*Mayur married...(f-f)* note pg21 and 7

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tehzeeb25

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Posted: 16 years ago

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hi! gyus i just read this ff & i loved it ... it is gr8888888 . hats of to the riters . it is just faulass ... update soon plezzzzzzz .

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Posted: 16 years ago

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can i also post here???? please tell me naa i mean can i also post a part here???? main iss ff ki silent reader hoon and i would dfeffo want to give this sort of writing a chance

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Posted: 16 years ago

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@Lekha -Ya, I suppose! :D Cause, here everyone posts! No 1 is fixed as such!

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Preethi

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Posted: 16 years ago

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when the next post is updated please Pm me. I am really enjoying it...

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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

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Posted: 16 years ago

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i jst finished reading all the parts from the start and i love everyone of them plz continue soon and pm me if u can btw im mishu

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mayur-premeer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#276

this is toooooooo cute i finished reading it all and i loved its tooooooooo nice how its written😃

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minalpink100

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Posted: 16 years ago

#277

hello friends thanks for u r compliments tomorrow i will update next part 😊

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prerna_agrawal

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Posted: 16 years ago

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minal...plz dear pm me when u update it....can't wait for the song!!....

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Swati

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Posted: 16 years ago

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minal dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its been so long dat u hav updated.....plzzzz yaar ab 1 longwala update kar de na...plzzzzzzzzz...waiting n waiting 4 it yaar..... 🤔 n plz dear plz pm me if possible,its been ages dat u hv updated dear,..
tk cr...god bless u re....
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... 🤗

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minalpink100

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Posted: 16 years ago

#280

hi friends thank for u r all support for me now i m continuing next part

MAYANK & NUPUR BOTH CAME TO HALL EVEN MAA ALSO READY

maa:- nupur tum aaj bahut sundar lag rahi hu kisiki nazar na lage meri beti ko

nupur:- with cute smile thanks aunty aur aap bhi

mayank :- are dono maa beti ek dusare ko tarif karege to mujhe kaun tarif karega

maa:- chinta mat karo aaj tum bhi bahut achhe lag rahe ho aur tumare chehre par to papa banne kei khushi kitna chamak raha hai kya bolu

mayank:- maa tum bi na

all r smile

mayank :- ab chale

all r reached to engagement function hall

wn they reached smarat is thr infront of the door

NEXT SCENE (SECOND)

samrat:- ayiye mayank & nupur aap itne late kyun kiye sab tumhara hi wait kar rahe hai & namste aunty

mom:- namste beta

mayank :- kya karu meri pyari biwi itne jaldi tayar ho gaye kya karu

nupur:- mayank with angry eyes

maa:- samrat mayank bhi kam nahi hai

mayank:- tum hamesha tumari pyari beti(bahu) ko support karti ho with smile mujhe ye bahut achha lagata hai

nupur:- ho to meri aunty(maa) hai o samjhe akdu

both nupur & maa go infront of house

nupur going slowly also she keep one hand in her stomach

samrat:- mayank nupur ko dekhi kya pehle aise thi ise gumati thi idar se udar udar se idar ab dekho itni slow chalti hai aur itna taklif bhi utathi hai na

mayank :- ha tum tik kehte ho bechari kabhi kabhi usko dekke mujhe bahut taklif hoti hai mujhe khush karne ke liye o itna taklif sehna rahi hai me bhi jitna o utna help karti hu

samrat :- o to tik hai kyunki tum bhi 50% pertner ho na fir 😉 ha ha ha

mayank:- ye kuch jyada ho gaya ab andar chale

NEXT SCENE (THIRD)

BOTH ARRMY & RHEA COME TO HALL RING EXCHANGING OVER

FINALLY ALL ARE HAPPY & ARRMY & RHEA COME TOWARDS MAYANK & NUPUR & TOLD

ARRMY:- thanks mayank & nupur agar tum dono nahi hote hum kabhi sath nahi hote

rhea:- u r right rhea

mayank:- ise koi bat nahi hamare hath me jitna ho sakta tha hamne kiye isme thanks wali koi bat nahi

nupur:- ha mayank tik keh raha hai aaj tumare life ka bahut khas din enjoy karo

arrmy:- ya sure

gunjan came towards nupur & mayank

gunjan:- di aaj tum bahut achhi lag rahi hu

nupur:- thanks tum bhi

mayank :- wife ho to kiska

gunjan :- o to hai jiju par di ho to kiski

achha chale ab dance karte hai thoda

nupur:- nahi gunjan mujhe doctor ne mana kiya hai dance karne ke liye

mayank:- ha gunjan tum sab karo na hum idar dekke enjoy karte hai

gunjan :- achha atleast jiju aap to ajayiye

nupur:- jao na mayank tum dance karo me idar se hi dekti hu

mayank:- nahi nupur nahi ahi to me bhi nahi jaunga 50% partne hu na

both gunjan mayank nupur smiled

gunjan:- tik ahi jiju gunjan gone

nupur:- tumhe jana tha na dance ke liye mere liye tum kyun choda

mayank:- meri pyari biwi tumhe dance kitni pasand hai me janta hu agar tum hamare bachhe ke liye ye sab chod sakte ho me bhi tumare liye tumare sath hamesha dedunga kabhi akela nahi chodunga dear

