Kambakht Ishqq KZK NEW NOTE Pg 86 - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

670

Views

55.7k

Users

16

Likes

8

Frequent Posters

Barishkiduaa thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: kripangad 4ever

awesome awesome 👏

saksham is sucha retarddd flirting wid a teacher "hey sexy" 😆
🤣
continueeeee sooonnn 😃



Heehhe well tnx ! yeah i also liked "hey Sexyy" ahaha 😳
well thank youuu 😃
Barishkiduaa thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: *V.I.P.*

heyy ashii nd aminah.. **kisses**
not bad good start !! <33
i wanna slap saksham..wannabee brothers
continue soon baby :P
try updating between thursday to sunday >??



Oh Okaay we will try to doo but u know we both are also bussy with skull stuuf..so mayeb if we have time will def trying to post on thursday to sundyy.. 😳
- yeh is mine first FF soo.. heheh tnxuuu 😛
Love ashii,
noha450 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#13
such a blissfull update cant wait to for nihaal😍
am_786 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#14

Thanks Noha even I cant wait for Nihaaaaaaaaaal😆

am_786 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#15
Part 2
After the lesson P2 ran outside before that Saksham could talk to her about their deal. During the lunchbreak she met her sisters and they started to lunch. While they were sitting P2 could notice that someone was looking at her all the time, and it was none other then Saksham. P2 stared to get nervous

P2: Dhara why is Saksham looking at here like that...?

Dhara just laughed at seeing P2's face

Dh: Dii Saksham's just like that... woh sab ko aise ghoor ghoor ke dekhta hai!
P2: But I have this really weird feeling... I am sure! Yeh zaroor kuch karne waala hai
Dh: Uff don't be so crazy woh kuch nahi karega!


P2 looked on with a confused look. After the lunchbreak P2 was walking to her locker and the whole hall room was kind of empty. Then suddenly someone ticked her on her shoulder, she turns around but sees nobody. P2 looks on with big eyes scared of a ghost perhaps. Then suddenly P2 feels a hand on her shoulder very scared she turns around with her eyes close. After a few seconds she sees Saksham standing infront of her.

P2: Oh... Saksham!

P2 sighed.

P2: You scared me! Kya baat hai?

Saksham gave her a evil smile


S: Shayed tum kuch bhool rahi ho P2..?

P2: Kya? Oh yeah mujhe tumhe kuch batana tha... Mr Mittal is waiting for you woh tumse baat karna chahte the ok? Now you have to go so talk to you later!

P2 tried to act smart while Saksham just looked at her really serious. P2 then was about to walk away when Saksham got a hold of her hand and pushed her to the lockers.

P2: Saksham!

S: Your forgetting something... zara socho!

P2: KYA! Just tell me what you want!
S: Humare first lesson mein jab maine tumhara haath pakra tha you told me you'll give me anything I ask for! Now I want something and you know really well what I am talking about!

P2 is really tensed because Saksham was so close to her totally pinned up to the lockers.

P2: Yeh tum kya kar rahe ho! Leave me!

Saksham and P2 are just a few mm's away from each other ... P2 tried to go left and right but Saksham put his both hands on the lockers so that she couldn't run away

P2: Your acting like a MENTAL person... MUJHE CHORO!

Saksham brought a evil smile on his face.

S: Sorry sexy but I cant leave you! Tumne hi to bola tha ke main jo maangoon ga woh mujhe millega!

Saksham put a hand around P2's waist.

P2: LEAVE ME!

P2 slapped his hand away and almost started to cry because of anger, Saksham just loved to annoy P2 and when she was about to cry he just left her how she was, sad or angry,

S: Uff P2! Itne nakhre kyun dikhati ho! All the girls of this college run behind me to get attention from me and your trying to run away!
P2: Lekin main uss tarah ki larki nahi hoon! And you know me long enough to know that about me! Now leave me warna main tumhaare baare mein headmaster ko sab kuch bata doon gi!

Saksham just started to laugh.

S: Come on P2 tumhaara yakeen kaun karega?

P2 didn't know the answer for that! Saksham was the most popular guy in their gurukul nobody would believe her but she atleast tried. Saksham did get scared because she was Prerna's granddaughter and she has a huge reputation in whole Panchmeshwar. Saksham still didnt let go of her untill Saksham heard some kids coming over there he started to run away and P2 sighed of relief. Saksham turned around and gave P2 a flying kiss. P2 looked on in disgust she couldn't believe she had such a jerk as a friend.

moved 2 other scene ~

Dhara was looking for P2.

Dh: Ab yeh Di kidhar gum gayi!

She tried to call up P2 but P2 wasn't picking up while calling she bumped into Vardhaan.

Dh: I am really sorry!

V: Koi baat nahi... I think we'll meet everytime because of bumping?

