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Posted: 16 years ago

#451

You definitely made me SMILE :-)..... great part

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Sneha Desai

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Posted: 16 years ago

#452

reserved.....

See I told you I'll bring my butt here next time!!!.... Hahahahaha.... Just there's a small prob, I've like never read this one at all koz it features mainly RM, but as its YOU, have to read it all out.... So will get back to yaaa as soooon as I read part 1-16.... Muahhhhhhhhhhh!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

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OMG Di Idk what to say. In fact I didn't know what to expect from this part when i checked my PMs this morning. I'm pleasnatly shocked! It was so beautifully written.

There was one line in particular that seriously made me smile even though it probably shouldn't have. When Rhaul was having that "talk" with Adi, I love how he said why are all the rules in this world only for me. Awwww. I could imagine him saying that too. He's such a cutie. But I feel horrible about his understanding about his dad. It feels like no one underdstands Rahul today. Muskaan misunderstood and so did Adi, both being closest to Rahul's heart.

The R-M scenes were INTENSE. That's all I'm gonna say. Seriously INTENSE. I loved them. 👏 You're just too damn good! And thank you so much for the quick update. Please don't make us wait too long for the next one. I really hope this whole thing works out for both of them.

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Imane

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Posted: 16 years ago

#454

Seriously this part had tears in MY EYES....
Rahul is finally coming to terms...he has realized it...
HE is trying his best...And ADI...i feel for him totally his character is soo strong here...Rahul is a great dad...he tries his best... Muski needs to understand him...she needs to let him in....i loved the end...he is mptivate dto make her smile...make muskaan smile...that is SOOO CUTE....i love this...continued soon...great writing as always...You are Amazing...Thanks

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@spln

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Posted: 16 years ago

#455

heya all!!!

*HUGZ* for the lovely feedback, and this was definitely one prompt time :) also, if i may add, the comments have given me a high in one respect, you all were so into writing it all out for me the wrong versus right for the chars and the story that i realized i should be very flattered for all my readers to be treating chars in such a real way ! i guess, at the end, every fiction, for me has that motive, how real it can look or be related to...

but other than that, theres a huge clarification i wish to make.. im uncertain if this was a bit of the update being misunderstood or me misunderstanding a handful out of the comments i got... either way my bad, but i would like to say, more explicitly, that the last of RM scene implied the series of sequences hence:

* rahul has of course overheard nijal and muskaan's conversation the night before, and he knows that muskaan has feelings for him ... if you will read back however, you will notice the conversation deals only with an attraction/infatuation claim from muskaan or nijal which is also all that rahul presumes it is... feelings they are nonetheless...

*when they start talking, perhaps from the shock of having being questioned in such a blunt way muskaan has a little on he spot introspecting moment, and in that it is that she realizes what she has been pushing away denying or naming a simple attraction is actually love... and she knows it is, that, and complete...

*when rahul there fore talks again insisting about her 'attraction' what she denies is the fact that it is just that, and yes, she doesnt add why it is not an attraction as he thinks it to be, mostly because upto that point rahul has not admitted his side of feelings... her self questioning in regard to why he expects her to say anything is keeping in mind the fact that she hasn't until then heard of his word from him...

*when rahul finally claims his feelings, PLEASE NOTE, he admits its much more than a silly crush, but he adds also that he doesnt know how much more or where this could go... to be precise, he makes no mention of the fact that he loves her... and that i want to clarify, isnt just what he doesnt say, but also what he feels.. for if i intended for him to have fallen in love and understood it hence, i would have, i guess, started this confrontation on that particular note, with him claiming that he loves her, before asking her anything else... it isnt so however... he is in that stage where he knows its bigger than nothing and after the whole conversation he overheard he has decided he wants to give it a chance but in his mind he believes the chance should not be marked with half rotten lies scattered everywhere...

* lastly... muskaan, after hearing his part, understands hes not in love with her... that he has feelings for her she realizes has always been obvious and shouldnt have been a question to begin with... but to her mind there is a difference... when she walks away, she doesnt claim to pretend this thing doesnt exist, neither does she inetnd walking away from it anynmore... she only believes that talking to her family about rahul's details have no significance for what they have right now... somewhere, from the fact that he claims to not love her yet, stems the apprehension of what if he never does... the idea that he may actually be in love and possibly not have realized it doesnt stand up to her, for, as it is, she has had her own realization just about then... and in that she lets him think of her having feelings for him as he does for her, nothing more, and certainly not to the extent of a love she realizes she harbors...

*lastly... rahul not in love.. yet... i had a back ground thought for that too.. nothing complex... just what i thought fit his char and his sketched back ground best... of course, i will try to unfold the best way i can with as little of ambiguity as i can manage in the parts to come... sometimes, i reckon, being the writer and knowing my own chars inside out for their past and present and even the future makes me ignore the fact that its not the same for my readers, and perhaps thats where the update lacked clarity to this particular setting of chars... excuse me for that ... :D i'm but a novice :D and believe me, a very unromantic never fall in love kind... i have no clue where any of this comes to me from or should in the first place to begin with :D

and last closing.. one more time, a huge teddy hug to you all for having presented such keen analysis of the update... i always have a ball reading them :) fr the bits that seem incoherent or less understood, or just contrary to what yu think should have been, pleaseee! let me off ... its just the way the story comes to me, it comes and i write :)

love ya all!!

nj :)

ps: will be replying to comment very soon :)

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-Nayab-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#456

Hi!

I'm finally back! 😛... Sorry I couldn't comment on your other part... Like you said...There wasn't much going on in part 15 but things needed clearing... Still enjoyed reading it immensely (spelt wrong I think 😕)... Especially Adi's part with Yume and her mum... So touching...

