New AR FF: Pyaar is Confusing-Updated Part 1- Pg 2 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks Reshma and teju..i'll surely update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG Riya! What a superb FF, really! I mean how do u manage to write and express so well.I really felt i am watching it on TV Riya.And i simply loved the way you introduced all the three characters, and choice for choosing Vivaan Bhatena is Super! Because he's hot and good looking with a really cute smile.
By the way thanks for using Sukirti's Pic that i PM'd you.She looks so beautiful as ever!
And i cannot wait for Part 1, seriously, im toooo Eager! Thanks in Advance.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: yam_dmg

OMG Riya! What a superb FF, really! I mean how do u manage to write and express so well.I really felt i am watching it on TV Riya.And i simply loved the way you introduced all the three characters, and choice for choosing Vivaan Bhatena is Super! Because he's hot and good looking with a really cute smile.

By the way thanks for using Sukirti's Pic that i PM'd you.She looks so beautiful as ever!
And i cannot wait for Part 1, seriously, im toooo Eager! Thanks in Advance.

Awww thanks Yamini, that was such a sweet comment 😊
I know I love my choice for Vivaan too! ....he's very cute 😳😳
Nooo...thank you for the pic! Btw Im liking ur current avatar too O_o 😆😆
Trust me Im working on Part 1 too!...ahh but I hate school 🤢 lol jk
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
nice ff..pls pm me when ever u continue...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww...that was such a cute part...but plz plz plz make it AR FF....as in armaan-riddhima :D
they are so adorable friends...continue super soon
and if u dont mind can u plz add me 2 ur pm list?
thnks
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Posted: 16 years ago
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As I said earlier that I'm gonna introduce supporting characters when needed; and now I want to introduce to you..Sonia. And the actress playing Sonia is....

Dhrushti Dhami!

Why did I choose her?- She is a good actor and for this FF, imagine her in straight hair. Her name is Sonia Jain. Armaan has always been Riddhima's best friend...but few month ago Sonia was Riddhima's second best friend. Some difference drifted the close friends apart and now they are arch rivals. Sonia is a very nice girl but she is def a little concieted. She thinks very highly of herself and believes that she is the prettiest girl at Excel.
Part One- Pyaar is Confusing
Riddhima's house.

Despite being the most popular girl at Excel, and despite being the diva of the college, Riddhima was one of those over-acheiver kind of student..who wanted to accomplish everything. Riddhima was a perfectionist, she carried a planner with her that helped her manage her assignments at college and she maintained her folder nicely as well.

Riddhima- Ah! Oh God! Main toh Armaan ko remind kara na hi bhool gayi ki aaj professor ne History book laane ko kaha tha! Shoot!
Riddhima hurriedly grabbed her phone and texted Armaan..."Armi..dont forget to get your History book..cuz I'm not gonna share it with you. Boohoo!"
This is kinda like what Armaan and Riddhima's relationship was..they perfected each other. They were not selfish, rather they found happiness in each other's success.
For the first day of college, Riddhima wore dark skinny jeans, a cute hot pink top and matching shoes. Riddhima obviously didn't need any make-up, but she still used to wear makeup ...cuz heck she liked it! lol For the first time, Riddhima was actually ready on time, and till Armaan reached her house...Riddhima started to play with her dog- Coco
This is Coco Kapoor btw.....

Armaan's house.

Armaan smiled while reading Riddhima's text. "Wow she cares for me so much" ..Armaan thought to himself. As instructed by Riddhima, Armaan followed her orders and put on the yellow shirt. It was not his favorite shirt, but this was the least he could do for Ridz.
Armaan got his stuff together and started driving towards Riddhima's house.

