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PArt 1 coming soon......few minutes....
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Here is the Part 1...Read it...See if you liked it.....


Part 1



There was a huge Mansion…a really huge…Why wont it be…as it had been made by killing so many people…so many Lives were devastated because of which this mansion was built…People would have cursed at the person who killed them…They might have had urge to Kill that Monster who was killing there Loving people…But no one can Lay a arm on them…As they were usually underground.There was speculation going around London…A speculation of a Ruthless Killer gang…They used to Kill any Sole Person who raises voice against them..No one can oppose them..as they didn't knew who they were…No one has ever seen the Killer Gang…Yes they were Ruthless..Killer Gang..Known as Mallik Gang…No one had ever seen any Member of Mallik Gang as they used to wear Mask..whenever they used to commit crime and live a Card…Yes a Playing card having Mallik Gang imprinted on it.

The mansion was situated away from the city life surrounded by trees, shrubs…so that no one can locate it…Inside the mansion there was a man inside a Dark room…He was looking at the Pictures in front of him..scattered on the Bed…Yes they were his Targets…His Preys…He was taking a Picture in his hand and remembering it in his mind..His Feature…Why was he taking their life…Ever thing…The Reason..doesnt matter to him…It was an order he has to Kill them…He takes a Photo…Photo of an Artist…Yes Kripa Gupta…He Has Just attacked her Two days Back..He hadn't killed her…She was only…her first Object whom…He hadn't killed…It was nagging him…Inside…but that was the order…Not to Kill her…He takes a Knife and Pokes it into her face…and laughs loudly…Madly… there were lots of people with guns loaded in there hands ready to pounce upon any lone sole any enemy…or even there partners if He would command them…Yes they had no mercy of his command…They listen to him…As they are afraid of him…more because it is his command…They have to follow it…or else..You are Dead…He was a ruthless man, He was just 23…He doesn't has any Emotion, He was never been loved, He was Emotionless..He was a Killer..who kills…and just Kills..Not having any mercy…He is a Ganster who kills people for Money..For revenge..even for fun…and if his Godfather commands him to Kill them…Yes his godfather..He was indeed his God…But does he believe in God…No…He is only his God…He only believes him..No one Else…That was Armaan…Armaan Mallik…He was Hot..having the body of Greek god..having a little stubble…his well defined jawline was a treat to any one to watch in his Godly face…But he was always undercover Killer…He has never been among Womens..never had received any attention from them…not even her mother…But he was a Living Monster as he never got the love he deserved in his Childhood…He was an orphan working on the streets…When Daniel had found him and raised him under his supervision removing any emotion of Love, Faithfulness, Kindness and build a Ruthless monster Armaan. Armaan was walking in the corridor..His hands in his Denim's which he was wearing…Looking at the security…It had been tightened recently..After they came to know of some Mission been carried against them…He orders…

"Michel…Take position at the Right Door…Look from there…No Mistakes…"

Micheal obeys his Master…He has to obey him..His word were Final…No body exept Godfather can oppose it….

" Benz..' You look at Air Trafic…Keep an Eye Up there…" He points to sky.." No Mistake…Otherwise you will be going there only…" He stroll whole villa checking the security and commanding the person to there right position.

He goes towards the weapon cabinet and takes out one Newly Built Laser Gun…which they had just imported fron…NY..He looks at it and smirks….I like it…He goes to the window..and makes a shoot…The Laser Pierces the Heart of a Man..Yes there Man…bas***d..Not Paying Attention…There is no place for Losers here…I like it….He loads himself with Knifes, Guns, Granites…and different explosives…He was visiting today..Yes His Godfather…

Door of the mansion opens and a man enter from the doorway…All turns to see him…They have never seen him like this…Never ever…How can it be possible…He was tensed…really tensed…For the first time they have seen him tensed…Yes first time…He walks inside trembling in mixed Anger and Fear…Fear of his Gang to be getting destroyed…His blood was boiling in rage, How did that Bitch…Shashank Gupta came to know about my Gang…How..?? Yes he was coming after meeting shashank…He was a undercover FBI officer who was working for finding about the gang which was hovering over London…Terrorizing people..Torturing them…Killing them…They were involved in all type of Crimes…But no one had any information about them…as they were never seen..only card was found at the spot…Theft, Drugs, Export, Extortion, Contract Killing and what not…??? He was determined to Catch them…to Disclose them…and he had found a link…A man from there gang…Yes there Man…Using Him against them. He had given him various clues..numerous one, He was too close…He was just about to catch the Godfather..yes the Godfather of the gang…Daniel Mallik…He was cunning, Ruthless…Yes he was just about to catch him when he shot him…Yes Daniel was too smart…He already came to knew that there was some man who was working against them, He just came to know it a day before…and he had killed him…yes there was no place for Losers..Backstabers…But now he was afraid for the first time…as shashank might have collected many assest against him…He has to destroy them…

" Dad…What happened to you…Why are you afraid…I have Never seen you like this…" Armaan looks at his Godfather's state…He has never seen him like this…He cant be scared…He is the Boss…He can kill anyone…

"Armaan..!!! Come with me …I have very important thing to tell you.." He takes armaan upstairs and revolves the antique statue right ways and a secret door opens ajar…He takes him into secret room…and closes the door sighing.

