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Part 12:-

A week later:

RM were going to the canteen in thier break when there was an emergency case.....

K- Dr.Rahul, Dr.Muskaan...yeh Ms.Shaalini ki case file hai...app dono isse milke sambhalenge...Paitient ne apni nas kaat li hai aur bahut khun beh chuka hai....go fast aur agar koi problem ho toh mujhe bulana....

RM- Yes Dr.Keerti

Few hours later:-

Shalini is stable....Dr.Rahul & Dr.Muskaan are relived as they could handle the case without the assistnce of any senoir doc....Rahul has gone 4 his rounds & Muskii is in the ICU with Shalini...slowly Shalini opens her eyes.....

S- Raj........RAj........

M- hello Shalini...I am Dr.Muskaan...kaisi ho???

S- I am fine...bt kyun mujhe bacahya??? Mian maar jana chahti thi...

M- Kaisi baatein kar rahi ho??? huh?? Tumne sucide karne ki koshih ki yeh sahi baat nahi hai...tumhari zindagi bahuy kimati hai...

S(tears)- Nahi hai...jiss zindagi me pyaar nah ho woh zindagi zindagi nahi hoti....Raj mujhe pyaar nahi karta.woh kissi aurse....main uske bina nahi jee sakti....

RAhul overhears this conversation & is abt to say sumthing when Muskii says-

M(angrily)- KYA???????????Tum ne ek ladke ke liye apni jaan dene ki koshish ki????Tumhari jaisi bewakuf ladki maine aaj tak nahi dekhi....uss ladkeki itna aukaat hai kya jo tum uske liye apni jaan do??? Usse koi phaark nahi padega tum jiyo ya maro iss baat se..samjhi...

Shalini in tears........

R- Kaisi baat kar rahi hai aap Dr.Muskaan???? Paitent hai woh!!!!!(turning to Shalini) Dekho Shalini, main samjah sakta hu ki tum Raj se bahut pyaar karti ho....Par kya tumne pyaar iss shart pe kia tha ki woh bhi tumse pyaar karega??? NAhi na..... Pyaar sharto pe nahi kia jata ...pyaar toh dilse kia jata hai....Agar tum usse sache dilse pyaar karti ho toh tumhe apne pyaar par vishwas rakhna hoga....Agar Raj wahi ladka hai jo tumhare liye banaya gaya hai toh woh tumhe jarur milega(looks at Muskii who se eyes are filled with tears) Aur meri dost hamsha khti thi Some1 somewhere is made 4 u...sab ke liye kahin na kahin koi ankoia banaya gaya hai bas unka milna humpe chod dia hai.....

S(smiles)- Dr.Rahul, lagta hai aap kissi se bahut pyaar karte hai!!!! Bahut lucky hai woh ladki jisko aap pyaar karte hai....

R- Aree nahi....main toh aise hi keh raha tha....Bahut filme dekhta hu na isiliye...main kisise pyaar vyaar nahi karta....

S- Sachi??? Pyaar ko chupana aasan nahi hota Dr.Rahul....

Rahul blushes bt wonders why did he blush???

Same nite:
RAhul's Diary:
Main pagal honewala hu...I dont know maine kaise Shalini ko itna bada bhashan de dia .....i mean....maine....mujhe kuch samaj nahi aaraha tha...jab Muskii ki taraf dekha aur uskaa pyaar ko lekar itna gussa...mujhe laga ki shayad Muskii Shalini se relate kar sakti hai...Muskii ka bhi toh kisine dil toda hai...aur mujhe ek pal ke liye laga ki agar Shalini ke jagah Muskii hoti toh........NO!!!! Muskii ko khone ak daar mujhe aaj tak kabhi nahi hua.....I mean ....woh meri dost hai...ya shayad dost se badkar.....nahi .....pata nahi.....


Muskaan's diary:
Aaj jo sab Rahul ne Shalini ko kaha mujhe laga ki woh mujhe bhi imply karta hai...jab maine Rahulse pyaar kia toh maine yeh expect nahi kia tha ki woh bhi mujhse pyaar karega....Rahul ko pyaar ki itni baatein kaise pata??? Kya woh kissise pyaar karta hai??? Nahi..aisa hota toh mujhe batata...woh abhi mujhe apni best friend manta hai...par main nahi chahti ki woh mujhse sweetly baat kare...mujhe takleef hoti hai...uske dil me mere liye koi pyaar vyaar nahi hai sirf dosti hai.. par uski sweet baatein mujhe hamesha purani baatein yaad dilati hai...main kya karu??? Babaji...help karo..plzzzz

Next day:

Shalini is feeling much better..Muskaan is giving her medicines....

