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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: loyal-kashian


mujhe khud nahi pata hai ki, maine kitne baar yeh ff padha hai. i read it like my bed time story book. i read all the parts every night. even today, i just did the same and came back to reply here. what should i say about this ff ?
let me be frank. i always look for the fan fictions, which have a perfect and a happy story and a perfect and a happy ending without any cliff hangers.
i love the way your story progressed. waise, i can wait for any end of time, to read your epilogue. love your fan fiction a lot and you deserve this love.
seriously. i am addicted to your fan fiction. and let me be true.
i love this fan fiction equally to how much i love kash and kash are my life.
hats off for the great job done di. love you so much and may god bless you for giving us such a nice fan fiction and for being such a great friend.

loads of love
deepu 😃

Deepu I love you very much............. i have never expected that someone wud realy re read me FF as much as u do this is just amazing thanxs for making me feel gr8 about my FF thanxs a lot for this gr8 coments nruti
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Posted: 15 years ago
nruti di..
great ending..
ammy must b sooo happy becuz ridz gave him twins.. really sweet and cute!
gr8 job
HiNaL
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nruti di...fabulous ending dear👏
just luvd it
wowww AR got twins...aww its so blissful
so glad to see tat armaan got his complete family now
wish to see more awesome ff's frm u soon




Edited by riddhima1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nruti.....hw r u.......anyways that was a fabulous update...
👏
......hats off to u........will really miss this ff........thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago




wow.. aaj toh mein believe hi nahi kar sakti.
aaj aap ne iss fan fiction ke epilogue lika hai.
you must know di. aaj mein kitni khush hoon.


poore on mein party kar rahi hoon aap ke part padne ke baad.

to be frank, hmm.. let me tell you..
the epilogue was not worth the wait.. but
more worthier as compared to the time i waited for



oh my god. you are so fabulous di.
i really love the way you make the story carry on.

i am head over heels in love with each and every line of the epilogue


and today, since it is the last part, i would like to give my
favourite line in each and every episode from the past.

character sketch - riddhima shashank gupta

she even wrote her term paper on him

this line was so adorable. i mean.. she wrote HER term
paper on him. bass.. i was like.. awww. thats so sweet.

character sketch - armaan mallik

he is not like any other other people who get all egoistic when
they got popularity n money at very early age

this is another heart touching line. that was a nice
thing to hear about armaan jaanu. it is very rare that,
armaan is portrayed as a positive character with all the
positive things happening in his life. i really love it.
and i would like to thank you for showing armaan in the
positive side of the story and at the end of the day,
good to see that, his heart is not recovered from guilt.
love you loads n loads n loads armaan. you are soooo sweet.

episode one

i really love this concept of getting dreams of armaan. i mean,
it is so very unique. the heart touching line is....

for me u r like my janat the sole reason for me to stay alive Ridhima

oh my god. i can just imagine armaan telling that. awww.
and i bet. they are definitely gonna look adorable.

arjun, how many times do I have to tell you to call me ARMAAN
and not sir I heat it when you do that I know you are my PA
but to me you are my friend also let it be like that


haaye mein mar jaawan. armaan, ek na ek din,
tumhare yeh saare adayein mere jaan uthalenge 😉
hats off to armaan's kindness. he is simply adorable in your FF.

episode two

Please Miss Gupta don't make me feel to old I m still a
bachelor so please call me armaan


yaar.. yeh waali toh awesome hai..
chak de phatte.. mujhe bohot passand aaya hai.

hehe.. armaan ko apni age ki yaad aagayi..
and that too in the case of riddhima. so sweet.

bachelor ji, dont worry. kuch hi dinon mein aap
shaadi shuda ho jayenge... 😆😆😆

no sir I think that al the candidat that u have interviwed so far r not at al gud they don't have one thing that Mr arjun has which is ur trust I mean u cant just put anyone as ur VP a VP shud b the man or female who u truse the most n to my view there is no one better then Mr arjun beside after putting mr arjun as ur VP I trly don't think that u need anyone else coz he is the best u have n with that u want need any other

waah riddhu.. kya kamaal ke brains hai yaar...
mein bhi yeh saare baatein sun ke, talli ho gayi hoon.
and i am completely impressed with positive vibes flowing.
good analysis. and you know. you are very brainy yaar.. iss FF mein.

and thank you so much nruti di. for the portraying of riddhima's character. and these lines are simply fantabulous.

episode three

In this 2 days armaan just cud not stop thinking about ridhima.

in my words, i can say that, this line is like a lamp,
creating a base and helping the other parts glow bright.
it is like a foundation to the budding love story.

itna bhi socho mat armaan. woh toh teri hi hai.

