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Part 11

"Kya hai Rahul?" Muskaan whined as he pulled her away from the girls.

He looked around to make sure they were alone before replying, "kuch nahin. Tujhse baat karni thi…"

"Haan kaho…"

But Rahul didn't have anything to say. "Umm…" he said, thinking quickly. "You look beautiful."

Muskaan rolled her eyes. "Yeh baatne ke liye tumne mujhe yahan keench kar le aye?"

"Arre," he retorted. "Aab mujhe tumse baat karne ka bhi haaq nahin. I mean, humari egagement ho gayi… atleast aab toh kuch aur waqt saath guzaar sakthe hain."

"Oh please," she said. "Give me a break. Tumhe toh sirf ek mauka chahiye mujhe baat karne ke liye."

"Toh…? Akhir meri mangethar ho!"

"You know Rahul," Muskaan said. "You can't just propose to me and think I am all yours!"

"Matlab?"

"Matlab, try to do some nice things. Like giving me gifts, taking me out… meri tareef karna aur occasionally mujhe I love you kehna…"

Rahul stared at her for a whole minutes before saying, "But you know I love you…"

"So," she said. "Girls ko aisi cheez pasand hai… Tumne mere liye kya kiya?"

He rolled his eyes. "Tumhe kya chahiye?"

"Saab kuch main baataungi, toh tum kya karooge?"

And with that she walked away, leaving a frustrated Rahul behind. "Aab iss ke liye kya karoon? ARMAAN!" he called.

* * *

"Aaj bahut achi lag rahi ho tum Anjali," Atul complimented.

"Pehle bhi keh chuke ho tum yeh Atul," she answered.

"Haan, magar phir bhi tum bahut khoobsurat lag rahi ho. Aur issi liye, yeh tumhari liye," he said, handing her a small rose plant.

"Thank you," Anjali said, laughing at his nave nature.

In the past few days, Anjali actually started to take a liking to Atul. The weird and embarrassing boy she met two years ago, suddenly started to look like a cute and nice guy that she didn't mind spending the day with.

Of course, its not love as Atul put it. Sometimes he irritated her to death and sometimes he gave her immense happiness with the silly things he did for her. Yeah at first, his flop plans made her angry, but now she didn't have the heart to be mad at his strange intern, who was different from the musclar Armaan and Rahul, who knew perfectly well how to romance and impress a girl.

Anjali sometimes wondered if she was the same person. Before she hoped for a strong guy, with a cool and serious attitude. But now she hoped for a different kind of guy… a guy like Atul. She knew he would never be able to romance like his two other best friends, and yet she also accepted the fact that whoever ended up him, would be very lucky.

And sometimes when she did think about the girl in Atul's life, she felt strange. And to some extent, she didn't want him to find one… because then, he would not be the same. He would devote his time to that unknown girl, instead of her. And she would be left all alone as all her friends enjoyed with her partners…

She sighed as she watched Atul ramble about his plants and owner, once again. She just never got tired of him these days… Life was strange in many ways.

* * *

"Ladies and Gentlemen," Armaan called. "Thank you very much for being here tonight. Jaise ki aap saab jaanthe hai, hamara Rahul," he said, pointing to his best friend. "Finally, Muskaan ko propose kiya. I mean how long have they been going out? Lets see," and Armaan held up this hand and started counting on his fingers.

"ARMAAN!" Ridhima chided.

"Ab please aap dono shuru mat ho jao!" Anjali interfered. "Jaise ki Armaan ne kaha, Rahul aur Muskaan finally shaadi kar rahe hai. Aur aaj yeh party cum sangeet unki kushi ke liye hai!"

Everyone in the hall cheered.

"The wedding date," Anjali continued. "is fixed for next Friday at the Grewal farmhouse in panchgani. So without further ado, lets start the evening! Girls on this side and guys on the other."

"Main nahin aa raha," Rahul said, shaking his head. "Main Muskaan ko chod kar kahin nahin aaunga."

"Magar main jaa rahi hoon Rahul," Muskaan said, walking to the girl's side. Everyone laughed as Rahul narrowed his eyes.

"Oye," Armaan called. "Natak chod aur yahan aa jaa!"

The parents smiled and sat down, watching the younger generation start the sangeet.

"Ek minute," Atul said. "Hum antakshari khel rahe hain na?"

"Haan," Muskaan replied. "But a little alteration…"

"Kyun?" Rahul asked.

