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Posted: 16 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: swansea

Yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh angel

wow can't wait for this too start
and thank u soooooooooooooooooooo much for saying my name
hehe
I'll be waiitng for this FF
and as u know ur just as mad as me so we'll be mad together hehe
ur ladoo😊

ladoo.... u read it lol
np for saying ur name.... lol it was tru... u beared with me... yh lets be mad together... so u gonna start ur mad idea ff den?? 😉
lv u lts
mad angel
xxxxx 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
A big big thankyou to all those who replied and encouraged me....
a big hug goes to all these.... 😳 i didn't think this ff would get this much encouragement.... 😃😃😃 love all these:
saziarmaan
sakshi
mahima
tava
riddhi
neha
dhrashti
cutie13
nidha
sanjana
yogitha
tanu
sameera
my crazy ashu
aims di
and my mad ladoooo........
lv u guys sooo much
rav
xxxxx 😳
Edited by lollipops - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33

hey guys... first part... 😳

Friends, I am using the situation from a week after the sanjeevani concert was over and how things had changed. The only thing I am changing in this ff is that all the interns know about Armaan and Riddhimas relationship from when they got back together in July... Hope that's fine...

part 1

Year 2008 30/12

Sanjeevani hospital... 8.00 is Fire escape stairs...

Riddhima is sitting on the last step as she is free now. Leaning against the wall she is lost in her thoughts. Remembering the couple of days ago, she thinks about the sanjeevani concert held to save sanjeevani and all of the interns were overjoyed with the announcement that they had not only raised enough to pay all the bills of the patients but furthermore they had exceeded their target and had raised a lot extra. All the extra money was used to deal with sanjeevani's money crisis. Riddhima recalled how her father came out of the conference room 4 days ago with a big smile on his face, how the interns were overjoyed to hear that sanjeevani was not going to be shut down!!! So much had changed within the past four days... Changed for good... Except for the fact that Mr Abhimanyu Modi was still going to stay at the hospital? Riddhima remembered how she had to dance with him as Armaan was in bed with injuries. She smiled thinking how everyone like di, atul, muskaan, Rahul and Nikki had opposed the idea as they knew armaan wouldn't like it but it had to be done....

Riddhima was smiling to herself. Now that everything was fine again everyone else had asked them to speak to Dr Shashank. Riddhima remembered the party which was held to celebrate the concert's success. Ridz recalled how Rahul and muskaan had confessed in front of everyone. How angali di had confessed to atul about her love for him......

~flashback-party~

Dr Shashank had invited everyone associated with the concert to the party. The party was held at a beautiful beach. There was a large gazebo set up and the party was nearly finished. Nearly everyone had gone; just the gang, Shashank, Padma and nani were present.

Shashank: Bachoo, Kya tum log abhi yaha rukne wale ho?

Ammy: yes sir, just until everything is cleared up, if you don't mind....

Sh: No problem armaan. Well I am taking maa and Padma home. Would you mind dropping Riddhima and angali at home?

Ammy nods his head. Shashank, Padma and nani leave.

An: I am bored, atul lets do something.

At: Armaan, mere bhai... tujhe me toh ideas overflow karte hai.... kuch soch Na

Rahul, muskaan, ridz and Angie all agree!!

Ar: Guys let's play spin the bottle... truth, dare?

Everyone agrees. They all settle on the mat placed on the sand with the bottle placed on some cardboard in the middle... Angali spins first and points towards muskaan.

"Phitte mooh? mere bari phir se pehle..." Everyone laughed at muski's response.

"Ok muskaan what will it be?" Angali winked at her.

"Truth please, angie.." Muskaan pleaded.

"Fine, fine. Let's see... hmm we want to know the truth about the person you love, if there is someone??" Angali smirked.

"Erm..." looks helplessly at Rahul who reassures her and tells her to say something.

"Well guys, I and Rahul love each other.." she says hastily.

Everyone gasps but they had seen it coming. They all smile at Rahul and muskaan. Then everyone starts to clap for them and armaan whistles.

"Guys I am so happy for you" Riddhima says smiling widely.

Atul and angali glace at each other and smile.

Mu: (who is really excited by now) and you know what? he proposed to me a couple of days ago.

Angali, Riddhima, Atul and armaan: WHAT??????

They are all shocked but then they all smile at Rahul and muskaan who are busy having an eye lock... They all get up and sing congratulation for Rahul and muskaan as Rahul pulls her into a hug... They all cheer ang then get back to the game.

