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Posted: 16 years ago
hey guyz sorry 4 da wait....
both me and aku r kinda bz ryt now....
v hv our boards cumin up in another 5 days...
hope u guys understand....
pl. pray 4 us.....
wid lots and lots of luv
poori
Edited by poori1993 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
SO SWEET !!! COOL!
CONT SOON WILL WAIT
SEE YAA
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Posted: 16 years ago
Poori and Akansha
first of all, thanks a lot for updating guys....i know people are busy with exam preps and other things....but still you guys updated...so thank you so much for that.
Poori....... i loved your update...especially mayank's reaction when he finds out who rhea is....it was a lovely update...and thanks a lot for PMing me to let me know..sorry couldnt read and comment earlier as i had a midtem the next day.....i was studying.
Akansha....i really loved your update as well.....the romantic scene in mayur's room was very well written....it was so cute the way mayank filled nupur's maang with sindoor.....and also funny when the doorbell rings..i can almost imagine mayank giving his broad irritating smile at arman....lols..so cute
Good Luck for your exams Poori and Akansha!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey guyz am back.... my exam went gud..... thanx 4 ur support....am typing my update ryt now... wil post it aftr typin....pl. wait.... i noe u people waited too long... but still....
"intezaar ka phal hamesha a nice update from poori hota he"😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Mayank: aasmaan se thodo yaa zameen se khodo yeh arrmy ko badlo?😆😆😆.

Nupur: kya????😕
Mayank: array nupur tumhaari bakwaas baat sunkar mujhe
bhi unki aadat pad gayi he?.
Nupur: array Monkey Mayank tumse achcha toh who arrmy he? who mujhse bahut pyaar se izhaar karta he?
Mayank: isiliye toh nupur? isiliye toh mujhe buraa lagta he ki meri biwi kisi aur ke chakkar me pad gayi he?😕😕.
Nupur: huh?😡😡.mayank tum? tum mujh par shak kar rahi ho??? 😡
Mayank: array nupur baat shak ki nahi he? abhi abhi toh hum kitne pyaar se the? dekha kya yeh arrmy ke aane se jagda ho gaya?😡😡😡
Nupur (screaming) : Mayank main jaa rahi hoon😡😡😡? tumse mujhe yeh ummeed nahi thi?😭
Mayank: array nupur suno tho?.

But alas nupur had already gone away?. It becomes nyt tym but nupur still dint cum back to da room?. Mayank gets worried and goes in search of her?. He thinks nupuz is wid arrmy but she isn't there too?

M: armaan nupur kahaan he???😡

A: array Mayank, mujhe kya patha??? Who to tumhaare saath thi naa???
M: nahin tho?. Maine socha woh tumhaare saath thi?.
A: mujhe lagtha he hume use doondna chaahiye?.😲😲
M: thik he?.😕😕😕

Both the heroes of our cast start finding nupur?. But she is nowhere to b seen?.

As he reaches his room he finds a letter 4 him? the letter reads?

"Mayank main jaa rahi hun? tumse bahut door? main kabi bhi ab tumhaare zindagi me nahi aaungi? agar mujhe bachaana he toh abhi mujhe suicide point par meet karna?"

mayank wakes up wid a jerk? he then realizes it wz all a dream?

nupur is then seen walkin alone in da garden? Mayank runs to her and hugs her frm behind?. He realizes dat she wz crying bitterly😭? he apologises 2 her?.

He lifts her and there r some really gud scenes goin on b/w them that shud not b disturbed by us?..*wink*😉😉😉

N: Mayank tumne mujh pe kyon shak kiya???
M: nupur jo ho gaya so ho gaya?. Abhi sab kuch hum bhool jaaayenge? 😳😳
N: thik he? agar mere pati dev yahi chaahte he toh hum use
hi hokum maante he?.😳😳😳
M: array bas kar nupur? ab hume hamaari future ke bare mein sochna he?😳😳
N: matlab???
M(as a matter of factly): bachchein😆
N: mayankkkkkkkkkkk???
M: haan nupurrrrrrrrrrr????
N: thik he tum ek bachche ko adopt karma chahte ho????
M: nupur?. Nahi main apni kudh ki child ke bare me soch raha hoon?.
N: lekin uska intazaam toh ho gaya naa?.🤣
M: kya????
N: matlab hein ki ab mein teri bachche ki maa banne waali hoon?.🤣
M: nnnnuuuuuupppppppppuuuuuuurrrrrr??? tune yeh baat mujhe abhi tak bataaya kyon nahi???? Main abhi maa ko fone karta hoon?.😃
N: maine who bhi kar daala?🤣
M: thik he main abhi Mumbai ko do tikt book karke aata hoon?
N: do nahin 4?.
M: kyon?. Itna jaldi bacha paida nahin hoga?🤣
N: mayankkk?. Mujhe tumhe kuch bathaana he?
M: bolo na?
N: armaan aur rhea ke bare me?
M: how do u noe rhea???😕
N: mayu, muje yeh bhi pata he ki rhea meri behen he?.
M: kyaaa????????😲
N: haan ab who sab baat chodo?. Rhea aur arrmy ek dooje se pyaar karte hein? lekin ek jagde ki wajah se dono alag ho gaye? arrmy ne isi baat ke liye mujhse help maangi aur mein use help kar rahi hoon?.
M: OHO?..😉😉
N: thik he abi hume do kaam karni padegi?. Rhea aur meri
fam ko join aur rhea aur arrmy ko join?.
M: thik he?. Mission milaaap ke liye hum tayaar he janaab😆?.
N smiles?..😃

guys am soooooooooooooo sorry 4 dis very late update.... mra exams chal raha tha... theree r more 5 exams left.... i dont noe when can i update aftr this.... if i get tym i will update surely..... thanx 4 ur support.....

luv ya

poori

Edited by poori1993 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow poori di
just luved it
proud of uuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
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Posted: 16 years ago

Wow poori...lovely....Ab toh mission milaap ka intezaar
And Nupur is pregnant...Hai Mayu is out of words...
Do continue when u have time....Thanks for the pm
And once again GR8 update
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome poori!!! tune sach kaha intezar ka phal hamesha a nice update frm poori hota hai.....bt dis update was nt just nice it was amazing.....p[lz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey poori...........
Nice epi.........
Full of twistz.........
It was too funny........
Especially wen Nupz said " is ka bhi intezaam hogaya hai"...........lol
And wen she said 4 tktz i thought maybe they were gonna hav twinz................lol!.........
Continue soon dear........
Bye.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
I just started reading your fanfic today and absolutly loved it!
Its so different from other ones what with Mayur being married.
Do update soon...I can't wait to read more!
:D

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