Look Through my EYES last part+epilog pg 50

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Daebak

@Daebak

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Posted: 16 years ago

#141

Hey loved the part...! It was superb....!

I thought u havent been updating since long!

Y have u stopped the PM's on every update !!

Luv,

Vandu

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#142

Beautiful part. Kashish's thoughts wer very funny. I think she shud admit dat Sujal is completely irresistable.😳😳😳

BTW Sujal is a way too clever(though he cudnt understand Kashish's feelings😆😆). And that psycho line was so kool. I think now Sujal can solve both his probs thru this 1 line. 😉😉

1 more thing dear. Ur last UD was NOT BORING. It's just dat I cudnt read the whole part in 1 sitting whereas I hav read many parts in 1 go. But ur UD was so interesting dat I just cudnt afford to miss even 1 line n so dat took me a lil long.

Though not a romantic part this tym too U ROCKED. Gr8 job dear. 👏And now I understand how u do this. Cant blv u spent 4 hrs on the date proposal part. HATS OFF!!!!!!!⭐️

PLS CONTINUE SOON.

Edited by sumaiya wahid - 16 years ago

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kashishdabest

@kashishdabest

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Posted: 16 years ago

#143

Hey meggs sweetehart!!!!! once agen mindbloooooooowwwwwwing part!!! simply loved it!!! was laughing like anything on seeing Sujal in that way...i actually cnt beleive he asked his secretary where he shud take her....i mean it must have been a shock fro the secretary 2 that he actually is serious about sum1😆....but yes it was fantastic!! and Kashish's reactions were soo funny 2!!! poor thing she is trying evry possible way 2 get him out of her mind and heart but nothing is working...she just cnt resist his charms, he has 2 much power over her heart and mind and she has realised the extent now!!.....Sujal for sure feels a lot more than expected 4 her...just him getting 2 realise it now....

ok my guess for the date...i have a feeling he is gonna take her on a boat...it seems he liked the idea!!!! waiting 2 knw wot will happen n hpe 2 get a sneak preview soon!!!...please please please try n update soon coz i am waitign 4 the next part like anything!!!!!.....and about u updating i dnt knw wot 2 say...hw bout long parts att short intervals😆...am only joking i knw it can get difficult!!! ermmm i dnt knwww!! all i can say is i can read as much of ure story as u post...now its up2 u!! woteva u find convenient...no pressure dear!!!!😳....fabulous part once agen!! ure brilliant!!!! keep it up!!!👏

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kashishdabest

@kashishdabest

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Posted: 16 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: meggs

hey dear!! u deserved each and every compliment trust me!! and u also made me blush wen reading it so now its all equal!!!😆...and dear u dnt need 2 thank us we shud thank u 4 such a wonderful FF......ohh so u basically jsut go with the flow!! tahts cool... i mean sumtimes wen u plan it it doesnt work...yh Sujal does have 2 buck up bcoz one day he has 2 tell the family...he cnt really hide it 4 long....and yes ure right he still needs 2 realise it!! so waiting 4 that.....keep it up dear!!!👏

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Ayesha

@styleislife13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#145

Hey Meghna........

I still can't guess any special place..............

Its a wild one but here it goes..............maybe its the place where they had the milkshake for the 1st time together.........

Maybe its a romantic place where no one will be present except the 2 lovebirds(hopefully later on.......)

Sujal is clever...................actually the mind behind Sujal is very clever n smart (its u dear) i still can't guess where u will be taking the couple..

U are really smart an i am hopin u wil give all of us a sneak peek.....on tue....................if u hav time.............

And abt the update..............are u gonna post a long or short one?

Oh well.................i really don't care wen the updates cum all i care is that they cum..........................lol

Post it wenevr............but if its gonna take suum time or if u are busy then just post a long one if u feel thats okay...........

Once again i really appreciate the epis that u post............

Continue soon dear........

Bye............

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Meghna

@meggs

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Posted: 16 years ago

#146

SNEAK PEAK

kashish waited impatiently.... it was already 7.45 and her "DATE" was late.
i Swear to god! if that man is trying any hanky-panky business with me then he is dead!!! why is he late?? he is never late for his court trials. if is he is ditching me then i'll poison him at breakfast tomorow morning! after all the agitation and tention i have been through for his "DATE" he has made a very BIG mistake by being late-

TING!!! TONG!!

K rushes to open the door and see's a casually dressed Sujal in front of her
What is he up to now?! why is he in in jeans and tee's? not tht he looks bad ... but why? and why is he grinning at my clothes like this?

s-"AH! U are ready on time. good. i se tht u r dressed appropriatly too."

S offers his hand to her so tht they can leave immidiatly.

On time!! u r late, and where is my apology for tht? What does he mean appropriatly dressed? jeans and top is apropriate dress for which darn date location?!?

s-"Princess shall we? i dont want us to b late.."

Kashish hesitantly places her hand in his still confused by his behaviour..

K-"Where are we going?"

S(smiling smugly at her)-"Have patience my dear princess. Patience is the greatest of all virtues..."

K grew more irritatled but maintained her outward cool... " Have patince my princes " my a**, if he keeps up with this sh*t for anotherr 5 min, i'll strangle him!! he better tell me soon where he is taking me....

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Meghna

@meggs

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Posted: 16 years ago

#147

nooooo... he didnt take her on a boat or to tht restaurent where they had shake... but these stilll are very good and very clever guesses... thanku for them... but since they were wrong like u Kashish is also impatient to know the location sooo.... now just wait for the big big part...😃😃

P.S.- i know the sneak peak wasnt worrth much actually i hadnt written anything but seing ur replies i cudnt stop myself so i just wrote somthing instantaneously... so what i have posted is unedeited and raw... i'll edit it later.. bye.

P.P.S.- sorry cant pm u guys right now.. gotta go.. if anyone reads the two msgs can tht person please pm others? i wud b very thankful😊

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 16 years ago

#148

hi megna..the sneak peak was thrillin...now am not able to control the excitement where he is takin her and that too in casuals...update soon dear and u hav said its big big part...wow am lookin very much forward...

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kashishdabest

@kashishdabest

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#149

hey meggs sweetheart loved the sneak peak!!! ohh am soooo excited 2 knw where he's gonna take her....like always u are probably going 2 do sumthing different than expected!!! now i am even more intrigued 2 knw where he is gonna take her!!!!! ohhhh plzz do continue soon!!! i am soo eagerly waiting 4 this next part...so about the sneak peak!! well Sujal 15 mins late!!! that is quite suprising!!! Kashish is getting soo impatient here...she definetly is looking 4ward 2 it otherwise she wouldnt get so impatient...then Sujal arrivign in casuals....hmmm strage...i soo wonder why!!!!...poor Kashish is getting impatient 2 knw where there going!!! lolzzzz cnt wait 2 read it dear!!! do update soon...n i will try n pm the readers 4 u!! not an issue...do update soon!!!!!