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PART 14


(Everybody gather around the table rahul cuts the cake and fed to the closest person to him, the party is finished, everyone makes their way toward their room or their house except ridzi and ammi)

(after sometime, ammi took ridzi to a ridzi's room)

rid(confused):armaan?? why did u bring me here?

(ammi placed his finger on her lips)

ammi:shhhh

(ridzi looked at him, wide eyes open)

ammi:I have something to give u

(he took his hand back and looks at the questioning eyes of ridzi)

ammi(smiles)(thought:god she looks so cute):close ur eyes

rid(more confused):why??

ammi:don't u trust me?

rid:of course I trust u

(she closed her eyes. She felt his breath on his neck which made her gasp. Ammi loves her reaction, he loves the effect they have on each other, the love which grower even more deeper with the passing minutes, hours and days)

..........................................................

IN RAHUL's ROOM

Muskaan(sad):rahul teri sari packing ho gayi

(rahul nodded)

rahul:haan hogayi aur tu sad maat ho, hum roz mileighe to sahi na, don't worry my princess

(he kiss on her forehead)

muskaan(smiles):u r right, where is atul?

Rahul:with angie

muskaan:I should have guessed

(rahul sat on the bed)

rahul:now come here

(she came to him and sat on his lap then laid her head on his chest. After few minutes, she tilted her head, cupped his face and placed her lips on his, in the start it was gentle but it turned into a passionate one, rahul's tongue entered into muski's mouth, their tongue touched, muski groaned softly then she encircled her hand around his neck and rahul did the same around her waist. They both moaned in the pleasure. Muskaan's hand made her way toward his hair, she ruffles his, she arouse him on the fullest, the kiss went deeper and deeper)

...........................................

IN ANGIE'S ROOM

(atul is sitting on the bed all sad,angie is standing in front of him)

angie:atul, honey why r u sad, u r not going miles away from me?

atul(takes a sigh of relief):thank god otherwise I would die

angie(smiles):atul u know u r so cute

(atul smiled and pulled her hard, she bumped into his chest her hand went around his neck, atul sliped his hand around her waist. She blushed and lowered her head. Atul held by her chin and make her face him. She looked into his eyes)

atul:I'll miss

angie:me too, I love u

atul:I love u too

(he kissed on her cheek and then atul kissed her lips, full of love, full of sweetness. Those moments were the best of their lifes. They kept exploring each other's mouth)

.................................................


(he places the locket on around her neck and hook it, then kiss her shoulder gently, a cold chill run down throw her spine. Then he led her toward a mirror)

ammi:open ur eyes

(ridzi opened her eyes and saw a locket, a half heart and it's wriiten Armaan on the locket. Ridzi looked at him, having tears into her eyes, she hugs him)

ammi:why r u crying?,(teasingly) now don't tell me those tears are of happiness

(she hit on her chest, then takes a step back)

ridz:thnx armaan, by the way where is the other half?

ammi:there

(he points toward his neck, it's the other half on which it's written ridhima)

ammi:now u r the owner of my heart and I am the owner of ur heart

(she smiles and kiss on his forehead)

ridz:u r so adorable

ammi(frowns):that's all?

rid:cute

(he is still frowning. Ridzi smiled and pulled his cheek and kiss on his cheek. She places her hand on his cheek)

rid:u r all mine

(ammi smiles and kiss her hand which was placed on his cheek)

Ammi:and u r all mine and will be always mine

(he hugs her)

(rahul called them, rahul and atul are read with their baggage and went ammi's house)


AMMI'S HOUSE


(At ammi's house, rahul and atul shifted in their room, they r separated. But the three room are very close next to each other and every room have an attached bathroom inside and a door to go to the next room from inside the room)


AFTER FEW MINUTES-RIDZI ROOM

(ridzi is sitting on the bed, facing the complete moon and the stars. All is looking so beautiful. She remember how they confesses in the open air, the wind were the witness, everything around them were the witness of their love)

(suddenly ridzi jerked out from her thought as somebody knocks on the door. She stood up and open the door. She is shocked to see the person at her at 11 PM)

ridzi(surprised):papa aap?

shashank:yes ridhima, I want to talk with u

ridzi:papa come in, sat comfortably and then tell me

(shashank smiled as he enters and sat on the couch, ridzi sat next to him)

shashank:Ridzi (he took a sigh) I am very happy for u and ammi

(ridzi looked at him, she is completely shocked)

shashank:rahul told me that u guys loved each other, I am very proud of u guys, u made the right choice.

(he smiled and path her head)

ridzi (smiles):papa, actually I was thinking how to tell u and moreover it's today we confessed. I didn't knew that rahul was so much impatient to tell u

shashank:he did a good job to tell me. I know ammi want to get married after he completes his studies and u too but u guys can at least get engaged

(ridzi blushed)

ridz:papa, I'll tell u once I ask to armaan

(shashank smiled and then nodded)

shashanl:now go and sleep u have to go to college to tomorrow

(shashank made his way out and ridzi laid on her bed thinking about armaan)

(It's same with armaan, he is laying on his bed and recalling all the moments, he told Bi that he had confessed his love to ridzi and ridzi to love him. Bi was very happy for ammi)

(u guys should have guessed that it's the same think with the other two couples)


NEXT DAY


AT COLLEGE

(the three girls at waiting eagerly for the boys in front of the college gate. There waiting for the last 15 minutes)

Muskaan:yeh abhi tak aaye kyon nahi?

angie:muski chill they should be in the way

ridzi:yeh muski angie is right

(actually ridzi is feeling quite awkward, doesn't know why, she is having some insecurities regarding ammi well she trust ammi but she doesn't trust the girl of his college what will people think of their relationship, as everybody mocked her, she is feeling scared, but then she assures herself that ammi is gonna be by her side. She came back to reality feeling somebody calling her, she looks up)

ammi(whisper softly): I am calling u from the past 5 minutes, where were u lost?

ridzi(lloked down):nowhere

angie:hey guys we should made our way in the college, we have about 30 minutes for our first lesson, so we can go in the canteen.

(everybody agreed and made their way toward the canteen. Ammi and ridzi were left back. Ammi hold her wrist)

ammi:ridzi tell me what's the matter, u look so lost?

(ridzi looked around, ammi understand she is feeling uncomfortable to talk there so he took her on staircase and made her sat then sat in front of her)

ammi(in concerned voice):now tell me what happen?

ridzi:ammi i didn't know, It will sound silly to u, but I am feeling awkward, u know what everybody....

(ridzi didn't found the word to complete her sentence, she is playing with her fingers to explain him or find words but all in vain but ammi understood. He hold her hands)

ammi:let people think whatever they want, it's doesn't matter to me and doesn't have to matter to u too

(he told her looking into her eyes)

ridz:ammi everybody is ok but ur friends?

ammi:ridzi if my friend can't respect u then it means they r not my friend.

(ridzi smiled)

ammi(teasing mood):and if u r feeling scared about the girls that someone girl may take me away from u then I can't do anything

(ridzi looked at him and hit on his chest)

ridzi:u r only mine and don't ever think about someone else

(ammi smiled and hugged her)

ammi:I won't think about someone else, because every other girl beside u, are my sisters, mothers or grandmothers.

(they both burst out laughing, ammi kissed on her forehead)

ammi:u look good like this

ridzi:u too

(she caressed his cheek with her hand)

ridzi:u have a beautiful smile

(ammi smiled and kiss her hand, they are still sitting on the stairs ammi's hand is placed on the other side of ridzi's shoulder)

ammi:my smile become beautiful when I am with u

(ridzi smiled and kissed on his cheek)

ammi:now we should go back to canteen everybody must be waiting for us

(ridzi hold his hand)

ridzi:armaan I have something else to ask u too

(he sat back)

ammi(in his most cool tone):and what's that?

(she lowered her head and blushed. He cupped her face)

ammi(softly):tell na?

(ridzi hugged him)

ridzi:papa was saying that we should get engaged

(ammi made her face him, she was blushing and looking down)

ammi(shocked):ur dad know about us?

ridzi:yeah rahul told them, (worried) aren't u happy?

ammi(he smiled widely):ridzi I am more then happy, Rahul is really an angel

(ridzi smiled as he hugged her tightly)

ammi(still smiling):I will call my parents to talk to ur parents and fix a date for our engagement

(ridzi noticed a tone of disappointment in his voice, when he mention his parents, but after he came back to his self)

ammi:and once we got our degrees, we'll get married, I love u so much ridzi

ridzi:I love u too Armaan

voice:ahem ahem



PART 15


(AR got scare and broke from the hug then saw who it is, and well)

ammi(take a big sigh):Oh my good, u frightened us Rahul

rahul(retort):well, it's not my fault, u guys have no shame, u r doing romance in the staircase.

ridzi(retort back):like u care about the place when u r with muskaan?

