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Posted: 16 years ago
#61
Great Promo
Post the next two parts
Bring Angad into the story
Update Soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62

Part 4- Meeting A Jerk At The Gala ~Part 2~

"Kripaaa" my father came to an open hug. I did not hug him instead; I removed an imaginary piece of lint off my short white baby doll dress that I matched with my dark wash skinny jeans. I saw Kaitlin there practically naked in her black tube top mini like really mini dress that made her look like a tramp and her over done dark hideous makeup made me want to gag. She was trying to do poses that she thought was normal as if it were a friggin photo shoot. She thought she fit in except she was a total outcast!

"Kripaaa I am so happy you came." I half smiled {Fake Of Course}. I went up to my room. I went to my balcony and sat on those swingy chair thingies. I called Inez up to have her make me a sundae. "Of course miss Kripa" Inez replied. I just kept swinging until Inez left my room. I quickly got off and went to my laptop. In there I wrote my first plan for Operation fake nose {Kaitlin} leave.

Operation fake nose {Kaitlin} leave {Plan 1}

*Ruin her party!!!!

Yess!!! It was a brilliant plan. Kaitlin's birthday bash was coming. Every year Kaitlin had this hugeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee party where she invited everyone. It would be the talk of the town and headline news for about 2 months. The tradition would carry on but this time it was not for the glamorousness. Uh oh! I thought as I heard the knock on my door. I quickly turned off the computer and stood there nonchalantly. "Miss Kripa" Inez said handing me my sundae. "Thank you Inez" I said nodding my head. Inez bowed her head about three inches and then she left my room.

Oh, was I bored there was nothing to do in the prison cell that I like to call home.

I went out to the mall at least that is something I loveeeeeee to do, shop of course! I called up one of my bestest friends Kiran, who was GAY! However, he/she was super cool. Other than the fact, he/she scared Josh because Kiran had a crush on him but it wasn't that big I mean he knew he couldn't get Josh. "Kiran" I ran up to him/her. "Kripa Baby" he said examining my outfit. "Ooooh girl you are rocking those Vera Wang" Kiran said in a gay accent. "Hey, lets go there" I said pulling Kiran into a store. I tried on a gorgeous silk ivory one of a kind off-the-shoulder gown with a low cut front and that dipped low in the back. "I think I'm gonna cry" Kiran said as he/she waved her hand dramatically over her eyes. "You like," I asked knowing obvious answer. "Nope baby I lovee it" I smiled to myself. I gave the sales clerk my dress and a few dozens of others. I gave her my platinum credit card and she smiled, as if she were pleased with herself.

"Ok, now let's go somewhere else" I said taking my bags and my credit card back. I went on and bought about four dozens of shoes. "Okay, now let's go to Claire's" I said pulling Kiran. "Is, this the last stop?" I answered, "Promise, the last one" I said retuning Kiran's pinky swear.

"Please" I begged Kiran. "Noooo!!!". "I thought you loved shopping," I told Kiran my opinion. "I do babe but we have been shopping for 7 hours non stop and I have to go to my yoga class," Kiran said. "Well, we stopped for a smoothie" I said and he/she corrected me, "then we went shopping again. Remember." "Yeah, I guess. Sorry Kiran" I said heading towards the back. "Oh Mama Mia! I have to get that dress," I said running inside a store. "Oh god" Kiran said putting his/her hand on her head as he pulled his/her body towards the store.

"Ummm... thank you," I said as the servants helped me get my billions of bags up to my room. I was so tireeeeeed! Oh man now I have to put all of this in my enormous walk-in closet. Awwww... I'll just do it tomorrow I said to myself.

"Okay, that's the last dress" I said as I sat down. Ok so what I couldn't resist to put it away now. What can I say I'm a neat freak! Oh, I was sooo tired so I fell on my bed I could feel my legs throbbing in pain. With the last bit of energy I had I changed into a pair sweats and a simple tank top.

"Pancakes with chocolate syrup" I demanded. I had breakfast on the table. Mixed fruit pieces, orange juice, Pancakes {Yummy...} and that's all I asked for. I ate three pieces of fruit two bites of pancakes and a few sips of orange juice. I left and then I got changed into a black halter neck and dark wash jeans. I left home to go to the mall. When I was about to leave Inez informed me, "Miss Kripa tomorrow you have to go to the Gala". Thanks Inez I shouted as I grabbed one of her famous yummy brownies I bit one piece and left it there to grab another one. I ate one before I got into my black convertible.

I was driving by and there was a red light. I was applying lip-gloss when someone honked at me. I whipped my head around. There were about five boys on top of the jeep and one screamed out, "Ey babe... Go out with me tonight?" I smirked. The jeep came next to my car. "So pick you up at eight?" he asked. "Sure" I said. "So give me you num-" I cut him off. The red light came on and I raced out of there. I laughed to myself. "I heard his friends saying "ohhh, she got you" and so much more.

Sorry this part was so short. I have been reallii busy, it has
been hard for me to keep track of my fanfic, and I have been having some personal matters and issues so I might not be posting that often...


