband wife or saas bahu tracks😆 Please feel free to read the version u want....that's why I have an AK and an AR version
By wat i unnderstud..i think Armaan is Shashank's son..
He he....no points for guessing😆
The things goin on between Padma - Shashank are nt nice..n wid d arrival of Armaan it cud worsen..
U have a point😊
I don like Anjali..she need not be so mean...Atul is a nice guy..n nobudy wud leave their career for their wife n family..i seriously adore Atul 👏
Well Atul was never interested in doing a job or working in an office
Abhimanyu is mean..he's got such a wunnerful wife..hu keeps evry1 happy..n he's not happy wid her?! I feel sad 4 Riddhima bcuz she got stuck up wid him..
abhimanyu is indeed the villain here
Rahul's character is nice..tat of a chilled out younger brother..seems very diff 4m Atul n Abhimanyu..n i thnk Ridhimma is closest 2 him den ne1 else
yeah ridz and rahul are buddies here
The character sketches were just superb..u rock bheegi..!!
thanks dear😊
I'm really looking forward 2 dis FF...
BTW i was wondering if Abhimanyu will have an extra-maritial relationship too..n Armaan might play the part of the other guy in Jaane Kya Baat Hui ( srry i dint follow tat serial tat well but i know the scenario )

Well of course Aish....Abhimanyu has had many affairs...he said it clearly in the intro yaar and yes, armaan is the other guy😉
Anyway i hope these doubts will be cleared in the next updates..
Update soon 😊
Thnx 4 d PM
PS:Are u gonna update SWD also?it's already over dear😆
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Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
hey di nice update
i also start liking AR ff with AK ff 😆
nice and great concept can't wait to read more but it really weird to see ridz fall in love with another guy being married to another hehe
pleaseeeeeeeeeeee continue soon
love ya
mittal
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: kaneez-e-fatima

thanq di this chandni here hope u remember.,....gosh i was waiting for ur new ff

thanks for pm
nice concept

looking forward to it



Thanks chandni....looks like everyone is changing their IDs😃

[quote=bollywood_chic]Heyy Sangeeta di,
I love the way you started this ff out.. it's very different use of a character sketch yet it took us into the minds, feelings, and atributes of each character.
can't wait for it to start.
thanks for the pm.
: )
xxSonia[/quote]

Thanks sonia....yeah I wanted to start the story with when AR meet, so laid down all the basic details of the character beforehand😊

[quote=aishar]
wt a deeppp ff...[/quote]

Thanks aishar...yes it is a serious subject indeed😊

[quote=jodubai]Perfect Beeghi.....love this plot, & the way you have described the characters was just so good, its like we can picture them perfectly now, its a good mix, you have in the modi house
would love to be a part of this wonderful journey, thanks for the pm....
[/quote]

Thanks jo!....hopefully u all know the background now....so let's jusp right into AR meeting😊 thanks for being there as always
Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
bahut acha hai Di!!!(may i call u di)
abhi pura nahi padha..but jald hi padh loongi....bahut acha hai...
Once again my sweet writer is back for me...i mean mere liye....as itne dino se mujhe to aisa hi laga tah ki wo koi angel hi tah jisne TERa Mera Rishta likha hai......anyways....bahut acah ahi.....keep doing the good Work!!!!!
Love
Ankita
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
yaaaaaaaaaay ur back n it seeeeeems
sooo gd already i luv the idea of lost identity
it really is such a nice concpt differenet but
interesting and i know ur gona make this ff
jus as great as al ur other onees
cnt wait
sorry 4 the l reply
thx 4 da pm n if u can om me if not
i'lstil b readin al ur updrtes loool
cnt wait 2 read more
updte sooon
nizma x

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