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Guys this is my first time am posting my FF here in the forum . I never did that before any one can read it. Its funny and romantic story if you are in interetesd I am not really that good . But i wil try my best😛.
I chose my few frinds from IF and few actors.
Hope u all like it

Am not really good at it. But I will try my best to do it.

Varsha as a Tanu : she is very simple and foolish girl. Her dream is about singing she want to be a singer so that's why she ran from her house and came to Mumbai to full fill her dream , where she met Mewhish her best friend.

Mehwish: She is very fun girl but she is very boring too. Everybody

calls her Tara. She wear glasses and reading books and always study .

Chandni as a Nisha: she is very good looking . All boys loves her but she ignores them because she is not interested in them . she likes karan her best firnd brother

Fiona as a Neha : she is very sweet and innocent girl but her biggest problem is she doesn't like to make friends she hardly have only one frinds that is her own brother Karen

Sarah : she is the most funniest girl. She love to dare all hot boys but she is waiting for her price charming. Which is really hard to find out for herself.

asma as a Piya : she is the most boring person she never do anything she is too lazy but she has a BF . she loves him so much .Boys:

Karan

He is very sweet guy . Nisha likes him but he doesnt care about her.Lets see how will they fall in love with each other.

Rajot: very tougth boy He hates those people who wasted their time on reading Her dream girl should be so sexy and understaning and always make his wish comes true. ( looks like he need magical girl)

Shahid as a Rahul:
He is very charming boy, handsome and good looking but his interst in people lives. He is very rich and want to enjoy his life more beauitfull so he left his house and came in mumbai and start his new life.
Shahid as a Raj ( Rahul twins bro) :
He is very innocent and he still lives in his house waiting for his brother to come house one day hopefully.
Harshad as a Prem:
He is very moody , it depends on his mood how will he react to others. He works at colothing store.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Dosti Se Pyar

Part 1

In this world, people always dream . Their dream always alive. Some dreams about having fun life, to become actress, want to be rich or singer. Always you can make your life great with your own confidence. This is story of eleven friends about their life and their struggle.

Its Sunday night, beautiful weather in Mumbai everybody is enjoying their life's some are sad, happy , enjoying and having fun. But her Tanu her dream about singing. She ran from her house and came to Mumbai , she met her best friend there Mehwish.

At the bus stop

Tanu: Oh God it's raining where should I go now. I even don't know anybody here .

She look at around and went to chai dukaan ( store).

Tanu: Bhaiya can I use your phone please.

B: why

Tanu: ( such a stupid question why we use phones) Hehe because I need to call my friend. I am new here ( making wired faces)

Bhaiya: do you have money

Tanu: for what

Bhaiya: hello jii you cant use my phone like this . If you have it take it out otherwise get lost .

Tanu: ( such a rude person) Thanks for letting me using your phone you get lost from here . You Don't who you talking with.

Bahia: tell me who are you?

Tanu: I am the star of the future , of the world. I came here to become singer not like you.

Tanu got really angry get out from his dukaan

Standing, and looking around what will she do now how could she find out where tara lives how to connect her.

Suddenly, there is guy who is shouting to some wired guy .

Guy: what is this nonsense? Get lost from here.

Tanu laughing.

Guy: excuse me ! Are you laughing at me?

Tanu: yes of course , By the way I m tanu nere here to mumbau I m looking for my best friend tara actually her name is Mewish but I call her tara its simple and cute name.

Karan : Hi this is karan. Nice to meet you. Come with me to my house and call her from there right now my cell phone isn't working so ?

Tanu: are you serious ( shocked face)

Will continue later?

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Part 2

Tanu and Karen reached.

Karen: so tanu I live there .

Karen lives in building like an apartment.

Suddenly, tanu saw tara .

She screamed .😆

Tanu: wow she is mine best friend tara

Karen shocked.

Karen: Oh really I know her she is my neighbor.

Tanu: sachi

Karen: yes she lives on upper flat

Tanu: let me go and meet her

Karen: No wait

Tanu ( surprised)

Karen : I mean give her surprise yaar take your bag pack with me . Meet her later.

Tanu: Okay as you wish

Karen: Okay welcome to my little house

Tanu: Nice flat

Karen: Ya I know.

Tanu : can I go and see your house

Karen: Go ahead sure.

Suddenly,, Nisha comes . Neha best frinds . Neha karen sisters.

