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Posted: 16 years ago

#851

Originally posted by: vallanki
I think Muskan will sqave kripa. Actually kripa is capable of saving herself from Prithvi. Now she has her love with him to face his cheated husband. She doesn't have to fear of Prithvi. She is worried only for Angad's safe so far. Now she can go back as Prithvi already know about her whereabouts. Gayatri is good character to help kripa. Simone..well sketched her to teach prithvi a good lesson. lizards, bugs...hmm I can imagine how Indian women's hostels look like!!! AK romantic moments are soothening!! keep giving more.

thanks vallanki. Yes, kripa is very capable of facing her husband and yes she will! That lizard part is very real because it happened to me in my hostel😆 except that i still don't have the courage to shoo them away😆

[quote=vamita]Wonderful Update Bheegi......

Loved Angad and Kripa's conversation.....Angad seems as a real majnu running for rescuing Kripa.....

I don't think Kripa has to fear Prithvi........She should be able to speak.....Prithvi can't do any thing.....He can only bark...She should reply him back and show him, she is not his weak wife any more, but a strong self dependent girl......It would be a good slap on his face........

Sorry for not replying to the previous update....Was busy during long weekend.....But the part was mindblowing too....Loved them to see together after so many parts.....I am glad to see Kripa move out....She should be strong herself, before trying to put it all behind.....Leaning on some one else, everytime would not give her self confidence and would give prithvi one more reason, to point on her character as well as during divorce.....I am glad Muskan is with her too.......And I love Gayatri for what she is doing for her daughter in law......

Continue soon....Will be waiting for hero Angad to save Kripa from the cluthches of villan Prithvi..........😆[/quote]

thanks Mitu! Yes, ur right, Kripa has nothing to fear except fear for angad's safety because prithvi is capabale of doing anything😡 I know even my weekend was super busy. Our superhero is on his way....koi fikr ki baat nahin hai😆

[quote=simi]wohooo... ur on a roll 😃

eww lizards 🤢🤢 but it was a very smart way u represented kripa's life. she has no one to help her anymore and has started to fight her fears herself!

i loved AK conversations too.. bechara angad can barely even see her anymore 😔

pole dancing? AHAHAH.... oh man..

hmm i wonder why he told her to keep her dupatta on the window so he could know where her window is 😉😉 go angad! show ur ape-giri 🤣

simone ka kuch nahi ho sakta.... she wants to leave prithvi cuz he's not the boss anymore... tsk tsk... cant believe there are girls like that 🤢

I liked what gayatri said about everyone actually coming back together in the sharma's house since they have been exposed to so much truth not only in prithvi's life, but also their own lives!

Prithvi attacked Angad? 😲 that was quick!! good think kripa is gone.. he's going to her hostel now 😔 but im not scared for her because she will know how to fight prithvi back i have full faith in her, and even more cuz she's got angad and muskaan's back 😃

this is getting too interesting now cont soon 😃[/quote]

thanks simi! Yes, once the story gets going in my mind, i have to regurgitate it asap😆 yes, the dupatta is there for a reason...apna superhero is on his way😆😆 UR right, kripa has nothing to fear from prithvi but yes she will be afraid for angad's safety...let's see what she is capable of doing😉 will try to update on sunday😃

Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago

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bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#852

Originally posted by: iamsmart
liked the conversation between Kripa and gayatri....she's a very understanding mother-in law...i was a bit surprised that gayatri already knew about angad's feelings..but gud i guess. even prithvi can't do anything to kripa if she'll stand up for herself. gr8 part.

