You Are Not Alone...(AR) Short Story (only 4 parts

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Posted: 16 years ago
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You Are Not Alone...

Another day has gone
I'm still all alone
How could this be
You're not here with me
You never said goodbye
Someone tell me why
Did you have to go
And leave my world so cold
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Lying on his bed he sighed...he closed the book finding it not intresting enough...all he could see was her innocent face..
Why Ridhimaa?..Why did you leave me?
He felt himself on a verge of tears but qickly wiped them as he saw his brother Rahul barge in his room...
"Ammy!..Guess What?"
Armaan plastered a smile on his face..."What?"
Rahul smiled.."I'm going to get engaged....with Muskaan!!"
Armaan was suprised..."How! i mean when did you tell mom and dad?...and you didn't tell me!"
Rahul sat beside.."Just a few days ago...they talked to her parents , and soon they arranged the date...but she doesn't know yet..i'm going to give her a suprise"
Armaan hugged.."Aww...i'm really happy for both of you"
Rahul pulled away from the hug..."K...have to go now...to give her suprise...you take care"
Armaan smiled.."Yeah you too..." As Rahul left he closed his eyes..Was he ever going to be happy like him?
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"Muskaan i told you na? I really can't come!" Ridhimaa twirled her strand of hair...sitting on her swing in her garden...
"Ridzi!...Nooooo you can't do this..look you're my best friend.. its my engagement..you have to come!"
Ridhimaa pulled the phone away from her ear....she was screaming...
"Muskaan...calm down...i told you the reason...i have a really important interview on that day"
Muskaan sighed..."Ridz plz?"
Ridhimaa shifted in her seat.."Look i won't make any promises..but i'll try ok?"
"Alright...but try...i'll wait for you...Bye Ridzi!"
"Bye"
She hung up her phone and stood up and walked in the kitchen....as she made herself a cup of coffee...she thought to herself
She couldn't really go to her engagement..because she knew who she will find...Armaan....all those old memories came flooding in down her head....when the first met....when the confessed their love for each-other....
But her life turned lonely and miserable when she left him...all suddenly...she always wondered how he must of been feeling...lonely like how she was....she had a reason for why she left....
On that last night she had met him....Armaan had took her to a dinner-date...on a beach....a beautiful white table..white candles...white curtains....it all looked so fairy-tale like. she remembered as she stood there stunned...
That was the night when he kissed her..she felt it was the most wonderful feeling in the world...
After the date... he dropped her home...he insisted to come inside.. he was just being naughty..but she refused and kissed him on the cheek and ran home
..when she came home...she suddenly recieved a phone call..she picked up the phone and instantly regognised the voice...
She didn't know her past was going to crumble around her after so many years..
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Hey Guys this is the first time i've started a short story i know this was quite boring!😆
but i promise the other parts will be good...do tell me if you have any advice to me to help me improve😆😳
i will update every Saturday...i hope you enjoy reading my four parts....and plz do comment😳 thank you....
btw this is the intro😆
Edited by **Manu** - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey MAnu very interesting intro.. Curious to knw wht happened between them in the past... Go for the updates.. We'll b ready for the comments... 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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manu 🤗 u tamatar i didnt know u were such a damn good writer, it was awesome, seems like a really good concept, do continue soon
luv
aishah
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww thanks aishah!🤗 to tell you the truth ..i don't think i'm that good..but i just wanted to write it😳

thanks for the comment swetha..i really appreciate it😳.. means a lot to me...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey its realy a nice conspte but i fell bed for both of them that they love each other sooooooooooo much but cant stay together i wonder what was the reason??? but its sound gud thnxs luv nruti
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Of course it's not boring hun! I love it so far...I wonder who called Riddhima that night and why she decided to leave Armaan. Continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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sounds really gd. continue sooN!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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do continue sounds very interesting
luv iram

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