Nikbhi FF : Hum Tum - Last Part & Epilogue Pg. 85 - Page 13

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey thanks everyone for the comments.
next part coming up soon. really hope you guys like it. me and archi spent forever discussing the scene! keep waiting and commenting. your support keeps us writing! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey..
sorry for the late comment!!
the part was fab!!
totally loved it!!
u guys are awesome writers!!!
plz cont soon and thanx fr the PM!! =]
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Posted: 16 years ago
yes....i HAVE to mention.,...n YES i HAVE to degrade :p
anyways, update soon....you know i'm eagerly waiting for the next part...
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ii lovee youu too veekshh šŸ˜”šŸ˜† and yeaa...the next part is coming up in about an hour..maybe even earlier! 😊
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Hey guys!...please update soon!!...dying to know what happens next! :D
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Part 7

"Muskaan," Rahul begged. "Chalo bahar chalte hai."

"Maine kaha na," she replied, angry. "Mujhe nahin aana."

It was evening and Rahul and Muskaan were in the locker room, arguing. Nikki managed to organize everything and now it was only the matter of getting everyone there.

"Aur kitni baar maafi mangoon?" he asked. "Please, maan jaao na?"

Muskaan turned her face away from him. Rahul sighed and sat down infront of her. He held her hand and said, "Dekh Muskaan, I am really sorry. Aisa kabhi nahin hoga. Aab please, maanjao aur dinner pe chalte hain."

She smiled and turned to him. He knew how to cconvince her. "Teek hai. Magar raste mein-"

"Ice cream lena hai," he finished, with a smile. "Pata hai."

"Pata hai Rahul," she said. "Tumhare saath rehke waqt ka pata hi nahin chalta."

"Haan," he said. "Magar aab hum late ho rahe hai. Toh jaldi se tayar ho jao." Saying that he handed her a packet.

"Yeh kya hai?" she asked, curiously.

"Aaj yeh pehen kar aa jana. Teek hai?" She nodded. "Aur dus minute mein terrace pe aa jana."

"Terrace?"

"Jaane se pehle, tujhe kuch dikhana hai."

* * *

"Arre, tum log yahan ho?" Armaan said, walking into the cafeteria. Everything was set. Rahul was on the terrace, waiting for Muskaan and Armaan came to tell everyone the news.

"Kyun?" Anjali asked.

"Ek surprise hai," he answered.

"Kaun si surprise?" Atul asked.

"Khud akar dekh lo champ!"

They stood up to leave. "Ridhima," Armaan called. "Tum bhi aao na?"

"Mujhe nahin aana," she said in a hard tone.

Armaan sighed. "Basket, gussa chodo na!"

"Tum logon ka phir se jagada ho gaya?" Atul asked, disbelieveingly.

"Chodo Atul," Anjali said. "Yeh dono ka jagada ab mamuli baat hogayi hai. Chalo, hum chalte!"

"Please Basket," Armaan begged. "Ek baar aa jao aur phir tumhe pata chale jayega main roses kyun mangaya!"

Ridhima rolled her eyes, but stood up all the same. The four of them reached the terrace to find Nikki hiding behind the door. They all assembled behind her and gasped.

In front of them stood a spectaular view, admist which stood Rahul dressed in a black tux, waiting nervously. Rose petals covered the floor, while big bouquets were placed all round the terrace. Floating candles were added to the scene, making the whole place glow serenly in the dark night. A strange, sweet smell was coming from the flowers, adding a nice touch to the site.

"Oh my god," Anjali said, understanding the whole set up. "Rahul is going to propose to Muskaan?"

* * *

Abhi walked around Sanjeevani, looking for his dear wife.

"Sister," he asked, stopping one of the nurses. "Dr. Nikkita ko dekha hai apne?"

"Ji," the nurse replied. "Woh saabi interns ke saath upar terrace pe hai."

"Terrace pe kyun?"

"Pata nahin sir. Woh subhe se waahi hai. Kisi ko bhi wahan jaane se mane kar rahi thi."

"Thanks."

Wondering what his wife may be upto, he went up to the terrace to find everyone crowded around the door, peeking outside. As he walked forward, he noticed what was going on.

Standing in middle of a beautifully decorated setting, was Rahul dressed in a tux and Muskaan in a red knee-length dress.

"They look so cute together," he heard Anjali say to Atul, who were sitting together on the floor.

"Bilkul humari tarah, hain na Anjali?" Atul replied, in his style.