(rahul turns a bit pink)

ammi(sadly):we were calling u angel and u spoil our moment

rahul:Thnx, I am happy to know that u think I am an angel and sorry for spoiling ur moment anyways I was searching u in the whole college, everybody are waiting for u in the canteen from the last ten minutes.

ammi:yeah we r coming

rahul(smiled):better come soon

(rahul left and ammi quickly kiss on ridzi forehead and made their way toward the canteen, holding hands in hands)

ridz:If u don't mind me to ask u

(ammi stopped so ridzi too stopped)

ridzi:Ammi u sounded sad when u mentioned, if u don't want then it's ok

ammi(angry but in low voice):Ridzi, who the hell do u think of urself, why do u think I will mind u asking me something, u have all the rights to know what i am thinking,u have the right to know everything linked with me

(he cupped her face and kiss on her forehead)

rid(blushed):ammi everybody are staring us

ammi:so? now come

(he places his hand around her waist protectively and made their way toward the canteen)

ammi:I was disappointed, as mom dad said they will be at home by today morning, but they were nowhere in sight

(now ridzi turned toward him and placed her hand on his cheek)

ridzi:ammi u know ur parents love u a lot right? (he nodded) but they are unaware of the fact that u didn't need only money, good education etc etc, but u need love and I am sure they'll understand soon, so don't be disappointed and moreover I love u and u don't look good when ur disappointed, now show me ur million dollar smile with ur cute dimples

(ammi can't help but smile)

ammi:u know u can make me feel better, I can't help smiling on ur cuteness

(he pulled her cheek, she pouts her lips)

ammi(he smiled): u look shoo shweet

(ridzi smiled and then they went to the canteen)

atul(grin and said with sarcasm):oh my pleasure, princess ridhima and prince armaan come here, it's an honor

ammi:chill atul, u should do the same with angie, kidnap her for some moment

(atul become red and angie blushed then)

angie(looked at him warningly):armaan??

armaan:ok ok sorry baba, but u have to agree atul look lovely when his face become red

(everybody burst out laughing including atul)

Sapna:hey guys

(sapne and amit too join them)

everybody:hi sapna, hi amit

ridz:how r u sapna? and amit?

amit,sapna:we r fine and u guys?

everybody:same her/fine

muskaan:bohot khush lag rahi hain kya huwa?

(sapna blushed and lowered her head)

rahul:sapna tell na

amit:well we r getting engaged

ridzi:when?

sapna:next week, saturday

muski:oh my god!

(everybody congrats her and amit)

ammi:oh my god, it's like engagement season, first atul angie, now sapna amit and then me and ridzi

everybody except ridzi(shocked):what????

(ridzi turn red)

ammi:well ridzi dad, my dad and we both want to get engaged, so we'll tell u the date once it's fixed.

angie:oh it's so cool

(they congrats them in advance. And AR r blushing, the bell rang they went to the class, they sat by couple.)

(the girl in the college are shocked to see AR together, some of them saw Armaan kissing ridzi forehead in the corridor and when ridzi placed her hand on his cheek)

(the first period end, so the everybody made their toward their next period, they all r in the same class. In the way, ridzi saw girls looking at them as AR were holding their hands, she felt uncomfortable, ammi looked at her and then looked where she was looking and notice that all the girls are looking toward them)

ammi(concerned):ridzi

ridzi(nervously):hmm

(she looked at him)

ammi(reassuringly, said in cool tone):relax

(she smiled)

ammi(loudly):hey guys can I have ur attention

(ridzi stared at him, everybody are looking at them)

ammi:meet my going to be wife, my life ridhima

(ridzi looked at him shocked, she never knew ammi can do that, she unknowingly smiled, ammi smiled back)

ammi(looking toward the girl who where staring at ridzi disgustingly):her brothers and my sisters (mumble) except ridzi (normally) if u have seen her pls keep ur eyes under ur limits,

(only audible to ridzi when he said except ridzi,she blushed, the whole college is shocked, all the boys r happy that the girls won't pay more attention to ammi, boys way r clean)

(but there were in the crowd a girl, who was fuming with anger, she loves him, but he never pay attention, she took a promise to break them apart and then smile evilly)

ammi:excuse us

(he took ridzi by waist and made their way toward the classroom, ridzi was proud of ammi (infact everybody of their gang), she quickly gave him a peck on his cheek,ammi smiled and kissed her back which made ridzi blushed)

ammi:oye hoye, u looked very cute when u blush

IN THE EVENING-AFTER CLASSED-OUTSIDE COLLEGE

ammi:ok by ridzi

(he kissed her on her cheek)

ridzi:bye

(she kissed him back on his cheek)

ammi:And don't forget about the engagement

(she blushed)

ammi:oye hoye

(he kissed on her forehead gently, and they made their way to their house)


AT RIDZI HOME

(ridzi is waiting impatiently for her father, who came back from work after an hours, they sat around the table and started eating, they r talking about everything but ridzi is quiet.Shashank felt something weird)

shashank(concerned):what's the matter ridzi, u r very quiet?

(she lowered her head as she blushed (gos she blushed a lot))

ridzi(still blushing with a smile):actually dad I told ammi about the engagement and he said....

shashank(impatiently):and he said?

ridzi:He said yes

shashank:that's a very good news ridzi

(her father hugged her, angie too and her mom hugged her too, she doesn't hate anymore ridzi instead she thought how will she live when the two angels of their house will go to their house, she has always a soft corner for ridzi but she didn't like showing but she had started now. The day when ammi came for the first time at ridzi's house for see them, her mom told her all the think like she doesn't deserve ammi for ridzi to take as a challenge and show ammi what she is, Padma always wanted well being of ridzi)


AT AMMI'S HOME

(ammi reached home and he is shocked, he hugs them)

ammi(happy):mom dad when u come?

mom:few hours ago

(her moms looked behind him, there were rahul and atul)

ammi(he glanced behind and looked at them):mom I told u my friends are going to stay at my home

mom:yeah, sorry I just forget;

rahul:hi I am rahul

atul:hi I am atul

(they shook hands)

mom/dad:nice to meet u young man

rahul/atul:same here

(his parents are very good but they somehow unintentionally ignore ammi)

dad:I hope u don't have lots of problem here

rahul(smile):no not at all uncle, ammi is taking care of us brilliantly

mom:ok freshen up everybody, I'll tell ramu kaku to set the table

(after few mins, ammi knocked on the door of his father's room)

dad:come in

(ammi entered and saw his father sat on the bed, going through a file, when he saw ammi he placed the file and the side table)

dad(smile):oh come sit

(he made him sat next to him)

ammi:dad actually, I want to get engaged with ridzi

(his father looked at him shocked)

dad(shocked):u actually whats to get engaged with ridzi

(he nods like a child, his father hugged and his mother who heard their conversation hugged him too, they were so much happy)

dad:I'll call bhai sab right now (he called shashank bhai sab)

(ammi smiled widely as he is aver the moon, thinking that he and ridzi will get engaged soon)

(ammi's dad called ridzi's dad, they were also very happy, they fixed the engagement after two weeks, as they need time to do the prepations and invitations)



AFTER A WEEK-SAPNA AND AMIT'S ENGAGEMENT-Saturday

(ridzi didn't went to the orphanage as she will go now on sunday with ammi she had told to the care taker, she was so happy to know that ridzi is gonna get engaged with ammi soon)

(all the gang is doing the prepartions or rather giving a last touch to the place,with some romance. The engagement is held in sapna's house and as u guys there will be lots of fun)

(by 8 PM, the guests started coming, ammi and the other guys are greeting the guests and as asual girls are getting ready (they decided to get ready at sapna's place itself), they r taking there own sweet time)

(By 9, the girls were ready including sapna. Ridzi wore:

Muskaan's dress:

Angie's dress:



And finally the engagement girl's outfit,sapne's dress (and the duppata which is around the waist imagine it on sapna's head):


(the guys wear sherwani's complementing girls like they wore the same color sherwanis as the colour of girl's outfit, they had planned all in advance. Moreover the guy had done the shopping for girl and the girl for guy. Ammi's sherwani is black with half white scarf. Rahul's sherwani is well a color which is closed to yellow but not yellowish like muski's dress, with blue scarf. Atul's dress blue sherwani with purple scarf and now the guy whose engagement is taking place amit is wearin a red sherwani with a white scarf))



PART 16
(valentine's day part)

(Girls came down with sapna, the boys turned toward them and are mesmerized, amit and his family are already their and were waiting for sapna to come down. Boys eyes are wide open)

(girls look toward each other and winked then led sapna to the chair next to amit. Sapna looked at amit his eyes too were wide open, she blushed and looked down, amit composed his self)

amit:u r looking beautiful

sapna:thnx, u look good

amit:thnx

(as amit and sapna are their friends so they decided to do every think boy vs girl, so the girls completely ignored guys and start saying hi hello to the guest)

(guys are shocked that girls didn't came to them, they looked at each other with eyes wide open)

ammi:guys u saw they didn't came to us

rahul:yeah ammi, they didn't give us even a look after coming down.

atul:my sweet sweet brothers did u forget that we decided to do boys vs girls, so they r behaving like we r stranger to them, they r ignoring us

ammi:oh so they want to play like this

rahul:so we will too play like them

(they too winked at each other and gave a hi5)

(amit's parent make the annoucement for the engagement, they exchanged the rings, so now began the real fun)

(the lights went off)

atul:yeh kiya huwa dosto?

rahul:light off ho gayi hai

(hey guys looks at the video of aaja nachle and imagine the three girl dancing on it)
Aaja nachle- Aaja nachle - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yRx5ydV1IfI

Jhanak Jhanak Jhan (the light spot on, on muskaan)
Khanak Khanak Khan (the light spot on, on anjie)
Jhanak Jhanak Khanak Khanak Khan Khan (and finally on ridzi)

(the full lights came back, the boys are once again mesmerized)

Mera Jhumka Utha Ke Laaya Yaar Ve
Jo Gira Tha Barielly Ke Bazaar Mein

(ammi's eyes are fixed on ridzi and has a cute smile on his lip)

Main To Thumka Laga Ke Sharma Gayi
Boli Ghoom Kar Bata De Ke Main Aa Gayi

Mujhko Nacha Ke Nach Le
Aaja Nachle Nachle Mere Yaar Tu Nach Le

(rahul is also staring at muski and he smiled too)

Jhanak Jhanak Jhankaar
Ho'Nachle Nachle Mere Yaar Tu Nach Le

Ab To Lutaa Hai Bazaar
Sub Ko Bhula Ke Nach Le

(atul can't take off his eyes from anjie, he is also smiling)

Aaja Nachle Nachle Mere Yaar Tu Nach Le
Jhanak Jhanak Jhankaar

Ho'Nachle Nachle Mere Yaar Tu Nach Le
Ab To Lutaa Hai Bazaar

Nachle Nachle Zara Nachle Nachle Chhatt Pe Bula Ke Nachle
Nachle Nachle Zara Nachle Nachle Jhat Se Bula Kar Nachle

(this second boys have completely forget that they are against the girls, when grils stopped dancing and everybody clapped they remembers that they are against them and compose them self)

(hey guys pls check the video and imagine the three guys on the place of shahid
Mauja hi mauja- Jab we met - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j01ycasxxts)

Baby when i look into you eyes i see the stars shine
baby here you shout,
Your love has made me so choosy, cooll!

