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Daebak

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Hey cool Intro.....

Continue soon !

Regardz,

Vandu

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kashish

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

hey ana really cool intro of the girls......and i agree with kashish that it cant be define in the books becoz the true love can only feel it............kashish looks like more mature about love like a dream girl but ridima is like childish n childhood love........looks like cindrella girl........anyway cant wait for their first meeting....ple ple ple continue soon......thanks

love

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swetha10

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Hey Ana cool intro.. looks very interesting... enjoyed the thoughts.. plzz continue soon..

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hydrogurl001

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

aww seems really cute and interesting! plz cont soon! and thanks for the PM :)

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Isha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

hey i luved it cont soon n thnx 4 tha PM!

❤️twinkle!

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Nidha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

waoh🤗 its really an awesome one⭐️ Ridzi's childhood love cool😎 plz continue it soon😛😉

"Raat ki tanhai se darte hai hum,
kagaz ki parchhai se darte hai hum,

Duniya sath chale na chale,
tumhari sath ki umeed karte hai hum."

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gia.khan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

looking forward to more babe! .. muah love this!

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aishwarya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

Hey Ana..really nyc...on V-day it's like a treat 4 us They way they all define love is magical..

I'm lukn fwd 2 dis one..

Srry 4 d shrt comment

Plzz cont soon...

Thnx 4 d PM

Aish

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Ana

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Posted: 16 years ago

#39

~*~Part 1~*~

Looking outside from the train window, a smile formed on his lips as strong wind hit his face............Weather was as cool and romantic as that of his heart.....it seems like it too know that he is happy........

He is happy..........and why not, he is going to get his love.....his first and foremost love...........his e-mail lover...

Loving her was the first thing, he knew he ever did himself.............he never need anyone's permission for this as this was a hidden feeling....captured in his heart......

His life was always monitored by his parents and after them.............his uncle aunty.....

But this time, he was determined not to listen anyone as why uncle aunty will decide, who should be his life partner.........he is old enough to decide........now, Sujal Garewal can take care of himself...........he is capable enough to lead his life on his own and this trip to delhi really made him independent..............he was successful enough to move on his own

*Buzz Buzz*

He take out his mobile and seeing the flashing name, his smile widened

"Hey Bhaiya" hearing chirpy voice from other side, his smile glow up

"Hey...........how are you?"

"Great, just waiting for you to arrive..." Sujal can feel the antisipation in the voice

"Something important" tease was clearly visible from his voice

"hmmmm...........actually there is..........just get back soon..........i am coming to pick you up"

"Ok then, bye Armaan" he said and cut the call

Armaan Malik........his uncle aunty Rahul and Juhi's son.................after Sujal parents died, they took care of him.......actually to him, they just take care more of him....they restricted him for late night outs or for roaming with the girls........same goes for armaan but Sujal help him go out........Sometimes, armaan just said

"Bhaiya, you don't look at the fun side of life"

Sujal used to simply smile and said

"I didn't have any elder brother who can rescue me later...." Armaan just used to hug him, proudly saying

"But i do have"

Armaan was the 2nd...........no no........first most important person for whom, Sujal Gerewal even can give his life..........

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"Di......come fast" On Riddhima call, Kashish hurried to the Tv Lounge and look at her Mr.Perfect....Mr.Cool or whatever you can think..............he was just the perfect one for her............................She just knew it....

Receiving the Youngest Achiever Award after signing a great deal, he was looking handsome in his black attire that truly bringing out his charms.......whatever, to her..........he looked handsome if he even wear a vest................she blushed at the thought

"Haye Haye di" Riddhima teasingly put her hand on her shoulder and said in a romantic tone as Kashish play with her duppata

"Don't you think, its a really dark shade of red this time..........." She pull her cheeks lightly which make Kashish blush more and shying, she run to her room.......

Sujal Garewal, really had that magic that can even make her blush any time............even if he is on TV......

Kashish was a simple girl...........remain reserve with her ownself.................to a person she was an open book was only Riddhima, a year younger sister..........She love her parents but the person who really take away her heart was Sujal........she knew him from...........let us think............she don't even know the date but from the time, she knew what love is...........He is the one..

She tried holding her blush, but that wasn't working................she get up and takes out a picture of him from her closet....

"I Love You...........Come Back soon" kissing his picture lightly, she put it back......

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After talking to his brother, he felt relieved...............atleast he will be here in next 5 hours and then he will kill this pain in his stomach by blurting out his secret..............he smiled as he remembered sujal's teasing voice

"Oh bhaiya, come back..............i can't share this firstly to anyone else than you.."