M-Shalini....i am sorry...kal maine kuch jyada hi overreact kia.....

S- Koi baat nahi Dr.Muskkan aapne mere bhale ke liye hi kaha tha...

Rahul enters....

R- Shalini..apni aankhe band karo...tumhare liye ek surprise hai...

S- Mere liye??Kya ?? Baatayi na Dr.Rahul...

R- Oye kudiye...tussi aankhe toh band karo...

Muskii stood watching them wondering what is the surprise Rahul got 4 Shalini..

Shalini closes her eyes & enters Raj(Shalini's love)

Ra- Ankhe kholo Shalu!!!

S- RAJ?!?

Ra- Tum sach me pagal ho...Mere liye ani jaan dene ki koshish ki...Aree yaar pyaar ka izhar nahi kia..iska matlab pyaar nahi karta aisa thodi hai.....

S- MATLAB?????? TUM.....

Ra- I love u Shalu....i really love u...main pichle ek saal se tumhe yeh batane ki koshish kar raha tha...par jabhi tum samne aati thi mujhe pata nhai kya ho jata tha mujhe daar lagta tha ki pata nahi tum kaise react karogi...aur agar tumne maan kar dia toh??

S- Phir woh ladki??

Ra- Woh!!! Woh toh meri cousin hai Neha..yahan padhne aayi hai...

S- Kya??? Mujhe laga ki tum...

Ra- Pata hai Shalu..jab mujhe Dr.Rahul ka phone aay ...mujhe laga jaise meri puri duniya hi kahatam ha gayi.... tum na ekdum stupid ho ..idiot ho...

S(smiles)- pata hai...I love u Raj....mujhe chodke toh nahi jaooge na???

Ra- NAhi...kabhi nahi....i love u so much..

They hug each other & Rahul smiles...looks ts Muskii who has tears in her eyes & faint smile on her lips.....

That nite:

RM had nite duty....actually Ridz was supposed to the nite duty bt she wsnt feeling well so Muskii asked her to take rest....

Ri- Muskkan main theek hu..tu ja ghar...

M- Ridzi...kabhi toh mari baat maan kar...tujhe aaram ki jarurat hai mujhe nahi...i am fine

Ri- Par Muskaan tu yahan subhe se hi hai aur u had a tiring day na..

M- Ridzi main apna khayal rakhungi aur tum apna rakhan...that is more imp isnt it?? Dekho agar tumhara bukhar bad gaya toh tu kal nahi aa payegi...aur kal Armaan ka bday hai....

Ri(bit blushing)- Toh??? Hone do...mujhe kya??

M- Oye huye!!! Itna sharma kyun rahi hai..tujhe kya laga mujhe kuch pata nahi hai??

Ri(blushing harder)- Matlab?? Tujhe kaise??

M(laughs)- Dost hu....sab paat hai mujhe...u like him na??

Ri- Pata nahi....I mean .....

M- I know...acha chod ab ghar jaa aur aaram kar & not arguments...

Ri- okay baba...tu jiti main haari...Muskaan apna khayal rakhna...

M- Ridzi...tu toh ab bilkul mummyji sound kar rahi hai....ok main apna khayal rakhungi...

R- Aur main bhi toh hoon na..Muskii akeli toh hai inne vaade hospital me....i will take care of her...hmm....u go home and take rest ok??

Ridz looked at RM.....she thought RM looked so sweet 2gether...kash yeh hamesha yui saaath rahe......

M- Oye!!! kya soch rahi hai??? Gahr nahi jaana???

Ri- Huh?? Haann ...bye...take care....

ridz leaves....

RM attend the paitents...gie them thier medicines & all sleep...

RM r sitting at the entrace of the path lab....
They saw Raj taking fruits 4 shalini...she was much better & was to be discharged the next day....
rahul looked at Muskii...

