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debby

@debby

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#991

Hey jaani... how r ya doing? I hope life's as rocking as this latest update of yours. :)

You write romance very well... the 'bouncing out' of Nupur's heart was so cute! The call couldnt have been better timed though... ise kehte hai kabab me haddi! I loved Mayank's inspection of the room and his reflections... The whole narration of a few days time was wonderfully done.. I can just begin to imagine how dream like they must have been indeed. To find such love is rare and not in everyone's destiny...

The little discussion on the medicines was cute too. They have such effect on each other, part of it unconscious. But they cant do without each other either... they are complete together. Little moments like the one u wrote about sumtimes say so much abt what really matters in life.

Coming to the end, it isnt a twist in the tale is it? I am sure you will protect my Mayank from any heartache... cant wait for the next update. Do PM me in case I miss out...

Love you loads. Keep writing!

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Arpita Madan

@Arpita.Madan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#992

OMG RUCHI DI!!!!!!!! itne dinon baad likha aur woh bhi itna dhamakedaar? *sigh* waitingggggggg
hugs
arpita
PS: Ur mayur scenes are so CUTE!!!

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Swati

@SwatiBeanyBrown

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#993

oh my god! how can u mnage such a stuff like dis?? m floored ms. Ruchi by ur ingenious way of storytelling!!!! 👏
m a new member here..so dint knew abt sch things here..but out of curiosity i atrted reading ese posts..n mann i dint slept 2nyt..i finishe reading all d 134 pages..actualy i wasn't readin,i was devouring ur story!!!! 😉 its a class,a masterpiece!! i dnt hav words 2 praise ur talent...BRAVO!! LUVLY!!!! 👏
i hv got so hooked up wid ur story dat i vl kp an active watch on ur ff updates..specially d mayur scenes..wow...dey r simply ethereal... 😊 ⭐️ 😃
god bless u!!! kp up ur grt work...

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Pallavi

@pigbelly4myfeet

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#994

RUCHIIIIIIIIIIII!!!

I'm SORIIEEEEEEEEEEE *tries to be cute by rhyming*

did it work? I'm so sorry for replying soo late woh bhi do do parts miss kardiye maine.

Ok I'll stop tryin to be cute now aur point pe aati hoon...This is for part 25...

OMG SOOOO romantic yaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!! First that line where Maa touched Mayank's heart and said "yahaan pe change hai" OMGGGG What a PERFECTT line! I was so touched while reading! Best line of this part hands down! *goes back to read it again*

And then Nupur finishing Mayank's sentence was too cute. What a great moment you wrote for us yaar.

And damn...I loved Mayank goin all strict and angry young man like over Nupur's health...so frickin hottt....*sharmaas*

And LOLLLL the chunnu ke papa shirts!! You couldn't resist using that haina? lol

OMG their eyelock and their closeness!! *dies* AHHHH I HAVEEE to read the next part toh main tujhse baad mein baat karungi...abhi mujhe faurann part 26 padna padega. *runs at full speed to go read*

Loveee you!! *jhappis*

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Pallavi

@pigbelly4myfeet

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#995

RUCHIIIIIIII!!!

😡

YOUUU and your stupiddd thrilllsss!! Tere thrillss ki toh main!!!

Ok Nupur better not have some purana dewwana awaara ashiq or something comin along! Well isn't she feelin stuff for Mayank? So that would be pretty impossible if she already had a boyfriend na? *ishmartty pants muh* Ya so nice try Ruch, I'm NOT fallin for this. And Mayank is such a ghadhaa yaar....I mean most guys are but seriously....koi cousin wousin....dost yaar bhi toh ho sakta haina jisse Nupur I love you keh?? A tear rolled down...jeeezz talk about jumpin to conclusions why dont'chya. Felt like smackin Mayank there. He better NOTTT like leave or something hearing that...yeh nahin ki bas boriya bistra baand ke chaldiya...he better still go inside the room.

Ok sorry for my rant there.....sab teri galti hai....teri aur tere STUPIDDD thrills ki!! 😡😡

lol ok I'm calm now....aisse matt dekh...I swear I'm calm ok? LOL at their dawai nok jhok! SOOO frickin cute! :D :D :D ....ok when I said calm, I meant relatively calm....compared to my above rant ok? teehee...

Aww another awesome takata bhadakta update Ruchi!! If I can forgive ya for your THRILSSS that is....😡😡

hehe love youuuu! 🤗

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GamesOfLife

@GamesOfLife

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#996

The next Deodhar sir is so cute 😆

@ Ruchi either its my influence or Rohit's FF bec u r getting romantic day by day : dancing to tune of one-another's heartbeat.....😳

@ loved every thing about this chapter ... well ppl r after study dates ....since beginning ...everyone .....has asked pd once for that 😆... if they didnt u gave us ..... keep it up ......👏... loved seeing Mayu so caring with medicines and all ... and Cj phone conversation was funny 👏

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luv-myur

@luv-myur

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Posted: 16 years ago

#997

Hi Ruchi,

I just read the full ff last week.

I enjoyed it.

I love the way you potrayed nupur.

Totally adore the character and sensibility you gave her.

Keep going.

Waiting 4 u'r update.

Thankyou.

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Swati

@SwatiBeanyBrown

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#998

m badly waiting 4 ur nxt update of love 4ever...plzzzzzzz update soon..ruchi... 🤔
hope u vl do it soon...god bless u.. 👍🏼
luv mayur always..luv mjht!!!!!!! 🤗