"Kyunki Rahul," she said. "Ladkoon hamesha haar jaate hain. Aur loosers se khelna bahut boring hai. Issi liye, aap logon par taras khake, humne game thoda change kardi."

"We don't loose everytime," Armaan fired back.

"Yes Armaan," Ridhima said. "You loose everytime!"

"Arre Basket," he said. "Tum mere khilaaf kaise jaa sakthe ho?"

"Jo bhi ho," Anjali said, before Ridhima could retort. "Point is, the rules are changed because like Muskaan said, its no fun playing with loosers."

"HEY!" Yelled all three of the guys at the same time.

"Ek minute ek minute, ek minute," Nikki interfered. "What are the new rules?"

"Well," Muskaan said. "In antakshari, the other team has to start with the letter that the song ends in. This time, you don't have too."

"Matlab?" Atul asked.

"Matlab yeh," Anjali answered. "One team will sing and dance and the other team has to answer to that in a song. Simple."

"And this way," Ridhima added. "it will be easier for you people and we will have fun."

"We would have won even if you didn't change the rules basket," Armaan said with a smile. "Magar phir bhi. Teek hai… joh tum kaho!"

And so the modified Antakshari started with the guys. Armaan stood up and started to sing and dance, staring only at ridhima, challenging her through his eyes.

"Soch Thi Hai Zyada
Kham Woh Samajh Thi Hai
Dil Kuch Kehta Hai
Kuch Aur Hi Karti Hai
Ladki Kyon Na Jaane Kyon Ladko Si Nahin Hoti
Ladki Kyon Na Jaane Kyon Ladko Si Nahin Hoti
."

Outrage, Ridhima stands up and replies.

"Itna Hi Khudh Se Khush Ho To Peeche Kyon Aate Ho
Phool Kabhi To Hazar Thofein Akhir Kyon Laaten Ho.

Jeena Ka Tumko Dang Sikhlati Hai
Tumhe Jaanwar Se Insaan Banaati Hai
Uske Bina Ek Pal Rehna Sakhoge Tum
Usko Pata Hai Yeh Keh Na Sakhoge Tum
Iss Liye Ladkiya Ladko Si Nahin Hoti
Iss Liye Ladkiya Ladko Si Nahin Hoti."

Everyone cheered as Muskaan got up.

"Aaj Ke Ladke I Tell You Kitne Lallu What To Do

Koi Mujhe Poocche How Are You Koi Mujhe Bole How Do You Do

Kabhi Koi Mujhse Na Kahe Oh My Darling I Love You

Oh My Darling I Love You

Oh My Darling I Love You."

Rahul smiled as he watched her dance and throw occasional glares at him.

"Aaj Ki Ladki I Tell You Nakhre Waali Sun Le Tu

Na Mein Poocho How Are You Na Main Bolu How Do You Do

Abhi Yahin Main Kehta Hoon Oh My Darling I Love You

Oh My Darling I Love You

Oh My Darling I Love You."

And as he said the last line, Rahul kissed her on the cheek and hugged her. The watching crowed wooped as the all of the guys.

Abhi for the first spoke up. "Does he ever stop?" he quietly asked Armaan and Atul.

"I know… even I am better than him," Armaan replied, oblivious to the fact that he was talking to his worst enemy right now.

At the same time Anjali stood up and dragged Muskaan away, who matched the colour of her red blouse. And then out of the blue, Atul stood up and started to sing.

"Haule Haule se hawa lagti hai
Haule haule se dawa lagti hai
Haule haule se dua lagti hai
Haaye… Haule Haule chanda badhta hai
Haule Haule Ghonghat uth ta hai
Haule haule se nasha chadhta hai
Haan… Tu sabar to kar mere yaar
Zara saans to le dildaar
Chal fikar nu goli maar
Yaar hai din jindai de chaar
Haule haule ho jayega pyaar chal yaar
Haule haule ho jayega pyaar
Haule haule ho jayega pyaar chal yaar
Haule haule ho jayega pyaar."

Anjali stared at Atul, who was doing the classic haule haule step, as Muskaan giggled ans pushed her forward. She smiled and danced with him, having the time of her life.

The dance floor cleared again and this time, Nikki stood up.

"Waise," she said loudly. "I was under the impression that everyone has to participate."

"Haan," Anjali said.

"Toh phir," she replied, with a smirk. "Dr. Modi ko bhi ek gaana gaana chahiye."

