AR ff:Dancing to your tunes...smallprt pg94 1/5

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aarora

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Posted: 16 years ago

#301

hey amazing update honey..luvd it..continue soon..
thanx fr PM..
luv ya..

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Misha Rai

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Posted: 16 years ago

#302

How sweet! The part with AbhiNiki was ..,. =] Too good!!

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tamanna17

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Posted: 16 years ago

#303

hi......great update....AR and AN were too good.....thanks 4 the PM.......continue soon

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maryam

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Posted: 16 years ago

#304

grt part really good plss continue soon

tnx for the pm

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smriti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#305

Hi sumedha!

Thanks for the pm! Have commented on ur one shot, in fact I read that first and having loved it, decided to read this one.

Liked the part, the whole AN and AR interaction was really sweet! So Armaan is finally getting jealous and guess Ridhima didn't particularly like Shonali either. Definitely a progress but as u mentioned slightly slow in its pace (no offence meant at all, just my honest opinion) nevertheless I quite liked the part; so kudos girl! Sorry if I offended you by my views in any way.

Looking forward to the next part!😊

Love

smriti

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nimisha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#306

osom..part gal..splly the alloo ka paratha scen..! i liked it!

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sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#307

totally adorable and I loved Mr.possessive Armaan, and the way he raved about the parathas was so cute as well as the way he literally pushed the other couple out of the studio.

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Divya Jagga

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Posted: 16 years ago

#308

a wonderful part...👏👏
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keep gng smoothly!!!

sorry that m late.....plssssssssss forgive me!!!😭

u also include many songs & i find them very interesting.......& recent one is my best- pyaar ki kahani suno!!

gud luck dear....👏
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Thanks for pm!!😊😊

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shriya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#309

dear sumedha,

first f all m nt a silent reaader..cz m commenting as soon as i finished reading..u said the fic is gng slow..hw cud u evn say tht??its gng awesome..call it coincidence but since jhalak strted i had been wanting to read smthng on ths lines..n was planning to write myself..but fortunately i stumbled across ur ff..its perfect..its lik u r writing wht one wud love to read..grt fic sumedha n its gng grt..everything b it armaan ridhima,abhi nikki or rahul muskaan evryone is perfect in thr chars..do pm me whn u update next,..will look out for ths one...

love shriya