Dhara smiled a little Vardhaan picked up her mobile.

V: Here's your mobile.

Dh: Thanks now I have to go find P2 didi... Bye!

Vardhaan winked at her and to his suprise she got a bit red and just ran away.

moved 2 other scene ~

P2 had PE on the first day of school, and if P2 has it Saksham has it too! P2 was not in the mood to talk to him so she just tried to ignore him the best she could. The first practice was just for soccer outside and while all the boys were playing the girls were just sitting. Saksham was looking at P2 all the time while she was just ignoring his gaze. P2 then stood up and walked to go away and Saksham went behind her... he pulled her behind a alley where no one could see them. P2 was about to scream but Saksham put his hand on her mouth.

S: Shh..!!

P2's rage came upto her again she was scared shocked and angry! Suddenly she had tears rolling down her cheek it was the anger! Saksham put his hand away. P2 just exploded!

P2: YOU ARE JUST SO ANNOYING! JUST LEAVE ME! Warna main chilaa doongi!

S: P2... this isn't fair! We had a deal aur ab tum mujhe woh do jo main chahta hoon warna...

P2: WARNA KYA! What the hell will you do!

Saksham was kind of scared too because he made her cry and she could scream easily!

P2: I just hate you!

P2 was about to scream when Saksham put his hand on her mouth again.

S: I Love You!

P2 couldn't utter a word anymore one tear was slipping down her cheek because of the anger. Saksham repeated what he said.

S: I Love You!!

Saksham held her head in his hand and came real close to her cheek... he just kissed the tear away. P2 looked on confused. What the hell happened to the fliry Saksham and who's this Saksham look-a-like infront of her? She just touched her cheek in confusion and ran away!

Preview: P2 is talking to Prerna about Love and asks her for a advise. Dhara on the other hand has found her prince charming!

Hope you liked the part a promo will be up in few days!

Noha Sorry for all the Sp2 scenes but it had to be valentine special😆
Edited by am_786 - 16 years ago
noha450 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#16
sweet update hun and lol i understand❤️ and happy valentine day
KripAngad4ever thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#17
omg he told her😳 it was cuteeee
i wanna see wat she does now..
contttt
yulZ thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#18

OMG !!!!! 😲 😲 😲 😲

mann i m loving this 😳 😆 😆 onli coz of SP2 romantic pals 😆

lets start frm the beginning ^^
hmm.. the 1st bit the intro.. was damm gud =D to be true there wasnt any palchin pics toh i thought ganga was the palchin for ur FF 😆
well wel.. prem aur sneha not a bad jodi 😉😆

2nd thing.. that trailor i loved it like hell !!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏
it was damm gud...
the bg music when NP2 mariage is shown is same to same like serial promo n all those stuff..
ek pal k liye i thought i watching a serial 😃 😃

3rd thing asmii.... 😃
yarr u r a gr8 writer 👏 👏 👏 👏 !!!!!
1st se lekar ending tak.. no comments 👏
i was reading it n njoying it to my fullest ^^
loved each n every dialogue n loved the way u made the flirty dialogues of shakshu n all 😳 😳 😳
hey sexy 😆😆😆

phew .. 4th thing 😆
Aminu.. loved ur part too ^___^
thanx for the lovely dovely parts of SP2 😳 😳 😳 😳
ek pal k liye toh sahi but this scene will be my sweet dose for abt the rest of my life 😳 😳
just loved it alottttttttttttttttttt...
i was blushing all the way frm top to bottom ☺️ n still m☺️ 😆

gr8 update guys !!!!
sorry 4 my longgg comment but u guys deserve the best !!!!!! 👏 👏
ab nihaal aur p2 ka love part bhi ayea toh i dont mind !!! 😆 coz starting toh SP2 kii love story se hee suru huyee nah 😳 😳 😳

conti. soon okie ^___^
will be eagerly waiting for it ^____^

@noha bhabhi= yarr where were u ?? i missed u so much ^^hw r u bhabs??😉
Edited by yulZ - 16 years ago
am_786 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: yulZ

OMG !!!!! 😲 😲 😲 😲

mann i m loving this 😳 😆 😆 onli coz of SP2 romantic pals 😆

lets start frm the beginning ^^
hmm.. the 1st bit the intro.. was damm gud =D to be true there wasnt any palchin pics toh i thought ganga was the palchin for ur FF 😆
well wel.. prem aur sneha not a bad jodi 😉😆
Yeah Couldn't find a proper pic of Palchin 😆

2nd thing.. that trailor i loved it like hell !!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏
it was damm gud...
the bg music when NP2 mariage is shown is same to same like serial promo n all those stuff..
ek pal k liye i thought i watching a serial 😃 😃
I had to listen to every kind of sad song for the music of the promo! And its torture for me because I am a real fast song person but anyways had to do it😆 Noha is our Creative Head she made the trailer even better then I had expected!👏