"Shut-up Atul!"

Kneeling behind them was Armaan and Ridhima.

"Taiyar ho jao Basket," he whispered to her. "Agli number hamari hai." Ridhima smiled, embarrassed at his comment.

And standing behind them, was Nikki. Abhi went and stood beside her.

"Yeh kya ho raha hai?" he asked, quietly in her ear.

Nikki glanced at him, before pointing to the couple in front of them. Abhi smiled as the scene before him took him down the memory lane to the most important moment of his life…

"Yaad hai," he said to her. "Jab yeh humare saath hua?"

She nodded as that night flashed infront of her eyes…

It was Friday night and Nikki's mom was urging her to hurry up and get ready.

"Uff-oh mama," Nikki said, as she straightened her hair. "Aap itna excited kyun ho rahe ho? This is not the first time me and Abhi are going on a date!"

She was in her final year of Medical college, while Abhi graduated a year ago. Even though he began to work, their relationship as boyfriend girlfriend never ended.

They started to date each other two years ago, when Abhi was dared by a few friends. However, that first meeting took a totally different turn, as they realized that both of them liked the company of the other. Ever since then, they have been inseperable. Many people expected them to either break up or end up married. However, neither happened. Up until that point, anyway.

Nikki's mom walked in with a package. "Yeh Abhi ne diya hai," she said, before leaving with a smug look on her face.

Curiously she opened the package to find a white sari with silver sequins. She was both surprised and touched by this action. Why did he give me a sari? She thought wildly as she wrapped the material around her.

As she walked downstairs, she noticed Abhi in a white suit, waiting nervously for her. Whats wrong with him? She thought to herself as he led her to a white limosine.

"You hired a limo for a date?" She asked incredously as he opened the door for her.

He didn't reply and quietly sat beside her. The limo stopped infront of a hotel she never been to before.

"Abhi, where are we?" she asked, getting out. "And what is happening? Why did you give me a sari? Why are you so quiet and serious and why on earth are you wearing a suit?"

"Shhhh," he said, calming her down. "Relax. Now before we go inside, please, please let me do everything properly. Behave yourself and don't screw up anything."

"Screw up what?" she asked.

A smile spread across his face. "You will see."

He led her inside and she was astonished to see the sight infront of her.

The whole room was decorated in silver drapes and white bouqets. In the center was a round table, beautifully decorated, with two seats. On one side, there was small band playing soft music while on the other, there was small platform for dancing. The lights were dimmed, and the hall was illuminated by floating candles in antique pieces set all around the room. White mist was covering the floor, giving the feel that one was standing on a cloud. And to finish it off lavender scent, Nikki's favourite, was added to the room.

Nikki was speechless as Abhi led her to the small table. She felt strange walking through the white mist and was oddly happy at the arrangements.

"How much time did you spend on all this?" she asked, when she found her voice again.

He ignored her and picked up the menu. "What do you want to order?"

She stared at him, demanding for an answer.

"You promised," he reminded her.

She sighed and nodded. He held out his hand and both of them stood up and started to dance.

Abhi was quiet while Nikki looked around, amazed at the decorations.

"Abhi," she said. He looked at her. "Yeh saab tumne mere liye kiya, hain na?"

"Haan…"

"Per kyun?" she asked. They were boyfriend and girlfriend. Nothing more, nothing less. "Why did you put so much into a relationship that is not going to last? Ek na ek din toh hum alag ho jayenge na?" she added, bitterly. She didn't want to leave him.

"Issi liye maine yeh saab kiya Nikki," he said, clearing his throat. Something he did when he was nervous and something that didn't go unnoticed by her. This brought on a new round of questions in her mind as she waited for him explain.

"I don't want us to break up."

There was a moment of silence, in which she anxiously waited for him to continue.

"I have been thinking about our relationship for the past few days Nikki and I don't know why, but it pains me to think that we will separate one day and go our own ways. It hurts me to think that I would have live without talking or meeting you. And honestly, that's not something I don't think I can do anymore."

They continued to stare at each other.

"Meri har din tumhare saath shuru hota hai aur sirf tumhare saath khatam hota hai. Din mein dus baar tumhe phone kartha hoon aur atleast teen baar milta hoon. Hamesha sirf tumhari khayalon mein rehtha hoon aur jahan bhi dekhoon toh tum nazar ati ho."

Nikki stood in silence.

"What I want to say is," he said, digging into his coat pocket. "I have fallen in love with you Nikki. Aab, tumhare bina ek pal bhi guzarna bahut mushkil ho gaya hai. Issi liye, I want to make you mine forever."