R- Muskii ....har kahani ka anth hamesha acha hota aur agar acha na ho toh its not the end its just the beginning.....
M- Rahul, tu kabse itni achi batein karne laga??? Kahan se sikhi??
R- Actuaally meri ek pyaari si dost hai usse....
M(bit jealous)- Dost ?? kaun??

R- Hai ek ladki...Muskaan Chada naam hai uska...

M(surprised)- Mujhse???

R- Haan ...tu hi toh hamesha yeh saari baatein karti thi....Tune hi toh kaha tha na ki tujhe love storiyes safal hota dekhna acha lagta hai...Shalini aur raj ko dekho...pyaar sirf kitabo me ya movies me nahi hota....real life me bhi hota hai....some1somewhere is made 4 u!!! hai na???

Muskii has her eyes filled wih tears....she hugs Rahul....Rahul is taken aback by her sudden action bt he hugs her back....
**RM MUSIC IN THE BACKGROUND**

M- Thanks RAhul...mera pyaar par se vishwas uth gaya tha...thank u so much

R(moves his hand through her hair comforting)- Aee MUskii...tujhe kabse mujhe thanks kehne ki jarurat padhi???

M(comes out of the embrace & looked at Rahul)- Rahul....main.....

Suddenly Rahul's pager rang & he had to go.......

Muskaan's diary:
Aaj jab maine arhul ko hug kia mujhe aisa laga ki main uski arms me safe hu...koi prob nahi koi tension nahi...ab aacha hai....he will alwys b there 4 me...mujhe uski bahoonme sukun mil raha tha......pata nahi yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai...kya main aaj bhi Rahul se pyaar karti hu?? usne mujhe itna hurt kia phir bhi jab bhi woh aas paas hota hai mujhe ek ajeeb si security feel hoti hai....
Main usse pyaar karna na chahti bt main kya karu...main ab tak usse nahi bhula payi.....

Rahul's diary:
Aaj Muskii ne mujhe hug kia toh ....toh laga ki bas yehi meri manzil hai....usse meri bahoonme lekar mujhe sukun mil raha tha....shayad mujhe Muskii se pyaar ho gaya hai....bt woh meri bachpan ki best friend hai...kya main hamesha se usko pasand karta tha??? Koi usko kuch bole roh mujhe gussa aat tha...i wanted her 2 b happy always...5 saal maine kitna miss kia...Yes...i am love ...i am love wid Muskii.......I LOVE U MUSKII.....I love u....

he opened his drawer to keep his diary & saw pic of his & Muskii's during thier school days at Kasuli.....he smiled lookig at it.....

Kyun aaj kal neend kan khwaab jyada hai...
Lagta khuda ka koi neek irada hai...
Kal tha phakir aaj dil shehjada hai...Lagta khuda ka koi neek irada hai...
Kya mujhe pyaar hai.....kaisa khumaar hai......Kya mujhe pyaar hai...
Kya mujhe pyaar hai.....

hope u like it.....do comment....
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sorry guys....main kissiko pm nahi kar payi.....next time pucca karungi...net bhi slow hai aur main thodi jaldi me hu......
sorry again....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Woooohooooooooo rahul is fainaly in love with muskii yayyyyyyy🥳

mindblowing part hun do continue soon i can't wait
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Posted: 16 years ago
amazing part!!
will be waiting for your next update!!
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Part 13:-

Next day:
its Armaan's b'day!!!!!

All wish him & he invites them to the party at his place.....they all finish thier work early & leave 4 their homes....

In the party-

Armaan was talking woth Ridz & she was busy blushing...Atul was trying too woo Anjali by taking tips 4rm Amy & Rahul....Rahul was busy staring at Muskaan....she was looking stunning in blue punjabi suit....BLUE was RAhul's fav colour.....

All were having blast !!!!!!!!

DJ played rocking songs & now he turned to play soft romantic songs......

O re piya.....haiiii
o re piya....
Udne laga kyun...maan bawara re....
ayya kahan se....yeh hosla re.....
o re piya.....haiiii
o re piya....

Rahul asked Muskii 4 the dance & took her on the floor.....
They kept looking in each others eyes....Rahul put his hand around Muskii's slim wist & pulled her closer....she shivered....he made her turn & she was going away when Rahul caugth her hand & made her come closer.....she was completely lost in Rahul's eyes....rahul moved aside her hair & kissed the neck....she shivered....she wanted to refuse yet she wanted rahul to beclose to her......

