AR:'IF YOU'RE NOT THE ONE''(VERY imp. note:pg 56)

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Jodubai

@Jodubai

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#201

What a brllant part, Barkha

someone is having a change of heart....hopefully not so late

its very nice to read the transformation of Arman trying to run away from her, not making an effort to talk to her....nice going....

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Nidha

@nidha1983

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+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#202

woah dear🤗 its really an awesome one⭐️ superb😊 so he like to talk to her😳😳 and i m waiting when he start getting jealous from Adi😆 then its going to be so fun😉😉😉 but overall its mind blowing one😍😎 plz continue it soon😛😉

"Dil Hi Dil Mein Hum Tumhain Pyar Bahot Krtey Hain,
Lekin Saach Hai K Bataney Se Bahot Dartey Hain,
Khud Pe To Hai Yaqin Saanson Pe Magar Nahi,
Moat Se Nahi Aey "Khushi" Zindagi Se Hum Dartey Hain."

Edited by nidha1983 - 16 years ago

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harika

@-harika-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#203

hey barkha, nice fic!! loved the characters n the realistic changes creeping in between AR..the flow is smooth n well written. good job! loving ridz character here. hope u update soon :)

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kashish

@kashishk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#204

Hey Barkha,
As usual, the part is awesome, I absolutely loved it.
U r an amazing writer.
I so loved u wrote AR scenes.
Continue soon.

Kashish

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shonaveer

@shonaveer

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#205

hey...

im one of d new readers to ur ff....

its really amazing....

just read everything.... loved it :))))

please do continue as soon as possible....

luv

deepu :)

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shonaveer

@shonaveer

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#206

hey... please do pm me if u continue....

luv

deepu :)

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bazingaaa

@bazingaaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#207

sorry didnt comment before

i love your ff

please cont soon

pm me please

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shonaveer

@shonaveer

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#208

continue soon na...

please

please do pm me if continue...

luv

deepu :)

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ridzi830

@ridzi830

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#209

omg..barkha
great part..loved it..u did not pm me yaar..pls try to pm me if possible...

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prety_cool93

@prety_cool93

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Posted: 16 years ago

#210

hey...i generally read ur ff n not comment...bt dis part was very gud...plzz pm me whenever u update d next part...plzzzz...n thnx 4 writing dis part...