RM FF:- SOME1 SOMEWHERE IS MADE 4 Uupdated9june - Page 20

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey Apoorva,
awww...such a cute and sweet part......''telepathy'' and ''dil ka connection'' was awesome........hehehe.........amaing update...do continue soon and thanks alot for the PM!!!
-surbhi😊
Edited by arvanu - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
HE HE TOOO CUTEE
RAHUL IS TOOO CUTE!!
CNT SOON SEE YAAA
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Posted: 16 years ago
AWESOMEšŸ‘

It was so cutešŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜ but short yaaršŸ˜•

But still it was rocking and telepatišŸ˜† that was so cutešŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

Update soooooooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!

Luv
Nadz😳

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Posted: 16 years ago

PArt 17:-


Next DAy:-

RAhul is coughing in locker room...

Enter Muskii........
M- Rahul...kya hua????

Muskii goes near him pats his back....

M- Ruk...main paani lati hu....

She is abt to leave when Rahul holds her hand

R- Mat ja....Tu paas hai toh sab theek ho jayega....

M- Rahul???

They sit on the small bench in the locker room....

M- Kya khaya tha ??? Itni khaasi kyun hui??? RAhul tu apna jara bhi khayal nahi rakhta ...maine tujhe0-----

R(keeps his finger on her lips)- Shs......bas...kitna bolti hai tu Muskii.....

M- Rahul...main ......'

R- Muskii...tu hamesha yuhi mere liye hogi na???

M- yeh kaisa sawal hai?? Ofcourse main hamesha tere saath hu....Tujhe jab bhi meri jarurat hogi i'will be there 4 u!!!!

R- I love u Muskii!!!

M- I love u 2.....(hugs him)

Rahul's pager rang.....

R- Dr.Keerti ne bulaya hai...

M- Toh jao!!!

R- O God!!! Meri raksha karna!!!

M- Rahul...woh itni bhi buri nahi hai...

R- HAan...toh kya hua agar ek chotisi galat pe woh pure week ke liye rectal exams karvati hai...ya double duty karvati hai....baar baar Sanjeevani se nilkalne ki dhamki deti hai aur--

M(laughs)- Bas hua...Ab jao....

R- Shyam ko milte hai.....Main tujhe ghar drop kar dunga.....

M- Ok....


Rahul leaves....

Its Evening!!!

All are done with their duties & ready to go home .....

At- Aree yeh rahul kahan hai???

Ar- Maine sirf usko afternoon me dekha tha Muskaan ke saath...badme pata nahi...

M- Usse Dr.keerti ka pager aaya tha.uske baad woh mujhe bhi nahi mla....

Ri- Kahin detention toh nahi mila na???

An- O God!!!!

M- NAhi!!!!!!!!

Ar- U bad girls...Muskaan ko mat daarao...

At- chalo..hum dekhte hai ki woh kahan hai....

Kissiko dhunde jaa rahe ho????

Enter RAhul....

M- KAhn the???

R- Muskii....Parso..mujhe ek presentation taiyar karni hai....Sanjeevani ke New Bombay ke project ke liye Dr.Shasank chhte hai ki main yeh presentation karu...

ALL- WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!

R-Wow kya??? Meri phat rahi hai....I mean..main doc hu..presentation???

All- RAHUL????

Ar- Dude..u have got a chance of lifetime!!!! Dr.Shasank ko impress kar diya na toh terilife set hai....

R- Woh toh hai...bas Dr.Keerti mujhe wahi samjha rahi thi so i got late....

M- Koi baat nhai...Tujhe agar koi aur kaam ho toh main aur Ridz chalte hai....

R- Tujhse jaruri kaam aur koi nahi hai....hmm??

M(blushes)- hmmm....

All tease RM......

RM In car....


Fm is playing....

Ghode jaisi chal ..haathi jaisi dum...
O sawaan raja kahan se aaje tum??
Chaak dumdum chaak dumdum..chaak dum.....

It starts raining.....

M- Baarish..Rahul gaadi rok na....

R- Muskii....

M- RAhul!!!!!!!

R- Ok.....

Muskii gets down...& spreads her arms & looks up...enjoying the rain.....
the drops fall on her face & she smiles...she jumps int the khaada full of water & laugh....
RAhul standing at a distance watches her smiling....

Koi ladki hai jab woh hasti hai...baarish hoti hai chanak chank chum chum......

Muskii looks taRAhul & gesture him 2 come in the rain with her....

He joins her & both dance in the rain...

RM completely enjoying themselves....rain has no intentions to stop...Muskii looks ta Rahul wishing this moment shold never go away..she closes her eyes to keep this moment locked 4ever...suddenly there's lightning & Muskii hugs RAhul very tightly...

**Rm music**

M- RAHul..mujhe daar lag raha hai...

R(wraps his arm more tightly around her)- ABhi bhi daar lag raha hai???

M- Nahi....


M- Rahul...tu jab bhi paas hota hi na mujhe lagta hai ki life me sirf khushi hai lkoi tenson koi dard nahi hai......


R- Isliye toh main hu hameshha....

M(comes out of th embrace & looks ta RAhul)- I love u!!!

R(kisses her forehead)- I love u 2.......

**Eye locking session **

Rahul sneezes.....

M- O God!!! Tujhe toh jukhaam ho jayega..chal hum ghar jaate hai....

R- Hmm.......

They get in the car...

R- Muskii yahanse mera ghar paas hai toh ........