He went on one knee and held up a sparkling diamond ring.

"Will you be with me for the rest of my life?"

Nikki closed her eyes as Abhi waited for his fate. As she thought about everything they have been through, she realized that she loved him too… Even she couldn't imagine a moment in which he was not there…

She opened her eyes.

"Haan…"

The nervousness vanished in a second and Abhi's face split into a smile. He slipped the ring on her finger and hugged her in joy.

"I promise to love you more than anyone in this world," he whispered into her ear.

She smiled. He let go of her and stared passionately in her eyes, before bending down and pressing his lips to hers…

A tear slipped from Nikki's eyes as she came back to the present. Abhi wiped it away with the tip of thumb. He then entwined his fingers with hers.

"Maine kaha na," he said quietly. "Main tumhe saab se zayad pyar karoonga."

She nodded her head. They both looked infront to see Rahul holding Muskaan's hand.

"Muskaan," he said. "Jab tum mujhse behaas karthi ho na, toh aisa lagtha hai jaise tum mujhe saab se zayad jaanthi ho. Jab tum mujhse se naraz hoti ho na, toh aisa lagtha hai jaise tum meri parva karthi ho. Jab tum mujhse se rooti hoti ho na, toh aisa lagtha hai jaise tum mujhe bahut pyar karthi ho."

He went on his knee and said, "Kya tum zindagi baar mujhse laadogi Muskaan?"

Everyone laughed quietly as Muskaan looked on in astonishment.

"Haan Rahul," she said, quietly, lowering her eyes. "Main tumhare liye kuch bhi kar sakthi hoon."

Rahul took out the ring and put it on her finger.

Armaan, Ridhima, Atul and Anjali stood up and clapped in joy.

Muskaan looked up in surprise and blushed. As everyone teased the couple, Abhi quietly said inher ear, "Hmm… toh yeh saab aap ne copy ki hai?"

Nikki shyly glanced at him before saying, "Not entirely. You did all white for me and I did all red for them. But joh bhi ho, what you did for me was the best. No one can ever beat it."

"Accha...," he said, smiling.

"Haan," she said, matter-of-factly. "Infact, to some point I didn't want to make Rahul's proposing as good as yours."

"Kyun?" he asked, scrunching his eyebrows. "Rahul is your best friend right?"

"Haan," she said nodding. "But I want ours to be special. And seriously, I never heard anyone proposing like you. It happens only in fantasies."

"Aab kya kare," he said. "Jab ladki itni pyari ho, toh kuch toh karna hi padega na?"

"Mujhe line maare ho?" she teased.

"No," he said. "Kyunki mujhe uski zaroorat nahin hai."

"Ooooh," she replied, sarcastically. "Mr. Modi toh kuch karne se pehle hi, sabse better hain na?"

"Woh toh main hoon," he said, as if stating something obvious. "But what I meant was that I am already married to you, so I don't need to impress you!"

"Kitni baar samjaoon?" she sighed. "Main tumhari patni thi. Aab laghta hai jaise tumhe phir se shuru se shuru karna hoga."

"No problem," he said. "Woh bhi karlenge."

Suddenly, Anjali called their attention. "Nikki," she said, not noticing Abhi in the dark. "What are you doing there? Idar aao na?"

Nikki nodded and quickly let go of Abhi's hand. She wished him goodnight before walking out into the night, to congratulate her best friend.

Abhi shook his head at himself. "Aaj bhi ziddi hai aur aaj bhi usi zid par, main fida hoon. But no problem. There is nothing about Nikki that Abhi can't handle." And with that he walked away.

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey guyz, hope you liked the part. Here are the dresses imagined. lolz

Nikki's white sari...
Muskaan's dress



Nikki's engagment ring.
Edited by -Archi- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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that was soooooo cute!!...omg both the proposals were AMAZING!!!..They were sooo romantic...amazing job guys!!...loved th update!! :D
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Posted: 16 years ago
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loved it archii! šŸ‘ ii lovedd the ending...abhi's lines 😳 you surprise me everytime baby! 😊
noww i cant wait to write the next part! hopefully i'll be able to write it soon with all the homework we have.
Edited by Rhea256 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey,
that was an amazin part.
it was so cute and adorable.
totally luved both the confessions.
hope now ridzy is not angry with poor ammy. lol.
pls. update the next part soon and do pm.
cheers,
sakshi

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