nupur:- with tears me bahut lucky hu mujhe tumare jaise sathi mila

mayank:- mat ro tumare ankho me me kabhi asu nahi dek sakta

mayank clean her tears & give one kiss to nupur forehead

nupur:- mayank sab deklenge

mayank:- dekne do me meri biwi ko kiss kiya kisi aur ko to nahi

nupur:- hmmmmm tum bina 😊

SONG SEQUENCE

RHEA:- BOLE CHUDIYAN BOLE KANGANA HAYE ME HOGAYI TERE SAJNA

GUNJAN & RHEA -LEJJA LEJJA LEJJA

RHEA & GUNJAN :- BOLE CHUDIYAN BOLE KANGANA HAYE ME HOGAYI TERE SAJNA

TERE BINJIYO NAIYO LAGADA ME TO MARGAYI YA

LEJJA LEJJA SONIYO LEJJA LEJJA

ARRMY & SAMRAT:-BOLE CHUDIYAN BOLE KANGANA HAYE ME HOGAYI TERE SAJNA

TERE BINJIYO NAIYO LAGADA ME TO MARJA VA

LEJJA LEJJA SONIYO LEJJA LEJJA

MUSIC BOTH MAYANK & NUPUR ENJOYING NUPUR VERY EAGERLY WATCHING THAT DANCE MAYANK SAW

RHEA:-AREY HAI MARJAWA MARJAWA TERE BIN AB TUMERI RAATE KATI SARE YE DIN

BAS TUJKO PUKARA KARE MERI BINDIYA ISHARE KARE

ARRMY:-LASKARA LASKARA TERI BINDIYA LASKARA ISE CHAMKE JISE CHAMKE JAISE CHANDKI SITARA

GUNJAN:-OOOOOOOOOO MERI PAYAL BULAYI TUJHE JO RUTHE MANAYI TUJHE O SAJAN JI HA SAJAN JI TUMNE SAMJO MERI BAT KO

SAMRAT:-

TERE BINJIYO NAIYO LAGADA ME TO MARJA VA

LEJJA LEJJA SONIYO LEJJA LEJJA

MUSIC MAYANK NUPUR KO UTAKE THODA EASY STEP ME DANCE KARTA START KARTA HAI NUPUR IS VERY HAPPY MAYANK ALSO DONT WANT DISCOURAGE THATS HE IS DOING VERY ESY STEP OTHER WISE SIMPLY STNDING ONLY HANDS FACE MOMENTS ARE THERE

NUPUR:- APNI MANG SUHAGAN HO SANG HAMESHA SAJAN HO

RHEA & GUNJAN :- AKE MERI DUNIYA ME WAPAS NA JANA CHEHARA BAND KE MAHI TU MERI GHAR A NA

MAYANK & ARRMY & SMARAT:- OYE SONI KITTI SONI AAJ TU LAGTI VE BAS MERE SATH JODI TERE SAJTI RE

MAYANK:- ROOP ISA SUHANA TERA

ARRMY:-CHAND YE HAI DIWANA TERA

MUSIC BOTH RHEA GUNJAN NUPUR DANCING NUPUR DANCE IS SHORT

NUPUR & GUNJAN FATHER:- OOOOO MERE DIL KI DUWAYI KAHE TERE JODI SALAMAT RAHE

ALL :- BOLE CHUDIYAN BOLE KANGANA HAYE ME HOGAYI TERE SAJNA

TERE BINJIYO NAIYO LAGADA ME TO MARGAYI YA

LEJJA LEJJA SONIYO LEJJA LEJJA

THEN FAST MUSIC COMES ALL ARE DANCING FAST EXCEPT MAYANK & NUPUR THEY STAND ANOTHER SIDE ENJOYING 😊

HELLO FREINDS HW IS MY UPDATE I KNW MY UPDATE IS SHORT MAY BE TOMORROW OR DAY AFTER TOMORROW I WILL CONTINUE THIS PART PLEASE READ & TELL ME U R OPINION NEXT TIME I WILL WRITE MORE EFFECTIVE ALSO U WILL GET MORE MAYANK & NUPUR ROMANTIC SCENES 😊 JUST WAIT 2 MORE DAYSSS😊

Edited by minalpink100 - 16 years ago