Her heartbeat was running fast faster fastest.....& she realised after 5 yrs its just Rahul who can make her shiver.....its only Rahul whom she likes being so close...her heart allows to accept every gesture of RAhul.......
She moves her hand on Rahul's face & both r locked in each others eyes......

RAhul comes closer to her 4 a kiss bt she hugs him ........RM r so lost in each other that they r not aware of thier surroundings.....

They were alone on the dance floor......All the ppl surrounded them....

Ridz was happy that her friend had found her lost love......

As the song stopped ....all claaped .....Muskii was so shy...she ran away.....

Rahul was resembling a tomato.....his cheeks were red....

Amy- Kya baat hai Rahul!!!! Tu aur Muskaan!!!!

At- Tune usko bola I Love U!!!!?????

R- NAhi...pata nahi...woh kaise react karegi.....

An- I am sure woh bhi tumse pyaar karti hai...dekha na kaise sharma ke bhaag gai....

R- Ridhima tijhe kya lagta hai???

Ri(in tears)- Mujhe lagta hai Rahul ki tujhe jaldi se Muskaan ko apne dil ki baat bol deni chahiye......Usne bahut intezaar kia hai iss pal ka....

R- Matlab???

Ri- Yeh lo ghar ki keys aur jao......tumhe asb paat chalega...

R- MAin jao????

All- HAAN!!!! GOOO................

Muskaan- Ridz house:-

Muskaan was standing in front of the mirror....she was angry on herself

M(herself)- Stupid..idiot....yeh kya kar rahi thi tu MUskaan??? Tune ek baar decide kar liya hai na ki RAhul tera sirf dost hai....tu usse pyaarnahi karti...u dont love him.... bt RAhul shayad mujhse....NO......Rahul tujhse nahi teri khubsurti se pyaar karta hai....thats rite!!!!! Tu baar baar usse tujhe hurt karne ka haq nahi de sakti.....Tune RAhul ki wajahse almost apna carrer barbad kar liya tha....5 saal pehle woh tjhe bhul gaya tha...aur ab achank usse teri yaad aayi??? NO Muskaan nai......Yaad rakh Ridz ne kya kaha tha...once a cheat always a cheat.....woh tere liye nahi bana hai...he is not the rite one 4 u Muskaan...plzzz.....

Rahul opens the door slowly & enters.....he sees Muskii standing in front of the mirror....

He slowly goes behind & holds her 4rm back...Muskii shivers....

R- Muskii kuch kehna tha tujhse...

he makes her face him & holds her hand
R- Muskii I LOVE U!!!! main tujhse bahut pyaar karta hu....paat nahi ki tu kaise react karegi bt .....maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki mujhe apni best friend se pyaar ho jayega....I love Muskii...i love so much....

Muskaan had waited 4 long to hear this 4rm Rahul bt when he said that she didnt believe him she thought just coz she is no longer a mottirolly Muskaan of Kasauli Rahul loved her.....now he wont be embarraased to call Muskii his girl frind...it wouldnt hamper his prestige....

Muskaan rudely removed her hand 4rm his....
M- yeh kya keh raha hai Rahul??? Tujhe koi galat faimi ho gayi hai...i dont love u....
R- MUskii....kya keh rahi hai???
M- wahi jo asch hai...Rahul main toh pyaar me velive bhi karti..i told love & all was sab bakwas.....
R- Muskii........Kasaulime toh........
M- RAHUL!!!!! Woh toh sab stpid tha...SRK ki films ka overdose ho gaya tha....
Muskaan was looking everywhere except Rahul...she knew she wont be able to lie looking in RAhul's eyes.......

rahul was completely shocked......he thought even Muskii love dhim ....he could see it in her eyes....
R- Muskii...meri atraf dekh ke bol....look in my eyes & say u dont love me.....

M- Rahul...plzzz ...yeh koi hindi film nahi cahl rahi...i said i DONT love u.....so plzz jao yaha se.....

R- NAhi MUskii...i know tu mujhse pyaar karti hai....

Muskii was geeting weaker & weaker by his every word...she simply wanted to 4get all other things...just hug him & onfess...yess i love u tooo......bt NO something in her was refusing to do so.........

