I'll Be There (AR) Pt8/Pg24-12/14 - Page 12

wooohooo

my b'day gift
cheers Sim
love u

reserved

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OMG Sim,i hadn't read the footnote before
it indeed is a an awsome gift
loved the update hun

and i didnt feel u jumped between scenes at all
the pace was faster coz u had many different scenes
god Sim the words are still ringing in my ears
it was just written so well👏 with all facts in place
i just love Riddhima in here,funny enuf more than Armaan
i wonder wat she's do when she finds out he's falling for her
i somehow feel she wud be as normal as poss
i felt it the most for shashank
Muskaan 's bit was so well put together
i just loved the whole flow and i still thot it was short😆
u know why,just can never have enuf of your updates
now update soon
and lets see how the story shapes up from here onwards

thanks so much
and love u lots

Hina

sim um gona start with defying ur orders...it was still short...alas...all good reads are short no matter how much the number of pages count down to!

oki fab part hun, i duno wat u thot was amiss...i think the convo start between them was natural.///i wqas almost surprised when she told him he cud sit n eat with them....only almost...the moment i read it, it seemed as natural as the fact that she didnt go gaga over him....

oh i duno...u take the emtions unpredictably n still they seem to fit liek the way they shud when i read them...just like ridhima from ur other fic calling armaan n telling him she takes the 2nd deal...u do things so unexpectedly, n then u write such that it feels like it was the obvious thing to happen hahaha...great job sims...loved reading the part, but u let out the secret exams off, u better be upadting quick parts!

tht was gr8. continue soon.

Amazing chapter! Love your writing....so descriptive and fluid. Will try to write a long review during my winter break...but for now, gotta get back to the books. 😔

hey .. jus caught up wiv ur ff n its amazin .. d way u ryt it is awesome .. kp it up hun .. x

Hey simran

Simran!!

Finally after long 4 hours i read d entire part....don't ask me wat took me so long...hiniz callin most of it haha..n d other ma stuck up old lappy!
neays! crap tlk! sexy update..did i tell u...luv yur fic...likin really..cuz for 1 u mke me think wat i wanna c next..n 2nd its juss do difft...its heavy on d happening but juss as light on d words...dts sum class work gurl!! ;)
and even wit me tryin 2 mke sense of wer u tkin it..i juss hve no clue...dt fleetin hope of thins workin out tem..juss wnt leave ma mind!! :)

update soon gurl! niceee!! :D

nij

jus caught wid d ff.. n luvd it.. it seems 2 b different....
update soon