Outside Riddhima's house

Armaan calls Riddhima.
Armaan- I'm outside.
Riddhima- Ok, I'm coming.
Armaan saw Riddhima coming. He jumped out of his car.
Armaan- Hey best friend!
Riddhima (while hugging each other)- Hey, Armaan! Oh I missed you.
Armaan- Uhmmm...hum sirf ek din ke liye nahin mile...and you missed me?
Riddhima- Thanks for that Armaan. Stop pretending, I know you love me ...more.
Armaan- You wish! Nahhh I'm kidding. I do love you a lot. (said with a huge smile)
Riddhima- Ha ha! See! Acha abhi chalen? Main late nahin hona chahti! Unlike you!
Armaan (blushing) - Acha suno....umm ye tumhare liye.
Armaan had bought chocolates for Riddhima.
Riddhima- Aww ..how sweet.
Armaan- Woh aaj pehla din haina isliye. Best of luck!
Riddhima- Best of Luck to both of us! Acha abhi seriously..chalen? Agar main late hui na to..toh ...you're dead.
After the cute conversation, Riddhima and Armaan drove off. Of course, the "I love yous" were said in a friendly way...but you never know what happens in the future.
At Excel College...
Riddhima- Dekha maine kaha tha na ki hum late ho jayenge! Sab tumhari fault hai Armaan. Tumhe toh main dekh loongi.
Armaan- whaa? Meri fault? Riiiiiiight. Tum vo apne doggie Coco ke saath itni busy thi..ki main bahar kab horn baja raha tha...But no Ms. Riddhima Kapoor was busy with that Coco Kapoor.
Riddhima- Oh you're so dead! Tumne...tumne coco ka mazaak udaya? I hate you Armi.
Armaan- You know you dont hate me, toh kam se kam jhoot toh mat bolo. God!
Riddhima- Ughhhh, chodo! Tumhari first class kahaan hai?
Armaan- Tumse matlab?
Ridhima (shocked)- Ahhh! Fine!
Armaan- Yeah Fine!!!
And this stupid old arguement ended Armaan-Riddhima's conversation. But it was not a big deal, they were best friends...but they used to fight a lot too. Little bit of nok-jhok is important in every relationship.

After Riddhima's first class..
Riddhima got out of her class and started looking for Armaan. And then suddenly, someone tapped on her shoulder. Riddhima turned around..it was Sonia.
Riddhima sighed.
Sonia- Oh hi, Ridz!
Riddhima- Kya chahiye tumhe, Sonia? What do you want?
Sonia- Oh! Subah subah..itna rude jawab? Not cool.
Riddhima- Oh please. I'm not interested in talking to you.
Sonia- Oh please! Neither am I. Main toh tumse tab baat karoongi jab main banoongi...Miss
Excel College.
Riddhima- Huh wat?
Sonia- Yeah silly. Tumne suna nahi...Miss Excel College ke baare main? Ab main banoongi,
Miss Excel College.. is college ki sabse khoobsurat larki.
Riddhima(rolled her eyes)- Good for you! Now please let me go.
Sonia- As you wish...
And hence, Sonia left. Its very surprising for othe college students to see Riddhima-Sonia
bicker. They used to really good friends and now they can't even stand each other. Riddhima started to think about her old lost friendship with Sonia and then someone whispered in her ears..
Armaan- Achi lag rahi hain na?
Riddhima- Tum! Kaun achi lag rahi hai?
Armaan- Wohi tumhari friend...Sonia.
Riddhima- Itni pasand hai toh..toh mere saath kyun baat kar rahe ho?
Armaan- Just kidding Ridz, can we stop fighting now? Please...
Riddhima lookied at him in a childish way...
Armaan- Acha yaar. I'm sorry...I love you and I love Coco too! Happy?
Riddhima (slaps Armaan lightly)- Thats more like it. Abhi chalen? Lunch karne?
Armaan- As you say, your highness.
Riddhima- Kya baat hai? I'm impressed.
Armaan- Haan haan itna impress na ho..main yunhi keh diya tha...(taps Riddhima on her
forehead with his pen)
Riddhima- OUCH! Armaan main tumhe nahin chodoon gi!
Armaan- Oooooo...I'm scareddd!
Armaan ran and Riddhima ran after Armaan to get her revenge. This is how crazy Armaan-
Riddhima were...more like super crazy. They loved their friendship, but is it more to friendship between Armaan and Riddhima?
End of Part 1

Precap- It was 3 am and Riddhima was lost in her thoughts and tossing on her bed restlessly. Then she finally decided to call Armaan.

Riddhima-Hello?
Armaan- Huh...hh..hello? Riddhima?
Riddhima- Haan, Armaan woh..
Armaan- Riddhima wat the heck ..you know is waqt 3 baj rahe hain.
Riddhima- I know lekin suno toh.
Armaan-Hh..haan kaho?
Riddhima- Voh Armaan.. mujhe mujhe ...umm..Ms. Excel College main part lena hai.
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P.S- I know its a very small part, but I'm still developing the idea in my head so please cooperate with me 😊. Also please DO comment 😛
I love your comments, suggestions and ideas...please let me know if you liked Part 1. Or if you thought it was total bakwaas. LOL 😆😆😆
Love,
Riya
Edited by jahluka - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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plz continue soon cant wait to see wats ganna happen next
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Posted: 16 years ago
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luv the part

continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nice update and what a nice start
plz update the next part soon and pm me if u can plz
thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Heyy Riya di!!

That was an awesome part!!!!! AR are sooo cute and sweet!! I love their friendship!! its unbreakable!! haha...and aww...they have their littel nokh-jokhs!! haha.....the little fight was so cute!! omg....Sonia (aka Muskaan from DMG) is bad??? haha....that's interesting!!! loved this part!!! plz cont soon and thanx fr the PM!!

<33333
Mahima

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