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@-midnightsun-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#951

that was jus superb kiran.... totally nerveracking... loved it!!!

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komal793

@komal793

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Posted: 16 years ago

#952

heyyyy kiran di
ur last part was great.it just brougt tears 2 my eyes.pls continue soon.and if possible dont end this ff as i am ver much addicted 2 it.

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tvshowgirl

@tvshowgirl

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Posted: 16 years ago

#953

hey guys-- are u commeting on part 77 still or did she post another part lol? im confused...

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Garima Mathur

@Ridzigarima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#954

Yipee ... atlastmy dearest Kiran di has updated ... and ... and ... and what a part it was! I wish I could give you hugs ... but chalo koi baat nahi ... you don't know how beautiful you write ... nahi sriously you don't kow that ... its a perfect FF ... just the perfect ... I wish I could se this much excellence in DMG also and Hey ... yeh FF end karne ki baat kaha se beech mein aagayi huh?? Don't you dare ending this!! Do definatley take your time ... but don't end the most amazing FF I've ever seen or readed in my entire life! and you know I really liked these lines:

His eyes smarted with tears as he looked over at the garden, and he could relive the moments of seeing Emaan running around, barefoot, squealing with happiness, her favorite teddy securely under her arm. And he saw himself, laughing and screaming as they both showered each other with water. Involuntarily, a smile adorned his face as he gulped, and the pseudo Emaan came running upto him, hiding behind him, squealing to save her from "bhai''.

That was really sweet ... I'm glad I read this FF ... do post a part during the weekend ... as I'mdearly waiting for Vinay Mallik's response ... so will see you soon .. in the 5th thread ... I hope! and now I'm dead sleepy ... will catch this later!

Buh-Bye,

Garima.

Edited by Ridzigarima - 16 years ago

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tvshowgirl

@tvshowgirl

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Posted: 16 years ago

#955

omygod di..just read it sorry was really confused bout the update and al...wow....

i hate vinay malik omygosh! but hes better htan that idot billy at least, thats just stupid. at least thsi character brings suspense.

i got tears in my eyes literally. you are such an awesome writier i hope you majorly take this fact into consideration

oh and PLEASE DONT END THE FANFIC PLEASE

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Meha_dmg

@Meha_dmg

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#956

Hi Kiran di It was an awesome part 👏.......... it was emotinal too 😭........ eagerly waiting to read the next part........ please update soon.......

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Surbhi_rox

@Surbhi_rox

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#957

wow!! superb!! awesome!! gr8 part di, luved it loads!!

cn't see armaan in so much pain!! feeling so sad for him!

how cn a father be so cruel dat too for his own son??

waiting eagerly for d next part!

so, nikki saved armaan, now wat is ridz gonna do when ammy comes back??? hope it won't create more problems between dem!

kaash shashank jaldi seh maan jaaye!

n AA story is moving on, luving it on!!

continue asap!!

-luv sanjana

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Pragati

@-Bubbles-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#958

suniye..zara dekhiye Kiran di..
main aapse shama maangti hoon ki maine itne dino se apke iss FF par comment nahi kiya..par mera iss baar apse vaada hai ki apke agle update par ek bohot lamba comment karoongi..
par uske liye apko update krna padega na..please please please jaldi update kariyega,hum sab intezaar kar rahe hain..hume janana hai ki aage bechare humare Armaan ke saath uske pitaji kya karte hain..

apki FF ki ek chahne wali,
Pragati😊

p.s.sorry for the whole 'hindi ki barsaat' above, im suffering from the KSG disease of saying 'suniye...' ever since he said that in JDJ😉!!!!
anyway,please update soon!!
(no pressure,though!😉)

Edited by ksgaddict - 16 years ago