Nisha opens the door.

Hellooooooooo anyone home

Karen: oh God why she is here. ( sad)😡😆

Nisha: Hey karen

Karen: sorry neha isn't at home

Nisha: so what! Are you alone at home..you right..I'd like to run away with you.

Karen: what

Nisha : oh just nothing jaanu jii😳

Karen: hey baghban😡😆

Tanu: hey karen nice house

Nisha: who is she witch?

Tanu: hey don't call me wicth( getting angry)😡

Karen: she is mine Gf

Nisha: what (shocked) you jking right( smile)😃

Karen : NO am serious

Karen pulled tanu arms and took it on his arms. 😲

K: she is my love

Nisha run away from there. (crying face)

Tanu: uff leave me

She slapped him

T : how dare you to touch me like this . Are you drunk or what look at you and me I am so beautiful and you. I never think of you guys like dumbest

Karen( smiling)

T : you just so cheap . I am not staying here anymore. You wiill see not only you whole India will knows me the great tanu I am going to be singer very soon .😛😆

Karen( why she is parsing herself huh)😲

K: look I don't like you either . I just did it on purpose cause that was my sister friend and she is after me . Got it. I am not in interested you ether. Get it out of my house now.

T : you are so wired first u tol dme to come at my house and now you throwing me out . Now I wont go what can u do now.

K: excuse me ( angry face) This is my house

T : so what . I am so hot

K: you don't look so hot yourslef🤣

T: I m hot I need water( angry) he is such a dumb. Go now?I am thirsty.

Karen went to the kitchen

K: I did very big mistake in my life to bring her at my home. I even don't know her and she

T: where are you ? WATER

K : coming darling

T : ( wired smile) Thank you Mr. whatever

K: Karen singh

T: wow nice to know that

At Nisha house

Crying and crying and smiling

N: how dare he?mummyyyyyyy

No munny to jahan per hai hi nahi what should I do . Mom was right she told me beta don't go to Mumbai alone . But me so stupid I I dint listen to her. I am so hot and karen even don't look at me

Karen house:

K: so madam ji when are you leaving

T: me

K: yes u

T : am not leaving until tara don't come here to pick me up

K: this is too much just leave now

T: I wanna meet your sister( laughs)

K: you don't even know her

T: look we can become frinds that's how people know each other and their true faces( smiled)

K( thinking) she is right though but no way

T: what happened

Nisha house
N: what she thinks about herself she is not even sexy like me

Neha introducing

N: oyeeeeeeeeeee hello auto bhiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Why are you leaving me alone here

Ab: because I am full today

N these middle class people

Nevermind I should go home right now.

Neha reached there.

Neha: actualy before going home I should meet Nisha

Neha knocking the door.

neha: she is taking forever

Nehainally nisha opened the door

Nisha eyes were dull

Neha: huggyyyyyyyyyyyyy . You wont belive me what happened today

N: I don't want to know ( screaming)

Neha: what happened

N: your bro have a GF

Neha: wow that's really good news. Congrulations

N: youuuuuuuuuuu making me angry now

Neha : oh sorry spry I forgot u like him naa

N: I don't know what should I do

Neha: u know am going

N: where

Neha: going to talk karen

N: goooooooooo( crying) Anyways am hungry now. What should I do eat.

Neha: Bhaiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

K: Hello my sweety little sis

N: shut up and who is she

T: I am tanu . I am new to city

N: so yout my bro GF

T: shocked

K: no no no she is not mine GF

N: Ohhhhhhhhhhh so whats your hobbies

T: people thinks I am very good singer my parents thinks this too . I ran away from my house

N: why

T: because they said you cant be singer if you become singer nobody gona marry you.😆

N: wow you want to be singer like rahul

T: who is rahul

K : sitting on the sofa and watching tv

K: he lives our next door . He is my friend too.

Rahul: yeh mera dil pyar ka deewna ..😆

T: he sing so bad

N+K: we know

T: wow

K: you know you should make frindship with me

T: why

N: casue he is very rich

T: than why the heck he is liviing in this flat

K: I don't know too we aren't that close. But I know he is rich tahst it nothing know about him yet.

T: why

K: cause he never told us about his life.

T: is he good looking

N: I have no idea

T: why

N: because I never seen him never met him. He moved her last week you know . I never get time to see him .😭

T: OH . Karen probably knows

K: why you asking me I Like hot gals

T: huh huh I forgot ou are guy

Nisha at her house.

