AR FF: ~*Woh Lamhe*~ note pg150*

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Nidha

@nidha1983

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Posted: 16 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: freezinme
I am really sorry for the delay guys.. but I promise to update tom for sure =D

no problem princess

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Tiya

@freezinme

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Posted: 16 years ago

#232

Reaching home Ridzi locks herself in her room. Lying on the bed she cried raucously, thrashing her fist hard on the bed taking out all her frustration. Suddenly her eyes got trapped with the mirror. She went near it and spots the sindoor on her maang and nose. She remembers once Padma told her that, during wedding when the sindoor falls on the bride's nose it means that she is very lucky and her husband loves her a lot. She gets a smile on her face but yet again realizing the reality, her face dropped. Then recalling the moments when she was standing up after catching her dupatta from the floor, Armaan's hand hit her and the sindoor from his hand came on her maang. That was nevertheless bearable for her, but when Armaan said, "I respect to what has just happened" brought back enormous emotions on her face. Her eyes become red with anger, gazing up at her in the mirror she put her hand on her maang and deliberately smeared the sindoor on it.

Padma looks at the card again and again thinking about the god's decision. May be he was Mr. Right for her daughter. While in the deep thoughts, Shashank turns up to the room and tells Padma not to talk about this topic ever again.

Same happened with Armaan, he knew that he has fallen in love with her in the very first sight but her saying no to the relationship stopped him to pursue it any further. He decides with himself that he will forget it as his dream and from the very next moment he will start living his new life.

Atul comes to his room to call him for lunch, but Armaan denies. He still needed some time to recover. Seeing Armaan in such a state, Atul sits beside him putting is head on Armaan's shoulder. Armaan notices him feeling very sad, and then he remembers his promise to Atul. He just has finished his exams and its time to do some masti. He brings a huge smile on his face and asks champ to get ready.

Ar: hey champ..aise kya betha hai..chal kahin bahar chalte hain tere exams khatam hue hain..u r a doctor now.. so lets party

Atul feels even sad, he knew Armaan was just trying to show off but from inside he is very disturbed. But he also knew that if he will go out, his mind would be diverted so he agrees.

At: Bhai main toh always ready hoon..chalo 😃

Few days passed like this, and no body ever talked about it again, but deep inside their hearts they cannot forget this incidence, it wasn't just a usual one that happens to every second person, but it was something that would have never ever happened to any one.

The new sun rose in the morning with new aims and dreams in their eyes. Ridzi is enjoying her holidays after the full 5 years of M.B.B.S. Now she wanted to enjoy them entirely. Being so free at home, her mind takes her to that incidence that she wanted to forget so as per her dad's advice she joined her dad's hospital Starship, not as a doctor but as a helper to her father until she starts up with her internship in some hospital. Starship hospital is a children hospital, and she always love spending her time with those kids. That was her favourite pass time, or you can say the only thing that helps her to forget that incidence for a while at least.

On the other hand, Armaan being a senior doctor of Sanjeevani plan to give his 100% to his hospital and make it the best hospital of India. He was preparing hard with his father to expand it as much as possible so that it can have much popularity and give its patients the best treatment they require.

After taking a round of his hospital, Armaan sit in his cabin and goes through the files that Dr. Shubhankar gave him to go through, and to think how can they increase their funds to buy new machineries of their hospital. While getting totally in the files, somebody opens the door of his cabin, and here comes a new guy in the story. "Hey Bro!! Not again.. not those files again!!"

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Lets pause him on the same pose for a while until I give you his introduction. Yes, he is Dr. Abhimanyu Modi, a senior doctor of Sanjeevani, best friend of Armaan and going opposite to his character of DMG, he is the flirtiest guy on earth. He has as many girlfriends that he himself doesn't know. He is a sweet, caring guy and has always helped Armaan whenever he needed.

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Abhi enters his cabin and sits on his table.

Ab: Kya armaan, jab bhi tujhe dekhta hoon humesha patients ya file, patients ya file.. chal na kahin ghoom ke aate hain

Armaan smiles at him

Ar: Main bas kaam kar raha hoon, dad ne yeh file jaldi submit karne ko kaha hai

Ab: uff.. you and your dad.. acha chal woh sab chod.. pata hai ward no. 22 mein ek nayi patient aayi hai aur kya hot hai I tell you..