She was about to fall on the ground but armaan
hold her from her waist n stared at her


oh my god. ab toh mere poore ke poore try kar rahi hoon.
mein poore FF se lines ko copy paste karte hue hi,
apne dream land ko visit karne lag gayi hoon. 😆

control yaar control.. khud ko kho jaane se, control karna chahiye.

The first page had his picture on it n under the pic it wariten with red ink "ARMAAN MALIK MY SOLE DESIRE" undernith of it was the name of the owner of the diary "RIDHIMA GUPTA"

waah bhai waah.. doosron ki diary padna achcha baat nahi hai.
but armaan, you have all the rights to read riddhima's diary.
so, no worries at all. i really love that, he read her diary.
jhakkas aur kamaal idea nruti di 😃


episode four

Ar: armaan u have fall in love with her the time u laid ur eyes on her she is the girl that will keep u happy for rest of ur life n u think that this is al just atrection do u know how happy u look when u talk about her or even thibk about her u just brok al ur personel n profesnel rules for her it soooooo simple that she has tht effect on u that u shud have for the one u love now tell me armaan how many females have u meet so far??

A: many

Ar: right n many of them were very famous celabrities n also few sexy models right

A: ya

Ar: then how come u never paid attention to them n now suddenly after meeting ridhima u r al changed in a gud way hun n also u never ever cared to buy a pracious gift for any one but her hun tell me why u want to do that?? Armaan this is not attraction this is love at firsdt sight''''

A: I think u r right I do love her no wonder I always think about her n cant sleep at nights n cant focuse on anything besid her'''..


i am in love with the whole convo yaar. it is amazing.


r u serous n what will u tell her ho ridhima her eu go this is our pustana kada its urs from now on come on she will defenatly''


yeh arjun bhi na.. funny guy.. hehe.. sarcastically baat karna koi iss se seekhe. this dialogue is awesome. i love it a lot yaar..

the highlight dialogue in this episode is:

I have to get ready to b with my to b wife

this dialogue is my 1st favourite dialogue in the whole FF

and i give a 5 star rating to this dialogue

⭐️


⭐️episode five

were u thinking on how hot I m looking right or something else

haaye.. this is so sweet. hahaha.. armaan.. badmash. but i am sure that, she will be blushing during that time. 😆

M: oye ridhima main na tere tarah pagl ho gay hun main abhi tere living room main armaan malik ko dekha tere parents se bat karta hua ha ha ha

this is my second favourite line from the whole of the fan fiction.

in this case I agree with u ridhima I belive the same that's y I am not married yet I have not found that perfect girl for me yet

(In his thought but now my wait is over after finding u ridhima)

⭐️


episode six

Armaa n gave out a lil smill bring his hand forward n v can see he had a hug pice of cake in his hand n in no time he rubed it all over her face like appling a lotion on the face


super fabulous. this makes me remember the badla waali episode in lonavela from the original dill mill gayye track. awesome.

👏

A: coz I don't know when i see her I just cant say anything

Ar: I u cant say anuthing but u can wink at her right

this is so nice yaar.. dii.. i am so in love with arjun- armaa's dialogues, their friendship and everything about them. they are so very adorable and are like true friends....


episode seven

Arjun was having his gala time seeing THE ARMAAN MALIK acting al crezzy but loves's other name is also crazy

natkhat arjun.. 😉


The vakantines day was coming close but for armaan it was way to far away he tried to talk to ridhima over the phone but everytime dial her number he wud just eather cut it or wud stay mum on hering her voice to his luck whenever he called her it said privet number on her cell so she cud not say who was actuly calling her for her the world was very good she happy by only seeing him in her drems but she was unaware of the fact that her beautiful face had done the damage to ARMAAN MAILK's heart for armaan it was a new n very nice felling of falling in love or actuly u cud say already in the love felling he wud go to his office but wud not b able ot do the work n wud only keep on staring at ridhima's picture that he had tsaken from the party secretly

The office ppl were on the verj to call the mantel hospital on finding their boss aka ARMAAN MALIK doing al the possible crezzy thing that he cud. But thanxs to arjun he was saved

i can rate this as 1000 stars... i keep reading this paragraph again and again. madly in love with this paragraph. awesome. 👏


For armaan he did that on purpose they were going no where but just needed to touch her for some reason n he got the best one to hold her hand during this dragging to parking lot he promished him slef ot hold this hand only till his last breath he knew she was stating at him n he also knew that she felt the same current that he felt when ever he touched her

i can rate this as 1000 stars too... 👏


armaan u know ur a fool she will not understand this n u might have ot reapet this...