3rd thing asmii.... 😃
yarr u r a gr8 writer 👏 👏 👏 👏 !!!!!
1st se lekar ending tak.. no comments 👏
i was reading it n njoying it to my fullest ^^
loved each n every dialogue n loved the way u made the flirty dialogues of shakshu n all 😳 😳 😳
hey sexy 😆😆😆
Do you believe its her first fan-fic! Its my third or fourth but its her first. Ashi was really nervous but to be honest shes doing such a great job at it na?😃

phew .. 4th thing 😆
Aminu.. loved ur part too ^___^
thanx for the lovely dovely parts of SP2 😳 😳 😳 😳
ek pal k liye toh sahi but this scene will be my sweet dose for abt the rest of my life 😳 😳
just loved it alottttttttttttttttttt...
i was blushing all the way frm top to bottom ☺️ n still m☺️ 😆
Lmao😆😆
Your welcome it had to be special because this friend of mine just loves SP2 and she was like your so mean your gonna kill him and all and I am like no just enjoy this part and all😆 Well Now I'll have to work harder because there are 2 Sp2 die hard fans now😆

gr8 update guys !!!!
sorry 4 my longgg comment but u guys deserve the best !!!!!! 👏 👏
ab nihaal aur p2 ka love part bhi ayea toh i dont mind !!! 😆 coz starting toh SP2 kii love story se hee suru huyee nah 😳 😳 😳

Yeah and its gonna stay in the Sp2 romance angle for quite a few episodes😳
I am such a big Np2 fan that its really hard to write about Sp2 everytime theres something romantic to happen I type Nihaal instead of Saksham 😆

conti. soon okie ^___^
will be eagerly waiting for it ^____^

@noha bhabhi= yarr where were u ?? i missed u so much ^^hw r u bhabs??😉


Your such a chatterbox I just LOVE your comments they are so long and lovely keep commenting like this yeah😆
Next part will be up on Tuesday or Wednesday😊
noha450 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: yulZ

OMG !!!!! 😲 😲 😲 😲

mann i m loving this 😳 😆 😆 onli coz of SP2 romantic pals 😆

lets start frm the beginning ^^
hmm.. the 1st bit the intro.. was damm gud =D to be true there wasnt any palchin pics toh i thought ganga was the palchin for ur FF 😆
well wel.. prem aur sneha not a bad jodi 😉😆

2nd thing.. that trailor i loved it like hell !!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏
it was damm gud...
the bg music when NP2 mariage is shown is same to same like serial promo n all those stuff..
ek pal k liye i thought i watching a serial 😃 😃

3rd thing asmii.... 😃
yarr u r a gr8 writer 👏 👏 👏 👏 !!!!!
1st se lekar ending tak.. no comments 👏
i was reading it n njoying it to my fullest ^^
loved each n every dialogue n loved the way u made the flirty dialogues of shakshu n all 😳 😳 😳
hey sexy 😆😆😆

phew .. 4th thing 😆
Aminu.. loved ur part too ^___^
thanx for the lovely dovely parts of SP2 😳 😳 😳 😳
ek pal k liye toh sahi but this scene will be my sweet dose for abt the rest of my life 😳 😳
just loved it alottttttttttttttttttt...
i was blushing all the way frm top to bottom ☺️ n still m☺️ 😆

gr8 update guys !!!!
sorry 4 my longgg comment but u guys deserve the best !!!!!! 👏 👏
ab nihaal aur p2 ka love part bhi ayea toh i dont mind !!! 😆 coz starting toh SP2 kii love story se hee suru huyee nah 😳 😳 😳

conti. soon okie ^___^
will be eagerly waiting for it ^____^

@noha bhabhi= yarr where were u ?? i missed u so much ^^hw r u bhabs??😉

pinkuuuuuuuu how r u yaaar?🤗
same here sweetpie 😃btw shoudnt i be asking u the same question?😆...lol
thaks for ur sweet comment about the trailler!!!!!already vaunting myself😆
tc and jhakas avi yaar
Edited by noha450 - 16 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: zajedno · 3 months ago

new morning, new day. what does the new day bring us. what will the morning be like after the storm that rages in my heart all night. What is...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz · 9 months ago

In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2)

Siggi by Sandhya (@sevenstreaks) (P.S this was my pitching picture to the production houses - which Sandy had done for me a couple of years...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: MidnightLibrary · 11 months ago

Rishtey the Bond of marriage (new chapter)

Chapter : Melodious Encounter https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/52348

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: zajedno · 9 months ago

HAPPY NEW YEAR

happyy. New Year 2025

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".