Armaan looks at him and gives a sigh..

Ar: abbe patients ko to chod diya kar, aur waise bhi woh tujh se bahut choti hai she is only 18.

Ab: my my Dr. Armaan.. I am impressed mujhe laga main aapko yeh news doonga magar yahan toh aap hi chupe rustam nikle

Ar: Nahi aisa kuch nahi hai, I was going through her case history..tab dekha. Aur waise bhi she is married

Ab: uff.. you broke my heart Armaan.. shaadi hui hai toh kya hua fir bhi case to main hi handle karunga.. theek hai na

Ar: Nahi Dr. Abhimanyu.. dad ne aapko ward no. 23 ke patient ko handle karne ko kaha hai jo 60 years old lady hain..

Armaan had a huge smile on his face seeing Abhi's disappointed expressions 😆

Ar: Best of Luck Abhi!!👍🏼

Saying this he laughed loudly. 🤣

Ab: (making annoyed face) haan haan..theek hai.. dekh lunga

On the other side, Ridzi with the kids in the Starship hospital

Ri: Dhruv.. dhruv kahan ho?? Dekho main tumhe last warning de rahi hoon bahar aa jao aur yeh dawai pee lo

Dhruv, who was hiding inside the bed, looks at Ridzi from the side

Dh: ni main ni aaunga.. mude woh gandi wali dawai ni pini

Ri: nahi dhruv yeh gandi wali dawai nahi hai.. acha agar tumne yeh dawai pee lee toh main tumhe ice-cream khilaungi

Dhruv gets the huge smile, thinking of ice cream he could not able to resist and came out of the bed 😆

Dh: Pomise?

Ridzi cheered as her trick worked

Ri: haan..pakka wala promise.. ab yeh dawai piyo

Dhruv takes the medicine

Dh: yuck!! Kitni gandi hai

Ri: hmm..ab gandi gandi dawai ke baad achi achi ice-cream bhi to khaani hai na

Dh: yayy!!

Dhruv jumps on Ridzi

Dh: Chalo chalte hain

Ridzi could not control but laughed on his such a childhood

Ri: acha chalo.

After having their ice creams Ridzi gets called by Shashank in his cabin

Ri: papa..aapne bulaya

Sh: haan beta.. mujhe kissi kaam ki wajah se out of station jaana pad raha hai toh tumhe peeche se mera ek kaam sambhaalna hoga.

Ri: haan papa..boliye.

Sh: Beta there is a hospital Sanjeevani, it is considered to be the best hospital in town and as per Padma's suggestion, collaborating with them can be a good idea for us as they don't have any children's ward in their hospital and we too will get more popular with them. So what do you think? Shall we do this?

Ri: Papa.. it sounds interesting, but do you know the owners?

Sh: Nahi, I didn't get much time to research through it but your mother seemed too interested in it, she only suggested me to do so as they also are planning of expansion.

After thinking for a while

Ri: theek hai papa..wahan sister Lovely bhi kaam karti hain, I think I will go meet her and try to take out all the information.

Sh: that would be great..thanks beta am proud of you.

Ri: thank you papa..

Saying that she left from there.

Next morning, she goes to Sanjeevani

A nice DMG tune goes at the backgound..
"Hum to chale the dost ban kar jaane kahan dill mill gayye"

She opens the Sanjeevani's door, it gave her such a fresh look. The interiors inside were just so good that she just could not able to believe her eyes. A hospital has such a nice, and refreshing look. Definitely it looks like a best hospital in town.

She heads over to the reception, "Hi, may you please tell me where can I find sister Lovely?" "Third door to the left, but she is busy at the moment with Dr. Mallik". Ridzi gets disappointed, so she thought why not to take out little information from the receptionist only. " Ohk.. So who is this Dr. Mallik?" "Dr. Mallik is a very senior doctor of Sanjeevani, or you can say he is the owner of this hospital."

"Hmm.. Doctor Mallik, inse milna padega.. but if I ask her another question about him then she will definitely doubt on me"

Ri: Sorry to disturb you again, but when will sister Lovely be free?