"Armaan..! You know about Shashank..That Undercover Basta*d who was Looking for us…He attacked me today…"

"What..!!! How dare he??…I would Kill him…I wont Leave him..I should have killed him that day only when we killed that Basta*d Anees…But you stopped me…I wont leave him now…!!" Armaan Glares at his Godfather…How dare he touch him…He would be dead in next hour …I wont leave him…

" Chill…Son..I have told you…Keep your temper in control…I will put you in trouble one day..and I don't want my child in trouble…You know that.." He glares at him.

" Dad…How can I keep myself cool??…when that man had a nerve to attack you??…Attack Mallik Gang??..Huh…I just cant!!!…I am going to kill him now…" He rolls his eyes and takes a step towards door…

"Hey! Stop…I did it already…You don't have any need to do any thing…Daniel never leaves anything…You knew that we had attacked her daughter once to threaten him…Huh.."

"Yes I know it…I had only done it…We haven't killed him…She was a Bitch…"

"Yes now you have to kill her…Go kill her…" He orders him..

"Yes sir..!!! I will do it now…" He responds to his command by saluting at him…His godfather…He was glad…He so wanted to kill her..

"Wait…This is something different…You don't only have to kill her…You have to look for the document that Gupta might have kept sealed somewhere in his room or may be other place…I know he had gained lot of information about us…I am having a feeling that..he came to know about our Location…all location…So you have to find that Documents first…"

"Okk..Dad ..I will do it…By tomorrow " He smirks and tries to leave.

"Hey …This isn't that easy..son…You will have to takle..FBI to get that document…they will also go after that document…You have to beat them…the best among them..that bas***ds daughter Riddhima…she is assigned this case to protect her…Most importantly you have to think how will you enter there…you have to be there in their confidence to gain access to those document and find where it is kept. "

"Hey Dad …Nothing is impossible for armaan…I will do the job…you just wait…" He smirks at him confident to complete the mission

"Your Mission will start tomorrow..Collect all the information and make the plan to takle…let me Know it…I will keep eye on you during mission…We have to find it…" He dismisses him…

Armaan leaves from there…

Armaan has collected every information about his mission…He will become an FBI…To complete the task…I am Coming…Beaware…

There was immense commotion in the FBI headquarter as there officer Gupta was found dead in the street near London Bridge…He was ruthlessly Killed and that same message…That Mallik Gang…

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Inside the conference room, There was a meeting held…There she was…. sitting at the corner in deep thought…she has just visited the morgue and seen state of his dad…He was gone…Left them…No she wasn't crying at loss of her father…She was Riddhima gupta…She was indeed Hot, Sexy, Arrogant officer…She wont mourn over his Death…Noo…I am strong…I wont cry…I will not Leave his Killer…That Mallik Gang…I will find them and Kill everyone…Dad had Told her he was too near them…But she didn't knew he wont be able to catch them…He was Murdered..ruthlesly..Now she has to complete the Misison to destroy them…That Mallik gang…She would Destroy them…She was Riddhima Gupta Hot, Perfect, Arrogant, Beautiful…but she doent know that aspect..as she never realizes it…Till now..?? I Will find them…and Kill one by one…

Sheron enters the conference room…He was the chief…He looks at Riddhima he Knows she wants this…But he will not Bulge Now…" Officers you all Might be knowing that why we are gathered here..so I wont waste time of that ruthless part that crime they have commited…But now we have a job at hand…We have to Find those Assets he has collected against them…How …??? We have to think..Where might have he Hidden it…??? He was to smart he never lets anyone know the proofs …he might have Hidden them …But where…That we have to find…Did you Got it…"

Everyone hears what there chief was saying. They all are mourning over the loss..But only she wasn't she was Determined..She had decided…Her Mind had started working…Now she Just wants to get that Cunning Kangaroo's Permission for this case…She knew she will Not be the one getting the case but she wants to handle it that too alone, as she cant afford mistake from any part…So she has to work alone…

"Chief…I would handle that case…I want to handle it…Alone…" She gets up from her seat and speaks.