N: I am disco dancer ..am disco dancer🤣

T: who is playing this loud music

N: probably my frind Nisha

T: Oh her I don't like her

N : heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy( angry)

T: sorry baba

Nisha: I wanan go pi ?but don't feel like it😆😆

What should I do

Neha: hey bro and tanu wait I be back I am going to tel Nisha to stop the music she is so annoying.😆

Rahul: I think I should go outside for check out sexy girls yeah yummy girls😳

*******************

Part 3

Rahul was about to step up outside. Suddenly, Phone rang.

R: oh god who is disturbing me

Closed the door.

Neha passed from there.

R: Hello

Person: Hi this is Raj secerity speaking

R: Oh so why did you called here

S: sir I want to tell you raj sir leaved a message from you

R: hey hey look if he is saying to come home back than am really sorry. I won't do that.

S: but sir?

R: I don't want to listen anything. You did your job so now you can hung up the phone.

S: sir please listen to me..

Rahul cutted the phone.

R: oh God I told bhaiya I don't wanna come to home back still he is very stubborn.

S: oh how should I tell him. His brother is in the hospital.

At Nisha House

Nisha: Neha please make something from me am very hungry.

Neha: shut up I came here to stop your stupid music.

Nisha: whyyyyyyy

Neha: don't make me mad now. Bye. Now don't play it again got it.

Nisha: fine don't wanna talk to you

Neha: neither do I

K: como on tanu please go now. Tara is waiting for you.

Neha: you still here

Tanu: hey I wanna be your friend

Karen laughing

T: what's so funny dude

K: ahah you know I forgot to mention that she my little sister she doesn't like to make friends

T: what

N : yes so true

t: you have friends

N: no I don't only my brother and Nisha that's it

T: why not

N: waste of time.

T: oh really

K: hey guys I see you both later.

N: where you going?

K: party

N: at this time

K: its just a 10:00

N: its time to sleep

K: its not

N: fine do whatever you want to do

K: by they way you should go to sleep right now you have college tomorrow .

N: I know bye good night

Karen left from there.

T : wow its just 10:00 you going to sleep

N: well yes?tommrow is first day of college you new season started going college after 3 months I don't want to be late in class.

T: aww I want admission at your class can do me a favor.

N: sure

T: can u go and get the application for me

N: oh why you just don't come with me tomorrow

T: so what time I should be ready

N: 8:00 clock

T; when did your college start

N: 9

T: what then why 8 o'clock

N: cause I said so hey listen I think I am falling asleep. I should go to bed now. Good night.

Neha locked the door and send out tanu

T: wow where is tara.

Knocking at the door

N: now what

T: where tara lives

N: her room # is 24 go now.

T: Thank you so much

Closed the door.

T: God she is so rude

Tara open the door( she go shocked) she wink her eyes

Tanu: heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Tara : wow what a surprise come

Tanu: I know

Tara : so when did u come

Tanu: haah its beong long tome almst 2 hours

Tara: where were you been

Tanu: your neighbors house

Tara: mine( shocked) who

Tanu: Neha and karan

Tara : oh I see did u have fun there

Tanu : yes I did

Tara : hey lets go to sleep have college tomorrow you know

Tanu : you too

Tara : yes

Next Morning

Karen: wake up neha neha neha neha neha wake up ( shouted)

N: let me sleep please

K: its 8:15 look at the time

N: 2 more mins

K: Okay fine

Nisha comes there

Nisha: hey karan darling

K: good morning

Nisha starting at him. Karen is trying to get off from there. He kept looking at the window.

Nisha smiling

Karan: why you smiling at me

N: you want to know why

K: yes

N: because I love you why you just don't join out college

K: cause am done with college

N: why

K: (in loud voice) cause I m stupid I was so smart in class so that's why I done quickly happy now

N : calm down

Here's neha comes

Neha: don't start fight now. Lets go nisha

K: bye have fun

Neha: oh wait where is tanu

Tanu: hereeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Nisha: hi tara and you whatever your name

T : tanu tanu is my name

Tara : hello how are you both

n+n : very good

At college??.

Tanu: am so nervous

Neha: don't be yaar

Tara: I know have fun take it easy

Nisha: why you scared

Tanu: cause am new here that's why don't know how's new peoples and teachers are here.