Sana

thanks sana....gayatri had just guessed because she had seen his interaction with kripa many times. he even sang songs probably directed towards kripa😉 like 'dil gira dafatan' in one of the older parts😃

[quote=iqbalnehaxo]Di ! ,
awesome part !! damn1 , angad and kripa are just too frekiin cuuuuuuuuuuute ! <3 i can read about them all day :P , hmm , kripas jeju & hher so called legal husband are really getting on my nerves now like leave her alone , I dont even know why he went to Angad's place .. your never going to get her ! Gayatri is honestly a rlly good mother-in-law . Continue soon di ,
- madiha

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thanks madiha. Yeah, we all still love this jodi don't we😃 Yeah, prithvi and shailendra are the main thorns in their love story but don't worry, that's about to change😃

[quote=kruti.luv.edward]

awesome part bheegi!

Naughty Angad is back!! lol..finally in character....

i officially hate shailendra.........he disgusts me more than prithvi.....i hope simone cheats on prithvi so he knows what it feels like to be treated that way. I'm glad that Muskaan and Kripa have met........I hope kripa answers the call!

Gayatri is such a great woman! I'm surprised........while reading the first couple of chapters, I had thought that gayatri would be a toughie while suryaban would have the soft corner for kripa....guess its the other way around..lol...

by the way.....the comments about pole dancing had me laughing so hard, I had tears of laughter in my eyes..hehe....

continue soon

thanks for the PM

xo Kruti[/quote]

thanks kruti! yes, naughty lover angad is here to stay now😆 yes, both prithvi and shailendra are disgusting but let's see how everyone opposes them😊 Yes, gayatri is a tough cookie but once she trusts someone, she will support them forever. All she needs his honesty which her son and husband never gave her😕 expect more naughty comments from angad as the story progresses😊

thanks Rabia and arohaangel😊

[quote=namelesssr]Methinks Angad is going to try to get the news of Prithvi going to look for her across to her by climbing up to her room... wasn't that a stroke of luck about him asking her to tie her dupatta to the window? I would've enjoyed reading about the climb in any other circumstance but this 😔

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thanks sup!
that dupatta was def placed their for a reason....our superhero needs a landmark before he can climb😉

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Sheetal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#853

great prt.
ab kya hoga. pritvhi toh kripa ko akela nahi chorega. superhero ko jaldi leke aao.
icant wait. bad part to leave on. 😆

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bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#854

[quote=tallyh020]hello bheegi,
I guess I m the only reader here who is behind and not going according to the updates, nyways i read 10 parts in 2 days not bad..

so here are my comments for the first 10 parts.

It is usually said that while writing a novel or a story the writer always place himself/herself in one or more than one characters present in the story, as those characters depict the real personality of the writer.. Where did u place urself?😍

I asked this because the last story i read was mixed doubles and in both there is one similarity, main character is musician and he is looking for his lost identity and past.. Why so similarity in both the stories? That a musician is looking for his past...

but one thing i noticed that ke aisa real life mein hona impossible hai, ke aik married ladki do meetings mein he aik strager ke sath itna frank ho jae, phir aik itne rich family kisi stranger pe trust kar ke os ko apne gher mein stay karae pehle rat mein he and then wo fire ka incident.... so unreal 😒

matlab aj ke dor mein aisa hona totally impossible

now one scene of the academy when Kripa met angad after the meeting of Mr. and Mrs Sharma at academy, now that was superb. It was just like a dream world for any person whom is going to meet his special one. Anyways I really like ur way of expression, u r really good in direction, the way of expression is all good, but ager yeah sab fiction se hat ke in reality ko dekh ke explain kia jae to it would be awesome.

Make sure ur next story should be based on real facts 😛

regards
talha[/quote]

thanks talha for ur very honest comments and trying to catch up with this long story. Actually, i have written many ffs and some are realistic some are fantasy. As i have mentioned earlier, i write to escape so most of my stories have realistic emotions, realistic characters but fictional situations that come to my imagination. Having said that, i'll say that even though certain situations might seem impossible to u but as u grow older, u will realize that even in real life, ANYTHING is possible.

Most of my stories are love stories with music as a background as that's what drew me to KYPH in the first place. KYPH was a music based show; that's why music is always there in my stories+ music helps me think of various situations also.

