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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: MichiDespo

Nice Idea but darling loosing everything means what...money,family or virginity also.

loosing everthing here is only family and money

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Posted: 16 years ago
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i think i will start this FF but this takes some time. thinking to finish Khel before i start writing this FF
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
the preview looks interesting...looking forward to the first part :D
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shabz.

the preview looks interesting...looking forward to the firstpart :D

i'll try to start it ASAP

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Prologue :-
"hey come on your going to be my wife in the matter of three months. Now come give it, it won't look nice if we fight like this. Lets take a romantic photo of ours, we can put it up in our bedroom, after our marriage." "Neev, I want to take it up during our marriage in our wedding attire, what say Neev. It will be our memory." "by the way your friend Miss.Ayesha is going to come from Hyderabad to attend our wedding?" "why are you so anxious about Ayesha's arrival, if you love her tell now only we'll cancel this marriage." "are you feeling jealous. Ms.Prachi Shah,"he laughs at her loudly. She goes and whacks him on his back. "ouch, why did you hit me hardly." "nice happened don't ever mess up with me." "ok come on down, everyone are waiting for us down."

"dad, I'm not coming to Panchmeshwar. See the weather, it's so horrible." "come on sis this is summer. What problem do you have." "na it's seems, I not feeling right to go there at present. My heart is saying that something is wrong." "Prachi come on grow up, all are willing to go, and your mom says she thought of coming there when your marriage is settled." "but also, Neev, please." "No, Prachi, what Neev says is correct. Everything will be fine." "leave it ma, Prachi is so stubborn, if she won't come, your son-in-law is with you. what say ma,"
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In Hyderabad
"hey, Ayesha looks like a devil here." "you are looking like a devil in there Prem, what say Kashish" "yeah, Ayesha whose this in the middle of Kashish and you." Ayesha stares at the photo for some time and "this is my best best friend when we were studying in Pune. Prachi Shah", "I think Mr.Milind Mishra got bowled over that girl I think so." "there no chance for it now, Kashish, she's going to get married at the end of three months period. She's a lucky girl. She has everything in the world. Family, money, happiness, love." "yeah, she's a lucky girl", Milind murmered under his breath.
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Neev, you promised me that you are not going to drive such a long distance. Right now stop the chair. Why can't you follow the rules properly. How many times should I tell you don't drive while speaking on the cell." "hey sweety, it's your fault. I can't disconnect your call. I promised you, we'll be before midnight and if we make it fast only we'll be there." "plz, break the promise. I don't need you'll to come fast. Please drive slowly and cautiously Neev. I just want you'll to arrive safely." She disconnects the phone with her teary eyes.
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"hey give that Saket. This is mine." "hey Ayesha, you are from which jungle." "What!..." "nothing, I'm just conforming", "conforming, what", Ayesha just throws a cushion towards Saket. Everyone were trying to stop the fight between Ayesha and Saket. But, Milind lazily gazed at it, his hands searching for a photo. He simply slips a photo into his trousers pocket. "for god sake can you'll stop the nonsense." "what happened to him suddenly." Ayesha questions Prem seeing Milind going into the bedroom.

NOTE:-

Hope so the prologue didn't come up interesting….. This is a small attempt. Not sure of continuing it. Do you feel this prologue interesting, post your comments, so I can think of continuing. Sorry for the mistakes. I will be updating the story, when I feel that the part is really worth it of posting.




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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
interesting start!
Milind already seems to be smitten by Prachi
is Neev going to have accident or something😕?
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
nice to see u to start a new ff
loved ur prologue
continue soon.


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Posted: 16 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: kuku..

interesting start!yeah thanks................................................
Milind already seems to be smitten by Prachi😃
is Neev going to have accident or something😕?for that you have to wait for the first part to be up

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mehanandita

nice to see u to start a new ffthanks very much
loved ur prologue😊tankuuuuuuuuuuu
continue soon.yeah sure............................


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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
Interesting shravu.........So milsi already in luv with Prachi so sweet

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