The warmth of time-Mayur FF updt pg9 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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VERY NICE U WRITTED!!!
LOVE IT CUTE...
CONT SONN
WHEN U HAVE TIME
WILL WAIT
SEE YAA
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
wowow i love your ff u are good nikita
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
dude it is very cute please update it soon i just loved every bit of it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome!!
plzz cont.soon n if possible lzz PM
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey.............Iam Ayesha...
Luved the concept yaar............
I think Akshat n Charu t ur own characters.............
Contiue soon.......
Really like it yaar...........
Criticism...................it was too short.............other than that it was perfect....especially the alpha and omega of it.......
Bye dear........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nikki your ff is amazing. please update it honey.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hum toh bahaut sharma gayeyyyy

its realli good ..... :)
do continuee

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Posted: 16 years ago
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nikita, ur FF is beautiful....seriously plzz do continue 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Flashback

3 years after college

Nupur had started working as a editor in a fashion magazine called Glamour.After her father's death all the responsibilty had come upon Nupur.She worked day and night for giving Gunjan the future she deserved,to fulfil all the dreams that her father had seen for his daughters and now Gunjan was the head of supply chain with a software company.Can u beleive it head of supply chain? well maybe not so surprising .....Gunjan did have a lot of talent and brains and guess wat Gunjan and Samrat were getting married and that also in 2 weeks and Nupur was the person incharge.She did not want the entire burden of the marriage to fall upon her dear uncle who had supported them after their fathers death.So the functions were divided Nupur took care of all the pre-marriage function while her uncle took care of the marriage. Gunjan was happy after all this was wat Nupur was working hard for........her only aim was to keep gunjan happy and in the process of achieving this aim Nupur had lost her wishes and dreams someewhere.

Bhushan house

4 p.m

Gunjan:oh god yeh di kaha reh gaye,engagement ceremony ko shuru hone mein bas 2 ghante rahe gaye hain aur yeh di ab tak nahi aye.

Dia:Gunjan atleast tum ready hona start toh karo,nupur aa jayegi,flight late ho gaye hogi

(yes dia had Finally got over Samrat and met Nikhil in the third year of college and fallen in love with him.......ofcourse he was smart,intelligent,goodlooking and good at heart and got along with Gunjan very well ,this was one of the reasons that Dia had become softer towards Gunjan)

Gunjan:par dia engagement ki dress toh di lane wali thi

just then Uday walks in

Uday:aree Gunjan tum abhi tak taiyar nahi hui

Gunjan:Uday bhaiyya di....

Uday:woh toh niche hai

Gunjan:niche???

Uday:haan....chalo dikhata hoon

They go out of the room and look down at the hustle-bustle of the house due to the marriage.a group of ladies sat in the corner singing punjabi songs while a group of girls danced around in the middle and in the middle of the group was Nupur dressed in a yellow saree ,her gair left open curled at the end with minimal jewellery ,the palla of her saree tucked in her waist dancing with joy.

Gunjan and Dia smiled.

Gunjan:yeh di bhi na,aate hi..............(but still that sight made her smile)diii(she sreamed down and waved towards her to come up )

Nupur waved back and quickly got out of the group picked by her bags and ran upstairs.

Gunjan(hugging nupur):kya di itne dair lagade

Nupur:sorry sorry sorry,actually na flight late ho gaye aur phir ghar ayee toh sabne dance karne kinch leya.yeh leh tera lehenga (handing over one bag)kaisa hai?

(as gunjan opened the bag)

Dia:woh!its really pretty

Gunjan:sach mein di bahut sundar hai

Nupur:acha ab jaa aur tayaar ho jaa warna Samrat aa gaya toh tayaar nahi hona daega waisa bhi usko tu seedhi sadhi hi achi lagti hai.

Dia and Nupur smiled while Gujan blushed and went to get ready

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Posted: 16 years ago
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gr8 one yaar.....i was waiting for u to update it
plz now dont delay tnxt update...........i am really luking forward to it
its simply gr8
mayank kahaan hai?.....usko bhi le aayo na...
plz can u pm me ...when u update nxt

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