All the guys turned to look at Abhi, who had his eyes only on Nikki. She raised at eyebrow, challenging him. "Maine suna ki Mr. Abhimanyu bahut acchi tarah naach the hai. Hum bhi kuch dekh le?"

As the crowed cheered, Abhi involuntarily stood up. "Is that a challenge Dr. Nikita?" he asked.

"Yes it is!"

"Mujhe challenge aapko bahut baari pad sakthi hai," he warned.

The rest of the girls fired up. "Kyun?" Ridhima said. "Hamari Nikki kuch kaam nahin hai!"

"Toh?" Atul said, standing up. "Hamara Abhi bhi kuch kaam nahin hai. Hain na guys?" he asked, turning to Armaan and Rahul, who stood with annoyed faces. Clearly, they did not like Abhi's participation.

The girls laughed. "You guys don't even support your own team member," Muskaan said. "And you dream of beating us. Yeah right!"

Anjali hi-fived her. "Exactly. Looks like Nikki won… so girls won, again!"

He guys roared a huge "NO!" in reply.

"Then make Dr. Modi sing…" Anjali said calmly.

Not wanting to loose once again, Armaan said "fine. Dr. Modi will sing!"

"Haan," Rahul joined. "He will sing and your girls are going to go down!"

As everyone walked back to take a seat, Abhi took hold of Nikki's hand. He gently place one hand on her waist and started dancing, making sure there was a lot of space in between them… just for the benefit of the watching audience. The song then started and Abhi started to move to the beats, keeping his distance…

"Pehli nazar mein
Kaise jaado kar diya
Tera ban baita hai
Mera jiya
Jaane kya hoga
Kya hoga kya pata
Is pal ko milke
Aa jee le zara


Both of them went down the memory lane, as the song brought on many scenes of their past.

***FLASHBACK ***

"Go Abhi!" Mehul smirked.

"Come on yaar!" Sonia added. "It's just a dare."

"To a junior?!" Abhi exclaimed. "What kind of junior looks fit to be my girlfriend?"

"Ek hafta hi to hai na Abhi!" Sonia continued. "Aur waise bhi, it shouldn't be too hard."

"Aap log pagal ho gaye hai! Main ek junior se kyun date karu? Aur mere liye kyun hard hoga? Its not hard for me. Mujhe to koi bhi ladki mil sakto hai. Lekin phir bhi. Juniors are soo….immature."

"Abhi tum ja rahe ho ya…"

"ja raha ho," Abhi said getting up and walking towards the cafeteria where most juniors had their lunch.

He opened the door and saw many faces turn towards him. Most of which were obviously girls. He smiled and said hi to some of them as their faces flushed with redness.

"Kisse puchu?" he asked himself. "Come on Abhi. Jaldi karo! You look like an idiot standing here like this."

Abhi looked all around the cafeteria and saw a table filled with beautiful girls. But none of them looked anywhere nearly as attractive as he wanted his girlfriend to be. Even if this was a joke, he wanted his reputation to stay good. Abhi looked away from the table of girls starring back at him and looked at a table near the window and saw a girl with long wavy hair sitting and chatting with her friends. She was almost – hot.

There she was – surrounded by a couple of guys and some girls.

"Okay okay!" she said. "Tum jeet gaye!"

She covered her mouth and laughed out loud. Everything seemed to be going in slow motion for Abhi.

Abhi shaked his head and muttered, "Yeh kya ho raha hai mujhe? Jaldi karo Abhi!"

"Abhi!" Sonia said entering the caf. "Kitni der karoge tum?"

"Yea Abhi," Mehul added. "Come on yaar…fast!"

I have to talk to that girl! Abhi thought. Aur yeh bahut aacha chance hai. Dare ke bahane isse baat to kar sakonga. Lekin – woh mujhe reject kar dengi to? Nahin Abhi – woh, ek junoir, tumhe reject kar de? Impossible. Aur kar bhi de to kya hua? Why the heck would you even care?

Without another thought Abhi started making his way towards her.

"Nikki!" Sapna exclaimed! "Abhimanyu Modi yahan aa raha hai!"

"Kyun?" Nikki asked without caring. "Usse kya chahiye?"

Sapna lightly hit Nikki's arm. "Come on Nikki! He is the HOTTEST guy in our college!"

"Lekin woh Nikki ke liye bilkul thik nahin hai," a boy beside Nikki added as the other boys agreed.