(boys made their way toward the middle of the floor, the girl are standing on a side)

Jag jag sara jag sara nikhar gaya
Hud pyaar hawa de vich bikhar gaya'2
hud

Jag jag sara jag sara nikhar gaya
Hud pyaar hawa de vich bikhar gaya '2
Dil tera hoi jave ambran nu chui jave
Mar udare dekho jigar gaya
Hud Mauja hi Mauja
Sham Savere
Hud Mauja hi Mauja
Pyar mein tere
Hud Mauja hi Mauja
rock d party hun
Mauja hi Mauja
mauja hi mauja
Sham Savere
Hud Mauja hi Mauja
Pyar mein tere
Hud Mauja hi Mauja
rock d party hud
Mauja hi Mauja

(they pull their girl toward them, girls struggled to pushed them but they were too strong)

Oh mahi mera sharwat varga (ammi caresses ridzi cheek, ridzi blushed)
Oh mahi tenu gat gat pela (rahul sat kneew down and made muski sat on his leg)
Oh mahi mera dil menu kahi jaye dil menu kahi jaye (atul twirled angie around and pull her toward him, she land on his chest)
Khul ke jeelan '2 (they kissed on girls cheek and girls are shocked, eyes wide open and mouth too)
Mithde haase (guys winked at girls and move backward and keep dancing, girls blushed and move in a side)
Oh mahi mere aase pase
Oh mahi mere haad beram huye
Dil sat rang hoye
dil mahi sang hoye jidhar gaya
Hud Mauja hi Mauja
Tera sahare
Hud Mauja hi Mauja
Hul hulare hun
Hud Mauja hi Mauja
join d party hun
Mauja hi mauja
Mauja hi mauja
Sham Savere
Hud Mauja hi Mauja
Pyar mein tere
Hud Mauja hi Mauja
rock d party hun
Mauja hi Mauja

(boys was going to leave from the dance floor, the girl held their hand. Guys stopped on their spot, girls turn around, their back facing boys. Boy looked at each other and are shocked. Girls take some step further and the song start)
(imagine them on the place of the two couples in the video)
Bole chidiyan- K3G - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tgqieSmXwC0

Bole chudiyan, bole kangna
Haai main ho gayi teri saajna
Tere bin jiyo naiyo lag da main te margaiya

(Le jaa le jaa, dil le jaa le jaa
Le jaa le jaa, soniye le jaa le jaa) - 2

Aah aah aah aah, aah aah aah
(Bole chudiyan, bole kangna
Haai main ho gayi teri saajna) - 2
Tere bin jiyo naiyo lag da main te margaiya
Le jaa le jaa, soniye le jaa le jaa
Dil le jaa le jaa, ho

(boys looked at them and smiled, then made their way toward the girls)

Bole chudiyan, bole kangna
Haai main ho gaya tera saajna
Tere bin jiyo naiyo lag da main te marjaawa
Le jaa le jaa, soniye le jaa le jaa
Dil le jaa le jaa, ho

Haai haai main marjaawa marjaawa tere bin
Ab to meri raatein kat ti taare gin gin
Bas tujhko pukaara kare, meri bindiya ishaara kare

Hoye, lashkaara lashkaara teri bindiya ka lashkaara
Aise chamke jaise chamke chaand ke paas sitaara

Oh oh, oh oh oh, oh oh oh oh oh
Meri paayal bulaaye tujhe, jo roothe manaaye tujhe
O sajan ji, haan sajan ji
Kuch socho, kuch samjho meri baat ko

Bole chudiyan, bole kangna
Haai main ho gaya tera saajna
Tere bin jiyo naiyo lag da main te marjaawa
Le jaa le jaa, soniye le jaa le jaa
Dil le jaa le jaa, ho

(It's midnight, so the next day start, the guest retired from the party include amit and sapna. the rest of the gang is still their, they take girls in separate corners to have some peaceful time)

(ammi takes ridzi on the garden, and crossed his hand on his chest and pouted his lips)

ammi:so u was ignoring me?

(ridzi smiled and nod. Ammi placed his hand around her waist and pulled her closer)

ammi:u look very beautiful today

(ridzi placed her hands around his neck)

ridzi:thnx

(they stood in the same place, ridzi tried to go away but ammi didn't let)

ridzi:what???

ammi(frowned):well u owe a compliment too

ridzi:oh well u look (she made a round around him)... u look very uhhh...

ammi:(think:did I look ugly?)

(ridzi saw the change of expression on his face)

ridzi(made a bad face):u look very (smile) handsome

(he looked at her and raised his eyebrow. She pulled his cheek and hugs him, he melted in a second and kissed on her forehead)

ammi:we'll get engaged in one week, it's like a dream, ahhh!!

(he shouted as she pinched on his chest and then looked into his eyes)

ridzi(smied like an angel):see it's not a dream, it's reality

(he hugged her)

ammi(smiled):u r very cute

ridzi:thnx, mein hamesha baghwas se mangti houn ke hum aise hi rahein, hamesha ek doosre ke saath aur hamara pyar barta rahe hai

(she kissed on his cheek)

ammi:me too

(he kissed her back on her cheek)

ammi:oh yeah, happy valentine's day

(he gave her a red rose and kiss on her cheek)

ridzi:happy valentine's day to u too

(she gave him a bracelet on whoch it's written ridhima's armaan, seeing that alli smiled and gave her another peck on her forehead)

ammi:thnx

ridz:ur welcome

(they hugged each other)
...................................................
(a guy and girl are standing on the entrance of the house)

boy:so u enjoyed ignoring me?

girl(grinned):yes a lot

boy:angie

angie:yes atul, ok I was just joking, well I enjoyed dancing and not ignoring u and u can't deny it

atul:I agree

(he hugs her)

atul:happy valentine's day

angie:happy valentine's day to u too

(they exchange flowers, red roses, they passed few romantic moments)

..................................................

(after passing cute moment rahul took muskaan to the car, while the others were in entrance or in the garden, so they were not seen)

rahul:I have something to give u

muski:and what it is?

rahul:wait

(rahul turn his face toward the back sit of the car, he bent down and took out a gift)

rahul:happy valentin's day

(she is so happy, she hugged him, he hugged her back)

muski(excited):thnx

(She opened it, ti's cute and lovely teddy bear who is carriying a hear on his stomack on which it's wriiten rahul loves muskaan forever. Muski became emotinal and had a tear in her eyes, she hugged him tightly and then kiss him in his lips, he respond equally)

(Muskaan opened her purse and took out a something)

muski:happy valentine's day to u too

(she gave him the gift, heopened it and it's an album, with their picture from the first day they met to now. Rahul smiled he is so happy, he hugged her back)

rahul:thnx muski, I can never have a beautiful gife then this

(after few minutes, they realize it have been so late so the girls made their way toward thei house and boy toward them)

(A week passed like a second for certain people but for ammi and ridzi those seven days were the most long, they r restless, they spent hours together or on phone)

(muskaan, angie and sapan are making ridzi ready, she is looking an angel, she remembered last week (before sapna engagement) when they were bying dresses for each other)

***Flashback***

(they r standing in the middle of the most famous mall in mumbai)

muski:hey guys, I have an idea

(rahul's hand is around muski's waist, in fact all guys' hand is placed around their girls's waist)

atul:and what's the idea?

muski:how about we select the dresses for u boys for the occasion and the boy for us

rahul:nice Idea

sapna:yeah I agree

angie:Yeah and then we'll see if we like u choice and if u like our choice

ammi:superb yaar

amit:I agree

ridzi:so let's go

(all the girls went to boys dresses shop and boys to girls dresses shop)

(when they came out they saw the dress and was shocked, first of all they were matching and secondly they love each other's choices)

***Flashback(end)***

(ridzi smiled remembering it, the expression on her face and ammi's face, she looked at herself on the mirror, she was looking perfect. All the shopping for her was done by ammi (dress, jewellery....))