[quote=sheetal00]great prt.
ab kya hoga. pritvhi toh kripa ko akela nahi chorega. superhero ko jaldi leke aao.
icant wait. bad part to leave on. 😆[/quote]

thanks sheetal....1-2 din tho wait karna padhega. Good to see u back😃

Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago

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Tooba

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Posted: 16 years ago

#855

😃aww poor Kripa have to bear all tht [hostel,lizards, loneliness etc ]
or dono becharo ko judai bardasht karni hogi 😭 poor A-K 😭
their phone conversation is soo sweet ..😳 Angad .. pole dance hahaha lol 😆😆imagine Angad doing tht .. 😳😆lol
Angad is too naughty 😳
😃dupatta window pe chorne ka kia scene hai ?
Simon is sooo disgusting .. 🤢Girls like her shuld get a big punishment ..😡😡
Gayatri aunty is so understandable .. luv her 😳😊😊
Shailendra .. isko kisi accident me maar dey pleshh ..😉 har cheez ki news deta hai Prithvi ko 😡 chamcha kahin ka 😡
hope Angad Kripa k pass pehle pochan jaey ..😊 wese humari Kripa akeli hi kaafi hai Prithvi k liye 😃but still .. ek se bhale do😆😉
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continue soon 😊
nice update 👏 and thanks for the pm 😊

Edited by sangat - 16 years ago

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bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#856

Originally posted by: sangat
😃aww poor Kripa have to bear all tht [hostel,lizards, loneliness etc ]
or dono becharo ko judai bardasht karni hogi 😭 poor A-K 😭
their phone conversation is soo sweet ..😳 Angad .. pole dance hahaha lol 😆😆imagine Angad doing tht .. 😳😆lol
Angad is too naughty 😳
😃dupatta window pe chorne ka kia scene hai ?
Simon is sooo disgusting .. 🤢Girls like her shuld get a big punishment ..😡😡
Gayatri aunty is so understandable .. luv her 😳😊😊
Shailendra .. isko kisi accident me maar dey pleshh ..😉 har cheez ki news deta hai Prithvi ko 😡 chamcha kahin ka 😡
hope Angad Kripa k pass pehle pochan jaey ..😊 wese humari Kripa akeli hi kaafi hai Prithvi k liye 😃but still .. ek se bhale do😆😉
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continue soon 😊
nice update 👏 and thanks for the pm 😊

thanks sangat. Dupatta is there as a landmark...samjha karo😆 Shailu and prithvi ki buri chaalein ab bahut din nahin chalengi😃 yeah, ek se bhale do😉

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Anila

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Posted: 16 years ago

#857

I have sympathies with mishty, the way gayatri expressed about mishty that's doesn't feel good to me, the reason is that, it is not possible for a women to live a normal life when she become handicapped. ye wohi samajhta hai....jis pe guzarti hai,🤔 her frustration grew more when kripa was given preference over her, and in this situation to feel insecure is totally natural.

no women wants that to see her husband idol, only those are respected who earns something, now kartik thought of starting some restaurant business, and I hope that through this ,mishty behaviour would also change a little bit.

that Kripa, I totally disliked her from the very first part but now i started liking her 😆, kripa is now very samajhdaar, first she thought whatever the chracter of her husband is, she has to live as Mrs. Sharma but now she is realizing that there is a world in which she can make her own identity.

thanks to prithvi, that in first time in this fanfic, that I found real aggressive angad khanna, otherwise ab tak toh ye character kuch Allah miya ki gaaey type hi tha,🤓 still i am unable to found that spark that zing in this angad's character in pehchan as usually this character was found to be.

