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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Ankita,
The part was really nice, I really loved it.
So Atul and Sapna are married that was so cute and they also have a daughter, shoo shweet.
Ridhima was so naughty when rahul said mein tumhe chod doun and ridhima said pehle paakar to lo,😆, even on the hospital bed she is up to her naughtiness, but I liked it.
It was so cute Armaan and Rahul teaming up together for teasing Ridhima and she was pouting like a child.
I loved every bit of the part.
Pls continue soon.

Luv u<333
Kashish
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: naughtyash

i m a kashirian yaar only karan-shilpa loved them misss them a lot okay then it will take time because i need it to be perfect hehehhehe

love ur ff do update soon n please pray for me my results will be out sooon pleaseeeeeeeee

and yea its ur ff so i want it to be ur style so no suggestions heheheh

Nahi yaar...sachi mein mujhe samajh hi nahi aaraha kya likhoon...but today i m really very happ...i got the Reader of the week award yayyayyyyyyyyyy.......
Best Of Luck...but kiss chij ke results??????????? 12th ka???????????
Thanks a lot for making siggi for me...(advance)

Originally posted by: swamii92

nice part pls continue and pm me but pls dont seperate sapna and atul let be AS rather than AA atleat in this Fan fiction

Thanks a lot dear!!!
Dear i m not separating them.....infact in my FF they r married and have a little princess too....
Next time i will PM u all...so don't worry...

Originally posted by: kashishk

Hey Ankita,
The part was really nice, I really loved it.
So Atul and Sapna are married that was so cute and they also have a daughter, shoo shweet.
Ridhima was so naughty when rahul said mein tumhe chod doun and ridhima said pehle paakar to lo,😆, even on the hospital bed she is up to her naughtiness, but I liked it.
It was so cute Armaan and Rahul teaming up together for teasing Ridhima and she was pouting like a child.
I loved every bit of the part.
Pls continue soon.