Dresses:
Ridzi:










Armaan (don't look at the girls)
http://www.rajasthanistore.com/image.php?object_type=product&image_id=2099

Muski:










Rahul:
http://www.rajasthanistore.com/image.php?object_type=product&image_id=2088

Angie(only the dress):
http://www.rajasthanistore.com/image.php?object_type=product&image_id=2295

Atul:
http://www.rajasthanistore.com/image.php?object_type=product&image_id=2465

Sapna:
http://www.utsavsarees.com/pages/sarees-large.asp?icode=LWK335

Amit:
http://www.rajasthanistore.com/image.php?object_type=product&image_id=2033

muski:u r looking so beautiful

(ridzi blushed)

angie:oye hoye, jiju to dekhti hai behosh ho jayein ghe

ridzi:di don't talk like this

sapna:oh itna khayal apne lover ka

(ridzi lowered her eyes)

muski(looking at msuki):ladke wale niche aa gaye hain, and jiju is looking so dashing

(padma entered the room and told them to take ridzi down. Angie sapna and muski fixed the dupatta on ridzi's head. And led her down, ammi looked at her with mouth full open. Girls led her toward the seat next to ammi and made her sat. Ridzi is looking down)

(Ammi placed his hand on ridzi's hand, ridzi looked toward him)

ammi:u r looking like an angel, so beautiful, so pure, so innocent

(ridzi blushed and looked down)


PART 17


ridzi:thnx,(looked toward him) u r looking very handsome, very hot, very dashing and very cute

ammi (smiled):This is first time I am receiving compliments like this, I am hot and cute together.It' sounds awesome, Thnx

ridzi(smiled shyly):ur welcome

(rahul came and stood next to ammi)

rahul:may I have the attention please. As u know today is my two best friends engagement, so they'll exchanger rings in few moment but shashank uncle have few words to say

shashank:thank you rahul, good evening everybody, I want to wish all the best to my daughter and son in law who is more son to me. From the minute they'll exchange the rings, the places of their partner will become even more important in their hearts then before. Engagement is a pure occasion where a girl and a boy promise to each other to stay together and share every preoblem. The period between engagement and wedding is the most important period because it's the time when u got a chance to spent more time with ur soulmate and to understand each other and the importance of each other. I'll pray to god that thay remain alway like this and love more more with every passing minute. So can we have the rings)

(angie and muski came with the guy ring they gave it ridzi, ridzi places the ring on his finger and atul brought the ring for ridzi which ammi places on her finger)

(everybody congratz them. Rahul took a mic)

rahul:So guys now time for some fun, so we decide to play antakshri, so girl in one side and boy on the other side, (smirk) of course I am in boys team and we r gonna win

(Muski glared at rahul, rahul gave her a smile which melt muski she too smiled and rahul sat on the side of boys team. Ridzi and ammi are playing too)

rahul:girls first

(he said looking at muski)

atul:so muski bhabhi u can sing whatever u want

(muski looked at atul and nod in no as she doesn't want to sing(when the first song end u have to continue with the first letter of the last word or the last letter of the last word))

sapna:muski izzat ka sawal hai

angie:pls muskaan

(she nods)

(hey guys blue are for boys and pink for girls)

Muskaan:
o o o o o ....
meethi meethi baatan karke
chand mulaakataan karke

(she stood up and start dancing eyeing rahul and blushing on the same time)

meethi meethi baatan karke
chand mulaakataan karke
dilasa de gaya
dil maahiya lay gaya
o rabba mera dil maahiya lay gaya
dil maahiya lay gaya
o rabba mera dil maahiya lay gaya


(rahul too stood up and held muski's hand, pulled her toward him. Her hands are on his chest)

(they r looking into each other's eyes)

rahul:
aap ki khatir mere dil ka jahan hai hazir
aap ki khatir mere dil ka jahan hai hazir
apne saare armaan kardoun mein zahir }2
kardoun mein zahir


(they bot sat down still glancing at each other)

angie:
Ruki Ruki Thi Zindagi
Jhat Se CHal Padi


(she stood up and started dancing which made atul smiled)

Hui Khushi Se Dosti
Mazaa Le Le Le Har Ghadi
Ee Ii Ee Aa Aa Aa Aa Hey Hey
Ee Ii Ee Aa Aa Aa Aa
Ee Ii Ee Aa Aa Aa Aa Hey Hey
Ee Ii Ee Aa Aa Aa Aa


(she was going to sat down when atul held her hand and made her dance with him, which she did without any struggle)

atul:
Aankhon mein teri'
Ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain
Ho'
ankhon mein teri'
ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain
Dil ko bana dein jo patang
Saansein ye teri vo hawaayein hain


(atul stopped and they both sat down glancing at each other like rahul and everybody looked at ridzi, ridzi became nervous and looked down)

ridzi:
[Hulchul hui zara shor hua
Dil chor hua teri aor hua ]2

[Esi chale jab hawa
Ishq hua hi hua ]2


(the lights get dim, ammi started singing)

Hulchul hui zara shor hua
Dil chor hua teri aor hua

(ammi stood up still staring at ridzi, held his hand out and offered to ridzi, she placed her hand on him and stood up)

Hulchul hui zara shor hua
Dil chor hua teri aur hua


(he places her hand on his shoulder and his hand on her waist on their other hand are in each others, he spinned her and twirled back)

[Esi chale jab hawa
Ishq hua hi hua ]2


(he twirled her around twice and pulled back)

Ishq Hua haaye
Ishq Hua haayaaaeeeein

(they stared into each others eyes)

Palko Se hoton tak jo rah nikalti hai
Gujare na wahan se yeh teri galti hai
Palko Se hoton tak jo rah nikalti hai

(ammi encircled his both hand around her waist)

hooo
Rehte hain abb hum wahan
Ishq hua hi hua


(ridzi places her hands around his neck and pull him closer)

Esi chale jab hawa
Ishq hua hi hua.....


(she places her head on his chest and moved in rythm)

voice:ammi (loud) ammi (more loud) ammi

(someone shook him, the light get like before)

ammi(confused):hmm, huh!! kiya huwa?

rahul:ammi it's ur turn u have to sing with h or a

(ammi realized he was dreaming when he started singing, he smiled as he saw ridzi sat down in front of him)

atul:ammi sing

girls:5...4....thr....

ammi(cut):
asmani rang hooo.........
pyaaar ki boond hoo......
roshni hoo dhup hooo
chahaton ki gunj ho


(girls stopped counting and looked at him, ammi is looking toward ridzi)

aanchal mein hain
danak chandni
haathon mein woh chand hain
gairon se bhi hain waastan
apno mein pehchaan hain ........
taratarira3 tu zindagiii


(ridzi looked into his eyes full of love, she blushed and lowered her head)

mera izhaar hain
pyaar hi pyaar hain
yaaron ki yaar hain
tu zindagiii


(ammi smiled looking at her, he doesn't took off his eyes from her, he loved when she blushed, he stood up and moved toward ridzi and made her stood up and danced with her)

tuhse main kya kahun
tu hi mera sukun
sang tere rahun
tu zindagiiii

(before ammi finished singing,ridzi eyes fell on muski who knows that ridzi know the lyrics so she pleaded ridzi with her eyes to sing she made a cute face like a baby, ridzi can't say no)

ridzi (looked at ammi and ammi looked at her):

asmani rang hun........
pyaar ki boond hun
roshni ka ang hun
main teri dhup hun


(ridzi hand are on his chest and his hand are place on her waist gently)

tujhse hi hain meri bandagi
tujhse meri jaaan hain
saaya tera mera aashiaan
tu mera armaan hainnn......
lalalalala3 tu zindagiii
mera izhaar tu
mera iqraar tu
pyaar hi pyaar tu
tu zindagiiii


Ammi:
tararatarira3 tu zindagiii

(everybody clapped, they sat back to their seat)

ammi:u sang brilliantly

ridzi(blushed):thnx u too

ammi:ur welcome and thnx

Muski:hey sapna jaldi kuch soch warna hum har jayeinghe

sapna:

Is Pyaar se meri taraf na dekho, pyaar hojayega (2)
yeh pyaar ho gaya tho teer dil ke paar ho jayega
pyaar hojayega(4)


(sapne looked at amit then lowered his eyes)

Do char aise mulakatein hogi
saare zamane mei baatein hongi (2)
baatein hongi
ke naam badnaam tera mera yaar hojayega
pyaar hojayega(2)


atul:amit sing quick

amit:yaar i can't remember anything

(he was too mesmerized by Sapna's song that he completely forgot that they were actually playing)

amit(composed himself):
Aajkal Tere Mere Pyar Ke Charche Har Zubaan Par
Sab Ko Maloom Hai Aur Sabko Khabar Ho Gayi


Rahul:so both teams have one point so they r no loser or winner

(everybody clapped)

Muski:Hey I want to play truth and dare

girls:we r in.

boys:we too.

(the couples gather around a table and sat down. AR are sitting next to each other, interlocking their fingers, after ever minuted they glanced at each other)

(Rahul took an empty water bottle)

Rahul:I'll start

(he spinned the battle it stopped at atul, armaan have to ask)

ammi:how much time it has been that u are in love with angie?

atul(blushed):jab se hosh sambhala hai, tab se

everybody:hoooooooooooo

(atul and angie both blushed)

(Atul spinned tha bottle, it stopped on muki, atul have to ask her)

atul:truth or dare?

muski(smiled):truth

atul:is rahul ur first love?

(he knew it very well just wanted to tease her)

muski(blushed):yes he is the first and the last too

(rahul smiled proudly, rahul's turn was the next and ridzi asked)

ridzi:truth or dare?

rahul:of course dare

ridzi:propose muski in front of us

(he smiled proudly, he is bit nervous but unnoticed by everybody. He stood up and took a rose from the vase. He bent down on knee)

Rahul(eyes with full of love):muskaan I love from i don't know from when I love u, but I only loved, love and will always love u.
Will u marry me?

(he advanced the flower)

(muski's smiled and took the rose)

muski:yes I will

(they hugged each other)

(like this everybody's go through different task, they only two person remain AR)

(amit spinned the bottle, it stopped at ridzi. And rahul have to ask)

rahul:truth or dare?

ridzi:dare

rahul(smiled mischievously):kiss Ammi

ridzi(shocked):what?

rahul:what what? u guys are engaged so kiss ammi on his cheek

(ridzi blushed she moved closer to ammi and gave him a sweet kiss full of love on his cheek, which caused ammi to close his eyes and smiles. When she took her lips back, he opened her eyed and looked at ridzi, his eyes too were showing the same level of love and passion, they both kept staring at each other until muski broke it)

muski(shouted):So ammi is the winner, congratz

ammi:thank u



PART 18


NEXT DAY

(ammi come to pick up ridzi, rahul for muskaan and atul for angie. They are waiting on separate cars. Ridzi came out with muski and angie.)

(Ridzi is wearing red salwar kameez. Muskaan is wearing white jean with pink baby top. Anjie was wearing blue jean and blue top.)