bohot achcha realization hai armaan. love it.


episode eight

ridhima when v fall in love we just fall in love we dont see if the person that i m falling in love is a rich or poor or anything for that matter and this types of thing does not come in the word love its just a love........


sooo adorable yaar.. i love you for this line nruti di


episode nine

A: "Ridhhima.. tumse milne ke pehle maine kabhi pyaar ke baare mein socha bhi nahi thha.. lekin jabse tumhe dekha hai main tumhare baare mein hi sochta hoon.. I've started to fall in love you deeper with each passing minute.. mere paas sab kuch thha sirf pyaar nahi thha.. lekin ab vo bhi hai.. main aaj inn sab ke saamne kehta hoon.. Ridhhima I Love You.. You Really Mean More Than My Life to Me.. (he appered in front of her nd got on his knees putting forward the ring) WILL YOU BE KIND ENOUGH TO MARRY ME ND MAKE ME THE MOST LUCKIEST MAN IN THIS WORLD.. I PROMISE TO GIVE THE WORLD.."

Every one was shoked as hell coz it was so not what they had imgine to their valantine party will be all the college stidents ans ridhima;s friend new that armaan malik was coming to the party and that to with ridhima but now in their wild dream they had thought that they will be seeing armaan malik the tycon himself sitting on his knees nad proposing to ridhima

Ridhhima was also too shocked to say anything at the moment.. she just stared at him.. she sensed the love nd honesty in his voice.. she had tears in her eyes.. never had she imagined her biggest dream to get fulfilled so soon.. she looked at the ring.. It was a beautiful blue saphhire nd diamond ring..

R: (whispered) YES

the room was filled with cheers nd applause.. everyone in the hall agine got the shoke on hering yes from her but they all were very happy to their love and happiness

Armaan carefully put the ring in her finger nd kissed her hand warmly.. the kiss gave her goosebumps nd she blushed to the core.. he then got up from his knees and pulled her into a comforting hug

R: (whispered) "this was the best surprise I've ever got Armaan.. I Love You.."

Those three words from her made him fly.. he felt himself floating nd reaching the heaven.. he lightly pinched himself secretly yo confirm if it was real or his dream.. but no it was his dream that came true with his love in his arms..


love the whole thing yaar. no words. tum hi samajh sakti ho ab. ki mujhe yeh itna kyun passand hai. pata hai na.. 😳


episode ten

after our marrige it will b only my way or highway (he said that with a noty smill and winked at her at end)

PERSONEL ASSISTANT u know what i mean right..............

ridhima SWETART i think u are supose to hid ur face on my chest not the shoulder

hmm... i think, i will rate these lines

1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000

stars.. no problem na.. 😆


hmm.. and about the epilogue... kya kahoon..

it is soooo good that, mein apne hosh kho chuki hoon...


i am completely in love with it di..


but the fan fiction in no more na 😭


but a small request to you..


please do write a one shot for us, whenever you find time and with a concept of armaan as a business man and falls in love with his PA riddhima. it would be worth reading from you.


i really love your one shots too. they are fantabulous.


and last but not the least.. thanks a lot for dedicating the epilogue to me. seriously speaking. it really means a lot to me.


well, that is it for now. will go back to read everything again and yeah.. agar kuch aur bhi bolne lagi hoon toh, i will leave another comment under your post. hehe.. iss tarah hai toh,


i will have to comment atleast once in every 90 days.. warna yeh close hojayegi.. 😆 love you and this FF a lot and will miss it a lot.


-- deepu --

Edited by loyal-kashian - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
ver nice.. epi... Nruti ...
Loved it...
and yea i love the ending part... for sure...
though the romance was hot and sizzling, Lamo0
Thanks for the pm
Love you
Maha
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Posted: 15 years ago
grt epliouge really goood
tnx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nruti di, i edited my comment.

-- deepu --
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey just caught up with ur ff...Its too lovely story. I loved each nd every part of this ff nd its beautifully written.

Mind-blowing story

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Posted: 15 years ago
AUSOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE


KYA BAAT HAI YAAR

AR.............TUNE AR FF MAST LIKHA HAI

I HOPE U REMEMBER ME

AGAR NAHI THN THN ..TERA MURDER TOH NAHI KAR SAKTI PAR TUJHE BOHUT CURSE ZARUR KARUNGI NAKAMIIIIII


CHAL TC
BYE
CYA

LOVE
GUESS IT

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