Neha: hey don't take tension

Tara keep looking back and looking around she was to fall down. Tanu put her hand down her stomach.

Tanu: what do thinking

Neha+ Nisha: huh huh we know

Tanu: what

Neha: now don't tel me u don't know

Tanu: tell me guys

Nisha: you know what your best frind tara ..right tara

Tanu: uff please tell me. Neha you tell me

Neha: ok ok actually she likes someone or I can say she is in love with our English professor son rajot.

Tanu: what the hell ? When did this happened

Tara: (blushing) No am not they are making up

Neha: liar we knows you like him

Tanu : am really angry at you tara u even didn't tell me this before.

Nisha : arrey where you looking at

Neha: I know I know she is gonna see him after 3 months yaar

Tara ; I don't know what u guys talking about

Neha: wow look her innocent face

Tara : ok whatever I don't love him

Neha: when we said you love him haan ..tell us..

Tara : am not blushing

Neha, Nisha and tanu: when we said yo 're blushing

Tara : ok stop all this.

Neha: guys lets go to canteen

Tanu: ok sure..

They all reached at canteen

Nisha: oh man sorry sorry I see you guys later I need to talk to my classmate girl she is has mine notes I need my notes back from here. Have fun

All: see you later.

Both neha and tanu laughing and joking around and drinking coffee. But tara mind was some where else

Tanu : tara what you thinking

Tara : oh nothing

Neha: cough rajot cough( laughing)

Tanu: huh (laughs)

Tara : guys stop it please I don't like him already told you

Tanu: ok ok fine

Both laughing

Neha: so tanu how did you like my college

Tanu : your college haha funny

Neha: yes of course

Tanu : nice coffee

Neha: I know

Tanu : so tara whats your plan for today with my jiju

Tara: (angry face)

There rajot comes.

Neha: hey tanu that is rajot tara love.

Tanu : oh he is cute. Who are other people with him

Neha : his friends. His friends are so mean .

Tanu : really

Neha: u don't know his frinds they are ..sucks

R: hello guys

They all looking each other

Neha : you talking to us

R: yes

Neha: oh ..we never talked so why today

R: actualy am not coming to class today so ca you tell my dad

Neha: oh okay..

R: thank you so much

Tanu : WOW

**********************

Will cont later

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Part 4

The bell rings. Every one went to class but tara was sit at the canteen and starting at rajot. Rajot friend why that girl is starting at you.

R: I have no idea.

F: Huh does she liked you or what

R: I don't know. Let me go ask her ( laughs)

F: ya funny

Rajot Lets go from here.

Tara : oh no why did he left

Tara follow him. Rajot doesn't know anything tara is following him. One of his friend noticed.

Tara stopped there and turned around.

R: oh god why she is following me( angry)

Rajot left from there. When tara turn he wasn't there. She went to search him but she couldn't find him. So she get upset and went home back.

At English class.

Neha : tanu u sit with me

T: how about Nisha where is she?

N: have no idea don't worry about her she is not with us

T : what do you mean

N : I mean to say she has art class right now with my her another friend piya something like this. She is so boring don't ask her about.

T: why

N: one day Nisha asked her lets go to party she didn't go and than she asked how about beach she didn't go either. She never goes anywhere expect his BF

T : wow she has BF

N: lol ya she got one

T : does he goes here

N: nope he isn't that rich you know cant ford it so he works at clothing store. He doesn't want to study

T: poor guy

Neha : ok dude teacher is here be quiet he is very strict and he is rajot dad the guy tara likes.

T: oh thanks for telling me. Hey whats his name?

N: Baghat

Tanu laughing

N : don't laugh

T: sorry funny name

B: welcome students how was your break . Neha tell me what did you do it in your break

N: sir I didn't do anything special just stayed at home.

B: ok good. Who is this girl who is sitting beside you. I thought u don't like to make friends.

N: No sir, she is new to this college

B : welcome so what's your name?

T: Tanu

B: I said full name

T: no sir u didn't said ( all student laughing)

B: shut up you all. Now you can sit down.

T: he is so rude

N: I know

B: what you both are talking. You tanu go get out of the class . In my class no talking at you . Get you all this.

N: but sir.

B: I said go..

T: okay as you wish.(angry)

Tanu went outside.

T: Oh God he is so rude I feel like killing him

Tanu saw a guy guy whoz coming toward her . She got scared for a sec and he went to her English class.

T: wow who was he?