(they guys are mesmerized by seeing them, it's not that they r wearing something different and new but every time they looked more gorgeous and beautifully. Seeing the guys, girls blushed, then say hello to everybody and sat on the respective car)


ARMAAN'S CAR


ridzi(shyly):hi Armaan

armaan(smiled):hi kaisi ho?

ridzi:I am fine and u?

armaan:I am fine, but if u r fine then look in my eyes

(she looked in his eyes, then looked down as she was blushing remembering they r engaged)

armaan:oye hoye

(ridzi flushed, ammi smiled looking at her.)

(armaaan start driving, his hand is on ridzi hand, ridzi's hand is on the gear. She placed her head on his shoulder. She is changing the gear with ammi, and keep blushing (she blush a lot). Which made ammi went crazy, and he felt more and more in love with her every time she blushed or even when she is with him)

(ammi stopped the car in a parking, she tilted her head on looked at him)

ridzi(surprised and confused):why did u stop driving?

(ammi looked at her lovingly, he locked his finger with her. She looked into his eyes and can see the passion and love. She started losing her sense, she was under his spell and ammi was under her spell)

(ammi moved closer, ridzi closed her eyes, feeling his breath on her face. Ammi smiled looking at her, he kissed her eyelids, then kissed her cheek passionately, he moved down and kissed her chin, he kissed everywhere on her face expect her lips, he was torturing her by not kissing on her lips)

(ridzi had enough, she cupped his face and kissed on his lip, on first it was gentle, ammi too closed his eyes and respond equally. Gradually it became deeper and passionate kiss, they were losing there self completely. Armaan's hand are around her waist, Ridzi hand is around his neck and the other on his hair. He parted her lips and took his tongue on her mouth. As her hand moved the kissed went deeper and deeper, they were out of breath so they moves apart.)

(their eyes were closed, they had broken the kiss but still they can feel it. Ammi opened his eyes saw her, she was blushing badly, her eyes still closed, her lips a bit swollen He moved once again to her lips and sucks where it's swollen then he gently removed her dupatta from her neck and placed his lips there, his kissed her neck. She gasped as he left a love bite)

ridzi:ouch!!

ammi(make a sad face):did I hurt u?

(she nodded innocently, this time her eyes were opened, he smiled sadly and then move once again on her neck and sucks at the same place)

ammi:did it feel better?

(he looked at her, still looking a bit sad .She placed her hand on his face and kissed on his cheek as saying she is completely fine, then hide her head on his chest as she has turned crisom red)

ammi(he is disappointed on his self):I am sorry, I wasn't able to control

(she placed her finger on his lips, she looked into his eyes)

ridzi(she asked cutely):shhh, did u regret kissing me?

(he shook his head negatively like a kid)

ridzi:then why u said sorry u know I love u and I completely trust u

(he hugged her, he is so happy to know the amount of trust she placed on him. He trusted her with the same intensity)

ammi:I love u too and I too trust u completely

(he kissed on her forehead and ridzi moved back)

ridzi:I think we should go to the college otherwise we'll get late

ammi(remember):yeah u r right

(Ridzi set her dupatta and Ammi set his hair which made ridzi smiled and started driving fast and reach college on time)

AFTER FEW WEEKS

(Ridzi and ammi was sitting together in a class, the bell rang)

ridzi:ammi u go and order, I have something to ask to teacher

ammi:Ok do quick

ridzi:I'll come in a minute

(she kissed on his cheek, he nodded and make his way toward canteen)

(ridzi asked her prof some question concerning the test and made her way toward the canteen. While going there she slipped, she landed on the floor and held her ankle. She was in pain. two girls came running to her)

girl 1:hey are u okay?

(they helped her standing)

ridzi:no it's hurting a lot

girl 2:come we'll take u too the nursery

ridzi:can u take me to the canteen pls

(the girls nod and made their toward the canteen)

(ridzi reached the canteen and ammi's eyes are fixed on the door as he was waiting for her when he saw ridzi like this. He ran to her and held her)

ammi(worried):ridzi what happened? r u okay?

ridzi:Armaan I just slipped as the floor was slippy and I am feeling better now this two girl helped me

girl 1:hi I am nikita

girl 2:hi I am Maya

armaan:thnx girls for helping her, come join us

(he told them to join them. They accepted. Ammi made ridzi sat on a chair and check her feet)

armaan:U twisted ur ankle very badly

(he pressed her ankle, she let a cry but then she sigh in relief)

ammi(concerned):is it hurting now?

ridzi(smiled):It's completely fine now

(she kissed on his forehead)

(ammi introduced the girls to the group and the group to the girls)

(as weeks passed they became very good friends. AR was getting in love more and more, they can't live without each other even for an hour. It was almost the same situation with RM and AA)

(There is one day left for the graduation and the parents decided they'll get the couple married after one week of graduation. So the preparation are going on full swing)

NEXT DAY

(Armaan, Ridzi, Angie, Atul, Rahul, Muskaan, Sapna, Amit, Nikki and Maya and other student got the graduation, they were all so happy and excited. They were going to get married in short time and after two month they'll start their internship in a prestige hospital like SANJEEVANI (of course the dean is Shashank))

(the priest told that AR marriage can't take place before three weeks, so they fixed after three weeks. AA, RM and AS marriage was held on the day which was fixed before (one week after graduation))

(AA, RM and AS get married ritually, they played all king of prank (imagine hum aapke hain kaun papper scene and other masti scene). It was again boys vs girls)

(now the girls took the guys shoes and hide them. The fun began as the girls returned back from hiding the shoes they found armaan and other guys in front of them)

(hey guys looked at the video and Imagine AR at the place of salman khan and madhuri)
(joote dedo-hum aapke hain kaun-http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eP1nuf2TIH8)

Dulhe Ki Saaliyon O Hare Dupatte Vaaliyon }2
Joote De Do Paise Lelo
Joote De Do Paise Lelo

Dulhan Ke Devar Tum Dikhalaao Na Yoon Tevar }2
Paise Dedo Joote Lelo
Paise Dedo Joote Lelo


Ajee Note Gino Ji, Joote Laao
Zid Chhodho Ji, Joote Laao
Fraud Hain Kya Hum, Tum Hi Jaano
Akadu Ho Tum, Jo Bhi Maano
Jo Bhii Maano, Jo Bhii Maano
Ajee Baat Badhegi, Badh Jaane Do
Maang Chadhegi, Chadh Jaane Do
Adho Na Aise, Pehle Joote
Pehle paise, pehle joote
Pehle Joote Pehle Joote
Joote Liye Hain Nahin Churaayaa Koi Zevar
Dulhan Ke Devar Tum Dikhlaao Naa Yoon Tevar

Paise Dedo Joote Lelo
Joote Dedo Paise Lelo

Kuchh Thandaa Pi Lo, Mood Nahin Hai
(she offered him different kind of drink, he refused it)
Dahi Bade Lo, Mood Nahin Hai
(she offered him dahi bade, he refuse them too)
Kulfi Kha Lo, Bahut Kha Chuke
(she offered him kulfi, he again refused it)
Paan Khaa Lo, Bahut Kha Chuke
(she offerd him pan but he refused once again)
Bahut Kha Chuke Bahut Kha Chuke
Ajee Rasmalaai, Aapke Liye
Itni Mithaai, Aapke Liye
Pehle Joote, Khaaenge Kya
Aapki Marzi, Naaji Taubaa
Naaji Taubaa Naaji Taubaa

Kisi Betuke Shaayar Ki Besuri Qawaaliyon
Dulhe Ki Saaliyon O Hare Dupatte Vaaliyon
Joote Dedo Paise Lelo } 5


(she took the shoes's and start runing, she reached in a secluded corner and stopped ammi was following her, he pineed her against a wall)

ammi:did u think u'll run away from me?

(she is still holding shoes, and encircled her hand around his neck)

ridzi:aaji kaun kambakht aap se dhoor jaana chahta hai, hum to hamesha yuhin aapke pass rehna chahte hain

(they both laughed)

ammi:promise me u'll never leave me, I'll die without u

(his eyes get moist, ridzi's eyes moist too)

ridzi:I'll never leave u promise, I can't also leave without u, now ur turn to make a promise

ammi:I promise I'll never leave u,(he hugged her) I love u

(she hugged him back)

ridzi:I love u too

(he kissed her on her forehead, then her cheek and finally in her lips, it was a passionate kiss, they finally broke apart, ammi left her go. She quickly kissed on his cheek and made her way back in the hall. The groom paid the girls)

(after the marriage RM and AA went to their new house, near shashank's house and amit took sapna to his house. (U guys can imagine what happen in the closed door😉.)

(Amit is supposed to go to america with sapna next morning)

NEXT DAY

AT AIRPORT

(In the morning, the gang reunited and see amit and sapna off. All new married girls blushed as ridzi teased them along ammi)

muski:jab teri shaadi hogi to phir dekhna

angie:han ridzi, it will be we vs u

(they all laughed and ridzi blushed a bit on the thought that she'll be Ridhima Armaan Malik in two weeks. Ammi was supposed to take ridzi home so AA, RM maya and nikki left from there)

(ammi and ridzi sat on ammi's car. They were all lovey-dovey (u can imagine what they were doing😉😳))


IN THE EVENING


(It was the reception day, ridzi was getting ready on her house. When she received a call, it appear "jaan")

ridzi(smiled):Hi Armaan, how r u?

ammi:i am fine n u?

ridzi:I was ok but listening ur voice I am very happy

ammi:me too, so u r ready?

ridzi:yes

ammi:I miss u a lot

ridzi:I am not missing u as u r with me

(she looked at the locket and kissed it)

ammi(he too looked at the locket):u r with me too but still u r far away, actually It has been complete 7 hours we didn't meet each other

(she blushed)

ammi(smiled):oye hoye, u looked gorgeous when u r blushing

ridzi:how u got to know I am blushing?

ammi:I know everything, we r one not two remember

ridzi(smiled):yes

ammi(sadly):ok ridzi U know how much I hate to say but I have to go mom is calling, by love

ridzi:bye I love u

ammi:I love u too, mwah, bye

(he gave her kiss on phone, she blushed)

(she hung up and the next second her mobile rang)

ridzi(smiling):hello

girl:hi ridzi, it's nikky, actually my car broke down and I can't get any taxi can u please pick me up from (she gave her the adress)

(ridzi smiled at nikki, she is a complete chatterbox)

ridzi:ok ok don't worry I'll get there in ten minutes

(ridzi told her parents a friend of her's car broke down, she'll pick her up and meet the in the hall)

(ridzi took her car and made her way toward the given address, she reach at a signal, she tries to stop her car but the break was fail. Ridzi panicked,)

ridzi(panicked):yeh break kyon nahi lag rahi

(she tried again and again but all in vain. Her car loose the control and she was near a bridge near water.)

ridzi:pls baghwan jee, help me

(by now she had tears in her eyes, she is remembering Armaan, she affraid. Her car bang again barrier and her car fell in the sea)



PART 19


AFTER FEW HOURS

(the police came there as people inform about the accident. The whole family and friend are gathered, ammi came there, tears in his eyes)

ammi:officers where is ridhima?

officer:we found the car but she is missing

ammi(he held the officers collar):officer found her in any price

(Ammi run toward the barrier with tears streaming down his eyes)

ammi(he is crying and yelled):ridhima, ridhima, where r u? U have to come back, where are u ridzi?

