NEW AK FF ~Overshadowed~

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey, everyone, I'm back with a new FF. Obviously, no one knows me because I've changed my username...it was actually a privacy issue :-)
Anyways, here I go with a new story...I hope everyone enjoys this...because I'm putting a lot of effort into it...and please comment!!! thanks everyone!!!

I don't want to give anything away, because it will make the story less interesting, so no character sketch!


Overshadowed is the story of a simple girl with simple dreams...until one day changes the course of her life! It is the story of relationships between siblings and between couples, and how they change with time and action.

Kripa is a simple girl, but her life is overshadowed by the actions of her sister, Mishty. Kripa is simple, yet elegant, natural and beautiful. Mishty is the exact opposite. Popularity, boys, and makeup are her middle name. Life goes on for Kripa, amid rejection and being overshadowed by her older sister, who is subjected to the acceptance of their mother far more than Kripa is.
One normal day, a phone call arrives. This phone call will change the course of several lives. This is perhaps the most important phone call of Kripa's life.

Are sibling relations more important than love? Is a mother able to choose between her children?

AND most importantly, is love always justified? Is it always necessary to make sacrifices in love?




Please comment :)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Intersting concept

can you pm when you post the first part
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Posted: 16 years ago
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interesting intro....
lets s what the call is???
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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interesting intro....can't wait for u to continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
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interestin concept....
cont soon n plz send me a pm if u can...
thanx....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
great start LOVED the intro
can't wait to read more😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great start
wonder who is the person calling? is it angad by any chance
mishti is too bad ...so mean

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