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Posted: 16 years ago
#61
i guess ridz is gng to play with armaan's feeling to take revenge and finally fall for him😉.
cute part😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62
OMG mona
that was such a great part
Oh no ridhima's going to play with armaan's feelings??? :(
Awwww i really wish she falls for him instead
hai, mona that was such a great part again hehe
thanks for updating
can't wait for the nxt part
Thanks for the PM
swancy
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: ak lover

i guess ridz is gng to play with armaan's feeling to take revenge and finally fall for him😉.

cute part😊



Yay! 😃You know the plot! Hehe. Thanks for giving it away!😛😆😆! Thank you(for the compliment😆)! I am so glad you like it! I just wanted one of fav writer to like it😳.
Mona.


Originally posted by: swansea

OMG mona

that was such a great part
Oh no ridhima's going to play with armaan's feelings??? :(
Awwww i really wish she falls for him instead
hai, mona that was such a great part again hehe
thanks for updating
can't wait for the nxt part
Thanks for the PM
swancy


Thank you so much! Yeah she is. Man.. you people are smart!! Yeah, she will fall for him. Thanks again for the compliment. As long as you are there to read, I am there to update! Lol!
Anytime (the PM)
Thanks again,
Mona.
Ps: I love the siggy(Swancy's properties, do not touch)!!
Edited by lalala10 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64
hey
i m back
i just read ur updates
and boy (girl) is that good
its like the best
i cant wait for the revenge and the
love for kripa and angad
plz continue soon and
thnx for being my freind
thank u soooooo much

~minita
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
Hey yaa ... Here's my comment :- @Part 7 :- Gosh ... Arman has to pay for it ... and Ridhima aww ... I can imagine how she'll be looking dripped in the cake !! he he he ;-) @Part 8:- OMG ... Ridhima kissed him?? am I in any dream land? Ok ... my sis pinched me ... that hurts ... but awesome part !! Loved that to bits ... do post soon ... and thanks for the PM ... and sorry for commenting late!! Do continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: xxxxminixxxx

hey
i m back
i just read ur updates
and boy (girl) is that good
its like the best
i cant wait for the revenge and the
love for kripa and angad
plz continue soon and
thnx for being my freind
thank u soooooo much

~minita



Hey,
Thanks for reading, commenting and complimenting. Thank you so much. Lol, AR's romance is going to bloom soon, while AK will be in for alot of choas before the romnace. Lol. I will ASAP! Oh, no! It's my pleasure.
You are welcome,
Mona.

Originally posted by: Ridzigarima

Hey yaa ... Here's my comment :- @Part 7 :- Gosh ... Arman has to pay for it ... and Ridhima aww ... I can imagine how she'll be looking dripped in the cake !! he he he ;-) @Part 8:- OMG ... Ridhima kissed him?? am I in any dream land? Ok ... my sis pinched me ... that hurts ... but awesome part !! Loved that to bits ... do post soon ... and thanks for the PM ... and sorry for commenting late!! Do continue soon



Hi,
Yes, Armaan had to pay big time! lol! Yeah, chociolatey, yumm.
She kissed him on the cheek but still, she kissed him. Lol. Your sister sure knows how to bring you back to reality. Thank you soo much. I will ASAP! No problem, anytime. Of course not, thanks for commenting.
I will ASAP!
Mona.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part8b:
A beuatiful Sunday.


Armaan runs over to Kavya and Riddhima smiles mischieviously. She shakes her head alittle. She was really enjoying it, well except for when her heart felt guilty and she felt like she had committed a murder. Everything except that part.

Soon, Riddhima and Anjali started playing badminton with Naina and Tulsi. Padma and Prerna were gossiping beside Kt and Kripa, who were decorating Kt's jean jacket with a white out. Soon, Naina was tired and started chatting with Padma and Prerna while Kt replaced her. Kripa was bored so she took out a novel and continued reading it from where she had left it.

She only had a couple of pages left so she was finished in 15 minutes. As soon as she kept the book inside her bag, she saw everyone rushing. She looked around. The clouds were darker and the light drizzle was now, heavy rain.

She helped everyone pack, the food and everything else that was there. Everyone gets into their cars and drive to their houses. By evening, the rain was, reduced to heavy drizzling.

Kripa walking in her garden. She just loved the rain!! She was humming a song and walking around. She thought she heard someone call her. She turned around . What she saw made her skip a beat. Before her eyes, was a wet Angad with his button up white shirt sticking to, his musculine body , his broad shoulders and his strong manly arms. His black hair and hislips were wet. He looked like a greek god, and she very badly wanted to touch his strong arms.

Ashamed of her thoughts, she looked at her feet. She never had these thoughts before. Neither did she ever look at someone thinking it might hurt themor make them feel uncomfortable. "Kripa!" Angad said, this time loudly.

Kripa looked up.
Kripa: I'm sorry! I was just umm... lost.
Angad: In your own house?
Kripa: No! I meant lost i thoughts.
Angad nodded.
Kripa: How come you are here?
Angad: Oh, well you see, all the others were coming here, and umm.. I was on my way home from getting mom's groceries. THen I get a call from Laksh, telling me to go to your house, as they were coming there, I mean here too. So here I am.
Kripa: Oh, well, that is nice. But they aren't here yet and, lets go inside.
Angad: Yeah!

As they entered Kripa told Angad that Prerna was taking a shower and that Armaan was asleep. Angad sweared under his breath. The more he wanted to ran away, the more closer he always got. But by now, he was perfectly fine. While shopping to groceries, Angad had managed to meet a couple of other girls, and then after flirting, he realized he was worried over nothing. He was still the same. But he deep down knew that he was attracted to Kripa.

Kripa went to get him something to eat, while he started watching tv. Soon Kripa came back and Angad started eating after Kripa handed him the plate.
Angad: Thanks.
Kripa: No problem.
Angad: These pakoras are really nice.
Kripa: They always taste nice when it's raining.
Angad: Yes they do!

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Prerna entered the living room to see Angad and Kripa arguing. Kripa hardly argued with anyone.

All the while, Angad and Kripa had found out that both were poles apart. They disliked almost everything that the other liked. Kripa soon found out about his flirty nature and decided to keep her distance. Angad on the other hand, was irritated at how she always gave a logical reason to dislike the things he liked. Both didnt like the other commenting about their hobbies or their likes and dislikes.

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Please do comment. I hope you like this part and please dont mind the mistakes. I know this part is like every slow and almost nothing except the AK scenes but it had a meaning in AK's future (in this ff).
Thanks alot for readinga dn commenting.
Mona.

Edited by lalala10 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesum part as usual!!!
ak part was good.......

👏
cont soon.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: nehasfan

awesum part as usual!!!
ak part was good.......

👏
cont soon.......



Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! I will ASAP!
Mona.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#70
I WAS A VERY NICE AND AWSUM PART BUT IT WAS SMALL .
I WANTED TO SEE WHAT WILL PRERNA DO WHEN SHE SAW THEM ARGUING.
NEVERTHELESS I DEFINETLY LOVED UR FF .
ITS A REQUEST IF U CAN THEN PLS WRITE A LONGER PART THEN THIS. PLS INCLUDE AR SCENES .
THANKS FOR THE WONDERFUL PART.

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