As for part 16... When I first read the PM I was like 😲 ... Couldn't believe you'd updated so fast (no offence 😊) ... I hope this continues 😉 😆...

Now coming to the actual part... It was AMAZING! As simple as that... I adored Rahul and Adi's conversation especially Adi thinking how he could be in trouble... I could just imagine his confused face 😆...

I could almost feel Rahul's pain when Adi says to him 'You're not my mother...' You've explained his emotions BRILLIANTLY... Bichara he tries so hard and to hear those words coming from Adi...

The Sangeetpal scene were he realises Aditya is Rahul's son... I was like NOOOO! Hoping that it would be something else (he realised) and not that 😛... I wonder what problems he's going to create now? 😕... The family/Meher will probably already know of it (thanks to Sangeetpal) before Muskaan gets a chance to explain it all to them...

The song Muskaan had chosen was so... Fitting... For both Muskaan and her feelings because she still believes in not saying the magical words 😆... Yet she still managed to convey her (hidden) feelings to Rahul through the song (kind of)...

Rahul and Muskaan's confrontation left me absolutely speechless... It was SO INTENSE! Really... I have no words... You are one AWESOME writer! 👏... Especially the last part...

'And he decided he was stressing too much, trying too hard. She was Muskaan, how hard could it be to make her smile... '

LOVED it! I sense a hint of masti 😆... Rahul's still as optimistic as ever... Even after what just happened between the two...

Take Care

Edited by N786 - 16 years ago

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...anshu...

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Posted: 16 years ago

#457

hey

thanx for d pm

d update was fab

i loved d intense emotions, during d rahul muskaan face 2 face

anshu

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@spln

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Posted: 16 years ago

#458

@nij... lolzzz... oki this one was a surprise... somehow, i anticipated you would enjoy AoL as and when you got to it... but this part of RM... and precisely for threason you did mention... i know hinu told you but maybe you forgot while and after reading... the last bit... i was telling her its the worst i've ever done, in general... not just RM :D ... and i sat at it longggggggg but couldnt do much.... :D lolzzz and surprise surprise.... you still used the word LOVED two times :D hahahah... oki yeh rahul was a prime of course! muskaan was in her own rights as was adi and even sps to an extent i reckon.... think i know where im taking this next, how is a question but oh well! muahhzzz wyfy, for the strict discipline :)

@hinu... yayyyy you hinu, i know the length and the prompt nature of the comment here had alot to do with the critic missing and you being there... you know... whether its that call the night i was leaving for the airport or this or many other lil tings here and there... i just know... ur there :) in a very.... reassuring way :) ... oki the comment.. the adi part i knew would go with you as it did, as it does all the time and never does with nij... :D the rest up and down ,... happening! you know exactly what mad things i was doing last tuesday... and sps... :D evil... you're giving him way too much credit!! 315 hinu, always!

@prasanthi... i hope my red note on page 62 will be most of an answer to the lil bits you asked dear... i was pretty uncertain about whether you were asking me as in questioning, or more like thinking out loud about the storyline in general... :D ignore me... :D and i think chars are like the pivot to any story.. whatever you make of them... is very closely going to coordinate what comes of the tale... its always a delight to be told the chars did it!

@kanu... lolzzz... nah... while she did make him feel very rotten and confused and i cant deny that, he wasnt going to tell her he loves her at all kanu! he had said what he had to... anyways... next part, lets see!! :)

@surbhi... thanks hun! you always say it, and it always still makes me smile :)

@sweety... hugs hun! for having done your part, and im glad you made up your mind whichever way you did!... for the part... RM getting together, in their own sweet time!

@aru... yeh ... i know... problems galore for the while... the bad news is, i always make too much mess and then bring hell down to earth to clear it up :S i should refrain from it next time, although i reckon im such a natural trouble maker... it just comes :D glad you liked the part in general hun.... RM... i didnt personally like!

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@spln

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Posted: 16 years ago

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@muneeza... *hugz* dear... for that very detailed comment!.. it was an insight and im glad you guys get down to telling me precise reactions to chars, more often than not i realize what i did well and what i abs did not! and most of all, its a great feeling to find readers get so involved with the chars of a fic, seriously, you have no idea how out of proportion my ego blows and i need this ton of lead to keep it down! :) thanks muneeza, like a whole ton of it, i hope the coming parts get better!

@aishwarya... thanks dear, for the comment despite the exams... which now i presume are over and so no sweat, not like i posted anytime before it!!.. will be though, some time soon!

@palnika... oh! you want nij to sort it out?? hmm... parts to reveal i guess... i wouldnt know exactly what yet myself since im not at it for a bit... but it will have it down pretty soon!

@nidha, @mar-, @saira, @shilky... thanks you all!

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@spln

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Posted: 16 years ago

#460

@RT di... :) always glad about that!

@sneha... take your time hun! im never easy on brevity!

@komz... *hugz* hun, glad you liked the part all bits included... will try to post at the earliest!

@imane... haha the muskaan and smile bit for my attempt to save a drowning bit to be honest... and i still think i was lame at it!... but if you liked it, gee thanks!

@natz... waiting of course, but for your update first!

@anshu... thanks dear!

@nayab... thanks for the super long and super wonderful comment dear!... and no offense taken about your shock at the second very quickie part :D sometimes, i get nice :D and the song, Rahul-adi part, RM... and the end hint of change... and SPS of course,... glad you like how it went... quite a turning part so much happening all at once it i reckon!... wil post as soon as i can!

Edited by spln - 16 years ago