Angali and ridz whisper to muskaan "we want full details of the proposal later" Muskaan blushes and nods. Next it was Riddhima who spun the bottle and it landed at angali.

An: Come on ridz.. I'll have truth as well..

Ri: ok di... hmm tell us something that you have hid and none of us here know? anything? come on fess up..

Angali gulps as her face flushes of colour. She takes in a big breath and starts

"Erm guys... it's about time I told you lot this and especially one person, atul." Saying that she looks him in the eye as he is quite surprised at her. She continues "You know all the letters that atul has got and the bike that was gifted to him by the mystery person.. well it was ummm me....." Everybody is shocked at Angie's confession as it was least expected.

At: iska kya meaning hua angali?? Atul very well knew the answer but wanted to hear it from her mouth. The 3 magical words.

An: ummm, atul I love you!!! don't know how, don't since when but it was a truth that I had well ignored until about a couple of weeks.... Ever since armaan and riddhima got together actually. I mean look at them, they are two completely opposite individuals, they are like the north and south poles which are soo far away from each other but still attract. Their relationship is one of the most pure ones I have seen in my life. No lies, no false promises just pure and unconditional love. I know the only reason I pushed you off was because.... well I was a jerk Atul and would you please accept me... I know you already do but u kno? anjali's voice broke as she stopped.

Angali sighed and looked up for the first time to see atul beaming at her. She saw Rahul and armaan's honest smiles. Riddhima and muskaan had slight tears in her eyes.

At: Angali I....

An: Atul, I am not finished yet. I just want to say how special you make me feel. No one has loved me as much as you do and I just want to give you the same love you gave me all this time. Oh and yes I will still love your plants as well.... Did I tell you, priya and Tina are the cutest.

Everyone let out small laughs. Just then Atul got up and made angali get up as well.

At: I love you angali.... I love you......

An: I love you too atul..... always will.

Saying that they hugged at everyone else got up and cheered on for them two. Armaan pulled riddhima closer as did Rahul to muskaan and the 3 couples spent the rest of the night celebrating on them being together.

~flashback over~

Riddhima smiled to herself as she remembered the confessions of the night.

She looked at her watch and sighed. She still had time left. She leaned back against the step and bumped into something. Armaan was sitting on the step above and was flashing his million dollar smile. He kissed her on her forehead as she leaned back against his strong chest. He enveloped her in a bear hug as he hugged her form behind.

Ar: Where were you lost?

Ri: Nothing baby, just thinking about Rahul and muskaan and di and atul. They were so cute the other night Na...

Ar: hmm..... yh but not cuter than you pumpkin He grinned.

Ri: God armaan!!!! another name?? She pouted her lips and turned around in fake anger.

Armaan smiled knowing very well that it was all fake. She had her back towards him.

Just them armaan gently lifted his hand and moved all the hair to one side, leaving her neck and shoulder bare to him. He gently placed a kiss on her neck under her earlobe and felt her shiver under his lips. He smiled as he traced his lips down her neck down to her shoulders. Riddhima turned to face him as he smiled at her. She smiled back and lowered her eyes blushing. Armaan lifted her chin up and moved his face closer to her. Slowly heading his lips towards hers.

'Trnnnnnnnn.....' Their pagers rang.

Ar: oye hoye. Is pager ki bhi mere saath dushmani hai??

Riddhima giggled as they both got up and headed towards the nursing station.

(Note: guys no flying cars and stuff in my future in my ff... jus the same old Mumbai as it is now... lol I don't want to turn my ff into a sci-fiction.... lol)

At the same time in the future........

Year 2027

Malik mansion 'ashiyana'....... 8.00 am......

We see a very wonderful mansion painted in red and white. The interior of the house has been done perfectly suiting the taste of the residents. The house is very quiet as it is a Sunday morning and only 8.00am so everyone is still asleep. Lol

The main bedroom of the house is very dearly decorated and has red and white colour combination. The net curtains are white and the there are silk light red curtains hanging up. The feature wall is red whilst the other 3 walls are an off white colour. A lady and a man are fast asleep on the bed with their faces covered with white sheets. The curtains are lightly blowing with the wind. The peaceful silence is broken with the sharp noise of the alarm clock ringing.... The lady moves the sheet from her face and her hair cover her face. There are clear frowns visible on her forehead. She gets up and turns the alarm off. She is dressed in a simple but attractive red night gown with her hair loosely tied in a knot at her neck. She falls back on the pillow but her eyes are open. A smile is playing on her lips. Her hair still flying over her face. She has a certain glow on her face. Suddenly she feels fingers on her face as they sweep over her face moving the hair off her face.