Nikki laughed. "Come on guys. Its not like Abhimanyu is going to propose to me or ask me out. Besides main usme interested nahin ho."

"Aacha…" Sapna said sighing. "Par Nikki please, agar usne tumhe date ke liye poocha to haan kar dena! meri khatir!"

Nikki laughed as Abhi got closer.

"Umm…can I talk to you for a second?"Abhi asked Nikki.

"Kyun?" Nikki asked confused. Why would he want to talk to me? I'm not even one of those stupid girls that ran after him, no offense to Sapna. But seriously, isse kya chaiye?

Abhi stammered on what he would answer than sighed and said, "Please, important hai."

Sapna's eyes widened as she leaned to Nikki. "Nikki please. Please Nikita dear. Meri khatir. If he asks you out say yes! Just get to know him! Then you can dump him…I wont say no. Just say yes this time! I want to get to know him better! Come on Nikki!"

Abhi heard Sapna whispering and smiled. Oh the charm I work on ladies.

"Thik hai. Thik hai." Nikki gave in. "Chalo…"

Abhi held the door open for Nikki as the whole cafeteria watched. Abhimayu Modi…talking to a…juniour? Something was wrong.

As Nikki and Abhi went outside the cafeteria, everyone got up and covered all the doors trying to hear what exactly Abhi had to ask Nikki.

Abhi looked at Nikki then looked away. How was he supposed to ask her out on a date? He didn't want to embarrass himself. What if she rejected him? Even if it was only for a dare, how would he ever be able to face her again.

"Umm…woh…mein soch raha tha…" Abhi started.

Nikki sighed. "Please jaldi karo…my class starts in 10 minutes."

Abhi sighed and spit it out. "Will you go out for dinner with me?"

The few people on the other side of the door gasped as Nikki's face turned bright red.

"Excuse me?" Nikki asked. "Why do you want to go out with me?"

"Please," Abhi asked trying not to sound desperate. Obviously this girl wasn't interested in him. But it was the matter of his reputation!

"Lekin kyun?" Nikki asked. "I barely know you!"

"I know. Aur issi liye mein chahta hoon ke hum pehle dost bane. We can start of as friends right? Then if we can't become good friends, we can go our own ways."

Nikki was surprised. Abhimanyu Modi…THE Abhimanyu Modi had asked her out. Wow…she was definitely not interested in him. But he did sound kind of desperate. He deserved one chance. Maybe he wasn't as bad as he sounded. And after all..she had kind of agreed to date him for Sapna's sake. This wouldn't be really like a date. They would just be friends.

"Thik hai…"Nikki answered slowly.

"Alright," Abhi continued getting annoyed. "Agar tum meri offer reject – wait – did you just say 'thik hai'?"

"Yea," Nikki replied smiling.

"Cool," Abhi said smiling. "I'll pick you up at 7."

"Um…Abhimanyu," Nikki called as he turned to go.

Abhi turned and smiled. "Please, just Abhi."

"Okay…Abhi," Nikki smiled. "Hum ja kahan rahe hai? I mean…should I dress formally or no?"

Abhi was feeling the same uneasiness as Nikki. "Umm...tumhe kahan jaana hai?"

"I don't mind either place. So, tum decide karo."

"Thik hai…how about formal?"

"Okay…see you at…7?"

"Haan…7."

Abhi walked off getting his pride again. Yes! Another one falls in the trap. Abhimanyu cannot get rejected baby!

* * *

Nikki walked to her closet slowly followed by Sapna.

"Oh my God, Nikki!" Sapna exclaimed. "He asked you out! And that too a formal dinner!"

"So…?" Nikki asked calmly.

"Nikki!" Sapna panicked after seeing the clock. "Nikki, it's 6:30! He is going to be here in 30 minutes! How are you going to get ready!?"

Nikki sighed. "Relax Sapna. Its only Abhimanyu Modi! Not Karan Singh Grover!"

"Well Abhimanyu Modi is the closest person to Karan Singh Grover you'll ever meet!" Sapna retorted back.

"Whatever," Nikki said picking a plain blue dress.

"Nikki are you crazy?" Sapna said putting the blue dress back in the closet. "You are going on a date with Abhimanyu Modi!!!! You have to wear something more…stylish."

Nikki sighed and sat on the bed as Sapna went through Nikki's clothes picking out a perfect dress for the date.

