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Posted: 16 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: lalala10

Hi,
Great part! Kripa ws excited?? I wanted her to be jealous, but nyways thata the way the sory goes. I hope AK fall in love soon and Rahul, actually realizes what he feels for Muskaan.
Please continnue soon,
Mona.



Hey thanks for commenting🤗

Jealousy will come a lil later, she needs to reli be into him. lolz😆😆😆 they will definitely fall for eachother soooon!!!! Rahul and mussu lovestory will also continue, and Rankan will be coming occasionally aswell.

will cont by tomorrow!

Nadz😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: deeya123

have a great time in ur home country

great part
good to see ak coming closer



Hey thanks for commenting🤗

I did have a blast, thanks😉

Yep AK together always seem sweet!

Nadz😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Sujalthegreat

Firstly I'm reading this fanfic for the first time...

Secondly its going okay....nothing much...nothing good about it at all....because its not good it's brilliant lol...sorry was just messing around...it really is brilliant....so far I've read this and outback man seeks wife and in both I totally hate this Prithvi guy...what a jerk...anywayz the latest part was great...I want to see AK fall in love real soon and like Mona said Rahul actually realizes what he feels for muskaan...great going and great job.




Hey Welcome to Chalte Chalte🤗😆
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😆😆 you got me there, i reli thought u didnt like it. lol! but im glad u liked it! Brilliant is a bit much for it as its only started. lolz but thanks!😳 LOL im following Outback man seeks wife aswell, and prithvi is a total jerk in that. lol in here i'll bring Nikki maybe later on for him, still thinking.

They will sooon be in love then confession then marriage and problems. LOL. RM are just so sweet any role u put them in they make it seem cute.

Thanks for ur sweeeet comment!

😆😆 Nadz😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Smilesx3

hey. great ff. love the story line. continue soon



Hey Welcome to Chalte Chalte! thanks for commenting🤗

Im glad u liked it!

will cont. by tomorrow, hopefully a looooong one.

Nadz😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: xxxxminixxxx

oohhh
we totally understand about u going to ur home country
have fun but plz update soon
could add me to ur pm list thnx


'minita



Hey Welcome to Chalte Chalte, and thanks for commenting🤗

Yep Home is home. LOL Thanks i had a great time😉

will cont. by tomorrow, hopefully a looooong one. will add u!

Nadz😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: swetha10

Hey Nadz.. jus caught up with ur FF.. itz amazing.. very interesting story line.. do continue soon n PLzz do PM me when u update............



Hey Welcome to CHalte Chalte! and thanks for commenting🤗

Awwww Im glad u liked it!

will cont. by tomorrow, hopefully a looooong one. will PM u!!!!!

Nadz😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: akrock

nice fic....
cont soon



Hey Welcome to Chalte Chalte, and thanks for commenting🤗

Im glad u liked it!

will cont. by tomorrow, hopefully a looooong one.

Nadz😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: sasik

jst read urr ff.

nice fic.
pls update soon.



Hey Welcome to Chalte Chalte! and thanks for commenting🤗

Im glad u liked it!

will cont. by tomorrow, hopefully a looooong one.

Nadz😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
#79


Chalte Chalte

Part 3


Rahul was fuming seeing muskaan laughing and talking to josh, she sits in josh's convertible, and they drive off. Rahul stands there watching them, he sits on his motor bike and follows them. He gets really irritated when they stop at a ice cream parlour and he flirts with her, he tells her something in her ear and Rahul is on fire, he hits his hand on his mo' bike. Muskaan just laughs at what he told her, and pulls his cheek. Rahul feels something strange 'but why???' he cant decide, he angrily looks at her and she sees him and gives him a confusing look and finally raises her hand to wave but he just angrily rides off.

"Rahul?? Yahan kya kar raha tha? Itni jaldi kyun chala raha tha?" muskaan thinks.

***************

Angad and kripa have a great time together at the coffee shop and then he drops her home. Malika sees them laughing and talking through the window and gets excited.

"lagta hai mera aur naina ka sapna poora ho raha hai, iss dosti ko rishte daari mein badalne kia" she says smiling and dials naina's number.

"hello naina, mubarak"

"malika…. Kya baat hai, tum bohot khush lag rahi ho?"

"khushi ki to baat hai"

"achaa, hua kya?"

"aaj Angad kripa ko chorne aaya tha, college ek ghante pehle khatam ho gayi hai aur kripa aur Angad abi aaye hain, saath… hastey hastey baatein kar rahe the"

"what? Really" naina asks excited.

"haan, to kya khayal hai? Iss dosti ko rishteydaari mein badaldein??"

"wow, that's great main aaj hi Angad se baat karti hoon"

"theekhe!"

They both hang up.

***************

Kripa is sitting at home telling muskaan about how funny Angad is.

"oye hoye, Kya baat hai, jabse aayi ho Angad ke geet gaa rahi ho, hmmm?" muskaan teases kripa raising her eyebrows😉.