M- Rahul..tu na bahut badmaash hai...

R- Le..tujhe aaj pata chala....

Both laugh & then sneeze....


Rahul's place:

RM enter RAhul's house & see the whole house in mess.....

R(looks around)- Woh....shit....thodasa kharab hai bt....

He slowly goes around & picks his shirts & chocklate wrapers thrown here & there....

R- Tu baith na....main paani lao???

M(looks around & then at Rahul...the way he is picking up the things & trying to smile...she wanted to laugh & was trying really hard not 2)- RAhul...koi baat nhai..mujhe pata hai ki yeh tera ghar hai...i know...

R- Hee...hee(fake laugh)

He is looking at MUskii & walking backwards to keep his things....suddenly trips over his shoes & falls....

M- RAhul........Chot toh nahi lagi...dekho toh....

R- Yeh jhota na..main pheknewala tha..yeh hamesha se mere liye unlucky hai...

Muskii sneezes...

R- Muskii;....tu change karle....tujhe sardi lag jayegi.....

Muskii goes in his bedroom....Rahul looks around & tries to make it look like drawing room.....

After sometime:

Muskii comes wearing Rahul's shirt & track pants....

Rahul was simply stunned 2 see her...she was looking beautiful even in her oversized dress....water falling 4rm her hair....she had shy look on her face......

R(come near her & puts lock of hair behind her ear)- Bahut soni lag rahi hai.......

M- Sorry...mere paas koi .......

R- tujhe pata hai ki duniya ki sabse khubsurat ladki hai........

M(blushes)- Rahul..tu bhi na...kuch bhi kehta rehta hai....

She is abt 2 go bt a strand of her hair gets stuuck in his shirt....He smiles...she blushes....

M- Rahul...yeh baal..nikal na...

R- Paas aao toh nikal sako....

Muskii goes closer..

R- Aur paas....

Muskii goes more closer..

R- Aur paas......

Now they r really were close...both lost in his each others eyes....when their lips r abt to touch......Muskii's cell rang & RM come back to reality.......

Ridz calling.........


Ri- Muskaan..kahan hai??? Theek toh hai na??? Main kab ki ghar pahuch gayi hu...tu kab aarahi hai...News dekhe kya??? Kitna pani bhar gaya hai...tu ------

M- Chill Ridz..mujhe bhi kuch bolna ka chance de.....


Rahul looks ta Muskii...RIDZ???

R(himself)- HAmesha galat time pe......tabhi toh main kehta hu... aise dost ho toh dushmaan ki kya jarurat hai...

M- Main Rahul ke saath uske ghar pe hu....hum bilkul theek hai...ok...tu akeli hai kya?? Dekh tu akeli mat rehna..Sharma Auntyji ke ghar jaana...aur -----

Ri- Nahi...woh ....ab....

M- Kya???

Ri- Armaan hai mere saath.......

M-OOOOOOOOOO...Armaan hai tere saath...phir toh mujhe chinta karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai..kyun??

Ri(blushes)- Nahi...aisi koi baat nahi hai..main..woh..actually kya hua na Muskaan..ki..woh...

M- U Love him.....

Ri- Huh??

M- Mujhe paat hai.....Apni dil ki baat bol de uko aaj.....bahut aach mauka hai....

ri- Nahi nahi...main kyun bolu??? Woh bolega na pehle....

Kaun kya bolega Ridhimaa...

Enter Armaan.....

Ri- woh...main Muskaan se baat kar rahi thi....

M-Bye Ridz....take care & all the best!!!!

Ri- Muskaan sun toh...main keh rahi thi ki......

Muskaan hungs the phone & turns to Rahul who is simply looking at her.....

M- Aisa kya dekh raha hai??

R- Tujhe dekh raha hu.....

M- Rahul tu ja....change kar le...warna sardi lag jayegi...

R- Muskii........

M- Rahul jao na.....


She runs in the kitchen & Rahul smiles...he simply loves the way she blushes.......

Muskii standing in kitchen making Haldiwala milk 4 Rahul....the memories of some time back flashed thru her mind....If Ridz hadnt called they would have.........O god Why am I blushing so much Muskii thought....

Muskii simply smiled & blushed thinking of all the moments they she spend with rahul.....

bada part....Hope u like it...do comment................

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Posted: 16 years ago
Reserved!
Even before you changed the title!
Sorry first one but so late!!!!
This was a fantastic part!
Ooofff!!! Riddhima aagayi beech mein!
I hope next part mein AR confession bhi hojaaye!
Love u,
Jinil!
Edited by KaSh_Deewaanie - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey Apoorva,
awwww....this part was chiooo chweet....the rain scene especially was adorable........and all the scenes where Muskaan cared for Rahul was just soo cute.....great update!!do continue soon and thanks alot for the PM!!!
-surbhi😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
it was tooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
pm me
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Posted: 16 years ago
well done! Awesome Part...continue soon...
Love the DTPH song and rain sequence....
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Posted: 16 years ago
That was a great part! especially the beginning, when he's coughing and Muskaan is so concerned, it reminded me of in one the recent DMG episodes when Rahul was coughing and Muskaan was concerned, but she was like '' no nahi jaongi uske paas, but then she can't stop herself because she loves him''. This part was muy excelente!!! And the rain sequence was really good too. I love that song, its like one of my fav songs. Thanks for the PM.
~ Sabreena
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Posted: 16 years ago
absolutely wonderful part!!
do continue soon!!

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