"How is this dress?" Sapna asked holding up a white, knee length dress. (http://content.nordstrom.com/ImageGallery/store/product/Gigantic/18/_5391778.jpg)

"Cool," Nikki said smiling. "I've been waiting for a chance to wear it. Though, I was hoping to wear it at a better occasion."

Sapna made a face as Nikki smiled grabbing the dress,

She came out of the bathroom with her hair straightened and pulled out a pair of white high heels.

Knock knock.

Sapna's eyes widened. "Oh no!"

Sapna opened the door slowly and motioned for Nikki to go inside the bathroom to apply some make up on her.

Abhi walked in the room looking as dashing as ever. He was wearing a black suit and stood in an amazing dashing way. Fixing his tie with one hand, as his other hand was in his pocket, he looked just as nervous as Nikki was feeling.

"Umm….Nikita ready hai?" he asked Sapna, who stood with her mouth open.

'Uh…haan…I mean nahi," Sapna replied.

"Nahin…"Nikki said walking in. "Mein bilkul ready hoon."

Sapna gave Nikki a look and walked towards her. "Nikki, you don't even have a bit of makeup on!"

"So..?" she whispered back.

"Chale," she said walking past Sapna.

"Woah," Abhi managed to say as he saw Nikki. She was the most beautiful girl he had seen in his life.

What the heck am I thinking? Abhi thought. I am only dating her because of a dare. I mean, she isn't even interested in me!

"Umm…Abhi?" she called waving her hand in front of his face.

"Uhh…Nikita, you look really nice," he said smiling.

"Thanks," she replied smiling. "And I go by Nikki."

"Okay Nikki," Abhi said showing Nikki the way to the car.

Abhi acted like the perfect gentlemen for the night. Partly because he knew that his friends were going to follow him wanting to see if he actually managed to do his dare and partly because he liked Nikki. She was different than other girls.

As Abhi pulled up the car on the driveway of the girls' hostel, Nikki laughed and thanked Abhi for the wonderful night.

As she walked in the foyer, she saw that most girls were sitting there waiting for her.

"Nikki!" Sapna exclaimed. "How was it!? Where did he take you? Tell us everything! All the details!"

Nikki laughed and blushed slightly. She had had an amazing time that evening. Abhi was actually a really nice person.

"Relax Sapna!" she exclaimed. "I had a really good time tonight. He took me to the Chinese restaurant beside that mall! And we just talked and then went for a walk along the beach."

"A walk? Along the beach?" Sapna asked with widened eyes. "And you actually had a good time?"

"Yes Sapna!" Nikki said skipping to the elevator.

"Is she okay?" a girl asked. "I thought she wasn't interested in Abhimanyu. Now she's acting like she's in love."

"I heard that!" Nikki retorted. "And no! I am not in love! I just think he is pretty nice and a really good friend."

The next fews days Nikki and Abhi did most things together. Abhi picked Nikki up for college even though the college was a block away from the hostel. They had both lunch and dinner together either alone or with friends and usually spent a lot of their spare time together. Abhi even helped Nikki with her assignments.

They had actually gotten close to each other and Sonia had began to notice that.

"Abhi," she called as he was leaving class.

"Hey Sonia!" he exclaimed. "What's up?"

"Where are you going?"

"To find Nikki. Why? Did you need anything?"

"Umm…Abhi. Can I talk to you for a while?"

"Sure."

"Kya baat hai Sonia?" Abhi asked once they were alone.

"Abhi…I think Nikki and you are getting too close. I mean seriously what will happen when she finds out about this dare?"

Abhi spent the day thinking about to tell Nikki. He had actually learned to like her and was starting to think of her as his actual girlfriend. But as far as he knew, she only thought of him as a friend.

Abhi called Nikki the next day at 2 in the morning.

"Abhi?" Nikki asked. "Kya hua? Itni raat ko phone kiya?"

Abhi glaced at the clock and bit his lip. Yikes, he didn't know he had spend that long thinking that he hadn't even realized it was two!

"Oops!" he exclaimed. "Sorry..woh maine time nahi check kiya tha. Koi baat nahi, kal baat karenge."

"No Abhi. Its okay. Waise bhi mujhe neend nahi aa rahi thi."

"Nikki…lets go get coffee."

"Um…Abhi. Breaking news: it's two in the morning! What coffee shop will be open at this time?"

"The one on the corner of this street. Aa rahi ho yak al mile?"

"Nahi nahi…aa rahi hoon main."

"Okay. Foyer mein wait karo…mein panch minute mein pooch raha hoon."