Luv u<333
Kashish

Thank u sooooooooooooo much......
Thanks a lot dear..even i also loved Ridzi-Rahul part....
Thank u sooooo much...
Wait till sunday dear......
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Guys...
How r u??????????
I hope u all r fit and fine to read my update.....
I m updating in an hour....
So stay tuned....
Love
Ankita😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Guys...here is the update....
Enjoy.....
Recap :
Riddhima (openeing her mouth) - Tum mujhe maroge....dekho na Armaan ye kya kah raha hai..(making a sweet and cute puppy face...and thought that Armaan might take her side....Armaan too wanted to do so as her sweet puppy face had melted his heart but She looks even more sweet when she is angry....so he just tried to make her angry)
Armaan - kya Rahul ne aisa kaha....(Riddhima nodded)....Bilkul thik kaha..tumhe bahut marr parni chahiye..kisi ki baat nahi manti....
Riddhima - Kya tumhe aisa lagta hai..jao main tumse baat nahii karti....
Rahul giggled..
Riddhima - Why r u laughing?? main tumse bhi baat nahi kar rahi....
Riddhima folded her arms...and makes a pouted face.....She was looking like an innocent child who was angry because somebody had taken her chocolate..
Rahul - Acha baba i m sorry.....(holds his ears) ab khush...
Riddhima shook her head in refusal....
Riddhima - Nahi...pehle tum promise karo ki tum mujhe ice cream khilaoge....
Rahul - Thik hai tum jaldi se thik ho jao tab main tumhe 4 nahi balki 5 ice creams khilaoonga....ab to
khush na..
Riddhima - Haan....(lightning up)
Rahul cupped her face and kissed her forehead and then Muskaan and Rahul leaved.....
Part 11
Armaan went and sat on Riddhima's bed with the bowl of soup in his hand......
Riddhima (still angry with him) - Jao na tum yahan kyon baithe ho......bara kah rahe the..."bilkul thik kaha Rahul isse to marna hi chahiye" (imitating him....)
Armaan smiled...
Armaan - Riddhima main mazak kar raha tha..i was joking...acha choro in sab bataon ko jaldi se ye soup pi lo..
The soup was green in color..it seemed that each and every vegetable was mixed in it just for Riddhima as she hated eating vegetables..Riddhima made different faces after seeing that soup...
Riddhima - Chiiiii mujhe nahi pini ye gandi si soup....
Armaan - Kis ne kaha ye gandi hai???
Riddhima - Iska color dekha hai......lagat hai duniya ke saare vegetables isi mein dal diye gaye hoon....
Armaan - Kyon tumhe vegetables nahi pasand????
Riddhima - No i just hate vegetables....
Armaan - Par is mein to sabji hai hi nahi...is mein to......tumne kabhi green mango ice cream khayi hai????😉
Riddhima - Green Mango Ice cream?????😕 nahi to....
Armaan - Tabhi na kah rahi ho....bahut tasty lagta hai...taste kar ke dekho....
Riddhima - Sachi????
Armaan - Haan....tum pi ke to dekho..but isse pine ka ek tarika hota hai...
Riddhima - Kya????
Armaan - Ise tumhe ek saans mein pina hoga taki saare flavours ek saath muh mein chale jayein....
Riddhima - Par aisa kyon?????
Armaan - Tum pehle kar ke to dekho...
Armana made her drink the whole soup it was not at all tasty...Riddhima didn't wanted to drink that but Armaan wasn't leaving her until
she complete that soup...
Riddhima - CHhhhhiiiiiiiiiii..aalllll....awww.....thu thu..thu....Isse Ice cream kahte ho????????
Armaan - Haan isse kahte hain Armaan Mallik's Ice Cream....😛
Riddhima - YOu...😡😡............i will not leave you...
Armaan - Uske liye tumhe pehle mujhe pakarna hoga...dear!!!
Riddhima - Armaan!!
Armaan - Ok baba sorry......(holds ear)
Riddhima was abt to say something when Armaan's mobile rang...it was from abhimanyu...
Armaan - Ji...................nahi wo nahi hain..............ok...bye...
Riddhima - Kiska phone tha??????
Armaan - Papa ka...
Riddhima - Ohhh!! to kya kah rahe the????????
Armaan - Yahi ki Riddhima ko ab injection lagwana hai..(Looking towards the door)
Riddhima - Kya????
A nurse came there with a tray....
Riddhima (pleading) - Armana please mujhe injection nahi lagana..pleaseeeeee
Armaan (walking towards her) - Lagwana to parega na..Riddhima warna thik kaise hogi??????
Riddhima - Please..............
Till then the Nurse had filled the liquid in the syringe.....
Riddhima - Pleasee Armaan...(Bending towards him and holding his hands)
Armaan (smiled) - Don't worry bilkul dard nahi hoga...tum apni aakhein band kar lo..ok..
Riddhima - Nahi....
The Nurse moved towards her and rud her hand with cotton...Riddhima holds Armaan's hand tightly ; closed her eyes...and hid her face in his chest........ Armaan could feel her breathe...her sweet fragrance..He wants this moment to stop right now...He wants Riddhima to be in his arms like this forever...But he control his feelings as he don't want to reveal it.....
When the Nurse injected her,Riddhima winced and Holds him more tightly.... Armaan too hold her to assure her that everything is alright.
Now the Nurse after injecting her again rub her hand with cotton and signalled
Armaan to rub her hand....Armaan rubbed her hand...
Riddhima - Maine kaha tha na dard hoga...(innocently)
Armaan - I know...but thik hone ke liye to injection lagwana parega na....
Then Abhimanyu and Shashank entered the room....Riddhima was surprised to see both of them there...She still didn't know that Abhimanyu was Armaan's papa.........
Riddhima - Aap yahan????????
Abhimanyu - Kyon nahi aa sakta??????
Riddhima - Nahi aisi baat nahi hai....wo..to main..
Abhimanyu - Acha ye batao ab kaisi ho???
Riddhima - i m feeling better now....
Shashank who was standing at the door..now comes towards her and kissed her on her forehead which compelled Riddhima to think abt her father who also used to kiss her in the same way.....Riddhima got lost in her thoughts...
Shashank - Kya hua???? kahan kho gayi???
Riddhima - Ji..aapne kuch kaha??
Shashank - Haan maine pucha tum kahan kho gayi thi???
Riddhima - wo..actually mujhe apne dad ki yaad aa gayi..wo bhi mujhe aise bhi kiss karte the....
Riddhima didn't know why but her heart felt the necessity to tell him (shashank) that.....
Shashank heart felt a blow....He cursed himself for leaving his princess... Shashank got tears in his eyes...Abhimanyu sensed that and puts his hand on his shoulder......
Shashank (controlling himself) - To main bhi to tumhare dad jaisa hi hoon na.....
Abhimanyu - Ofcourse Shanky....ye bhi koi poochne wali baat hai..........afterall main bhi to iske dad jaisa hi hoon....
Riddhima and Armaan smiled..
Shashank - Waise main tumhare liye kuch laya hoon...
Takes out a Dairy Milk Chocolate..(Yummy..my fav.)
Riddhima - Wow.....ye to meri fav. chocolate hai.....
Armana was now confirmed that Shashak really loves her a lot.........And he decided to joint them together again....
Shashank (To Armaan) - Mujhe tumse ek baat karni hai...kya tum pl. bahar aaoge..
Armana - Ji...
Both went outside...
Armaan - Ji uncle boliye...
Shashank - Please Armaan Riddhima ko matt batana ki main uska dad hoon.....
Armaan - Agar ye aap mujhe nahi bhi kahte tab bhi main nahi batata...don't worry uncle..aap dekhna wo ek din khud aapko apna dad kahegi.....
Shashank - I hope so beta....