(Everybidy cried seeing him like this.)

Armaan(crying and spoke angrily):AGAR MERI RIDHIMA KO NAHI BACHA SAKTE TO KOYI BAAT NAHI MEIN APNI RIDHIMA KO KHUD BACHAOUNGHA

(He was just going to jump but Rahul and atul hold him. his parents, ridzi parents and other friends tried to calm him down but all in vain. After shouting he fainted)

(his parents, rahul and atul took him in the hospital. Ridzi parents, angie, muskaan, maya are on the bridge)

(after few minutes shashank received a call)

Shashank(sad and crying):hello

nikki:hello uncle mein nikki bol rahi houn, yeh ridzi kahan hai mein uska wait kar rahi houn

(he started crying)

nikki:uncle kiya huwa?

shashank:ridzi met with an accident and her call fell in the sea

nikki(started):oh my god

(she hung up the phone and after 30minutes she finally got a taxi and reach to them. She was crying, she hugged angie and ridzi's mom. She tried to comfort them)


IN THE HOSPITAL


(the doctor came out after checking)

rahul(worried, his eyes are moist):how is he doctor?

doctor:he is a very bad state, u shouldn't give him any stress from now

atul(sad and his eyes are moist):sir how can he not take stress, he lost his love

(by then they hears shouting)

ammi(shouted):ridhima

(he stood up, took away the drip and run from there, atul and rahul tried to stop him. But he wasn't going to stop, he snatch the keys from rahul and sat run to the car. He drove back to the bridge rahul and atul follow him with a taxi)

(ammi reached the spot, came out from the car and went back to the barrier)

ammi(crying out his heart):ridhima, ridhima tum kahan ho? Pls come back, I can't leave without u, u can't leave me, I'll die without u. Ridzi where r u?

(he collapse on the floor, crying)

Officer:No one have even succeed coming out from here, she is dead

ammi(shouted and held his collar once again):no she is alive

officer:Mr malik pls control ur self

(he took his hand back and knelt down)

ammi:she is alive, she can't leave me


(Hey guys listen the songs in the same time as reading)
(tere naam(sad)-tere naam-http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iszBupPx454 .Only listen don't picturize ammi on salman😆)


maar ki bhi vaadaa apna na todenge
ik dooje kaa saath kabhi na chhoDenge


(ammi:ridzi u r looking beautiful, u r the most beautiful girl on the earth

rid(blush):are u flirting with me?

ammi(chuckle):no not at all, u r really looking goergous.

ridzi:so r u drank?

ammi:no, why are u asking me question like this?

(ridzi:ammi u never praise girl like me before so....)


apnaa to sadiyoN janmoN kaa naataa hai

((ammi pinned her against the wall)

ammi:did u think u'll run away from me?

(she is still holding shoes, and encircled her hand around his neck)

ridzi:aaji kaun kambakht aap se dhoor jaana chahta hai, hum to hamesha yuhin aapke pass rehna chahte hain

(they both laughed))


jaan se jaan ko kaun judaa kar paataa hai

(ridzi:thnx,(looked toward him) u r looking very handsome, very hot, very dashing and very cute)

tere sivaa, tere sivaa

((they stood in the same place, ridzi tried to go away but ammi didn't let)

ridzi:what???

ammi(frowned):well u owe a compliment too

ridzi:oh well u look (she made a round around him)... u look very uhhh...

ammi:(think:did I look ugly?)

(ridzi saw the change of expression on his face)

ridzi(made a bad face):u look very (smile) handsome


(he looked at her and raised his eyebrow. She pulled his cheek and hugs him, he melted in a second and kissed on her forehead))


tere sivaa is dariyaa kaa nahin koi kinaaraa sanam
ho.., nahin koi kinaaraa sanam


(ridzi:u r only mine and don't ever think about someone else)


tere naam ham ne kiyaa hai, jeevan apnaa saaraa sanam
ho.., jeevan apnaa saaraa sanam


(ridzi:I love u too)
(ridzi:I'll never leave u promise, I can't also leave without u, now ur turn to make a promise)


ammi(shouted on top of his voice):ridzi u can't leave me u promised me, u can't leave me

(Rahul and atul took him from there, but he was firm too not move. They took forcefully)

IN AMMI'S ROOM

(he is sitting on the floor, in the dark. If the light were on we could easily see his eyes with swollen and tired, he hadn't shaved from two days. He is surrounded by ridzi pics. Their engagement's pic, sapna's engagement's pic, college pic, RM,AA,AS sangeet and wedding pics)

(his eyes felt on the wedding pics)

***flashback****


(she took the shoes's and start running, she reached in a secluded corner and stopped ammi was following her, he pinned her against a wall)

ammi:did u think u'll run away from me?

(she is still holding shoes, and encircled her hand around his neck)

ridzi:aaji kaun kambakht aap se dhoor jaana chahta hai, hum to hamesha yuhin aapke pass rehna chahte hain

(they both laughed)

ammi:promise me u'll never leave me, I'll die without u

(his eyes get moist, ridzi's eyes moist too)

ridzi:I'll never leave u promise, I can't also leave without u, now ur turn to make a promise

ammi:I promise I'll never leave u,(he hugged her) I love u

(she hugged him back)

ridzi:I love u too

(he kissed her on her forehead, then her cheek and finally in her lips, it was a passionate kiss, they finally broke apart, ammi left her go. She quickly kissed on his cheek)

***flashback (end)***


ammi(he cried loudly):ridzi pls come back, I can't leave without u

(his parents are looking at him from the edge of the door, they r also crying to see their child in this condition, his father hugged his mom)

((atul and rahul are teir to support ammi and as ammi's parents request them to stay there with ammi they can't say no) atul and rahul entered in the room. Rahul placed his hand on ammi's shoulder. Atul and rahul have to support him but they were also sad, they had to be strong)

(ammi looked at him)

ammi(he cries):see rahul, ridzi isn't coming back tell her na to come back I can't live without her, pls take her back. She promised me she won't leave me. Look tell her It has been 48 hours we met each other, pls tell hell to call me. Why isn't she calling me back or taking my call

(he took again his mobile and called on her number)

rahul(by now he too was crying):she won't come back, qThe officer said retuning from the sea back alive is impossible, why can't u understand.

ammi(shouted):shut up, she is alive, get out from here, I don't want to see u.(he cried) she is alive

rahul(shouted):stopped it armaan, now eat u haven't eaten from two days (he soften) now eat please

ammi(like a child):no, I won't eat until ridzi came back

atul:armaan please eat

(armaan shook his head)

atul:tujhe ridzi ki kasam

(he looked at him, he can't say no he give him promise of ridzi. He sat down, atul made him fed)

rahul:now pls sleep armaan for sometime

armaan:I wish I just open my eyes and it become all as it was on the morning of ur receptions day

atul:armaan pls relax, sleep few hours it will relax u

(he nodded, atul and rahul left the room. But ammi didn't budge from their, he kept looking at rdzi pics and remembering their moments. He kept crying)

(at midnight, rahul went to ammi's room and saw everywhere, bu ammi wasn't in sight)

rahul(worried):yeh kahan chala gaya itni raat ko?

(he ran to atul's room and knocked at his door, atul came out)

atul(sleepy):what happened rahul, u look worried?

rahul:armaan isn't in his room

atul(worried):oh my god, where did he went?

rahul:we have to find him

(atul and rahul took different car start searching. After an hour's drive atul found him on the same bridge where the accident took place. Atul called rahul and inform him)

ammi:ridzi pls come back, u know I can't leave without u right? Just come back it's our wedding in 13 days, I promise I'll love u like no man love a woman, I'll give all the happiness, pls come back. Rahul told me u r d... (he can't even utter the word dead, the tears are streaming down like creating a sea) he is lying na, u r alive, I know, U promised me u'll never leave me. And yeah u wanted our room to be painted on lilac color, I painted the walls on lilac color, perfectly as u wanted. And I als kept some place free to hung our wedding pic. Pls come back.

(atul seeing that start crying, but he have to control to be strong. He went to ammi and hugged him, ammi sobbed on his shoulder)

ammi:pls atul, tell ridzi to come back, I miss her it has been so long that we talked.
I can't leave wthout her, she is my life. I know she is alive, she promised me. And If I am alive it means she is alive.

Atul:ammi even if she is alive, do u think she'll be happy to find u in this state, u have to leave happily for her, she wanted to see u happy. Did u thought if she come one day what will she go through seeing u like this. U have to leave for her and fulfill her dream. She wanted u to be a successful doctor, u have to do this for her.