Nikki sighed and went to the foyer still in her pajamas and waited for Abhi to come.

She was clearly falling in love with him. But something was wrong. From both sides. Abhi clearly hadn't asked Nikki out because he liked her. There was a reason behind that. Oh God, she thought. Yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai? Mein Abhi ke bare mein itna kyun sochti hoon? Uski mile huve sirf 6 din hue hai. Mein usse aachi tarah janti bhi nahin. Nahin…I think I know him pretty well, now. Lekin woh…woh mujhe sirf ek dost samaj ta hai. Argh! Life is soo confusing God! Help me!

Just then Abhi pulled up and Nikki went outside telling the clerk to say, if anybody asks, she went to get some coffee.

The two had a seat in the coffee shop and they noticed that they were the only ones.

"Abhi-"

"Nikki-"

Both laughed as the waiter took their order.

"Umm…you start," Nikki said nervously.

"Nikki," Abhi slowly started. "I called to tell you…"

Abhi took a deep breath and cleared his throat – something that he did when he was terribly nervous.

"Nikki – the only reason I asked you out was because I was dared to ask a junior out and date them for a week."

Nikki sighed. She knew her dream was too good to come true.

"Lekin -" Abhi continued. "Ever since I saw you that day, I felt something between us. I had to get to know you better. And that's the reason I did the dare."

Nikki looked up at Abhi feeling guilty. "Koi baat nahi Abhi. Waise, mujhe bhi tumhe yeh kehna hai…ke…woh din, maine sirf Sapna ki wajah se haan kaha tha."

"Lekin," she continued quickly before he could jump to conclusions. "I'm glad I said yes now. Main tumhe such mein ek bahut aacha dost manti hoon."

Both Nikki and Abhi felt relaxed now that they had gotten that off their chest. But how were they supposed to confess their love? They had clearly just said to each other that they were happy to be friends and happy that the misunderstanding was now over.

(I think we'll continue the rest in other flashbacks.)

***FLASHBACK ENDS***

"…Mein hoon yahan
Tu hai yahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Aa bhi ja
O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa

O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa…"

Abhi stopped short, conscious of the people around him… especially his wife's two bodyguards. He quickly let go of her, and waited for everyone's response. The room erupted in cheers.

As Nikki backed away to the girls, Armaan, Rahul and Atul caught up.

"Wow," Atul said. "Aap toh mujhse bhi bahut acha gaathe hain…"

Armaan eyed him suspiciously. "Aapne Nikki ke saath kyun dance kiya?"

Abhi smiled, for he had his answer ready. "Because there is no one else left. You would get mad if I danced with Dr. Ridhima, Rahul would get mad if I danced with Dr. Muskaan and Atul will get mad if I danced with Dr. Anjali."

"Then who told you dance in the first place," Rahul asked.

"You wanted to win right?" Abhi said, trying to stay confident. "So I did something new."

"Poor Nikki," Armaan said. "Bechari, kitna bura feel kar rahi hogi!"

Abhi smirked. "She actually is jumping around in joy," he muttered to himself.

"Kuch kaha?" Rahul asked. Abhi shook his head. "Well, agli baar maat karna."

"Haan," Armaan said. "Nikki ke paas bhi gaye na, toh…"

Abhi nodded and turned away. They were stopping him from going to him own wife?

"What say girls," he asked. "Wasn't that good?"

The crowd answered in a loud call, but the girls didn't seem convinced.

"Kya?" Abhi asked, noticing their expressions.

"Well," Muskaan said slowly. "You didn't really sing… you just did a slow dance. Anyone can do that!"

"Aise kaise keh sakthi ho Muskaan," Rahul interfered. "Dr. Modi gave such a good performance."

"But he didn't sing," Ridhima stated.

"Basket this is not fair," Armaan said. "Boys won!"

"No!"

"Yes!"

"No!"

"Okay wait wait wait," Abhi interfered, breaking up the call and answer between Armaan and Ridhima. "Lets do this again. And if you girls are impressed with that, then we won. Okay?"

"Teek hai fine," they answered.

And so the guys retreated to their side of the room and four doctors discussed between themselves as the four girls waited anxiously.

The lights suddenly dimmed as a song started. The spot light fell on Abhi, Armaan, Rahul and Atul who were slowly walking forward, singing

"You Are My love, My Love, Jaanejaan You Are My Lover

You Are My love, My Love, Jaanejaan You Are My Lover."

