*An angel from hell* AR part 2: pg 9 (23/02) - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey sandy,
great part...loved it...waiting eagerly 4 the next one....thanks 4 the pm...pls pm me when ever u continue....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey sandz...... 🤗.. 1stly sorry hunny... i am late... 😭.. got caught up in a few things... 😲😲.. you r one brill writer hunny.... 👏👏.. that was sooo wicked... 😳.. hate to say this but riddhima's a right pain in the backside.. hehe.... hmmm who can change that...?? 😆😆... lolz.. loved the grand entry of ammy... great to see the obama issue.... hehe superb hunny.... loved it all..... P:S swanz beat me... damn!!.. hehe... i'll be 1st next tym.. 😳.. lolz.. lv ya rav..xx

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Posted: 16 years ago
#63
Hey Sandy,
THe whole part was awesome, I really loved the way u describe her dress.
And she is really a hell of girl, she accuse the guy for nothing.

The scene I loved the most:

She looked up, and saw someone's back to her, the body was well build, very good from the back.

Fabulous introduction of Armaan, can't deny his body is really well built.


"Welcome ridhima" his voice came as ridhima stopped right on the front of the house.

He is greeting her but the difference is he is welcoming her into hell.

"Armaan?" ridhima managed a word out of her mouth. Slowly she watched as the guy turned around, ridhima watched as she bold muscles poked out of his chest, the masculine scent was roaming around the house. He was wearing a dark red and black shirt with dark jeans. His face sharp and textured. He stood up and walked towards her, ridhima stood still wondering what was going on. She wanted revenge she was going to make his life a living hell and she is still on for this plan.

She too wants to make his life hell.😆. They r on the same boat.

"Ridhima gupta!" armaan said as he stood right in front of her. His eyes gazed from her cleavage to her toes. "Good as gold" he said as ridhima watched his eyes burning in anger the same was her's was.

Yeah he is really proving he is a playboy. Both are angry with each other.

"Welcome ridhima, Welcome in hell" he grinned widely

This dialogue was awesome, so he announced it.

"So i guess we're on the same page" ridhima grinned

I can imagine they both taking revenge, gonna have fun in the next parts.

"Yes we are" he turned and walked near her. As ridhima eyes wondered around the mansion it was big. "Get ready ridhima!" his voice gave her a threat

She is completely ready armaan, she was only thinking about this from the second she knew she is gonna stay with u.

Ridhima laughed. "Don't worry armaan, as much as you think you might scare me. Guess what i'm more scared of what i'm doing then what you are"

Superb yaar, she isn't scared of him. Actually I really wanne know her past because I am sure something big happened and somehow it have a link with mens (she hates men except her bro).

-"Hell ridhima, hell"

-"I love places like that" she had whispered in his ear, as the hot breath fell on his earlobe, this was going to be fun, armaan thought

-"I am the devil from hell Miss Gupta" armaan breathed in her lips

-"Then i'm the angel from hell Mr Malik"

Those four dialogues are awesome, AR r not less then each other. They r truly from hell.
I really excited to read how they fall in love in love.

They both stood there, not moving away from the sight of each other. This was one journey which would make them both know more about each other. One whole month of pure torture, one moth of being in hell, with both the angel and the devil, none of them knew what was coming their way. Ridhima looked into his dark blue eyes, as armaan looked into her grey eyes. Not moving it was their fight, a fight to make either one's life a hell. A total hell......

The challenge is done, and the part was excellent especially this one, I am really looking forward.

Continue soon and pls do PM me.
And yes a very very happy birthday to Karan aka Armaan.

Luv u<3333
Kashish

Edited by kashishk - 16 years ago
yogzz thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64
hey sandy loved it yaar.........
it is amazing.......
thanx for pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
Sandy Ur selection about clothes is wonderful.
Its like u r in some fashion house or a dress designer itself.
May be im wrong but i like ur description.
AR r Devil n Angel from hell😆😆😆
👍🏼Great voyages .looking forward.👏
"The past cannot be changed,
the future is still in your power."

- Hugh White
take care
ritu
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow, AR have finally hit it off, though on the wrong note, but they've finally met. ridhima has to admit that she was smitten by armaan's good looks when she saw him.
thanks for the pm. continue soon and do pm me.
mohini :]
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Sandy,
Lovely update....wow, both are bend up on making the other's life hell...wonder what will happen next???
Atul was a sweetheart.....stuck with Muski....don't think he minds that....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
gr8 part...
n now the war begins...
cant wait for the next update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sandy Thnx for the PM.
I loved the part, U wrote it superbly.
Continue soon really want to know what will they do.
Neevfan
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
whenr u updating..waiting 4 an update

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