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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww.....congrats NJ!! (now, i can address u as nj instead of just calling u spln ...lolz)
though i hvn't still gotten the chance to chk out ur fics...some day i will for sure...but i can see that u truly deserve it....keep up the good work...i've scanned through a few chaps of 'unleashing...', ur writing style is so descriptive and amazing....i really hv to read this piece...will do so soon.....lolz....
take care,
ania :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: cool_SK

Congrates NJ......👏



You have to fill this little chart

1: What make you feel about her fics....

Titles:Hmm titles.... very scientific😳

Script: From the 3 she has written i have to say every in tune to human factor...👏

Style: Very american like many of the other American writers on the forum... but she carries her own flare..

Her Best Fic, In your View: First everyone!! 👏

2: A fiction tell you alot about his writer............so what her fics make you feel about her?

Funny as a person she in fun loving😳.... in her fanfiction she not exploreed comedy as such

Serious ... the dimentions she explore u can tell she a deep thinker😳


Cute .... hmmm the First fanfiction... and elements of the second had that quality for me...

Romantic.... Yep she a die hard romantic

A Power Pack..... awaiting to see this side of her in her fan fictions

Social.... yep she great person😛

3: Rate this out of 10


Writing: 6

Storyline: 7

Her nature: 10

4: Write few words about her & her amazing writing?

A very warm and one of the most intelligent members i have come across and u can tell she very confident young woman. Has a good heart and will go out her way to make u feel welcome.


5: On which subject you want her to write on?
hmmm i think im waiting on a Fan fiction when AR are married from her to explore ...a simple and cute love story... 😛

6: What improvement you want to see in her work?
I think for me her descriptive side on the scene need to be looked at a little more... as in the the characters mannerisms. Emotions u can she she caputures so well....Plus i think since her 2nd fan fiction she improved in so many ways. She explores the shades of the characters so well👏... but sometimes in Newton u could tell the passion in her ff was missing in places... or maybe that was the vibe i got....😳

7: What if she write fic on couple other than Kash & which one(couple)?
LOL KASH forever❤️

8:What is the best thing you like in her story?
She know what she wants to write and does deliever a great read...😊

Nj is a wonderful person though i dont know her on a personal level .....she can write a wonderful tale and im sure she give us many more great write ups in the future ..... Personal i know her best Fan Fiction is yet to ermge and im sure she thrill us all with her stories
BTW NJ ....im being honest on and can put my hand on my heart and hope i have not offended u at all! But as writer u are growing in so many ways and i truely hope we get to see more from u in the future! All the best in everything u do in life and on the new future Fan fictions.... as i have my seat ready there👍🏼
Love Kat
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
aawww kat thanx for the chart fill up....n no u have not n cant really ever offend me....in fact ur appraisal seems dam fair, most things u say id second n agree with, except perhaps the first fic being my best haha...yeh thats one id not think like u abt i gues...its dear to me coz its the first but not my fav....yeh all of the other things u like or suggest abt i think id say almost the same if i was writing a self appraisal...n die hard romantic...i think i take after my idol trully....AUSTEN he wrote some of the most romantic works but was different person...well she was a romantic for a bit but she dint live as one....um close...i think lolzzzz....

but thanx a bunch, not just for the chart....il remember forever i got to the forum coz u let me in!...n its been such a wonderful year almost....oh well it is a year today dam i just realized lolzzz....i cant thank u enuf!

best from me yet to come...think that will alwaz be so....never no scope to get better!

lov,

nj

ps: il keep the fic of armidz married in mind, only um uncertain how much justice i wud do it, without the experience of a relation like that writing that dimension might not be something i master! but il keep it on, n will certainly try a hand at it soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: spln

aawww kat thanx for the chart fill up....n no u have not n cant really ever offend me....in fact ur appraisal seems dam fair, most things u say id second n agree with, except perhaps the first fic being my best haha...yeh thats one id not think like u abt i gues...its dear to me coz its the first but not my fav....yeh all of the other things u like or suggest abt i think id say almost the same if i was writing a self appraisal...n die hard romantic...i think i take after my idol trully....AUSTEN he wrote some of the most romantic works but was different person...well she was a romantic for a bit but she dint live as one....um close...i think lolzzzz....

but thanx a bunch, not just for the chart....il remember forever i got to the forum coz u let me in!...n its been such a wonderful year almost....oh well it is a year today dam i just realized lolzzz....i cant thank u enuf!

