Maslow's hierarchy of needs #2 part 35 pg 147 - Page 108

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Posted: 16 years ago

😲 Didn't think i'd be up to comment right away...while i finally decided to read your update with sleep head (I am very bad with my thoughts n comments when not in the right mood :D)..but i am going to HAVE to say this...it was one of your best updates...for me! I am not always fond of reality in the sense of feelings, transitions, relationships in general...but i loved how you incorporated muskaan in this one...kudos! :)
I thought it was definitely heavy..and you confirmed with your PS lol...! Honestly..ive never liked anjali much...for obvious reasons in dmg..shes not given something of a good image to remember and here you've kept her edgy always..hence..in this one..i disliked her even more....!! :D
She ain't got the time for a friend who she claims to be her dream boy...haha!! sum love that is...ah!

Two of ma fav lines...Armaan-Anjali "....accommodate me in the millions..." and Muskaan-Riddhima..."...he loves me?.." Both for the excellent effects..in terms of timing..simplicity..aptness..!!

cheers for the upd....lets see what you shower us with in your next one...soonish!

nijaL

ps: heres the link for my thread...
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1131723



Edited by missypatel - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey awesome part. The atul and armann convo waz awesome!!! Plzzz continue soon nd all the best for ur exams. Thnks for the PM!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

hey amazing part. so sorry i hadn't posted a reply for the previous part u updated but anyway both were awesome rlly. coming to this one i really liked armaan n atul's convo with the latter giving the reference of Citron n his dealing n armaan understanding the hidden meaning. u shape ur mind n feelings in words rlly well. i am looking forward for armaan n anjali's convo more than that anjali's reaction when she comes to know that AR r in love with each other. also for RM's confession. well we surely have a part to look forward too!!!
keep updating

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Posted: 16 years ago

a very realistic part and the way u described everyones feelings was so apt.anyone would have behaved like armaan riddhima rahul and muskaan.well lets see if anjali and ankit r capable to handle this volcanic eruption that i am sure will deeply effect them.and atul just love his maturity,one should always have a friend like him.plz do updat esoon.will be waiting eagerly.

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey sam!!!
relly nice part.........evn tho i dnt relly enjoy RM bt sumhow i alwayz hv a gud tym reading RM in dis fic........dunno y...evn tho i def still prefer AR anyday........cont soon.....waiting 2 read more......
luv,
urvi
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Posted: 16 years ago

waoh di🤗 its really a superb one⭐️ so sweet😊 rocking😍so Armaan try to talk with Anji😊😊 & Anji know's Ridhima love someone😉 plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

From Armaan "I never thought I would love someone like you,
Never in my dreams that I would meet you,
But then, as I travel in my life's journey,
You walk into my life and I fall for you.

I never know how is it to be in love,
Until that very special moment,
You brought wonderful things in my life,
You opened my eyes to see the beauty of love.
You are the one who taught me how to love sincerely,
You showed me the way to your heart,
You cared for me, and I really appreciate it,
You showed me how to love unselfishly." To Ridhima