--- <3 Elana*
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63
Awesome fanfic. I'm waiting for Angad to come into the picture. I have a feeling that he's Prem's brother.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64
cool one👏
ud soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65

Part 4 Meeting A Jerk At The Gala

~Part 3~ PROMO!!!

"How do I look? Fabulous! I know." I said spinning around
elegantly. I wore the same dress I had tried on at the mall. Tina looked a little
jealous but who cared I looked fabulous in my silk ivory one of a kind off-the-shoulder gown with a low cut front and that dipped low in the back. "You do" Tina said, still looking a little jealous . "Okay, lets go now," Tina said pulling me.


Yay hope U R excited I'm posting
Part 4 Meeting A Jerk At The Gala ~Part 3~
Soon meaning today which has Angad in it!!!!

--- <3 Elana*

Edited by Elana* - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#66
Side Characters

It's Elana Obviously and I would like to ask if you guys want other
characters from diff... shows. AK are the
most important ones but if you would like other characters from diff...
shows {Finished Shows Will Work} as
SIDE CHARACTERS
I will be happy to add them.

As Long As
~I kno da couple
~They are not like old couples EX... {Mihir/Tulsi}
~And if U realii... want them
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67
just caught up wid ur ff..
must say ur doing an awsome job!!
cont asap
gr8 promo
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
nice promo...
but where r u???
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Posted: 16 years ago
#69

Part 4- Meeting A Jerk At The Gala ~Part 3~

"How do I look? Fabulous! I know." I said spinning around elegantly. I wore the same dress

I had tried on at the mall. Tina looked a little jealous but who cared I looked fabulous in my silk ivory one of a kind off-the-shoulder gown with a low cut front and that dipped low in the back. "You do" Tina said, still looking a little jealous . "Okay, lets go now," Tina said pulling me.

"Kiran" I said as I waited for a hug. "Oh, Kripa you look gorgeous" Kiran said in his gay, accent! "Ummm... so do you?" I said as if it were a question. "Hey guy-" Tina was about to say guys when she saw Kiran. "Hey Kripa, hey animal," Tina said my name nicely but she said Kiran as if he were inhuman. Tina hates gay people but I don't get why, Kiran is so sweet! "Oh Tiny, tch, tch, tch, when will you learn not to be jealous of me," Kiran called Tina Tiny because she was small and so petite and she looked like a mouse,

"Huh," Tina stomped out of the circle we had made. "Oooh, so how's it going on with you and Pierre, your amazingly sexy gay French boyfriend?" I said nudging him. "Oh, not good at all babe, I caught him with that blond stringy haired little miss know it all Francine. I mean what kind of name is Francine, it sounds like Puke!" Kiran said with attitude. "Ouch! But you know what?-" Kiran cut me off "What?" he/she looked so innocent. "You should move on." I tried to give him spirit. "Ok, I mean I should try to move on." Just then Josh came he hugged me, but Kiran pushed me away and embraced Josh dreamily and tightly for a looong time! "Okaayy, you can let go of me now," Josh said a little annoyed. "Oh sorry." Kiran said embarrassed. Josh zoomed out of here. Ok, don't tell me Kiran wants to move on with Josh? "Oh, Josh is so-" I cut Kiran off "I don't wanna hear about it," I put my palm up.

I was about to go grab a drink when I fell flat on my butt. Hope no one noticed. Oh, but they did, they all did. "Are you okay" people said concerned. "Yeah, I'm fine" I said even thought my ankle hurt, even if it hurt a little it still hurt. I was sitting next to Kiran when he/she spotted some hot dude. "I love you Kripa babe, but total hot dude next to the girls" Kiran had a naughty smile. "Who? Prithivi! Oh my god, Prithivi!!!" I ran and hid well practically jumped when I saw him. "Ok, why did you turn down Prithivi he is sooo hot!" Kiran said dramatically. "Ok, he is a total creep who had a crush on me since like... forever!!!. And he is such an idiot!" I exclaimed. Some people looked back at me I smiled and continued to talk.

I was sitting nonchalantly when Prithivi came up to me and asked me for a dance. I shot him down in a heartbeat. He kept trying to get me to dance but I refused. At last, he gave up and left with someone named Maria. "May I have this dance?" a mysterious hand appeared in front of me. "No!" I refused assuming it was Prithivi. "Umm... yeah sure," he said confused. I whipped my head around and gazed up at the dreamy and gorgeous man in front of me. He quickly walked away and I walked after him. I tried to explain, "Hey... wait-" I tried to explain that it was not his fault that I thought he was Prithivi.

Just then, I saw him. Oh, but this time he was feeding
cherries to a girl. Jerk!!! "Yes, how may I help you?" he said smirking. "Umm... but you and-" I babbled. "Sweetie you only get one chance with
Angad Khanna. And you blew it." Can you believe him? "Actually Angad Khanna I just came to give you this..." I said throwing my drink in his face. He was shocked. His jaw was up to his knees and he looked furious. Looked like, Angad Khanna had never been treated this way.

Sorry. I know I promised that I make this
part long but I thought I could torment you guys by not posting a long part and give details
Muhuahuahuahuahuahauhauhauhua!!!!

<3333333 Elana*

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Posted: 16 years ago
#70
Ahhhhh, I'm happy Angad's in the picture finally! :)

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