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Posted: 16 years ago
ohhh ruchi..u r just too good..!!i loved the beinning and the end..nupur has saved mayank's no as MONKEY??😆...i loved the last part..it reminded me how they talked at phone earlier!!
☺️and i loved the way how you got mayu's dad issue in the beginning..it was really sweet..!!!sam-nupur convo was great!!
awesome update yaar..keep updating!!!👏
love you!!🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
omg ruchi!!!!!
that was fabulous... i luved it!!!
cant wait for the next part! :)
plz update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: palak5

ohhh ruchi..u r just too good..!!i loved the beinning and the end..nupur has saved mayank's no as MONKEY??😆...i loved the last part..it reminded me how they talked at phone earlier!!

☺️and i loved the way how you got mayu's dad issue in the beginning..it was really sweet..!!!sam-nupur convo was great!!
awesome update yaar..keep updating!!!👏
love you!!🤗

hey palak
good to see u back yaar....finally hectic days are some-wat over now
love u jaanu and glad u liked it😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: raveenamc

omg ruchi!!!!!

that was fabulous... i luved it!!!
cant wait for the next part! :)
plz update soon!

thanx a lot dear
glad that u liked it
will be updating soon😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
SHARMA MANSION
mayank was standing in front of mirror ,setting his spikes and humming....but suddenly he stopped doing that and made a straight face as he saw his mom curiously looking at him . Mayank turned towards his mom
mayu : kya hua ma?
mom : kya hua mayu?
mayu : aap aise smile kyun kar rahe ho?
mom : mayu tu aise humm kar sakta hai toh mein smile nahin kar sakti ?..waise aaj janab badle badle se nazar aa rahe hain...
mayu : aise koi baat nhain hai..woh toh..
mom : woh toh..kya?
mayu : kuch nahin...
mayank turned his face on the other side
mom : waise aaj tune t-shirt ke jagah shirt kyun pehne hai? aage toh kabhi nahin pehne
shipla looked at mayu with raised eyebrows
mayu : itna dramtic hone ke zaroorat nahin hai..mann kiya toh pehanle
as he made his way to door
mom : kuch toh badla hai...
mayu turned back...he was irritated to core
mayu : kya badla hai..dekho mere wohi do kaan, do aankheen, ek naak hai....kya badla hai?
shipla moved around him and watched him from head to toe...then she came and pointed to his heart
mom : yeh badla hai
mayu was speechless coz he knew shipla was true...so without saying any word he made his way to college
EXCEL COLLEGE
nupur and CJ were walking down the corridor , and nupur was back in her tees and jean
CJ : by the way..tum toh time par aa gayi thi , phir kahaan chale gayi thi
nupur : Mr. Mayank Sharma ko uski neend se uthane
CJ : no ways !!!!
nupur : kya matlab ?
CJ : matlab mayank soo raha tha...impossible yaar
nupur : kya impossible...woh actually mein soo raha tha, aur uske chakkar mein meinne bhi bus miss kar de
CJ : quite strange...waise interested in playing tennis ?
nupur : obiviously yyaar...aaj khele
CJ: done !!!..after class hum chalenge
nupur : cool...chal phir class ke baad milte hain
CJ : haan...wiase bhi i am planning to bunk this class, bye
CJ moved to canteen and nupur made her way to class but before tthat she saw mayank coming wearing shirt
mayank looked at nupur who was giggling
mayank : ab tumhe kya hua hai?
nupur : mujhe kya hua hai....tumhe kya hua hai?
maynak : abb hasne ke kya baat hai?
nupur : waise tum shirt mein ek dum chunnu ke papa lagte ho
and she started giggling again and mayank was left confused
mayank : very funny ...tumhe aur ma ko samajhna mere bas ke baat nahin hai and now will u stop laughing
nupur became a bit serious but again started to giggle and mayank was furious now
mayank : okk tum hasso , mein jaa raha hoon
nupur [trying to control her laugh] : accha sorry sorry...ab nahin hasungii
mayank : good...waise howz ur ankle now?
nupur : its perfectly fine...
mayank: gr8...aaj class shayad nahin hogi
nupur [all excited] : woh...kyun?
mayank : kitna khush ho rahe ho class cancel hone ke baat sunkar...aaj deodhar sir nahin aaye hain
nupur [jumping in joy] : awesome awesome awesome...matlab aaj humein bangalore mein bus miss karne ke liye daant bhi nahin padegi
mayank nodded
mayank : accha mujhe..
nupur : library mein kaam hai...mujhe pata hai...okk then see u later
mayank smiled and went to library
LIBRARY
Mayank was there in library for almost an hour completing his pending work and making notes.
mayank : yeh topic ...hmm...CJ se poochta hoon
he looked around in library in a hope that CJ might be there but she was not . So mayank went outside library and called her
mayank : heyy CJ
CJ [reluctantly] : heyy mayank
mayank : kya hua tumhe...koi problem hai
CJ : haaan
then only she recieves a cushion from nupur who was desperately gesturing her as to not to tell anythng to mayank
CJ : i mean naa
mayank : kya baat hai CJ..i can feel somethng fishy and where are u ?
CJ : woh..kuch nahin hai ...yaar
mayank [ authoritatively] : kahaan ho tum?
CJ [quickly] : hospital mein
as she said this , nupur kept hand and on her forehead
nupur [to herself] : aaj toh mein gayii
mayank : hospital mein !!!!...par kyun
CJ : woh actually nupur aur mein tennis khel rahe the and uske ankle mein sprain aa gaya and its a ligament tear
mayank : what !!!...kaunse hospital mein hoo