With Luv: ~
Nidha🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
reserved :)
*edited*
finally...i know um really late..was caught with work now that school's open again after hols..
coming back...it was a wonderful update sam..loved reading it...
armaan trying to talk to anji and his frustration at not being able to do so was really well-explained...
the convo between armaan and atul was the best..atul so simply explained the intesity of the problem and i am really in awe of this balanced guy...and armaan ranting over miseries and atul admonishing him was really great...
rahul and anji's part was superb as well..loved rahul's guilt at having burst out at muskaan and anji's curiosity getting the better of her and her thoughts on armaan and riddhima was fab..i really hope she doesnt turn negative..but um loving the way this track is going...hope armaan and anji talk it out soon...
rahul's attempts at making muskaan acknowledge him was really nice and riddhima being a great friend..and armaan's presence was really good...
the riddhima-muskaan convo...the second big intense convo of the part...loved the way muskaan burst out and confessed her feelings to riddhima and riddhima being the great friend and support that she is...loved the way both the girls talked abt their insecurities and relationships...um glad that muskaan has confessed, though not in direct words, that she loves rahul...and her question of whether rahul loves her or not was sooo good...loved it...
well..yess RM needed their track to be justified..love the way u are giving each character the space and importance that they require...
great piece of writing once again sam...
and looks like u are close to opening a third thread..so congo for that...
and thanks a ton for the pm :D
awaiting the next one...
Edited by SunainaTM007 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
sam grt part agn..i was beginning to think rahul n muskaan had ended it for good but thanks to u,m glad to c muski behaving sensibly..did want to c more of AR but guess wth the track,its not a big deal..though i wud love to read more of them..loved the way armaan agrees to go for dinner at riddhimas single request..i luv arman..i may hv said ths a countless times in countless fics but here i love him for the gentleman he is..jus wanted to ask u something..in all the parts tht u write,i hv found the charcs saying ths one particular thing tht a person ought to giv priority to the one he loves..though i agree to it,i still hv ths anjali kinda feeling..does ur love hv to b more important thn ur frnds..i hv seen numerous ppl whn they start dating they jus forget tht thrs another world existing which includes their frnds or other close ones..they prefer giving more importnc to their respective partners..i find it very difficult to accept the fact whn it inclydes close frnds but the way u made riddhima say abt the priority thing to muskaan it seems so right yet difficult to implement..i dunno whther m making my point but i needed to elaborated ths cz i hv seen the situatn being highlighted more thn once..however it was a grt read i got to read after long...3 parts together....i think i shd stop here..
shriya
ps: i need to add ths thing ..i love riddhima..shes the ideal char in ths fic..i stl hv to come across smone wth such level headed thinking...shes too good..!
Edited by shriya12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
So i know ive been mia for a while. Just been extremely busy with a new job, getting used to the routine and all. Ive finally caught up and I have got to say wow!! I missed sooo much. I love how you have shaped all the characters. Armaan has slight shades of gray and I actually like it. It makes him more human. What are we without all our foibles? Atul is a complete sweetheart. Friends like him are so rare in todays world. I have liked the way youve portrayed Rahul and Muskaan's relationship. Muskaan's insecurity, confusion makes her all the more believable. So finally Armaan has opened his eyes to the fact that there is a possibility that Anjali might have feelings for him. I cant wait to read about how Armaan will actually break it to her that hes in a relationship with Riddhima and she would always remain a friend and nothing more. I liked how a casualty like Riddhimas father's hospitalization actually brought him closer to her family. A pillar of rock during tough times, brownie points for Armaan!
I promise to read and post comments more regularly now since there is a semblance of stability in my life now :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey sam, how are things going? congrats on passing your exam, bet u must be feeling lighter!

ahh these insecurities...cant escape them, never know when they come creeping up on us, but they always do! it gets the best of us.
it was a very deep part sam, a lot to think about and take in. i think your absolutely right...we all get selfish, but its a matter of perspective. what i do may seem perfectly natural to me, but someone else may perceive me as selfish...but who are they to judge. no ones all wihte and all black, we all have our grey shades...you really drive home this point sam, well done! im really glad u wrote his part, its a good reality check, something i feel i need every once in a while lol
now they actual events on the update...i feel RM deserve some light as well. it wouldnt seem right to brush them off, so im glad ur giving them time in the parts.
must say i loved the scene between riddhima and muskaan! glad they talked about it and got it all out...now maybe muskaan will talk this out with rahul...and am looking forward to a confession ;)
poor armaan, just cant get the chance to short things out with anjali...and she too is avoiding! but i dont blame her, i think i would be scared to face him as well, knowing that their relationship may change after this one conversation! but i hope armaan gets to talk to her soon, poor guy is feeling so guilty about it!
atul armaan scene was great! the underlying meanings in their convo, followed by atul confirming AR arein love...was really nice :)
another thing i liked was rahul putting anjali straight! lol i could sense his irritation with her questions...and now she knows riddhima is most likely in love with armaan!
amazing part sam, am looking forward to the next one...post soon :)

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