"shut up mussu, tujhe to bas ek hi rishta dikhta hai ladke aur ladki mein, you are mad! Pehle raj, phir rohit aur prithvi aura b Angad… come on mussu" kripa says irritated.

"okay baba sorry" she holds her ears. "aaj main aur josh ice cream ke liye gaye the, it was damn good, and you know maine Rahul ko dekha who gusse mein motor bike mein chalagaya, hi bhi nahi bola, patanahi kya hua usse" muskaan tells kripa confused with rahul's behaviour.

"hmmm.. pyar" she bursts out laughing at the words she just blurted out, Rahul and muskaan… 'Never' they always fought and argued and she was just not his type.

"Kripz…" she stares at her astonished "Ewwwwww, me and Rahul… NEVER" she says thinking of the possibility.

They both chat about the day…

Kripa was sitting on her laptop, which was placed on a table right in front of the window, she was just completing her assignment. It was just 2:30pm and a black Mercedes enters the yard and kripa jumps up with excitement and runs out of the room. The driver opens the back door and a tall, dark and handsome man steps out of it… dressed in a Black Hugo Boss Suit and black Prada leather shoes. His hair was long and tied in a pony, he stepped out with full attitude, Indicating his driver to move with his hand. Without smiling he moves towards the door, where another servant is standing holding a tray of water, he takes the glass and sips it. And again indicates him to leave with his hand. Arrogantly enters the Nanda mansion.

"Ranbir tu agaya?" malika says running towards him, they hug.

"Mom, main sirf panch din ke liye gaya tha, you are too much" he says as he sees her eyes swelling.

"tu jaanta hai na jab bhi tu kahin akela jaata hai to mujhe ghabrahat hoti hai"

"Whatever, Mum theekh teen baje mujhe orange juice aur chicken sandwich chahiya, mere room mein bijhwadena"

"jaanti hoon, do din mein tumhara routine thodi bhool jaongi, tu fresh hoja main bhijwati hoon"

(on Fridays Ranbir comes back home early and has his afternoon snack)

"Thanks mom, Love u!" he says as he makes his way to his room upstairs, while talking on the phone.

Ranbir sees kripa at the edge of the step.

"Bhayyyaaa" she says hugging him tightly, first time he smiles.

"Kaisi ho chutki" he asks her pulling out of the hug and hitting her cheeks slightly.

"bohot buri hoon, aapse bohot ghussa hoon" she says making a childish face, twitching her nose.

He smiles "kya hua?"

"panch din keliye gaye the aur mujhse mile bhi nahi, mujhe aapse baat nahi karni" she innocently says.

He smiles again at her innocence "accha to yeh baat hai, okay baba Im sorry" he holds his ears "itna achanak faisla kiya aur tu ghar mein nahi thi"

She just ignores and starts walking to her room.

"okay to yeh lindt chocolate muskaan ko de deta hoon" he says smiling.

She stops and her mouth starts watering… she loved chocolates and lindt was her favourite, they never sold it around so Ranbir made sure to buy it whenever he went out of the country. Aur who teddy bear bhi muskaan ko dedoonga, aur who guess ki watch jo main apni chutki ke liye laya tha. She turns and gives him a funny look.

"kaha na sorry" he says holding his ears.

She just smiles and hugs him again, he kisses her forehead "chutki mujhse kabhi gussa mat hona, okay!" he says.

"I missed u bhayya" she tells him.

Big D is standing on the corner and watching this, she smiles. Kripa was the only one that Ranbir ever said sorry to and couldn't take it if she was upset.

"Big D" Ranbir sees her and goes to greet her "kaisi ho aap"

"kaisi hoongi? Hun, Fit as usual, tu kaisa hai?"

"A one big D" he says and his phone rings, he just greets her with a smile and goes to his room.

His room was clean, and shining… unlike muskaan and kripa's room, everything in his room was organized, his files all piled up on the office desk, His Papers neatly stacked up in the trays, his clothes neatly piled in the cupboard, his shoes neatly kept on the shoes stack, everything was perfect!

Ranbir sits down on his laptop and gets busy, its 3:03 and his juice and sandwich hasn't arrived.

"MOM, RAMU KAKA…" he starts screaming and the poor ramu kaka rushes towards the room, knocks and enters.

"aap logon ko waqt ka kuch ehsaas hai? Tum pure panch minute late ho… wahan table per rakhdijiye" he tells him.

But before he could place it on the table he drops the juice and the glass breaks.

"WHAT THE HE**! Tum logon se ek kaam theekh se nahi hota!!!! Ab jaldi saaf karo, mera floor ganda kar diya, ab kiriyan aur cockroaches' ayenge… Ewwww" he says making the funny (cute) face blushblush

"MOM, BIG D, Johnny, Mangu… etc (I cant think of any names. LOL)" he screams they all run in.

"kya hua puttar?" Big D asks trembling.

"MOM, BIG D please mere kamre mein aise log mat bhejiya kariye jo khud sambhal na sage, Ab jaldi saaf karke niklo yahan se!" he says irritated.