Rahul: hello sir.. Am sorry I am late.

B: who are you?

R: Hi I m rahul new to this class. This is my first day.

B : ok good you are late to class go outside for 15 mins than come back. This is your punishment.

R: but sir..

B : no but and if. I said go

R : ok fine sir.

Rahul goes and stand near by tanu.

T: hii

R: hey( smile)

T: are you new

R:yess today was my first day and he gave me punishment cause I came late.

T: he is very mean

R: ya. Why u here

T: he send me out too

R : was you late

T: No way I was talking to Neha

R: Neha who neha??

T: oh the girl was sitting in the first bench

R: oh I didn't see her.

T: that's okay

After 15 mins

R: hey okay I am going he said come after 15 mins

T: ok best of Luck

R: Thanks

Rahul entered

R: sir may I come in

B: sure. Go ahead sit there

R: where sir

B: to the first bench

R: okay

B: so students I gave you assignemt do it its due on Friday take your time and you need to find your partner you can chose only one partner.

Rahul goes and sit near by Neha.

R: hey neha

Neha got schocked

N: ah ?.

R : you probably thinking how do I know yours name . right

N: Yaa

R: well your friend told me tanu

N : oh she is not my friend

T : ok..lets be frinds new to this college.

N : sorry I don't like to make friends

R why not

N: none of your business

R: alright so which project we doing

N: I explain u later

At Raj office?

Sarah at the office counter.

S: can I please meet Raj

Lady: no he is not here he is sick he is in the hospital told you like 100 times.

S: when you told me liar.. You lying

Raj personal secrity

Sec: what is it ? Who is this?

S : I want to work here I need this job.

SecL dude he is mine Bf

Lady : raj sir is your BF

Sec: its not he doesn't have GF you know howz raj sir is..she is making up

S: Ya I was lying.. I wanna meet him

Sec: how many times we were gonna say his health is not good he was really sick go to the hosital here is the dress and meet him.

S: thank you so much

At lunch time.

Rahul : hey you ..listen..hey neha listen

Neha: what is it?

Rahul : I want to ask you something

Neha : what is it? Hey tanu you go I am coming.

Tanu : okay see Ya

Neha: now ok tell me

R: actually don't know how to say

N: say it

R: will you become my girlfriend

Neha shocked she cant stop laughing

R : what

Neha: are you kidding me

R: oh am serious

Rahul grab neha hand into his hands

Nisha saw them

Nisha : huh what this happening. Huh I need to tell karan about what her sister doing at college

******Wil cont later****

Edited by Himanivineet - 16 years ago
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wooow sania🤣 bhaghat🤣 i would laugh too.. omg he is so mean😆 i like it😆 but ya.. wow reallyyy nice update yaar😲👏 no me in it haaan😡 hahhaa🤣 i wonder what am doing... 🤣 😃😃😃
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Originally posted by: *Nishi*

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wooow sania🤣 bhaghat🤣 i would laugh too.. omg he is so mean😆 i like it😆 but ya.. wow reallyyy nice update yaar😲👏 no me in it haaan😡 hahhaa🤣 i wonder what am doing... 🤣 😃😃😃

🤣 yes u were in it at the end🤣
sorry u r part was short..it depend..okay🤣
dont worry u pat wil be long..too next time
i have to adjut t naa🤣
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OMFG I LAUGHING SOO HARD...AHAHA RAHUL GRAB ME...IM BLUSHIN RIGHT NOW..BUT NEHA IS NOT...IMAOOO HILARUIOUS🤣 N LOOJ NISHA GOIN TO TELL KARAN
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🤣

u blushing ya right u got shcoked🤣 blush ki baat ker rahi hoo🤣🤣🤣

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Originally posted by: Himanivineet

🤣 yes u were in it at the end🤣
sorry u r part was short..it depend..okay🤣
dont worry u pat wil be long..too next time
i have to adjut t naa🤣

oh yaaa... ok i read now.. omg im gonna tell on themmm🤣 ya i know what u mean🤣 omggg🤣🤣🤣 sania u need grammar classsss🤣🤣🤣 adjut u are so dumb i love u😳
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Originally posted by: *Nishi*

oh yaaa... ok i read now.. omg im gonna tell on themmm🤣 ya i know what u mean🤣 omggg🤣🤣🤣 sania u need grammar classsss🤣🤣🤣 adjut u are so dumb i love u😳

watever🤣

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