The man moves the sheet from his face and looked at his beloved wife, and these are none one other than Armaan and Riddhima malik....

Ar: good morning pumpkin...

This time Riddhima does not frown and lightly turns to her side to face her hubby. She reached forward and gently pecks her lips. Armaan smiles at her.

Ri: good morning armaan.

Armaan moves forward and envelopes her in his arms so he's lying back on the bed and she is on top of him from one side with her hand and face on his bare chest.

Ar: aaj bhi tumne alarm lagaya?? Its Sunday today. I did not want to get up. See abhi tak Rishi aur mere baby bhi nahi uthe.

Ri: (surprised) Armaan, you forgot? What date is it today??

Ar: erm 30/12/27 why you asking...

Ri: And 19 years ago from now?

Ar: erm let's see. 30/12/08... (Suddenly remembers something, opens his mouth wide) OH MY GOD!!!!! (he screams)

Riddhima laughs at his reaction as he joins in as well..

Ri; yes armaan.. today is the day we are coming back to the future to see us...

Ok that killed... 😆😆😆. That is soo long😆😆😆 lol couple of things... Thankyou for all the immense support I know it's a crazy idea but that's what I am lol crazy😳😳😳 you might be thinking why I showed RM and AA confession really quick... well before they went into the future I wanted them to be together😃😃😃

Welcome to all the new readers😳😳😳

Sakshi sweets... I will cont my other ff as well but 2moz ok?😳😳

Guys I only have a week left up until my exams and once they are over I will update more frequently... like twice in a week... hope that good news.. will upd love?? Whatever... tomorrow and this update might be my last one up until 13 January as that when my exams finish... If I get time I will update but otherwise this will the last update till 13 Jan😕😕

i really really wish that this part was up to ur expectations.....
plzzz... leave lots of comments..

End of my speech... Lmao 😆😆😆

So have a very very happy new year in advance and I hope the coming year brings you lots of good times and may all your dreams come true😆😆😆

Love you lots and lots

Rav

xxxxxxx

Edited by lollipops - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh amazingggggggggg my angel hehe
i'm loving this FF
continue sooooooooooon
Ur school starts na???
welcome to the group hehe
do continue soon or else.............
and yes i am mad ladoo hehe
and remember OR ELSE!!!!!!!!!!!!
ur ladoo
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
hey
it was an amazing part.
luved the way u sum up every1 in a single part.
i just hope the creatives somehow read this and get ideas. lol
the priya and tina and thing was really cute.
thank God, at least u r practical enough 2 put the flying part away.
btw, luved the name 'aashiyana'
AR are so sweet.
its o.k. rav, take ur time, as u have 2 study as well.
dont worry about us, we will cope up by reading ur wunnerful parts again and again, lol. (p.s. a bit of pestering is allowed lol.)
sorry for the long comment.
p.s. dont 4get 2 om me.
sakshi
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
🤣
rav u cracked me up wid ur flying note 🤣
that was tooooooo much lol🤣🤣
anywy I loveddddddddddddd everything wht u write👏👏👏 .. really weldone👏👏
👏n D word ASHIYANA touched my heart.🤗......awwwwww love u more for thisssssss
and yaaaa studies come first so do study well n best of luck for ur exams...
Love ya
Neha...

Edited by prernadeewani - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
gr8 part
ar is so cute
love the name ashiyana
cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
hey!!
sweet in a crazy way huh!
sureli ur living up 2 ur crazy tag...lmao
bt reli its different n a nw concept
luking 4wd 2 ur nxt chap
luv u lts
thx a ton 4 de pm
crazy ashu
HAPPY NW YR DEAR...HAV A BLAST
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
it is really gud plz contd soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
waoh🤗 its really an awesome one⭐️ such a cute one😛 so AA😛 & RM😉 confession is sweet one😳 plz continue it soon😊 & thanks for the pm😉


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Inkar kar ka bhi muj ko ikrar hai,
Us ko pana
Shaid meri kismat main nahi,
Najane phir bhi har mor par usi ka intazar hai."






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