"Must be in a while," the receptionist answered. Ridzi then goes around to the waiting room, and tries to look at it as much as possible. She stops just outside Armaan's cabin unknowingly, which had one-way mirror all over; everything outside can be seen from inside whereas from outside it only seems like a mirror. Unknowing of this one-way mirror Ridzi looks at herself on the mirror and adores her looks in it by making the cute cute faces and this gives brings a vast smile "Perfect".

Inside the cabin, Armaan, Abhimanyu and Sister Lovely were having their meeting when their eyes got stuck on the beauty standing outside. 😍

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Hey guys, I would like to dedicate this part to Rucha aka frnd.of.frndz.. she only delayed me for posting this part lolzzz.. its actually her most addictive ff she asked me to read.. n i went totally into it.hehe 😃😃 luv u Rucha

And thanks to everyone else for commenting soo nice things about the last part.. m soo glad u ppl lked it dat much

Wil PM every one shortly

Luv yaa
tiya

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Nidha

@nidha1983

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Posted: 16 years ago

#233

woah Tiya princess🤗 its really awesome one⭐️ i m the 1st one😳 thank god😃 that i come one right time😉 its rocking one so they decided not to talk about it😭😭 and Abhi is cool one😛😉 how sweet😊 spl mirrior one😍 it s my fav. scence from Hmraaz😉☺️ and BD is so cute😳😍 i m totally mad for him like Kash☺️ but overall mindblowing one😊😊 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉

"Har RASTA aik SAFAR Cahta hai,

har MUSAFAR ek hum SAFAR Cahta hai,

Jese CHAHTI hai CHANDNI CHAND ko,

koi hai jo APKO bhi is kadar CHAHTA hai."

"True Love Is When
Everything In the World Is Going Wrong,
All U Have To Do Is Look At That Special Persom
And
Suddenly
Everything In The World Is Right Again . ."

Edited by nidha1983 - 16 years ago

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Surbhi

@arvanu

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#234

hey Tiya,

awesome yaar.......very well written......awesome update........liked the first half......the way u expressed Ridhima's emotions were splendid......oh-oh..Ridhima making cute expressions and Armaan noticed her.........and we have a new entry......cant wait till AR meet again and Ridhima's realises that Sanjeevani is owned by the Malik's.....do continue soon!!!!!

-surbhi😊

Edited by arvanu - 16 years ago

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Rucha

@frnd.of.frndz

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#235

Hey Tiya..
Thats not my fault..😉..😆..
the part was fabulous..
I was wondering how will you frame AR's meeting again..
awesome track..

Rucha

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DEVIKA / DEE

@DEE2803

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#236

very interesting .....so finally they gonna meet again....ohhh can't wait for the next part ....please continue soon

thanks

DEVIKA

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Sammy

@sammy4u

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

#237

nice part do continue soon.

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Simone

@-simi-

Inactive

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Posted: 16 years ago

#238

nice part tiya!!! cant wait to see how they meet again 😃

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cutie_shalzy

@cutie_shalzy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#239

hey tiya wht a wonderful part awwwww ridz cried so much nd now bth wntd to forgt this but is this go so easily i dnt thnk so lts see wht destiny has plan fr thm hmmmmmm intresting abhi flirtatious nd ar responsible dr gud vry impressive nd ridz also in sanjeevani wowwwwwwwwwww yaar now thy bth gonna meet wth each othr yeyyyyyyyyyy why u hv stoppd erghhhhhhhh cnt wait she ws seeing herslf nd thy also caught wth beauty of her wowwwwwwwwwww cnt wait fr d nxt prt hm yeah she is busy
cont sooooooon
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna

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Sunaina

@SunainaTM007

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#240

hey tiya...

awesome update...loved it loved it loved it.👏.👏.👏

the starting was fab..the way u expressed ridzi's anger was real good...and its soo good that armaan has fallen head over heals for ridz, it'll be interesting to see how she falls for him.😳.😳.and hes such a gr8 guy,he just didnt persue after she refused...and atul is such a caring bro...

and then abhi is just cool.😎.😎.his character sounds interesting...

and then ridzi n dhruv..such a cute scene...

and then finally..she goes to snajeevani...and the one-way mmirror thing reminded me of the movie humraaz where bobby doel could see amisha thro' his one-way mirror thing...but i just love the scene...

and waiting for the next part to see how both AR react when theycome face to face...