M- Rahul plzz 4 God sake yeh jhoote sapne dekhna chod do....hum kabhi dost the yeh baat dhyan me rakhke i am being very patient wid u warna secutiry ko bulake kab ka bahar phek dia hota....u get it....

Muskaan didnt wanted 2 say all that...she was forcing the words out...she didnt like hurting Rahul bt if she wont he will hurt her instead.....

R- MUSKII???? Hum kabhi dost the matlab??? Kya ab hum dost nahi hai???

M- RAhul JUST GET LOST 4rM HERE.....do u get me????? Teri backwas sunne ka mera bilkul maan nahi hai ok??? Tu jaa raha hai ya security ko bulao???

R- MUSKAAN?????? TU.....yeh.....

Slowly tears were forming in RAhul's eyes too.....he kept waliking backwards his eyes fixed on Muskaan...........

He came down the stairs completely shocked....he never expecte this reaction from Muskaan...Muskii his best friend.....she knew him better than he knew himself & 2day........


Dil jude bina hi tut gaye
haath mile bina hi chut gaye....


Chanse jo tute koi sapna
Jag suna suna laage
Koi rahe na jab apna....
Jag suna suna laage
Jag suna suna laage......

Meanwhile Amy & Ridz were on thier way on his bike.....Ridz had some feelings 4 Amy bt wasnt sure of them...Amy too liked Ridz bt he didnt confess.....he knew Ridz wasnt like the other gals whom he flrited with....she was different....

Ridz-Amy on bike:

Ri- Ab tak Rahul ne Muskaan ko bol dia hoga na???

A- Hmm...main Rahul ke liye bahut khush hu.....

Ri- MAin dono ke liye ....Muskaan ko apna pehla pyaar mil gaya.....i am sooooo happy 4 her...

A- Pehla pyaar?? Matlab??

Ri- Woh Muskaan Rahul ko school days se bahut pasand karti thi.....

A- Tum pyaar me belive karti ho??

Ri- Pehle nahi karti thi.....par ab....

A- Ab karti ho.....

Ri- hmm.....

Amy stops the bike & turns 2 look at her...

Ri- Kya hua??

A- kyun belive karne lagi???

Ri(bit shy...she doesnt know whta 2 say..she loves Amy stare bt...)- Woh RM ko saath dekhke...

A(disappointed)- RM??? Bas .....aaaaur ....

Ri- Aur.......Armaan.....

A- RIdhimmaa......(leans closer)

Ri- Woh....muujhe ...mujhe ghar jaana hai...chalo...

A- Ridhimaa ab tum meri aankhome itna kho jaogi ki samne ki apna apartment bhi nahi pehechanogi maine socha nahi tha....(flrity smile)

Ri- HUH?

Ridz looks around to see...they were standing near the gate of her apartment....

Ri(blushes)- Woh Main.....actually......RAHUL????

A- Kya???Yeh Rahul beech me kahanse aagaya???

Ri(makes him turn)- Woh dekho.....

A(calls)- RAHUL!!!!

No response.....rahul is waliking down the road.....not aware of anything......

A(panicked)- Aree Rahul...woh gaadi dekh.........

Amy runs & pushes Rahul...both fall on the foothpath....Ridz comes rrunning....

Ri- Rahul??? Tum theek ho na??? Kya hua?

A- Rahul...hey dude.....kuch toh bol ......

R(suddenly hugs Ammy)- Woh mujhse pyaar nahi karti......she doesnt love me..

AR Shocked.....especially Ridz...woh Muskaan ki har dhakan se wakif thi bt what Rahul said ......

A- Kya??? Kya keh raha hai???

R- Usne khud kaha...she doesnt....love me....she never.....woh mujhe apna dost bhi anhi samajti...she said ki sab 5 saal pehle hi khatam ho gaya.....

Ri- Nahi...aisa nahi ho sakta...mujhe muskaan se baat karni hogi....

Ridz went to the apartment....the door was wide open...bt Muskaan was no where to be seen...she called her...MUSkaan!!!???? She went inside....she saw Muskaan sitting down tears flowing continuosly.......

Ri(shocked)- MUSKAAN???? Yeh sab kya hai???

No respone 4rm Muskii.....

Ri- Muskaan....mujhse baat kar yaar....tell me kya hua???? Rahul aaya tha na???? What happened??? Tune kya kaah usko??? MUSKAAN DO U HEAR ME?????