"Riddhima…We know you want to handle it…But will you able to handle it…Its Personal case for you…You will have emotional involvement…I cant give it to you…Alone…I have Appointed another undercover officer…Armaan Khan….In fact it was appointed by Higher authorities…He will handle this case"

"Who is that…I want to handle it chief…I wont leave this one…It is too dear to me…" She pouts and glares at him.

"No there are secret orders that you will only Protect Miss Kripa Gupta…That case is more important and your full support is needed there…"

"But chief I can Handle Both case…I want it…at any cost…" she glares at him.

"Okkk…Riddhima I will Look at it…I Would put you as his assistant in the job…I mean Copartner…" He laughs sheepishly at her at mentioning assistant…I Wont allow her to win here otherwise she will get My job someday…She will only assist…

I will not leave them…Those bas***ds, Criminals…They Killed him…But First I Have to Look at this Secret Agent…Lets see who is that…She leaves from there to check on Kripa…She was protecting her since that Attack..Ohhh..Noo..Today was Her show…She leaves from there..

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Kripa was Getting ready for the show…She was an Artist…The Well known Kripa Gupta…The Actress…The Model..She was in immense Success this days..Her fan following was increasing Day by Day..She was a great Actress..She was Hot, Sexy, Gorgeous, Arrogant actor, She cant take anyone Disobey her…She was wearing her costume..Ready for her next performance..She was ready to Rock…To rock on stage…There was chaos in the Hall, People were Moving here and there eagerly waiting for there Role model, There Actress to arrive…They were shouting.."Kripa.."…"Kripa.." .They were roars of 'Kripa' across the stadium Hall..It was her Rock Concert…She was Performing in London.

Kripa was Fuming with rage in her room…She had to wait…How can He make her wait…How dare he…??? Kripa doesn't Wait's for anyone…Everyone waits for Kripa..Huh…!!! She gets up and roars into the Organizers Cabin…She explodes at him…

"Hey!!! What do you Think of Yourself..You are Making me Wait…??" She glares at him..

Organiser looks at him Horrified…Yes he was horrified he had heard many incidence when Kripa had bounced on organizers when she wasn't Happy with them…He was horrified seeing her expressions..

"Kripa Madam…Please Take a seat..I will explain…Plsss.." He makes her seat and tries to pacify her..

"Madam the Co-star With whom you were going to perform is Late..e He hasn't arrived yetYet.Yet.."

"What..??? You are Letting me wait for a Bluddy Co-Star..Who is Late…This is not Done..!! Who is that..Co-star…??" She is Aghast at his reply …She was made to wait for just a stupid Co-star..How can they…?? Kripa Never Waits..Never..

"He is a New-Comer …Had done Quite a Few show…He would be just arriving…" He answers her earnestly…

"What..??? ..A New Comer.."

"Yeah..He is Immensly Talented…" He was now scared by Looking at her expression…'Anthony You are Dead Today…You made her Mad…Now she wont Leave You..!!!

"You Scoundrell..!!! You are Making me Dance with a New-commer..Some Stupid..Jack-Ass New-Comer who Doesn't even comes on time…Like he is some Rock star…" She gets up from her seat and catches his collar and Shakes vigorously ready to Choke him…How Dare he Do This…Kripa Never Dances with a New-Comer..It's Against her reputation..She just cant..!!

"Madam..Plss Listen..He is Really Good..Plsss…Leave Me..!! " He request her horrified she was going to kill him…He would be 20th Victim of her violence…Plss..Save me…

"You Know..Kripa Never Dances with any Newcomer..Huh…Then Why did you do this..??" She hits him hard in his stomach…No one does this to kripa…

"Madam..Plss..Leave me…First Let Look at him…"

"No…I will never dance with any..Stupid, Jack-ass, Sucker, New comer…"

Suddenly the door of the Room opens and a man in his early Twenty's enter the cabin…He was the New-Comer Angad Khanna...He looks at them..they were Fighting..He looks at the state of the organizer who had chosen him…He was in the verge of Dying…He has to do Something…He goes towards her and separates him by catching her by her shoulder and rolling her straight into his arms…She falls into his arms…her head buried in his chest..She jerks up..and looks at him…'the man Angad-for her just a mere stranger now..but little she knew he will be her life in future'…..shutting her large mouth gaping at him…she gazes into his deep blue hazel eyes…those eyes in which she can drown herself at any moment, Standing in front of her was Angad, the Greek god himself with his well build 6'2" figure with muscular chest looked utterly suave and handsome in a blue designer wears and those Baggy jeans. A diamond-studded silverlined watch adorned his manly wrist. His long dark hair waving in the direction of wind was brushed back for the sleek looking as a perfect hunk ready for hunting…He was Really Handsome…she looks at him…'He is Hot..' She mouthed to herself…she will have fun with him…But who is he…?? Why is he looking like this…and How dare he Touch me…Pull me…All good thoughts vanished…anger blazed in her eyes…

