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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey those were lovely parts...!
I wish every date of theirs wudnt end in misunderstandings !!
And i wish i cud strangle piyush !! Ughh !
U have to upload the pics in tinypic.com and then choose the "Forums" link given and paste the link here...Then the pic will be displayed !!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

Hey those were lovely parts...!glad u liked 'em

I wish every date of theirs wudnt end in misunderstandings !! don't worry now there wont be any misundersatnding after the end of their date.... but u see the feel so intensely for each other tht they cant help but think the worst..... is like when u care care too much for a person all the wrong things seem to happen to tht person and we also begin to doubt tht person too much
And i wish i cud strangle piyush !! Ughh ! some day sujal wud gladly do it for u😉😉😉 lets say i have good secne in store for tht.. it'll come a lot later but it will. mr. grewal but personally thrash him in front of kashish.
U have to upload the pics in tinypic.com and then choose the "Forums" link given and paste the link here...Then the pic will be displayed !! THANKUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU. I dont know how i wud do without all my wonderfull readers



Edited by meggs - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: styleislife13

*reserved*

Hi yaar........
Terrific post...........Dont wanna say too much now........u are allowed to say whatever u want and how ever much u want
It was brilliant........
The best epi evr.......😃😃
U were clever wid the descriptionz and their feelingz...........thank you, i hope i am forgiven fr the late update, if u liked their feeling and the developments
I can imagine what they were thinking...........
My Princess.......i wud faint every time he says that..........i love too
U wrote wonderfully.........
What can i say.......
Luved every bit..........
Luv the thoughts.....soo true........its gud u keep the thoughtz really free.........K n S r not shy to express........
Man..........nearly 50 kisses missed........oh well...........first kiss shud be sudden and veryyy special.. i dont know when they wud actually smooch.. lets just wait and see
Luved the teasing............
The way K said that he was part of their family was really sweet...........
He soon will be a son..............or shud i say (son-in-law)..........
Gr8 epi.........
It was worth the wait...........
Soo awesum u mentioned the ridez..........
I felt as if i was at the fare.............tht was the intention..😊
It was really gud............
After every ride K wud open up her heart.....well she is a bit of a kid.. who doesn't get excieted in crazy cars?
That was really nice........
I was holdin' my breath every time S came close..........
Luv the descriptionz yaar..........
U r too gud...........awwwww thank you so s much, u are too generous with praises
Its kinda late right now.......
So i will reply again untill i feel satisfied.........like u now its me eagerly waiting for ur comments
I might comment by pasting the update and writing my own feelings at the time......
Sweetie iam free on Tues...............soo i will comment the rest on that day..........
Hope u understand.......hey no hurry. i made u wait long too, didnt i? i can wait as long as u do write
Is this much appreciation enough?.........i wanna say more...but iam tired right now...sorry for that.....write whenever u are free and feel like commenting. no hurry and yes as i have already said u praise me too much...
A poem for S n K's Friendship........
Frm K to S..........
I think the poem suits them.....n the scenes.....
Thanku Friend........

Dear friend I can't explain to you
How much you mean to me
If it weren't for you I can't imagine
Where I'd even be

You've made me laugh and smile
More than I can bear
You've helped me through the hardest times
When I was in despair

You kept me up when I was down
And I was feeling blue
You helped me turn my life around
And become somebody new

Thank you friend for everything
I'm glad you really cared
Thanks for never leaving me
Thank you for being there

