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Posted: 16 years ago
#71
u write rely gud...
get well soon sweety...w8in 4 ur part😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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NICE PART!!!!!!!!!!!!! GET WELL SOON...TAKE CARE........LOL.. DO PM ME
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73

Ok guys' First of all ii am very sorry for the delay and from now on this ff will no longer be said in Muskaan and Rahul's POV.

PART 6

"Ouch!" Rahul screamed as his mom applied the ice packs on his left arm.

"Kisne kaha ta gym mein jaake training karne ke liye" His mom shouted at him, blowing on his bruise. "Dekho kitni chot lagaye hai tujhko" Rahul stood uo, more like jump up in pain.

"Momma plz dard hota hai" He rubbed his arm in pain pouting his lips.

"Rahul mard ho toh mard ke tarha is dad ko saho"...His mom glared at him. "Yahi toh baat hai Maa, mein mard nahin hoon"

His mother's eyes shot up. "Kya?"

>>

Muskaan's eyes flickered as the suns rays beamed through the curtains. Her arms were resting on her pillow as she fidgeted left and right.

"Uff aaj kitni garmi hai"

She pushed away hr quilt still fidgeting trying to find a cool place on the bed. She pushed away the locks of hair behind her ear.

"Good Morning Frizzy Hair" Ridzii enterd the room holding a big mug of coffee. "Chal utt jogging pe jaan hai"...

"Ridzii aaj weekend hai"... She answered to then find Riddhima glaring at her. She put her head back down.

"Muskaan aaj k din ii don't wanna throw water on you". Muskaan's head shot up. Her hair covering her face looking like a ghost. "You wouldn't?"...

"Suit yourself" A chuckling Riddhima left the room, leaving the mug of coffee on the side table.

>>

"Nahin mein nai askati" Rahul was talking on the phone. He walked towards his cupboard getting out his favourite blue shirt. "Jee nahin". He buttoned up his shirt. "Namaste" Rahul drank his orange juice and left the house.

"God weekend pe bhi kaam hai" He started his car driving down the deserted lanes of Forks. "I Miss You Muskii" Rahul looked out of the window a tear escaping his eyes. The lights went red. The cars all stopped. It was like a crossroad. Rahul once again looked out of the window. Something caught his eyes. He opened the windows to take a better look. There on the other side of the road was a boy and girl. She was hitting him and he was retaliating. It was sort of like a cat fight. He laughed as they were like a duplicate of what he and Muskaan were when they were young.

*BEEP**BEEP*

The cars behind horned at Rahul. The lights were now green and his car was still in the same position as before. He turned to look at them a final time to then drive down the memory lanes of his childhood.

***Flashback***

"Rahul ball phek"Muskaan screeched.

"Muskaan mein yaha per s latakraha hoon aur tujhe ball ki pari hai?"He shouted looking at Muskaan laughing her head off. "Accha baba theek hai haat de" Muskaan helped Rahul get down.

"Sorry Muskaan mein tera ball nai la payi" Rahul pouted his lips and held his ears.

"Yaar tu bhi kamal karta hai" Muskaan went upto him embracing him. "Tumhare liye toh ball kya puri duniya ko chod diya toh kum" There was silence for a minute or two. "NAA" muskaan stuck her tongue out at Rahul and started to run.

"Tu kabhi nahin badlegi" Rahul began to chase after her into the house.

Sorry for the delay. I know this part was rubbish but ii didn't want to stop writing for ya'll. Plz bare with me. I am very busy with exams.

<3

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Posted: 16 years ago
#74
It was cute and good luck with your exams!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
awww...cute part feels really nice to read ur FF after a long time ....thanks a ton for ur Pm....cont soon and Pm me when u update ....all the best for xams👍🏼
With Love
Saba
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76
awww very cute part...and y didn't u stop pming me?...please om me next time u update...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: i-love-dr.rahul

awww very cute part...and y didn't u stop pming me?...please om me next time u update...

Do u know what ? It said ur pm's have exceeded the limits thats why it didnt cme throiug
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice part honey... Thanks for the pm!! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: DMG4EVER

Do u know what ? It said ur pm's have exceeded the limits thats why it didnt cme throiug



ohhh lol...welll it's not full yet...anyways tthank u for trying..and please pm next time
Edited by i-love-dr.rahul - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#80

Very nice part!!

good job.....continue soon!
thanks for the pm
-Simran

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