The warmth of time-Mayur FF updt pg9 - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Engagement Hall
7 p.m

Samrat walks in to find the engagement hall empty

Samrat: wow dude, lagta hai sab bhul gaye hai ki aaj teri engagement hai aur yeh stupid Benji mujhe apna Best friend bulata hai aur ab tak nahi aaya.

Nupur tapping Samrat on the shoulder

Nupur:hmm...aaj tak suna tha par ajj dekh bhi liya ki pyaar insaan ko paagal bana deta hai , khud sa hi baate kar rahe ho

Samrat turned to see nupur and passed her a smile

Samrat: hey to be sister in law! welcome back (hugging her) Delhi se kab aaye?

Nupur:abhe kuch hi der pehle.

Samrat:wow, nupur u've changed(looking at her from head to toe and holding her saree's palla in his heads)saree and all haan.

nupur:bas bas zyaada bolna ki zarorat nahi hai ,tumhare engagement hai isliye pehni hai

Samrat:but i must say laag bahut hot re hai

Nupur:thank u thank u

benji entering

Benji: sorry dude bahut der ho gaye, woh actually teri engagement ring mil nahi re thi isli

Samrat(giving him a exasperated look):Jha Benji waha trouble.Dude, aaj kay din toh mujhe baksh deta.

Benji:sorry dude(looking at Nupur) hi nupur

Nupur:hi

Samrat:acha dude tune invites toh bhej diya thay na, sabko

Benji:Haan aur sabka confirmation bhi aa gaya hai.Annie,chako,cj,aur (looking at Samrat and winking)

Samrat:aur aur (in teasing manner) aur kaun reh gaya yaar

Samrat and Benji together:Mayank

(Nupur's head turned and she looked confused but didnt say anything and walked away)

Samrat: (grinning) kuch log kabhi nahi badalte

(just then a girl passed by carrying a heavy basket of flowers)

Samrat:hey beautiful,may I help you (the girl passed him a smile and he took the basket from her and followed her)

Benji: (looking after samrat):sach kuch kabhi nahi badalte

8 p.m

The engagement party was in full swing but the bride was yet to come

Samrat: I know ki larkiyan tayyar hone mein time lagate hain par chashmish itna time laga sakti hai yeh mujhe nahi pata tha

Dia:oh come on Sammy its her day aaj time nahi lagegi toh kab lagegi

Samrat: wow I am impressed lagta hai Nikhil ka bahut effect ho raha hai

Nikhil:(joining them) well kya kar sakta hain Nikhil ka charm hi kuch aisa hai

Samrat: who toh hai ,par yeh charm dia par kuch zyaada hi chalta hain

Benji:dude zaara apni nazrain yaha se hata kar peche dekh

Samrat turns and sees Nupur brringing Gunjan

They come and join them

Nikhl:someone is loking very stunning

Samrat:hey dude shez mine,,just mine(and winked at Gunjan)who blushed )

Nupur:oh hoye, meena kumari kaise lal ho rahi hai by god!

Samrat:waisa Nupur tum bhi aisehi blush karne waali ho.

Nupur :huh

Samrat: (beaming)Hey Mayank!

Nupur:turned around taken aback

Edited by nikki_k - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42
hey that was rocking.................
ur just a fab writer.....................
future director,producer,scriptwriter nd everything of MJHT.
btw sajan is toooooooooooo guddddddddddd nd ofcourse better than ur mayur...........👏😆
nyways dnt mind dude.
bygod!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tussi gr8 ho.
Edited by angadluvskripa - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
awww!!
that was a lovely part!! really cute:)
plzzzz update soon!!!:]
cant wait for mayank to make his entry!! lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44
wow that was gr8
it was actually awesum
comtinue soon yaar
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
hey nikita...just came across ur FF!!!! and read all parts and the only word that comes to my mind is AMAZING!!!!👏all parts are totallly great!!! please continue sooon dying to read more and if it's possible please PM me when u update!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
Omg..readin ur update after such a long time!! its gr8..
plz update soonn...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
wow awesome plz continue soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48

JUST AWESOME!!!

CNT SOON! SEE YAA!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
Come on you will have continue with this fan fiction...it is really very interesting and Good...ummmmmmmm well honeslty there are no words to describe how good this fan fiction is...Looking forward to reading the rest of it... =D

Thanks

xox
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
goood!!👍🏼
plzz cont soon...waiting fr mayur meet....

n plzz add me to yr pm list if u have 1...

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