loveeeeeeeeeeeeee the poem. promise to use some of it in my next chapter
Hope u like it........
Take Care.....
Luv Ayesha.......
I will reply again.......
1st to comment..wen u wrote the best epi.....u r getting better n better.....😆😛
Gud luck wid the next 1.....thankyou😊
Cont. wenevr u want.😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
Thnx 4 this long UD. It definitely pays 4 the delay. I simply luved it. Each n every bit of it was gr8. 👏👏
Firstly Sujal's saying dat he wud hav jumped into the water......dat was indeed sweet. Then he was afraid of height. Now dat was sumthing really unexpected-the gr8 lawyer SUJAL GREWAL afraid of height (well I'm also afraid of height).😆😆😆 But it did hav sum advantage in the form of Kashish's almost kissing him. 😳😳😳But poor guy cudnt figure out if dat was true. 😆😆😆
Then again the emotional talks abt their childhood n then the hugs n sweet talks. Everything was very very beautiful.
But Sujal was irritated by dat snake guy n so was I. He was arghhh..., 😡😡
However at the end dat Piyush completed the word "Saturday". Poor Sujal. I hope this Saturday vanishes 4m the week. After all if Sujal cudnt go how can any1??
Ok now I shud stop being so stupid. But must say the part was fabulous. And if u cum up wid such parts after taking sum tym then do w8 4 sum more tym. This was indeed a wonderful date btwn our fav SK.
PLS CONTINUE SOON.
Edited by sumaiya wahid - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
i hav posted my comment in the prev page check it out............
Edited by spvd - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey meggs sweetheart!!!!! mindblooooowing part!!!! simply outstanding!!!!!totally unexpected but soooo beautiful!!! i loved each n evry bit!!! it was superb!!!! brilliantly described and u put forward there thoughts perfectly....a perfect blend of romance and evry emotion being jealousy, emotion etc...but it was fantastic!!!....hw shall i begin!1 well lets say the location first!!! i was soo suprised wen i read he took her 2 a carnival😆it was soo unexpected, but thats Sujal 4 u!! i thought she was gonna hate it bcoz she wasnt 2 happy in the beginning but slowly as she was reliving all her childhood memories she loved it!!!...i have 2 say i never thought a carnival cud be so romantic😆 but u were brilliant with the romantic parts!!! beautifully described.....i cant believe Sujal is scared of heights!! 😆😆😆here's Kashish letting a python sit on her and on the other hand we have Sujal who's scared of heights!!! poor him but Kashish made sure 2 take all his fear away with one gesture😆poor guy didnt even make out if it actually happened or he was dreaming..i guess his confusion began bcoz wen he leaned forward to kiss her, she moved back bcoz they were near the ground!!! wot timing!!!!😆 he didnt manage 2 get more than just a slight touch but oh well he can wait!!!!.....loved his jealousy wen that snake charmer was flirting with Kashish....shows he definetly has feelings 4 her!! i hpe he realises soon enuf....and i have 2 say these both are soo damn confused, both are so doubtful....there kashish is doubting he wud be jealous 4 her and here Sujl has doubts whether she likes him or not, thus he is keeping at a distance and here agen Kashish doubts that the distance between them only means he takes her as a friend...so we have doubts within doubts!!! wot a doubtful couple😆 loved the ice cream part!!! i cud just imagine hw cute they wud be looking sharing the ice cream!! and suprisingly, she didnt share her candy stick but shared the ice cream...doesnt Sujal get the hint!!!!!....so finally Sujal's wish of kissing her nose came true!! he has been wanting to do that since ages😆it was soo cute though!! it left her suprised but he covered it up well!!!....and then we have the part with the emotional talk between them regarding Sujal being a part of her family...that was just soo touching...i guess those few words from Kashish was all he wanted...her thinking he is family meant the most 2 him n still even after that he doesnt realise its coz he feels 4 her!! wot r we gonna do with u Sujal😆....and then the part under the tree that was just sooooo beautifully written and described!! i was thinking am i dreaming!! is this actually happening!! did he say all that 2 her and did she 2!! but yes once agen they were confused, she thought he was flirting like a friend would n he was agen unsure about wot she felt and thought she only takes him like a friend 2!! but yeah he actually told her he wants her kiss suprisingly!1 i was hoping he wud get one atleast in this date but maybe u have sum other plan 4 that n am sure u will do a brillaint job of it so i leave it in ure hands!!.....and then the ending!!! awww i was getting soo damn frustrated...no one wud let him finish off what he wanted 2 say!! am sure he wanted to take her out agen this saturday but first nick n then PIYUSH!!!!!😡i soo wanna kill him 4 spoiling evrything!!!1 poor Sujal he was soo mad!! he thinks she's 2 timing....i hope sumthing happens and she doesnt meet him on saturday and SK end up being 2gether!!!!.....anyway fantasttic part sweetheart!!! words are 2 few 4 it!! one of my most fav parts in the FF so far!! and plzz dnt say ure not good at romance bcoz i think ure brilliant with it!!!...keep up the gr88 work and looking forward to more SK moments!!!! do update soon....i knw its kind of greedy 2 be asking 4 a part soon even though u gave us such a long part but i cnt help it!! its such a brillaint fic!!!....keep up the gr88 work dear!!!! and thanx 4 the pm!!!!!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi.....
Just wanted to ask......
Wen will u btry n update.....
I hav examz now so thats why i wanna know...
TC......
Bye........
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey dear do update soon!!!! waiting 4 the next part!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Meghna.....

Yaar its been 4eva since u updated yaar...
I cant wait any longer...actually i can....lol..
Plz update soon...widout ur updates ...i get bored..
Plz update soon sweetie...
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey dear when u gonna update??????????????????????

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