Here Aryan's Cabin..
Khusi was shocked to see Aryan there...
Khusi - sir aap yahan kya kar rahe hain???? i mean aapko to aapki behan ke paas hona chahiye na..
Aryan - Kya karoon..meri behan mujhe wahan rahne hi nahi deti....(He told her everything)
Khusi - I can tell that she really cares a lot for u and u too cares a lot for her...
Aryan - Kaise???
Khusi - Ab dekhiye na..aap uss samay se har 5 minute par hospital phone kar rahe hain...koi bhi kah sakta hai ki aap usse bahut pyaar karte hain.....
Aryan - Arey yaad aya mujhe Dr. Sapna ko call karna tha...
Khusi - Abhi 10 min. pehle hi to aapne unse baat kiya tha..aur wo bhi itni pareshan ho gayi thi ki jaldi hi call cut kar diya...(giggling)😆😆
Aryan - Maine sachi mein bahut call kiya hai????? (confused)😕😕
Khusi came towards him and was bending over him....Aryan was confused what was she doing???????? He could feel her smell...her wild flower fragrance...His heart was dancing..but it stops dancing when Khsui takes his mobile from his hand and stood up.....
She showed him the dialled call..the folder was filled with Armaan's and Sapna's Number...
Khusi - Ab pata chala....
Aryan (embarrassed) - oopppss😳........ab amin call nahi karoonga.....ab main wahan ja kar hi mil loonga..ok..
Khusi smiled seeing concern for his sister in his eyes..........

Sanjivani Hospital..............
Abhimanyu and Shashank have leaved the place 5 minutes before....now
Riddhima and Armaan were alone in the room.....
Riddhima - Armaan...
Armaan - Hmmm...(busy in sending message to Aryan abt Riddhima's condition)
Riddhima - Main bore ho rahi hoon...
Armaan (looking up) - To main kya karoon joker ban kar tumhe hasaoon ya
phir bandar ki tarah nach kar dikhaoon....
Riddhima - I think second wala option jyada acha rahega....waise bhi tum to bandar ho hi..jyada mehnat nahi karna parega....
Armaan - Very Funny.....
He again engrossed in his work...
After 5 mins.
Riddhima - Armaannnn.......
Armaan - hmmm...(He was now busy in his laptop)
Riddhima - Tum kya kar rahe ho???????? kabhi mobile pe to kabhi laptop pe....
Armaan - Wo main aise hi time pass kar raha tha....
Riddhima - Wah...main yahan borr ho rahi hoon aur tum ho ki time pass kar rahe ho...band karo usse (ordering)
Armaan - Acha baba band kar raha hoon..itna gussa kyon hoti ho???? To band kar diya ab thik.....ab batao kya hukm (order) hai mere aaka
Riddhima (makes a puppy face) - Tum mujhe abhi ek gana sunao.....
Armaan - What?????????????..yahan????????? Pagal ho gayi ho kya...agar Dr. Kirti ko pata chal gaya to wo mujhe kachha chaaba
dalegi.....(Armaan knew that Dr. Kirti is very strict)
Riddhima (like a innocent child) - Nahi wo kuch nahi kaheingi..main unhe bol doongi..tab wo tumko nahi daateingi...
Armaan - Kyon....tum koi Queen Victoria ho jo wo tumko nahi daateingi....
Riddhima - Nahi..par wo hamesha mujhse ache se baat karti hain....aisa lagta hai mano..wo mujhe ya mere family ko janti ho.....
Armaan now understood why Kirti treat her like a familiar one....Because She was Shashank's daughter..so he decided not to extend the topic...
Riddhima - Kya hua......tumhe pata hai wo mere saath aisa treat kyon karti hain??????????
Armaan (quickly) - Nahi..nahi mujhe kaise pata hoga.....
Riddhima - Thik hai...chalo ab tum mujhe ek gana sunao...
Armaan - Riddhima tum jidd kyon kar rahi ho...ye hospital hai...
Riddhima - ok tum yahan mere paas aa kar gana bilkul dhere dhere.....ok...
Armaan - Riddhimaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Riddhima - Armaaaaann...please hamare dosti ki khatir....pl.
Armaan - Tum nahi manogi...fine main suna raha hoon.....
Armaan closed his eyes...rested his head (he was sitting on the sofa)......
Riddhima was confused😕😕....."maine to isse gana gane ko kaha tha....but what is he doing" Then she heard a pleasing voice mumbling some
lines...