the image that i summarized till now, that is Mulla ki daud masjid tak.....toh angad ki daud academy tak,the person who has no social life, no interaction with other people, jo bas 2-3 ghantey ke liye academy jata hai aur phir kisi gharelu aurat ki tarha sara waqt apne flat mein pada rehta ho 😳

logically, prithvi should be the one who reaches to kripa'.. aage aapki marzi ! 😳 prithvi would become stubborn now, mard ki fitrat hai ke wo chahe bahar kuch bhi karta phire but if he finds his wife to be with stranger he cannot tolerate that, prithvi knew that angad is also the reason of kripa's getting divorce, and this is really damaging his ego

I guess kripa would ignore prithvi's warning, but when there is an attack on angad, tab usse halaat ki asal sangeeni ka ehsaas hoga

jaise Ekta ke serials mein heroine ke duputte hero ki wrist watch mein ataktey hein'.theek wiase hi aapki stories mein, har kisi ko apne matlab ki baat zarur sunai deti hai 😆

Edited by annu127 - 16 years ago

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bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#858

Originally posted by: annu127

I have sympathies with mishty, the way gayatri expressed about mishty that's doesn't feel good to me, the reason is that, it is not possible for a women to live a normal life when she become handicapped. ye wohi samajhta hai....jis pe guzarti hai,🤔 her frustration grew more when kripa was given preference over her, and in this situation to feel insecure is totally natural.

feeling insecure is natural but wishing ill for another person is not justified. Mishti always wanted something 'bad' to happen to kripa and I cannot justify that in any human being😕

no women wants that to see her husband idol, only those are respected who earns something, now kartik thought of starting some restaurant business, and I hope that through this ,mishty behaviour would also change a little bit.
yes, mishty will def change now but once she leaves her hatred for kripa then i will consider her reformed

that Kripa, I totally disliked her from the very first part but now i started liking her 😆, kripa is now very samajhdaar, first she thought whatever the chracter of her husband is, she has to live as Mrs. Sharma but now she is realizing that there is a world in which she can make her own identity.
yes, kripa was too seedha earlier mainly because of her sheltered upbringing. But now she is gradually learning how to survive

thanks to prithvi, that in first time in this fanfic, that I found real aggressive angad khanna, otherwise ab tak toh ye character kuch Allah miya ki gaaey type hi tha,🤓 still i am unable to found that spark that zing in this angad's character in pehchan as usually this character was found to be.
i don't write the same character of angad in all ffs. lagta hai aapko aggressive aur arrogant type males pasand hain😉 not the sensitive and understanding types

the image that i summarized till now, that is Mulla ki daud masjid tak.....toh angad ki daud academy tak,the person who has no social life, no interaction with other people, jo bas 2-3 ghantey ke liye academy jata hai aur phir kisi gharelu aurat ki tarha sara waqt apne flat mein pada rehta ho 😳
oh come on Annu! That's because i have not shown what else he does in his life. He is an artist and he does a lot of work at home also, like composing songs at night...please give him a break! Just becaus ehe doesn't have a 9-5 job or is not an aggressive man, doesn't make him a sissy. He uses his aggression like a man- when needed rather than indiscriminately

logically, prithvi should be the one who reaches to kripa'.. aage aapki marzi ! 😳 prithvi would become stubborn now, mard ki fitrat hai ke wo chahe bahar kuch bhi karta phire but if he finds his wife to be with stranger he cannot tolerate that, prithvi knew that angad is also the reason of kripa's getting divorce, and this is really damaging his ego
yes, prithvi has a big ego. Earlier he didn't care where she had gone because wo soch ta tha ki wo wapas aa jaayegi but now that angad is back in the picture with her, he isa raging ego maniacal bull

I guess kripa would ignore prithvi's warning, but when there is an attack on angad, tab usse halaat ki asal sangeeni ka ehsaas hoga
yes, kripa wouldn'ta care about herself but if angad is harmed, she will def react

jaise Ekta ke serials mein heroine ke duputte hero ki wrist watch mein ataktey hein'.theek wiase hi aapki stories mein, har kisi ko apne matlab ki baat zarur sunai deti hai 😆
after all this is a TV forum😉 Thanks for ur 'hatke' comments as always