Malika just nodds her head and tells ramu kaka to clean up and leave, the poor man was trembling… everyone was scared of Ranbir except kripa.

Ranbir was irritated he spoilt his mood, he just goes out of the house.

***************

Two weeks pass and kripa becomes good friends with Angad. Kripa is always laughing when shes with Angad, shes surprised about all this herself, how can she be happy and laughing with the guy she thought would be the last man on earth she would talk to. He was so different from what she thought he was.

They go out for dinner. After dinner they have a conversation.

"so kripa, tumhara pyar ke bare mein kya sochna hai?" Angad asks concerned.

"Pyar… well pyar for me is… I really don't know, its certainly not all that great, like in films… but maybe, I don't believe in it and don't even have the time for it… so yeah im not sure😕😕" she says trying to figure out her view, Angad just tries to smile. "tum batao what is love for u?"

"for me love is the most beautiful feeling a human can feel, I think if a person doesn't have love they are incomplete…" he tells her getting lost in the explaination.

"ooh, hope it is like that for you.. by the way, hai kaun yeh?? Who's the lucky girl? Hmmm…😉" she asks teasingly.

He blushes a little "well.. im not too sure if shes lucky or I am…[blushblush] am not still sure if shes the one for me, but the feeling I get when I am with her, I never feel that way with anyone" he tells her dreamily.

"ooooh that's sweet, now im jealous" she says laughing😆😆 (just joking) he looks up at her immediately as she says that.

"are you??" he asks with seriousness written all over his face, she gets shocked by his reaction and looks at him… they have a eye lock… after a while kripa breaks it and changes the topic.

"hey look sab dance kar rahe hain, wanna dance?" she asks him to change the topic.

Hun… he gets out of it also and looks at where shes pointing "yeah sure, lets go" he gets up and offers his hand, she smiles and takes it…

They start dancing on slow music, kripa just dances casually while they both joke and laugh while dancing.

"kaafi accha dance kar lete ho😳😳" she tells him while dancing.

"thoda thoda… Rahul se sikha hai😳😳" they both laugh.

***************

Kanya plans an overnight party in khandala with her friends.

Kanya bunked college with her boyfriend Robbie, in her car. They were going to khandala for the weekend, the other friends were going to meet them there, she was quite spoiled and now Robbie (her long time crush) had asked her out last week, she already decided to spend her life with him without knowing him. While he's flirting with her and touching her, she takes the one way by mistake and meets an accident with Ranbir.

~~~~~~~~~

Ranbir was rushing to khandala for an important meeting.

"What the hell, driver dhekh ke nahi chala sakte?" he shouts angrily when he feels the bump on the back seat.

"unki galati hai sir, one way mein gusse aa rahe hain, main abhi dekhta hoon"

"haan jaldi karo mujhe der ho rahi hai" he says looking at his wrist watch.

~~~~~~~~~

"oh no… Robz ab?" kanya says scared.

"don't worry love, kuch nahi hoga" he tells her getting down.

He speaks with the driver.

"driver, jaldi der ho rahi hai" Ranbir shouts angrily.

The driver quickly settles for the damages and drives off. Robbie and kanya also drive off. After some time kanya's car breaks down on the road and they call there friends to pick them up. They all go to the beaches and play volley ball and stuff. After that they go to the khannas farm house. Its huge. A huge bungalow with a massive swimming pool and braai area. Kanya gets the drinks and the party stuff. They start getting drunk, swimming, dancing, drugs, snacks and smooching.

"babez, can we also…" Robbie asks kanya pointing at her friends that's were smooching and stuff. Kanya was spoilt but she had the limit, she done all stupid things for her friends but never took drugs herself or smooched with any of her boyfriends, she loved Robbie from a long time but she didn't want to cross her limits.

"Robzzz I think its not the right time, just give me some time…." After a long pause "lets dance" she suggests and he agrees. They party all night then kanya shows all of them there rooms. Next day all the couples start enjoying with each other. Kanya decides to swim. So Robbie and her swim. While swimming Robbie keeps touching her and holding her waist and kissing her cheek, she feels a little uncomfortable but lets it pass by and gets out of the pool. After some time they all leave to go back to Mumbai. Robbie and kanya also leave but they stop at the beach.

Robbie tries to touch her all over and she gets frustrated and slaps him. He gets angry and pushes her, she hits her head on a rock and faints.

***************

That's it for now, I know it was short but I'll post the next one by Thursday so I hope you enjoy this update!

Sorry for the short update! Please Comment/criticise!

Luv

Nadz😳

Edited by nadz_J - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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~~~~~~~PROMO~~~~~~~

Ranbir meets kanya, they have a argument and he saves her.

Rahul argues with muskaan about josh, he tells her that josh is a bad guy and she shouldn't be moving around with him, muskaan gets angry and tells him not to bother about her and interfere in her life.

Angad cant stop thinking of kripa… he tells naina that he loves her and they decide to take the proposal.

They go to the Nanda mansion and kripa finds out whats happening, shes shocked!

Hope u like the promo!

Luv

Nadz

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