OMG i never let u in honey u where alway part of IF.... and like all newbies alittle shy entering the waters.... i seriously did nothing!😳 but wanted u to enjoy ur Experience here!!😛

best from me yet to come...think that will alwaz be so....never no scope to get better!

lov,

nj

ps: il keep the fic of armidz married in mind, only um uncertain how much justice i wud do it, without the experience of a relation like that writing that dimension might not be something i master! but il keep it on, n will certainly try a hand at it soon!
This is what writing is all about experimenting and all.... as i scientic urself u knew the more we try the better we get and i my self still have my own areas of improvements as well....
Perfect was for me the best Fan Fiction to date and i can enclose why i loved it so much..... It was the AR relationship which clicked in that .... Armaans motive for the best of him business to marry her ...and Ridz denial of marrying someone her father chosen but fell head over heals for Armaan.... it was the little meeting u describe so well.... and him falling in love with her totally.... The romance level and initial passion ran threw that fanfiction for me....... so well scripted and excuted!!👏👏
Newton from the inital and when they went back to college was great the lab incident and her insecurities.... but i think u tried to get every emotion packed into the fan fiction ..... It was a great read as u explored the characters but coming to the end u kind of lost track a little and it kind of showed slight;y... and i think it was all due to vast range of other characters u where exploring as well... which kind of diluted certain aspect..... but i can say from this fan fiction i can tell u have learnt alot and in Unleash it shows....👏👏
Will alway be there to comment on what ever u write! hey i written some disaster believe me and i know where i lack as a writer, but we all still learning and im sure one day we can look back at a fanfiction and say that was the best.... Toady i read mine im like what this rubbish ROLF....
p.s. - No offence!😛
Love Kat

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Posted: 16 years ago
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kat no offense taken, but u need to quit the ps precautions please :)

um repeating, there is no reason to be offended by anthing u say, i take your words quite seriously!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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congratulations NJ. I have never read ur stories but I know u have quite a fan following. One of these days, I will definitely read ur fan fics as I can tell ur very talented and creative.

Congratulations once again- u deserve to be in the spotlight!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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You have to fill this little chart

1: What make you feel about her fics....

Titles:great..............i luv all her titles...give a suspense effect to the fic

Script:great.....i really like how she proceeds

Style:good.....i luv the accent she adopts for a character

Her Best Fic, In your View:Newton....what say?...i luv it

2: A fiction tell you alot about his writer............so what her fics make you feel about her?

Funny

Serious

Fun-Loving

Cute

Romantic

A Power Pack

Social

3: Rate this out of 10


Writing:8

Storyline:8

Her nature:10

4: Write few words about her & her amazing writing?

Girl, u r rocking.........keep going on like this.....

5: On which subject you want her to write on?

like kat di said, a married AR...........i too would like to read how there relationship will travel a journey............in UWRU...i first thought that AR are married n is there some misunderstanding...........but lovely break my heart

6: What improvement you want to see in her work?

A bit more explaination........description so capturing a situation will get more easy

7: What if she write fic on couple other than Kash & which one(couple)?

i will luv to read if it is Angad-Kripa.....but other than...........always Kash

8:What is the best thing you like in her story?

She totally looks engrossed in the character..........i really like the way she shows armaan style in Newton......that just made me adored her more n more

9:What are the things you think is the backdrop of her fic?


the atmostphere she creates is really magical

luv ya girl......

lolz
ana

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: cool_SK

hey guys

Here, is a chance, to get a bit close to your writter and ~Express Your Thoughts~ about him/her

After Kat di and Sangeeta jii......here is our third Writer


spln

aka

NJ




You have to fill this little chart

1: What make you feel about her fics....

Titles: The BEST.

Script: See below.

Style: Brilliant. Brilliant. Need I say more? THE BEST. I mean from all the other FF's over here... Naseem's the best.

Her Best Fic, In your View: Unleashing What Remained Unsaid

2: A fiction tell you alot about his writer............so what her fics make you feel about her?

Funny

Serious

Fun-Loving

Cute

Romantic

A Power Pack

Social

ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

3: Rate this out of 10


Writing: 10.. though Naseem, I've always wondered why you wrote UM instead of I'M.

Storyline: 10

Her nature: Hmm... from what I know... she's inspiring!!!

4: Write few words about her & her amazing writing?

Publish it. thats all. it's that brilliant.

5: On which subject you want her to write on? Something other than romance.. like history.

6: What improvement you want to see in her work? I have no complains :) you can ask a professional critic for that job.

7: What if she write fic on couple other than Kash & which one(couple)? A couple designed from the top of her head.

8:What is the best thing you like in her story? Details and diction.

9:What are the things you think is the backdrop of her fic? I wonder why i have no answer for this question...




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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg naseem!! congrats...it sure is double party!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
Nijal...ana...zuz...nidha...kratz....thanx for the charts girls....nij hun u say too much :)

ana...thanx for the tips n the married couple thing i will keep in mind!

zuz/....lovya girl....theres some strange wavelength where u n me think alike...yayyyyy for the fic u call ur fav ....its my fav too ...from all iv done so far :)

nidha thanx for the high rating...

kratz hun ur becomeing a pro ur self, n fast....love ur work n comments from u take me a level higher!

ania, palnika, everyone thanx a bunch!

bheegi di thanx for being here i love ur fics u already must know, n it wil be great to hear back from u whenever u get the time to read any of mine!...fan folowing, its not just me, its how lovely the readers at FF are!
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