Armaan circled around Ridhima, saying

"Dekha Maine Dekha Jab Se Tujhko Dekha

Kuch Bhi Na Socha Na Samjha Dil De Diya Re."

Rahul twirled Muskaan, singing,

"Ho Gaya Re Ho Gaya Haan Iss Dil Ka Kaam Re

Ho Gaya Re Ho Gaya Ho Dil Tere Naam Re."

Everyone,

"You Are My Love, My Love, Jaanejaan You Are My Lover

Maahi Ve, O Mere Maahi Ve."

Muskaan and Ridhima answer, shaking their hips,

"Sona Sona Mera Maahi Sona Sona."

Just then Atul walked over to Anjali and danced, in his usual style.

"Tauba Meri Tauba Tera Nakhra Kamaal Hai."

Anjali,

"Taarif Karne Mein To Bada Bemishaal Hai."

Abhi,

"Soone Soone Mukhde Pe Zulfon Ka Jaal Hai."

Nikki,

"Mera Naseeb Hai Tu Yeh Mera Khayaal Hai."

All guys to their respective partners,

"Ho Gaya Re Ho Gaya Mujhko Bhi Pyaar Re

Ho Gaya Re Ho Gaya Haan Deewaana Yaar.

You Are My Love, My Love, Jaanejaan You Are My Lover."

Armaan,

"Bada Hi Puraana Love Ka Takiyakalaam Hai."

Ridhima,

"Main Hi Teri Tu Hai Mera Charcha-E-Aam Hai."

Rahul,

"Chal Hat Jane Bhi De Mujhse Bada Kaam Hai."

Muskaan,

"Tu Hi Subah Hai Meri Tu Hi Meri Shaam Hai."

Everyone,

"Ho Gaya Re Ho Gaya Mujhko Bhi Pyaar Re

Ho Gaya Re Ho Gaya Haan Deewaana Yaar.

You Are My Love, My Love, Jaanejaan You Are My Lover. "

Rahul,

"Dekha Mene Dekha Jab Se Tujhko Dekha."

Abhi,

"Kuch Bhi Na Socha Na Samjha Dil De Diya Re."

Armaan,

"Ho Gaya Re Ho Gaya Re Is Dil Ka Kaam Re."

Atul

"Ho Gaya Re Ho Gaya Re Dil Tere Naam Re."

All the guys go on their knees and sing,

"You Are My Love, My Love, Jaanejaan You Are My Lover

You Are My Love, My Love, Jaanejaan You Are My Lover."

The hall erupted in cheers and Ridhima buried her chest in Armaan's chest, Rahul kissed Muskaan on the forehead and Anjali hugged Atul, who was pleasantly surprised. Nikki too smiled and hugged Abhi (which was unnoticed by Armaan and Rahul who were too busy with their personal affairs), who lightly kissed her on the lips…

okay guys! tht was part 11! pretty long!! me and archi worked hard on it (somewhat) and soo sorry for the delay...btw...if youu guys can add me to your buddy list i would appreciate it as it would be much easier to send PMs...please and thank youu. do leave comments/ suggestions.

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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow!!!
That seriously was a long part and and Amazing one!!!!!
Loved it and you song collection is great!!!
loved all the song
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Posted: 16 years ago
That was long and perfect .. super .. fantabulous .. Awesome and my dream part I dream of writing like you
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Posted: 16 years ago
wonderful part!!
will be waiting for your next update!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Great part
Love it
Can't wait till everyone finds out about AN especially armaan and rahul
Thanks for the pm
Cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG! That was just excellent!! I have no words..I didnt want it to get over at all! So beautifully presented. All the songs choice were WOW. Esp. RM's..right for the situation. The AN flash-back was superbbb..so real..and new!! Amazing!! Hayye..you sent me off to dreamland for a while!! 😍 Loved how you potrayed Anjali's feelings..so sweet!! The last song.."you are my love" was brilliantly co-ordinated for every character. Hatss Off!! 👏

PS:- forgot to add!! Loved how Armaan and Rahul were acting like her body-guards. 😆 😆
Edited by -Mansi- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part!!!! 👏 the flash back was THE best.yaaa u were ryt it WAS a lonnnnnnnnnnnnng part.thanx for that .it was ironic that abhi was being stopped to meet his wife.plss continue soooooooooooooooooooon this time.ur ff is addictive.thnx for yhe PM by the way.

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