He was having a dreamy look as he hit the bed.........smiling deeply.............suddenly remembering something, he take out his wallet from his trousers pocket and look at his beloved picture

Smiling, he hold his mobile and dial a number again

"Hello" hearing voice from other side he grin

"Hello Love" hearing her giggle, his heart felt a warmth

"Armaan, we just confessed yesterday and you are like.............we are like this from years" he turned on the bed and said in his romantic husky tone

"So what Love, we confessed yesterday but we both Love each other from long time right........"

"Oh hoo................so you had planned long back how to start off........don't you?" Imagining her grinning, he just closed his eyes

"You bet Riddhima..............i had planned so much.........so so much to tell you, to say you..........to call you...."

"Like?" hearing her soothing voice he opened his eyes and started

"Like, to start my day with your voice and to tell you, how much i love you" He surly get his romantic sense from his father

"ahan, continue......i am listening"

He get up and reached to the window and stand looking outside, having some support with the pane

"To take you out on a date or even share a lunch with you.............take you to the shopping to tell you that you look amazing in any attire..............make you look at the mirror to say that you look great without make-up........just be yourself....and.........."

as he stopped to take a breath, he felt that wind strike him again

"And?" Riddhima's heart beat risen as he stopped...........she fall more and more in love with him with his every word

"And to make you go to the sleep saying that i love you.........." armaan felt the seriousness of the situation so said teasingingly

"Now spare me in your dreams girl............atleast let me sleep peacefully without making me coming in your dreams.........oh" as he said striaght forward

"As if i want to disturb my sleep to see you there too.................can't handle you 24/7..............its aunty's patience how he deal with you" she said with a grin

"You too should develop such patience as later, you too have to deal with me 24/7......"

Riddhima blushed at the thought..............right to say, she blushed even more than kashish

"Stop blushing baby, its only 12........still 2 hours before we meet"

"Armaan, Shut up" hearing her warning, he give up

"Ok, sorry..............oh Sujal bhaiya is coming.....i am going to tell him today.................will you like to join me" Riddhima think for a while and then agree

"Ok, see you"

"Love you"

"hmmmmmmm" saying she cut the phone, leaving him with the desire of hearing the same "Love you" back

"Ahem Ahem" turning around, armaan left shocked seeing his mother with a questioning look on his face

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Edited by cool_SK - 16 years ago

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Ana

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Posted: 16 years ago

#40

~*Part 2*~

Inhaling the smell of brewing coffee, along with some freshly made pastries...........the three settle down on a table

"Anything you like sir?" Sujal look up at the waitress, holding a pen and small notebook........waiting for his reply

"Hmmm" he look at both Riddhima and armaan who were buzy playing with there thoughts..........or more properly, deciding how to play with there words

"Three Cappuccinos" the waitress smiled

"Anything else sir"

"No, thank you" closing her notebook, she went away fastly as Sujal turned to examine both his buddies

They both were just missing from there……….

"Am I to some wrong place…………how they both just shut up without giving me any notice" he smiled and jerked his head.

Waiting for a moment, when they both didn't say a word, sujal bang the table once that shock them and startled they look at him

"What's up guys? How can you just stay quite when you both have a news to give me?...In the last 24 hours, you both bug me a lot….and now, when I am here, you both are quiet…" Armaan and Riddhima smiled and then started….

"Actually" saying it at once they both just look at each other and smile

Observing them from long, armaan got the point

"Ok, Ok……….i got it, but whats the problem?" Shocked they look at him…

"What? What you get bhai?" Armaan was confused and so was Riddhima

"Its so obvious guys, you don't know from how long I wanted to hear that" Sujal broad smile made them blush as he hug them both at once

"Bhai, Mama and Dad" armaan scratched his head

"Don't worry, I will" armaan assured them that he will talk to the parents soon about them

Getting down on the chair……..Riddhima just look at Sujal and Armaan….

"You grow up so soon" Sujal said teasing armaan as he just looked away, controlling his blush

"And you started blushing too?" He was shocked to see the little ammy grown up

"Bhai" armaan turned to Sujal and they both get into some talk

Riddhima keeping admiring there bond, she always had………There was something so special, so unique about them that whoever sees them playing, laughing or teasing each other, just adored them

"May just Sujal do get it soon that Di is the one…..the one and only one for him" Riddhima prayed silently

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Entering the room, Kashish just as usual look across the glass wall that clearly show sujal cabin……it was her routine to just start ashe just get so pleased seeing him sitting there…….Sujal owned the business but being good friends, she joined him later just on his request to share his burdan

Smiling, she said down on her laptop, to see his reply........

She mail him regularly.........and last night she just mailed and congrats him on wining the award...

