Roommates - (DMG) - Part 2- Page 3

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JennyPenny

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

^Thanks yaar. Now that I see it, I realized I forgot to mention about the guy. Consider a blooper pleaseee😳
Thanks so much guys😳 Glad u are liking the story:)

Edited by jenny1000 - 16 years ago

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KaSh_4_eva

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

fantastic part I liked that line when anjali said don't hang around like tarzan next time

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sweetaddiction

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

cutee !!-- am enjoyin ur fanfic-- it sounds interesting and with this start-- i tink its just gonna get better-- cant wait to read more !!
~Sweetoo =)

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kashish

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Hi, I caught up with ur FFn it's mind blowing , I just can't help my self for smiling, fabulous, but tell me their was also a guy hanging, where did he go, or I didn't understand pls clarify, anyways continue soon, ASAP.And if possible PM me.

Kashish

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@star_fan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

WoW...Crazy Beginning....Its exactly Crazy Beginning....Its interesting & enjoyable....Really amazing...Very very nice part....So cute....Fabulous as they are always...

Will b waiting for what next so do try to be very soon...

Edited by star_fan - 16 years ago

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Nidha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

woah jenny🤗 its really an awesome⭐️ so cute😊😉 plz continue it soon😊 and send me pm😉 when u update😳 if u dont have any problem😳

"Hum Hawa Ke Jhonke Hai
Guzar Jayenge,
Khamoshi Se Tumhare Dil Mein Utar Jayenge,
Paa Ke Tumhari Dosti Ko Hua Ehsaas Ke.
Tumse Bichad Kar Hum Mar Jayenge."

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Veronica

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

awesum part jenny!! cont soon!

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JennyPenny

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

Thanks everyone for your comments😳

Yeah the guy hanging will be introduced in the next part as well as some flawness of some characters.😳

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Jia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#29

Jenny!!!🤗

Just got online and saw this!! Wohoo that was a thunderous update, I sooooooo loved the amazing way in which you described the bond forming between the chaacters, ofcourse KASH oops AR being the best!!

I cud so imagine KASH there yaar, the small little fights, yet not over the top which is wat i adored, the small understanding forming between the couples, and oh i have to admit its Atul's character u deserve a standing ovation, the AA bond was brilliant, ok RM and AR were superfantabulous, overall a very very enjoyable, flawless penned treat and an outstanding begining to a great journey, kudos Jens!!