Na hai yeh pana....
Na khona he hai.....
Tera na hona, jaane
Kuyn hona he hai
Tum Se Hi din hota hai.....
Surmayi shaam aati hai....
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Har ghadi saans aati hai
Zindagi kehlati hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi.....
Na hai yeh pana
Na khona hi hai
Tera na hona, jaane
Kuyn hona hi hai.......
Aa aa..aa aa?aa aa..aa aa.. aa..

Aankho mein aankhe teri
Bahoo mein Bahe teri......
Mera na mujh mein kuch raha
Hua kya....
Bathon mein bathein teri
Rathe saogathe meri
Kuyn tera sab yeh ho gaya
Hua kya.......
Mein kahin bhi jaata hun
Tum Se Hi mil jatha hun
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Aa aa aa aa aa aa?
Shor mein khamoshi hai.......
Thodi si behoshi hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi.....
Aa aa aa aa aa aa?
Aadha sa vaada kabhi
Aadhe se zyada kabhi........
Jee chahe karlu is tarah
Wafa ka......
Chode na chute kabhi
Tode na toote kabhi
Jo daaga tum se jud gaya.....
Wafa ka
Mein tera sarmaya hun
Jo bhi mein ban paya hun......
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Raaste mil jate hai......
Manzile mil jati hai.......
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Na hai yeh pana
Na khona he hai
Tera na hona, jaane
Kuyn hona he hai.......
Armaan opened his eyes to see almost all the staff....nurses..interns...doctors of Sanjivni eyeing him.....He then Looked towards Riddhima who was staring at him...He really felt very embarrashed..Then he again dare to look at the door...all where still gazing him...suddenly a fat lady from the crowd comes towards him...
Lovely - Tussi to baara acha gate ho sir ji,.....aap singer ho kya???
Armaan's cheecks were turing deep red....
Then Sapna comes towards him...
Sapna - Wow Armaan..u sang really very very very well....ur voice is too good.....hai na Riddhima...
Riddhima - Yes Armaan.....tum ne sachi mein mera dil khush kar diya......thank u soooooo much.....
Armaan - Riddhimaaaaaaaaaaa (coming towards her) main tumhe kitni baar samjhaoon..dosti mein no sorry no thank u...
Riddhima - Thik hai to phir mujhe mera Thanks return kar do.....
Armaan - Haan haan le hi lo..waise bhi mujhe tumhare thanks ki koi jarurat nahi hai...
Riddhima - To de dona...kisne kaha hai lene ko....
Armaan - To le lona kisne kaha tha dene ko......
Riddhima - Armaan...
Armaan - Riddhima..
Riddhima - Armaannnnn'
Armaan - Riddhima.....
Riddhima - Huh..
Armaan - Huh...
Now the whole Sanjivani was enjoying their sweet fight....There was a old lady in the next compartment she was also hearing their fight.... She prayed to god "Bhagwan ji in dono ki jodi banaye rakhna....".........
Hope u all liked it....
Please do comment guys...Silent Readers pl. comment guys....
Thanks a lot....
Ankita😊😊
Edited by Armi-Shilpa - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey ankita😃🤗
me first yayyy🥳🥳
the part was awesome dear
it was sooooooo cute
i loved the way ridz asked armaan to sing for her😳
loved it dear
love
susha😳
Edited by susha11 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyy awesome part update soon i want to no who the lady was awwwee armaan loves ridzz there soo cute
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Posted: 16 years ago

woah dear🤗 its really awesome one⭐️ superb dear😍so sweet😊😊 so Armaan make her agree to drink soup😆😆😆 so cool😉 and what a singer he is rocking plz continue it soon😛& thanks for the pm😉


"Hawaon k hath ek arman bheja hai,
Roshni k zariye ek paigham bheja hai,
Fursat milay to qabool ker lena,
is nacheez ne"Piyara"sa "Salam" bheja hai ."
"payar say payar us waqat na karo,
jab payar ap se payar na karay, or
jab payar ap se payar karay to payar
ko itna payar do k wo kisi dosry se payar na karay..."

With Luv: ~
Nidha
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow thats really a sweet update,i really loved it a lot
i really aryan will come when shashank and abimanyu are there,its nice he didnt come,i loved aryan n khushi convo too,but this is totally AR part for me
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Posted: 16 years ago
SOOOOOOOOOOOO SWEET.
LOVED IT.
UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOON AND PM ME.
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Posted: 16 years ago

hey dear😊

it's really a very nice part............. thanks for the pm.......... continue sooon..............
Edited by k_anjali12 - 16 years ago

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