"Hey there
Thanku.........i am so pleased to see your e-card and mail..
Actually i didn't expect all this so soon..........this award and all.
To tell you, i never thought i was capale of all this......it was only your belief that make be believe myself and got here
Between, now you know my name and really see me.....can't you think now its my turn to see you too....
And thank you for the compliment....Do i really look that good?

looking forward to your reply for my request

Sujal"

Kashish smiled reading the mail...........It was a different Sujal, she always felt in his mails......Sujal was never such friendly with her in reality as then in mails....may be he is like this to armaan but just to an extent.................

She simply adored him and then click "Compose" button and started typing

"Hi Sujal

I thought you said that now you can easily identify me from what you know me till now...
i was looking upto that.....
and yes, you were looking so....
now its enough to praise you............its high time for you to now find me
catch me soon" she added a wink emotion in the end

After done with the typing, she take the Mouse in her hand and click send button on screen………a smile formed on her lips and her stomach felt some goosebumps.

"Finally done with another one" hearing her cordless voice, she pick it up and heard his voice

"Kashish, can you please come in my cabin"

"Of course Sujal" adjusting her coat, she get in with the same warm smile

Opening the door, she peeks in to find him beaming seeing the screen of his LCD…………A tingling sensation take place in her heart………she always felt……….oh……..it is really something extremely beautiful on seeing him reading her mails with such love and admiration

Yup she wrote him anonymous e-mails………but no lie was there…..she first just started to make him acknowledge her but later she starts liking him this way………….his replies are so of himself………..He was a very reserve person just like her……but while writing mails to each other, they both never feared to express themselves…….

To her, more excited thing is that he still don't know who she is…………..but he had promised, that he will find her soon…

Knocking the door, she gets in to find him minimizing the window and looking at her

"Sujal"

"Yah, i was just thinking to review the details of meeting, you had with Nanda's.......i heard you did great"

"that you, and i surly will see you that soon"

Kashish turned and reach to the door

"Kashish" She smiled as she knew whats comming...........still smiling she turned with i-know-u look

"Coffee" Sujal said with a puppy face that always make Kashish go more for him

"Ok" Sujal again focused back on his mail

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Getting into the bed with the sweetest smile, Riddhima remembered how her life changed in just a month........just till the end od Dec last year, she was loosing him....she scared, highly scared of that..........she loved him from the childhood............

Rahul and Shashank were great friends........and mostly went on picnics together....and from then, she saw him............they both clicked greatly with each other and have a strong friendship bond

She remembered how she felt terrible just before new year eve

~Flashback~

Running into the house..........he quickly get up the stairs.....skipping some in between..........coming into the corridor, he left the first door and quickly opened the second door in right

There she was sleeping like a log............snuggled in her blanket.....as he move forward, he saw that smile on her face that like ever, made him smile too...........

Having a grin on his face, he jumped onto her and took her with surprise............a surprise that almost left her bewildered..........

Coming out from the trance, she heard his laughing like a manic and looks daggers at her

"Armaan…." Getting a grip on the pillow……she narrowed her eyes and next moment

"You stupid, idiot….jerk.." kept calling her that, she beat him hard………while he was rolling on her bed, laughing like hell

After sometime, when she was fed up with that…………she again lay down on her bed and covered herself again with the blanket

Armaan controlled himself and rolled on…………putting a hand on her shoulder…he started

"Riddhima……..don't be angry yaar………….i was just teasing" Riddhima smiled hearing it inside her coverlet and said

"I know armaan…………ok just shoot" she knew why he was there with her……..so just came to the point

"You know me better…….." he was amazed with her understanding

"Hmmmm…"

"Ok, I just met Priyanka today……………Oh my ridzi, she is so hot" she clutched the sheets to hold her anger back…….

"Thank God! I am under this coverlet" said thanked while trying to keep her eyes dried from the tears

"You know what, she too have same interests as mine………….i think, I got my date for new year's eve" he was saying dreamingly without knowing that he just break the lovable dreams, she was thinking of from almost two months……………..hoping that this time, atleast he will ask her……but alas

"there are just 3 days for new year party and i was thinking..........that i am going to miss this................but priyanka saved me" saying he hold her tightly around her waist..........leaving her desire for him more

Just then armaan cell buzz

"Hey honey…..

Yes I am on my way…………see you" getting up from the bed, he talked……and reached the door..............Riddhima felt disappinting on not feeling his warmth any more

"Oh shit" looking up at clock, he quickly said

"Ok bye Ridzi, I am going………………do meet me at coffee shop" saying he run from there, leaving a sobbing Ridz

~Flashback Ends~

Remembering old time................she just went to sleep

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(Sorry for late update
buzy with studies so whenever i will get time, i will update surely

lolz
ana😳)

Edited by cool_SK - 16 years ago