(ammi looked at him and he knew, he have to fulfill ridzi's dream)

ammi:atul tu thik keh raha hai, I will fulfill all dream of ridzi, I know she will come back

(atul hugged him tightly and he too hope that ridzi wil come back, after few minutes rahul reached there and took him house)


NEXT DAY


(ammi always remembered ridzi, but he ate and slept on time, he was alwyas surrounded by her memories, which made him smile. He didn't smile after that day from heart which reached his eyes)

(rahul and atul postpone there honeymoon, Rahul and atul decided to take him in some other town (delhi), it will change the atmosphere, but they knew very well whatever he leave, he was always with ridzi memories. They tried fully to make him smile, but he smile onmy when he remembered his time with ridzi)

(rahul entered in ammi's room controlling all his emotion)

rahul:ammi have u done ur packing?

ammi:yeah I am doing

(he put his clothes and other stuff, along ridzi's pic. While he was packing his eyes fell on his wrist)

***FLASHBACK***

ammi:oh yeah, happy valentine's day

(he gave her a red rose and kiss on her cheek)

ridzi:happy valentine's day to u too

(she gave him a bracelet on which it's written ridhima's armaan, seeing that alli smiled and gave her another peck on her forehead)

***FLASHBACK(end)***


(he smiled remembering the moment and when it finished a tear made his way on his cheek)


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voice(shouted):Armaan


PART 20


voice(shouted):Armaan

(she looked around, she had shouted his name again, No she didn't know who he was. she looked around the room, sweat was driving down her)

(Doctors came running, they saw the girls was panting heavily. They gave her an injection to calm her down. She felt asleep)

guy:uncle is she ok?

doctor:Yes Angad, she is better now, she shouted some armaan's name anyways u have done a great work to take her here on time

angad:it was my duty uncle

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(It was along time now, he sat there on his bed looking depressed. Fine he did miss her but what was it now, where was she. where was the person he loved the most now)

atul: Armaan? (walking to his bed)

atul: Armaan??? (He asked again, when he finally jumped out of his thoughts)

armaan: Haan atul (he looked starled by atuls appearance)

atul: Kaha koh gayye te? (he bit his lip for asking him that)

armaan: kahi nahi champ (smiling he tried to assure atul)

atul: packing ho gayyi???

armaan: Haan woh todi si bakhi hai

atul: teek hai

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doctor: U know she is very lucky, eventhough she has several bruises on her body, It's a miracle she is completely save now waisa angad kaha milli tumhe yeh ladki?
angad: woh uncle (He went thinking on what had happened and how they found this girl)

***FLASHBACK***

(a girl is standing near the big rock, on high height, she was ready to jump)

guy:kripa pls stop,

kripa:why should I stop, go from there angad

angad:kripa pls listen, I don't love her, she was trying to trap

kripa:u r saying the truth right?

(he nodded and hugged her)

angad:I love u, u r my wife, i love u more than my life

kripa:I love u too (her eyes fell on something) angad see there

(angad looked where she was pointing, they went there and saw a girl)

kripa: angad (tears formmed in her eyes)

angad: kripa shhhh (he tried to calm her down) come on jaldi hospital le chalte hai

( He quickly dialed the number, finally it took time for the ambulance of delhi to arrive he waited and calmed kripa down)

kripa: jaldi doctor (she said as tears quciked down in her)

(putting the girl in the ambulance they took her to the hospital)

***FLASHBACK(end)***



doctor:yeh Kripa bhi na bilkool bachi ban jati hai kabhi kabar, lekin aaj uske bachpane ne ek jaan bacha di

angad:I am very proud of wife

doctor:yes and I am very proud of my daughter

(they both laugh)

kripa:u both are laughing on me right, I won't talk to both of u

angad:of course we were laughing at u

(kripa pouted her lips, like child, angad pulled her)

angad:we were saying we r proud of u

(he kissed on her forehead)

angad:but if u try suicide once again, I won't talk to u

kripa:sorry, but seeing u with some one else made my blood boiled

(he smiled at her and kissed once again on her forehead)

kripa:how is she now?

angad:better, uncle said she shouted some armaan's name, when she opened her eyes

kripa:maybe he is somewhere connected to her

(the girl in hospital u should have guessed it's ridzi, ridzi gained her sense, but she doesn't remember anything)

ridzi:mujhe kuch yaad kyon nahi aa raha?

(she is crying now as she forced to remember but she is unable)

Kripa:it's ok, tum itna zor maat to dimaag per, by the way I am Kripa. What's ur name?

(she tried to ask her name, maybe she remembered, ridzi looked at her strangely)

priyanka:I don't know, what's my name?

Angad:it's ok, (he places his hand on her shoulder) ur brain get damaged but from now ur name is Priyanka

PS:(from now on, in this story ridzi will be called priyanka)

Kripa:and u r gonna stay with us,(she looked at priyanka's pale face) oh sorry is langour se to milana bhul gayi

angad(shocked):kripa!!

Kripa:what?? anyways meet him, he is angad khanna my hubby

(she pulled his cheek)

(priyanka forgot about what angad told and smiled then made shocked face as flash go through her mind she is pulling someone's cheek but whom's she don't, she can't see his face)

Kripa:would u like to be my sister?

(priyanka came back to reality and nodded. Kripa was too happy she hugged her)

Kripa:see angad u and dad always team up against me, now I have a cute sister

angad:she isn't only ur sister, she is my sister too right Priyanka?

(he side hugged priyanka. priyanka smiled at their relationship, they were married but fought like children. Although she was smiling but there was amiss. She can't smile with her heart)

priyanka(weakly):Okay okay, angad bhai...(she looked at him) u don't mind me calling u bhai?

(he shook his head and hugged her)

angad:no in fact I love it

priyanka(she smiled):yeah I was saying, That u don't need to fight as u r my bro and she is my bhabhi. And bhabhi u know it's way to much fun to share this relation.

(kripa made a bad face, priyanka pulled her weakly, with a small smile, toward her)

priyanka:don't worry, we'll tease him together, we will always team up against him

(kripa went happy and kripa hugged priyanka)

(Angad went out and meet kripa's dad in his cabin)

uncle:Angad, priyanka are physically a bit week, but she has brain damage, well it isn't very dangerous. Actually in those case it's like she remember everything but there is a wire, which didn't let the message receive the brain

PS:(this is only blah blah i truly don't know a single stuff related to medical)

uncle:I believe, she'll get her memory back really soon.
Angad I am glad u did take priyanka's responsibly.

Angad(smile):uncle u didn't need to be glad as u have heard, she is my sister

(kripa's dad patted his shoulder, in the way of showing he is really proud of angad)

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(Ammi is sitting in the back sit of the car, he is thinking of ridzi and the moment he spent with her. He loves those moments, it's his life now. He is sure that she'll come back. He is going to Delhi only for rahul and atul, he know they r doing all this to made him smile. He had seen atul and rahul crying. They missed ridzi a lot)

(he recalled all the moment spent with ridzi)

ammi(think:Ridzi u know I am heartless now as u have my heart and I don't know where u r but I'll find u soon. I miss u a lot, I love u a lot)

(he closed his eyes and ridzi face flashed in front of him, automatically, he has a smile on his lip. But he opened his eyes as he hear atul speaking, but he is still lost in his and ridzi's memories, he can't move his attention from ridzi, he doesn't want even)

atul(cutely):rahul please car rok emergency hai

(rahul smiled at atul but ammi didn't show any trace of smile he was again lost in his thought anyone can know it. Rahul was sad, he can't made his friend happy)

(rahul stopped the car, atul rushed to the toilet. Rahul came out from the car and sat next to ammi after few minutes)

rahul(softly he put his hand on his shoulder):armaan

armaan(come to the reality):huh!! han kiya huwa?

rahul(he tried his best to not chocked on his word):Yeh tere liye apple juice laoya houn

(ammi took it, rahul made his way and on the same minute a tear licked from ammi's eyes)

***FLASHBACK***

PS:(from part 13, the day when AR confessed)

rid:oh haan, I was just going to bring a drink

ammi:wait I'll bring, what u'll like to have?

rid:anything u like

ammi:so much trust on me?

rid:more than my self

(ammi's feeling happy that ridzi trust him that much and he hope he'll never broke this trust and he also trust ridzi a lot more than his self, he wents and comes after few minutes)

ammi:here we go

(went to know what it is, it's apple juice)

rid(smiles):thnx,u know it's my favorite drink

ammi(give her back a charming smile with his cute dimples):mine too,

***FLASHBACK end***


(Ammi wiped his tears as Rahul came back on the driver seat, he too have to be stonger)

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(Priyanka:go through a nightmare, she can't see the faces. She saw she is with a guy giving him a bracelet, then a guy giving her a locket, then he kissed her, she jerked up from her dreams. She took the glace of water on the bed side table and drank it. Her eyes fell on the mirror which reflects the locket on her neck, she was going to took it off, to look what it is. But then she stopped as she heard a voice
a guy:now u r the owner of my heart and I am the owner of ur heart)

(she stood up from the bed, she is still so weak, moved closer to the mirror and saw, it was written Armaan)

Priyanka:armaan

(she tried to remember whose name is it but all in vain, her head began feeling dizzy. She was unable to stand straight and felt down and it made a noise which made angad kripa awake. They rushed to her room and saw her on the floor.)

angad:kripa call uncle quickly

(Kripa nodded and called her father, meanwhile Angad picked up Priyanka and placed her on the bed)

(Kripa's father came in twenty minutes, he lives near their house. He checked Priyanka)

uncle:don't worry guys she is ok, she fainted because she put lots of stress on her mind

(Kripa was passing her hand through Priyanka's hair, her eyes fell on priyanka's neck, there were a locket, a half heart, on which it was written Armaan)

kripa:see angad, on the locket around her neck it's written Armaan

(angad looked where she was pointing)

angad:yeah I guess she loved someone named Armaan

uncle(smile):and I believe, it's because of his love she is saved

(angad and kripa smiled)

