precious gift called love- ar ff....part 4 updated

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shivu_crazyfan

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Posted: 16 years ago

hey guys,,,,.....😊 its my secong ff of ar,,,,.......first one was not so good....i tried my best to make it the best plzzzz have a look and if u really like den plz comment on it.......

its a love sstory of armaan ridhimma[ shilpa] who fall in love but destiny plays a game wid dem.....dey died....and dey again take a birth[ rebirth ] to be together........

the story includes

simmy- a 17 yrs girl who tells a story to her little sis niki abt ar......story of true love.....rebirth.....

hope u ll like the intro!!!🥱

part 1- page 1
part2- page 2!
part 3-page 2
part4- page 3

Edited by shivu_dmg - 16 years ago

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Sameera

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Posted: 16 years ago

HEY.
Nice concept yaar..........i'll love to read this...please do continue this soon and plz if u can then pm me when you update.

love,
sameera

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shivu_crazyfan

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Posted: 16 years ago

part 1

the story begins at the 2 sisters home

niki is studying...and trying to focus upon something

simmy- hey kya kar rahi hai????

niki- kuch khass nahi....

simmy- accha let me see,,,rebirth par reserch kool topic.

niki- kya kad accha topic hai di😡

simmy- kyun

niki- wats dis rebirth ...huh?? i don brlieve dis stupid things......

simmy- are dis things do exist ..bas belief hona chhahiye

niki- accha??

simmy- accha...chaal let me tell u aa story.....a story abt a true love....kaise dey fall in love and how dey were separated and died off....but dere love so so true..pure dat dey took a rebirth and finally dey are together now.........

niki- ohhh acha...seems interesting......es kahani mein kaun kaun hai

simmy- es kahani ke characters hai......___________________

ridhimma....armaan....atul..anjali.....nikki....rahul air muskaan....

niki- yeh sab kaun...

simmy- armaan - ridhimma......jo bas ladte the jagerte the...aur bas pyaar ho gaya........
muskaan.....anjali...nikki....raahul...ayul deir frnds....

ridhimma.........she was a doctor.....cum intern just taking training in sanjeevani.....and she had muskaan ...anjali..her fnds wid her...

and opposite dere
armaan cool handsome hunk.......nikki was his best frnd....and yes rahul and atul......dey all just passed dere coll. and was finding der particular jobs........

hope u ll like part 1.....plz do comment i really worked hard........

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Sameera

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey,
nice starting , ... ...continue soon.

love,
sameera😊

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shivu_crazyfan

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sameera_12
Hey,
nice starting , ... ...continue soon.

love,
sameera😊

thanks a lot sameera..........i ll surely continue soon.......

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Nidha

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Posted: 16 years ago

waoh👍🏼 its sound intresting😊😉 plz continue it soon😊 and plz send me pm😉 when u update it😊 if u dont hv😳 any problem😊

"Wo samne aye to nazro ko jhuka longa
DekhoNga nahi phir b tasweer bana longa
Aana ho to aa jao ruswayee nahi hogi
Dekhe ga nahi koi, palkon main chupa longa."

Edited by kvn1983 - 16 years ago

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Nruti

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Posted: 16 years ago

hey nice consept i raly liked it its very interesting "REBIRTH" i do not belive in this thinks but i wud always love to read about it
plz do send me a PM when u updat

thnxs

nruti

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Mahima

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Posted: 16 years ago

hey....very nice start!! interesting concept!! plzz cont soon!!

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shivu_crazyfan

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kvn1983
waoh👍🏼 its sound intresting😊😉 plz continue it soon😊 and plz send me pm😉 when u update it😊 if u dont hv😳 any problem😊

"Wo samne aye to nazro ko jhuka longa
DekhoNga nahi phir b tasweer bana longa
Aana ho to aa jao ruswayee nahi hogi
Dekhe ga nahi koi, palkon main chupa longa."

thanks a lot!! yeah i ll pm u!!

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shivu_crazyfan

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: arluver15
hey nice consept i raly liked it its very interesting "REBIRTH" i do not belive in this thinks but i wud always love to read about it
plz do send me a PM when u updat

thnxs

nruti

sure!
thanks a lot!!!!!!!