CJ : sanjeevani mein
maynak : mein aa raha hoon
mayank disconnected the call and CJ looked at nupur who was glaring at her
nupur : kyun bataya tumne mayank ko?
CJ ; mein kya karte...usne itne gusse se poocha ke meinne bata diya
nupur : aaj woh mujhe maar dega
then doctor came in
doctor : aapko tennis khelna nahin chaheye tha...u were already having sprain
nupur : actually sir..it was fine today so i thought
doctor : its a ligament tear ..and u should be thankfull that u didnt dislocate ur bone...otherwise it could have been severe
nupur nodded
doctor : u are on complete rest now..atleast for one week and dont dare to do somethng silly this time
nupur : yaa
nurse tied a crape bandage across her ankle
nupur came out of hospital and she was literally limping and CJ gave her support , and mayank's car stopped in front of them
nupur didnt evn dare to look at mayank and mayank was damn angry on her
maynak : mein nupur ko ghar chodh dunga
CJ : fine !!!
nupur got seated on front seat and mayank drove back home
during the drive nupur didnt utter evn a single word and mayank continously scolded her for being careless
they finaly reached BHUSHAN MANSION and nupur took a sigh of relief
nupur tried to move out of car but all in vain coz her ankle was not supporting evn a slightest of wieght and it was giving her loads of pain
mayank came to nupur
mayank: ghar ke keys hai tumhare paas
nupur nodded
mayank : mujhe do
nupur : par..
mayank [stern voice] : kaha na do
nupur handed over the keys to him
mayank went ahead , opened the door and nupur was confused as to wat was mayank doing
he came to nupur , bent a bit and took nupur in his strong arms
nupur was all mesmerised ..she had butterflies in her stomach as mayank carried her to mansion
nupur continously looked at mayank ...he was best person on this earth..so caring and so sweet .
mayank ,though angry on nupur , still couldnt help but got lost in her innocent eyes...myanak could easily peep into her heart from her eyes....he could make out nupur turning scarlet red and mayank enjoyed this moment forever.....
mayank took nupur upstairs to her room and made her lie on her bed...as mayank tried to stand , nupur screamed
nupur : ooouch !!!!..mayank
mayank again resorted to his original position
maynak : kya hua ?
nupur : oouch..tumhe yeh stupid shirt pehne ko kisne kaha tha?
mayank was still in same position..he was siting besides nupur but his body was bend almost above nupur
maynk : kya?
nupur : tumhare stupid shirt ke button mein , mera locket phas gaya hai...
mayank looked at it..and it was actually inter-twined , that too very badly
mayank couldnt straighten his body coz that will cause chain to rubb against her skin and bruise may occur
nupur tried to correct the mess but she couldnt..it was damn difficult for her as she felt mayank's warm breathe..he was so close to her that made her heartbeat evn more wild
maynk was continously staring at her...her changing expressions , her beautifull eyes...
nupur finally gave up and looked towards mayank...they shared a eyelock...
mayank : ek kaam karo...lets get-up and sit..warna aise toh kuch nahin hone waala
mayank supported nupur's neck and both tried to sit..
it was like a soul dancing to same beat...
they finally sat down , both reached to the locket together....the touch sent chills down there spine...it was a beautifull feeling
mayank : mein karta hoon
nupur removed her hand and mayank cleared the mess up.
they were still sitiing close to each-other..lost in each-others eyes.....dancing to tune of one-another's heartbeat
hope u liked this part....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome prt ruchi di.............waise normally toh I dont read mayur prts so carefully but these days due to SS scenes and d fab mayur track in d show and in ur ff has made me to like dem......

Love Adya!
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Posted: 16 years ago
uff gr8 update dear.......... mayur scenes were just too awsum.......mayu is soooooooo caring towards nupur........every single line was soooooooooo fantabulous yaar.........loved it very much..........plzz pm me next time......
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part ruchi
it is too good
plz cont.. soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
ruchi jaani!!!!!!!!! how can u be so good?it was something out of the world!!!!!!!! u have a really xceptional quality that u can cherish throuout ur life.u can emote their every emotion,every passion with great potential& courage,whthout making the sequence too mushy.totally heartmelting part.love u loads jaani.🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Ruchi....
Awesum update....
Soo sweet....
The Dil Badal Gaya Hai dialogue was just awesum....i like the mom n mayu scenes...
I wanna play tennis too....
Wen u said hospital...i thought maybe it was a joke...but it was real...
I could just imagine the fear (of Nupur being hurt)...on Mayu's face....
Such a caring guy....
They shud've talked more in the car....
I knew he was gonna lift her in his arms .....that really was sweet...
Butterflies ....totally.....
And the locket scenes.....fab......
What happened next...wanna know....
A very gud update....and longer.....Congo....
Thnx for the pm......
Keep it up...
TC...
-Ayesha-

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