The Contract Marriage[AR]PT1-6Edited13/4 Notepg150 - Page 8

Originally posted by: Sterva

reserved *edited*

heyyy i am 1st to comment for the 1st time!!!!

waow!!! dat was gr8, thier 1st kiss😳

btw at d end i was a bit confused😕 i didn't quite understand wat happened

but i guess u will make it clear in d nxt part....

i am waiting eagerly fo d nxt part. 😃

Originally posted by: kashishk

Hey dear,
The part was awesome, I completely loved.
Poor Ammi is in coma, I hope ridzi comes back soon.
I really want to know what is the better Ammi says If you Liked him soo much then, Why did you make me love you why'??.
I really want to know their past and of course want to see them together soon forever.
U r one of the best writer man.
Pls pls pls continue soon and thnx a ton for the PM.

Kashish

Originally posted by: SparklingDaYs

Hey kashish thanx for loving the part...I also liked it while writig it....

yeah...he is ion comma...Indeed in ventilartor his heart has stopped...😲😲😲

You want to know the main part....Patience dear...Wait..Long wait....Every thing will enfold...😆😆😆

yeah Let us see they will come together or not..🥱🥱

Love
Rohit

Originally posted by: kashishk

Don't say that the ventilator will stop. Never in my worse of worse dream.

Ur taking about patience I have 100% of inpatience.

Of course I want the main part which I hope u'll unfold soon.

Don't say that let see if they will be together or not, it will be a nightmare if they r not together.

Continue soon.

Kashish

Originally posted by: SparklingDaYs

Hey even...I dont know what will happen i am just writing on spots...I have chaged my post at last minute..changin my the story..😆😆😉i had continued the flashbacks only..

I didnt wrote present part...armie rona dhona ...badme add kiya..😉😉

Last moment mein add akiya...Ammie ko coma mein bhejne...Hahaha....😆
😆
So aage kya hoga ...Guess...Even I will Guess...!!!😳

Originally posted by: kashishk

Hey man,
In this case we r the some I too wrote on the spot.

Bechare Ammi ko last moment per coma mein bejh diya yaar, mere dil hi tod diya.

Hope u'll guess soon something nice and wrote soon one thing is sure their is huge misunderstanding or secret. Which I think u r guessing what it can be.

(I know how it went sometimes, don't know if it's some with u, u r sleeping and in ur dreams u r thinking about ur FF what to write in the next part😆. I know I am weird)

Love
Kashish😊

Originally posted by: SparklingDaYs

Yeah...kashish some thing like that....

Sleeping and guessing😲😲

Neways i have wroted next part half..infact almost done...will see what too add tommorrow....

AAbhi sleeping and Thinking time....Byee...🥱
🥱
Love
Rohit...

😲

dat was amazing!!!