M(shaky voice)- Maine wahi kia jo mujhe karna chahiye tha.....

Ri- Rahul tujhse pyaar karta hai...tujhe pata hai na???

M- Woh muhjse nahi...meri khubsurati se pyaar karta hai...

Ri(shocked & ANGRY)- KYA???? Kya backwas kar rahi hai???

M- backwas nahi hai...yehi sach hai...

Ri- Aisa tujhe lagta hai...Muskaan Rahul toh....

M(angry)- Rahul ki tarafdari kyun kar rahi hai??? Pyaar karta hai woh mujhse??? huh??? Real MUskaan Chaada se?? Kahan tha 5 saal??? Ek phone Ek khat atleast email...????? Itna toh kar hi sakta tha...

Ri- Muskaan ....tu kyun purani baatein lekar baith gayi....

M- Nahi Ridhimma.....yeh baatein mere liye important hai...Hum dono Kasauli se achanak chale aaye Rahul ko koi pharak nahi paada....Woh Mumbai chala gaya...mujhe ek baar bhi milne nahi aaya....

Ridz felt xtremely guitly...rahul aaya tha...bt she lied to her friend 4 her own good ....now thi was acting biggest obstacle in her love story....

Ri- Musk...Muskaan....

M- 5 saal me usne mujhse ek baar bhi yaad nahi kia...woh mujhe bhul gaya tha Ridz...bhul gaya tha...ab achanak usse mujhse pyaar ho gaya????Ridz main aisa ladka nahi chahti jo meri khubsurati ko dekh kar mujhse pyaar kare...kuch saalon me yeh khubsurati nahi rahegi....do pyaar karne walo ko unka ehsaas jode rakhta hai....Rahul ko shayad aisa koi ehsaaas hai hi nahi....

Ri- PAr Muskan......'

M- Ridimma...usko agar sach me mujhse pyaar hona hota toh Kasauli me ho jata...

Ri- Muskaan...tu hi toh kehti thi na ki pyaar ko waqt ki nahi ek lamhe ki jarurat hoti hai...pyaar ek pal me ho jata hai...

M- Aisa kuch nahi hota...sab backwas hai...rahul ko meri koi pava nahi hai..i hate him....School me bhi usne mujhe use kia padhai ke liye....aaj bhi aisa hi karega...

Ri- Nahi....maine uski aankhome tere liye pyaar dekh hai...woh tujhe bahut khush rakhega....

M- AAnsu denewale khushiya nahi dete....Plzz Ridz...tune hi toh kaha tha na once a cheat always a cheat..phir ab kya hua???

Ri- Muskaan maine toh woh sab isliye kaha tha ki tu RAhul ko bhulkar padhai pe apne carrer pe concentrate kare...Aur Muskaan rahul cheat nahi ...woh tujhe .....

M- EnoughRidz...tu meri dost hai ya uski??? Mujhe iss baare me koi baat nahi karni....

Saying she went out bt not before she heard Ridz saying
Ri- Muskaan kismat ne tum dono ko dubara milaya hai uski koi wajah toh hogi....

the door was slaamed hard by Muskii


Ridz knew the prob was there coz she lied to Muskaan & now it was her responsibilty to fix it....

Ri- Meri wajahse dono ke beech galatfaimi hai aur ab main hi isse theek karungi...i know what to do.....

Ridz smiled to herself analysing her plan .......bt destiny had other plans........

plzz comment...hope u like it....
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesoem parts!!!!!!
but Muskaan was too rude to Rahul.
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Posted: 16 years ago

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**EDIT**

This was something un expected but whatever it was it was awesome mind blowing lekin Muskaan ne kuch zyada hi react kiya I hope ki next part mein they are together!
Love and Wishes,
Jinil!
Edited by KaSh_Deewaanie - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

wonderful part!!

do continue soon!! will be waiting!!
thanks for the pm!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
excellent parts ...just amazing...Thanks for the PM.....i feel bad for both muski and Rahul ..both are correct at their own places
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow! yaar, very few ppl's writing can make me cry, but those outbursts blew me away. I almost started crying on thinking of the 2 in such states. Mindblowing job yaar! Thanks a lot for the PM! I'm so glad you updatedd fast. Update faster this tim! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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