Angad eyed the girl who he had taken into him arms just now..she was indeed beautiful…those chocolate brown eyes which are eying him with confusion having clouds of emotion in them…he observes her emotion changing with every moment..she seems in deep thoughts..he thinks why is she confused…??her figure was just perfect as any other chick with whom he goes out with but she wasn't those types …She was beauty queen…Yes she was Kripa Gupta…the rock star..She was wearing red Halter neck dress..She was ready for the Dance…and here he was late.. But there is some thing in her which was forcing him towards her..her face was epitome displaying a sheepish cat..That ruthless actress Kripa Gupta..Who never fails…she was arrogant…Just like him…A man hunt…Yes she was ..He knows it..He had heard it…but he was able to see through that face there was something different in her…She wasn't the one she shows…He ponders over it for some moment…yes he can see that pure innocence inside those dark brown eyes looking at him…she had little make-up on her cheeks with slight Blush..applied upon…'her hair were plane silky…those jasmine fragnance were making his senses go wild..he was developing some uneasy feeling…which he choose to ruthlessly discard…suddenly some voice broke him from his task….

"Hey..Stupid will you live me…??" She glares at him…feeling uneasy with his constant stares.

"Ooh…Sorry…!!!" He leaves her grinning sheepishly at her..

"How dare you touch me..Huh…??" No one…means no one can touch her …without herconcent..and here ..he took her into his arm…How can he..??

"If I wouldn't if I don't have to stop you …You would have killed him…!!" He glares at her..he was saving her from attempting a crime…

"Shut-up…!! No one answers back to Kripa…Got that…??Who are you…??"

"I am Angad…Angad Khanna.." He smirks at her…Forwarding his hand..to shake..

She looks at him…Stupid..I will not touch his hand…I am Kripa..Kripa Gupta..Who is he…??

"Who Angad…??What are you doing here..??"

"I am the new artist…Here to perform with you…!!" He Winks at her..taking his hand back…shoving it through his hair…She is Tough…Tough to crack…

"You…!!!! You are that stupid Jerk…because of whom…Kripa had to wait..Huh…You are a new artist and making the star to wait..Huh…Good start…Angad…."

He just laughs sheepishly at her…She was just amazing her sense of humor was great…He was loving it..!!!

"Now Just Stop laughing…You Scum-Bag-Suckker…" She glares at him…How can he laugh at me…He will learn what Kripa is…Huh..

"Now..If you want to work with me…you have to go according to my Rules…Huh…"

"Okkk…Miss Kripa..as you say…"

"Okk…So never be Late next time…Kripa hates people..Who aren't Diciplined..!!! " She growls at him…"Rest you will know…as the concert progresses…Go and get ready…Let me see..How are you….???" She dismisses him….

Huh…Miss ATTITUDE…I Will show her what Angad Khanna is..!!!!!!

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Armaan was ready…He was ready on his Mission..This was the first part…He has to find about Armaan Khan..And see Him…Closely…Hmm…Mr Khan…You are Gone…Armaan is oming…to Kill you…He Laughs Loudly…and them takes two phograph and circles them with the knife in his hand and pokes the knife into the photo….Miss Gupta…I am Coming…Coming to meet you…As Your Agent…Miss Riddhima Gupta..

The end…


Here read the part 1.....Do leave a comment...

Here is my other fanfic...The Contract Marraige...Do look at it....If you lke it...Link.....

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1117116
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg it is amazing yaar.................
i really liked it.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
thanks for the pm
gr8 start
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey wow awsome intro and the first part was really good... continue soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks for the comment sujata...😃

Rohit
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute_unknown_fr

omg it is amazing yaar.................

i really liked it.........




Glad you liked it....😃

Will update soon....😳

Rohit
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: susha11

hey
thanks for the pm
gr8 start




Thanks for the comment

Rohit
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sameira-90

hey wow awsome intro and the first part was really good... continue soon..




Glad you liked it

Will update soon...😉
Rohit
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Posted: 16 years ago
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waoh🤗 its really an awesome one⭐️ so Armaan is going to take palace of Armaan Khan cool😍 & Angad entry is awesome one😛😛 so cute plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉


"My heart says that you like me,
My eyes says that you feel something for me,
My mind says that you think of me,
But till now you are quiet…"






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