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(Armaan, atul and Rahul reached at delhi, they settled them selves on rahul's house

PS:(rahul and atul are from delhi, so they have their parents' house there)


rahul(smile):hey Ammi ur room is on the first floor on the right, next to atul's room

(ammi smiled back, took his bag and made his way toward his room, he unzipped his bag and took out ridzi and his photo. He kissed it and placed it on his bed side table. A lone tear made his way on his cheek)

armaan:I miss u

(atul was on the edge of the armaan's room door. He too felt tears welling, but he knew he has to control so he plasters a smile and entered)

atul:hey Ammi come, we r going out for lunch

(ammi nodded and joined them)

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(Priyanka wook up and felt her head still spining)

kripa:hey Priyanka, the food is ready

(kripa helped priyanka to came in the dining room. Priyanka looked at a man of about 50 years old)

priyanka:aap to mere doctor hain na, aap yahan kaisai?

kripa(she laughed at herself):how silly of me I forgot to introduce u to him, he is my father

pryianka:namastey uncle

(she bent down to take blessings)

uncle:jeetey raho beti, aur beetiyon ki jaaga yahan hoti hai

(he pointed toward his heart and hugged her. Priyanka was touched, she smiled through her tears. She doesn't who she is? where she is? and the people are treating her like they know her from ages)

angad:hey uncle, meri behna ko rula diya

uncle:acha ab behna aagayi to uncle ko bul gaye

(they all laughed and ate. Whenever priyanka smiled or laughed, people closed to her can easily make out that something is missing (yeah her heart is missing armaan but her brain isn't receiving the message of heart))

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(Rahul took armaan and atul, in a very famous restaurant, they ate there, well for ammi it was like eating less playing more with the food,)

rahul:ok guys, after eating we'll go home and rest for a while, I am very tired

atul:me too

(armaan kept silent, he tried a lot to speak more but he can't, it's like impossible)

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(Priyanka and the other's finished eating)

uncle:ok now I have to go have some patient waiting for me

(everybody nodded)

uncle:and Kripa and angad, u have to bring Priyanka for the regular check up by 5 PM

angad/kripa:ok

(kripa and angad smiled and everybody say bye to uncle)

kripa:come Priyanka, I have lots of think to tell u

angad(dramatically):that's not fair girls, kripa from the day u got priyanka, u forget me

(he made a sad face and pouted his lips)

kripa:yeah well I was thinking, what about I joined priyanka in the night too

(angad open his mouth wide and the girls burst out laughing)

kripa:come join us, oh by the way didn't u have an appointment today

angad:it got postpone

(kripa smiled like child. Then grabbed priyanka and angad by their arms and led them to the sitting room.)

(Kripa ran back in her room and came with photo albums. Kripa shoved her their pics. They have great time)

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(By 4 PM, Rahul, atul and armaan were sitting in the sitting room)

rahul:hey guys what about sight seeing there is beautiful place near our house

atul:yeah and i love that place, u in armaan

(armaan nodded, with a fake smile. They got ready and took cycles. Ammi wasn't in the mood of cycling but he did it for rahul and atul)

(the reached the place,it was a park, in the middle there were a beautiful lake surrounded by grass, on the grass there were children games planted)

(ammi put the bike in a side and moved toward the lake and it was breath taking. For sure it was less beautiful then ridzi. He smiled remembering about ridzi. He wished, sitting there ont he lake, that he'll take ridzi there. He is damn sure she is alive and coming there in delhi he can feel her presence even more)



Question:Hey guys, in this part i somewhere mentioned where is ridzi, u have to told me where she lives and where I wrote it😉? (answer it through PM box, I hope lots of guys will answer it)

Hey guys, keep reading and leaving ur comments. Thnx for ur support till now I hope u'll support me in the future too. I'll continue As Soon As Possible.

Luv u guys<333
Kashish


Edited by kashishk - 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Robin_M

hey girl congrats on thread 2!



Her Robin,
Thnx for the congratulations.


Originally posted by: ruky786

wow second thread congrats looking forward to more updates for this ff



Hey dear,
Thnx a lot for the congratulations.
I hope u'll keep loving and commenting this FF.



Hey guys, I'll continue soon. I hope u'll love the next parts. Thnx a lot for the compliments, pls keep reading my FF and leaving ur comments,ur comments meant a lot to me moreover it help me a lot to improve and to know if I made a mistake somewhere so let me know (all criticize are welcomed).

Luv u all<333
Kashish

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Hey First of all congrats on ur new thread n then the coments on la the parts that u have writern so fat got only onr word FABULOUSE its just wonderful the way u have writen this ff so far i m so glad to b the reader of this fantstic ff thnxs a ton for al those PMs n sorry for not commenting manny times but i m very very bussy with my class n work its realy heard to keep it al together but i m trying to manage it al
i m doing double major so its like studing towtimes more then u r supos too
but u hjave to do it
any way once agine congrates n keep on rocking just like this
luv
nruti
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Originally posted by: pwincess kanzi

congo 4 new thread kashish. updae asap! dnt 4get 2 pm me! :D



Hey Princess,
Thnx a lot for the congratulations.
I'll continue ASAP (hopefully tomorrow, if not tomorrow then sunday for sure).
Don't worry I'll surely PM u.



Hey guys, I'll continue soon. I hope u'll love the next parts. Thnx a lot for the compliments, pls keep reading my FF and leaving ur comments,ur comments meant a lot to me moreover it help me a lot to improve and to know if I made a mistake somewhere so let me know (all criticize are welcomed).

Luv u all<333
Kashish

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Originally posted by: cutie_mahima

Heyy Kashish di!!
woww!! second thread!! congrats!!!! =D

and about part 20....sorry for commenting late......but..

it was awesome!!!!
but soooo sad!! =[....noo!! ridz has memory problem!!!!
awww...i can't see armaan in this state!!!! AR are adhura without each other!!!.....
AK's entry was really good!
plzzzz make AR meet again sooonn!!!

cont soon and thanx fr the PM!!

<333333
Mahima



Hey Mahima,Thnx a lot for the congratulations.
It's ok for the late comment but I am happy u did it now.
Thnx a lot for the compliments.
I agree it was sad.
Yeah ridzi lost her memory.
I also can't see ammi like this.
Yes AR are incomplete without each other.
I am so glad u liked AR entry.
Don't worry they'll be together soon.
I'll continue soon and ur welcome for the PM.



Hey guys, I'll continue soon. I hope u'll love the next parts. Thnx a lot for the compliments, pls keep reading my FF and leaving ur comments,ur comments meant a lot to me moreover it help me a lot to improve and to know if I made a mistake somewhere so let me know (all criticize are welcomed).

Luv u all<333
Kashish

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#26

Originally posted by: anupama96

hiii i have just read your ff its really nice yaar continue soon

and yaa ar ko jaldi milado yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz



Hey dear,
Welcome to my FF.
Thnx a lot for the compliments.
I'll continue soon, Don't worry they'll meet soon, just keep patience😉.



Hey guys, I'll continue soon. I hope u'll love the next parts. Thnx a lot for the compliments, pls keep reading my FF and leaving ur comments,ur comments meant a lot to me moreover it help me a lot to improve and to know if I made a mistake somewhere so let me know (all criticize are welcomed).

Luv u all<333
Kashish

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Posted: 16 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: loyalkashion

heyy congrats on second thread pleazz update the next part soon and pleazz pm me when u do it thanx

kash forever



Hey dear,
Thnx a lot for the congratz.
I'll upload soon.
I'll surely PM u when I'll continue.



Hey guys, I'll continue soon. I hope u'll love the next parts. Thnx a lot for the compliments, pls keep reading my FF and leaving ur comments,ur comments meant a lot to me moreover it help me a lot to improve and to know if I made a mistake somewhere so let me know (all criticize are welcomed).

Luv u all<333
Kashish


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Posted: 16 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: pushpi

Hey congrats on the second thread! Hope you get to update soon and don't forget to PM me ;-)

-Pushpi-



Hey Pushpi,
Thnx a lot for the congratulations.
I'll update soon and will surely PM u.



Hey guys, I'll continue soon. I hope u'll love the next parts. Thnx a lot for the compliments, pls keep reading my FF and leaving ur comments,ur comments meant a lot to me moreover it help me a lot to improve and to know if I made a mistake somewhere so let me know (all criticize are welcomed).

Luv u all<333
Kashish

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Posted: 16 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: SaziArmaan

Hey hun...

Congrt for da new thread..
u ttuely deserved it...
now plzzz update mega soon... am so eager to read da next part....
Luv Ya saz.....😃



Hey Saz,
Thnx a lot for the congratz.
It's all happening because of u guys, thnx.
I'll continue ASAP.



Hey guys, I'll continue soon. I hope u'll love the next parts. Thnx a lot for the compliments, pls keep reading my FF and leaving ur comments,ur comments meant a lot to me moreover it help me a lot to improve and to know if I made a mistake somewhere so let me know (all criticize are welcomed).

Luv u all<333
Kashish

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Posted: 16 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: cutie_yachu

hey kashish welcome on nd thread congratz
waiitng fr d nxt prt
cont soooooon
luv yachu



Hey Yachu,
Thnx a lot for the congratz.
I'll continue soon.



Hey guys, I'll continue soon. I hope u'll love the next parts. Thnx a lot for the compliments, pls keep reading my FF and leaving ur comments,ur comments meant a lot to me moreover it help me a lot to improve and to know if I made a mistake somewhere so let me know (all criticize are welcomed).

Luv u all<333
Kashish

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ArSh(Armaan-Shilpa/DMG) ff:

Is there anyone interested in reading ArSh(Armaan-Shipa) ff, it's such a old show that I'm not sure if there any fans left in this forum.

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