AR ff:Dancing to your tunes...smallprt pg94 1/5 - Page 45

Originally posted by: Angelic_Swancy

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww loved it bbe

toooo goood just beauitful girl do continue soon swancy

Originally posted by: SunainaTM007

reserved :)

*edited*

heya sumedha !!!! sunaina!!!!!! *hugs*

awesome part again...loved it totally hun...thanks

the convo or more like the sms convo was extremely cute...armaan is really stubborn...and finally riddhima had to give in...he reminds me of me somtimes...i can be really stubborn when i want to..hehe...

and then the convo at freezone..well-penned...me too....most of the time i get what i want done!

and RM...gosh..they will always be special...muskaan abusing rahul and rahul trying his best to escape her aims..and then the moment between them...aww..he cares for her sooo much...thanks sunaina, i'm always trying to keep rm alive through this ff!

and then AR again...riddhima decribing love and armaan confessing that he was never in love...they are soooo cute together..and then his thoughts were described well...and armaan and his flirtatious comments...he will never change :) we don't want him to now, do we?

and the time at armaan's....that was fab..love the way nikki was ordering and bickering with the boys...and then armaan and riddhima having a close moment which was not missed by abhi...and yayyy..he realised that his young bro is in love...and the scene where armaan tends to riddhima's burn was damn good...the description was well-written...the mention of rahukalaam reminds me that u mentioned of living in chennai all ur life and i'm living in chennai for the past two years...omg we're right here in the same city!!!! imagine if we've already bumped into each other somewhere before??? what do you do? also, armaan is actually older than abhi.....

the girls getting along well and riddhima's parents...but mostly her dad...how can he be rude..agreed he was concerned abt her safety and all but he didnt even give her a chance to defend her views or actions...

and the part where armaan consoles riddhima and gives her a philosophical speech..that was really fab...
well dads will be dads i guess...

rahul's confession..simple yet sweet..and the song was so apt for the situation and the pair...amazing hun...and the lovebirds in their own world after confession...awww..that was cute...thanks sunaina, you always gimme such lovely comments i dunno what to say to you!!!!

superb again hun...

*hugs*

continue soooooooooooooon :D

Originally posted by: ammy-ridz

hey..AMAZING PART!!!

Loved it.OMG!!! the messaging part was Wonderful.Armaan is so cheeky man...I was so shocked reading the 2 lines n then the whole conversation left me into splits.😆 thanks.....i'm glad you enjoyed reading it...
this almost happened to me once so i know how freaky it is!!!!

Loved AR n RM moments.

Awesum!!!

Plzzz continue soon.

Thanxx .

Originally posted by: KSG4lyf

gr8 part sumedha👏👏👏

Originally posted by: dmgaddict

hey sumedha!!!

that was an awesome part.

i loved the scene between rahul and muskaan and muski throwing stuff at him was hilarious😆

the AR moments in the ice cream place were soo sweet even if they were only talking 👍🏼

the line were he said ill stay all night if you want me to had me turning red myself😳 Armaan flirts so much man that's armaan na......that's why we love him!!!! thanks for liking the part!
love sumedha

please continue soon

~anjie

Originally posted by: nandinidev

Yeeeeeehaaaaaa.....!!!!

So it's FINALLY here...an update...and my insides are dancing the conga as I rush to read...hehe...

Reserved :)

heyya nandini!!!! *huge big hug!!!!!*

Edit :

And I'm here...FINALLY...SO sorry for being so late with my response Sumedha...I just felt I needed more time for this one...wouldn't have been fair if I had left with a tiny little good-job comment when I had so much going on in my head and heart while reading the piece as well as after it...so here goes...😊 well am i glad your here!!!! i just had to had to had to reply to you right this instant!!!!!

First, I've loved all your parts before as well, but this one seems absolutely flawless in terms not just of the content, but also in terms of the way you've presented it...there's nothing fancy or cliched in there...which is what I LOVE about it...whether it be Abhi-Niki, Rahul-Muskaan or, of course, Armaan-Riddhima, they're all familiar, and yet different... i love you nandini i just totally totally love you!!!! you don't know how much the fact that you don't find this ff cliched means to me!!!

Beginning with the beginning, I really he way you've sketched out the friendship between Abhi, Niki and Armaan...absolutely loved the way he said, "No. I think I love her." I could actually picture his expression and tone of voice at that point...the little exchange about the alimony-split deal was nice and witty...smart humour...I like...😎 thanks....it just sort of came up when i was writing the part....i hadn't even planned for that phone call to armaan but i needed to link the two scenes and the two places so that's when i decided to bring in the call.....

Rahul and Muskaan were as they always are...I could picture their faces and their running and Muskaan's squealing, along with Rahul's threats...loved their part...had a very happy, fresh, spunk vibe, leading smoothly into the intensely passionate...niiice...!! 👍🏼 this is how i've always imagined rahul and muski in my own head you know??? the spontaneity, the fun, the arguments, and the deep seated love between the two....its so sad that we didn't see so much of this on dmg....that's why i always try to keep them alive through my ff with all the readers....

And finally, Armaan and Riddhima...see, I'm going all fuzzy on the inside as I write this...all your fault...hehe...first, Armaan's forgetting what he was saying when he catches sight of her and can't take his eyes away...then, Riddhima's reaction to Shonali, and Armaan's reaction to Riddhima's reaction to Shonali...haha...absolutely hilarious and SO darn cute...!! And then, the jet-skiing disaster-turned-intimate-moment as well as the snorkelling joyride...beautifully described, each and every part of it...the fact that they know, in one single moment, what they feel for each other...sigh...if you could see the expression on my face right now, you'd know me for an absolute, hopeless die-hard romantic...and if your fic brought out that side of me so effortlessly, need I say more? 😳 well i'm a die hard mills and boons fan too!!! and guess who the source of inspiration was?? the one and only armaan mallik of course!!!! after watching him for three years on TV you just can't help but picture these scenes in your head na? and coming to your expression, you should see mine right now when i read your comment the way i'm grinning from ear to ear my mom actually asked me if i got soem love letter on india forums or something??? and i told her na, this comment is better than a love letter!!!

Bottomline : I LOVED the part...and am officially running out of words to describe how it made me feel...I just hope you understand what I'm trying to say...this has got to be the best comment in all of these 67 pages girl....i can't say you've made my day....coz you've done so much more than that!!!!

i love you loads and keep reading!!!! thanks a ton for being sooooooooooooooooo sweet!! i'm almost scared the next part won't live up to your expectations of me!

Thnks soo much for the PM...and Please update soon...!! 😃

Loads of love,

Nandini 😃

a rib crushing hug for you
love
sumedha

Originally posted by: smriti.tweety

Hi Sumedha!!!!!! heyya smriti....

Gr8 part!!!!!👏thanks a lot!
Absolutely loved the whole AR conversation. I really like how they are slowly progressing in terms of comfort in their relation. Totally agree with Ridhima here, Love indeed is a different experience for each one of us. No defined rules! AR are definitely attracted to each other. Wonder when they will acknowledge it.
awaiting the next part!😃there's a confession coming up soon....
thanks for reading!
love
sumedha
love
smriti

p.s comment on the continued portion on pg 56

Originally posted by: loyal-kashian

shuuuuuuupppppperrrrrbbbbbbb......

awww... loved it a lot...

please continue soon...

luv

deepu :)

Originally posted by: Robin_M

awww such a sweet part! AR are falling for each other! loved their sweet scenes!
looking forward to more, continue soon!