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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
shafo, tanvi,ayesha!,JIA,SANA,LRL_01,jenny

thnx a ton guys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! for liking my work!

Bublly u will enjoy the mayur scens after this ones too! i promice!

Kavya thnx!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
"uumm................paratha? Nahi bhajiya! Ummm........................'

benji was confussed. He was looking at rate board for last 15 min. Sam was standing near him with his grumpy face ever.

"arey benji, ab tak to hum Alibagh pohoch jate! Jaldi kar warna Dia aa jaegi"

sam said in gabbar's tone in sholay.

"lekin sam mein confuss hoo! Kya khau?"

"ek kaam kar apni aankhein band kar aur jo naam aankhonke samne hai wo order kar"

"haan! Yeh thik hai"

and benji closed his eyes.

Shaking head in disbelief sam turned to gun, who was searching for some one.

"arey chashmish kise dhund rahi ho?"

"huh? Haan wo di ko. Kahi dikhae nahi de rahi"

"fikar mat karo woh aa jaegi"

"par ek baar jake dekhana chahie. Main jakar dekhati hoo. Waise bhi yahan ruk ke kya karu?"

sam raised his eydbrows,

"achha? To ab humari company itni boar hai?"

"arey nahi samrat! Maine aisa to nahi kaha"

"to aisa karte hai hum dono dhundate hai"

"par benji?"

"benji", sam said half laughing, "jab benji khata hai na tab uske aas pass agar earthquack bhi aa jae to use koi farak nahi padata"

gun looked at benji then at sam for second,

"achha thik hai!"

so they went to search for nup and mayu.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53
As they approach further, gun saw few village ladies painting a Matka. Gun turned towards them, unknown to Sam.

"to chashmish tumne college fest ke barrein mein kya...................."

and Sam turned, but coudnt see Gun.

"chashmish........chash........." and there he found her sitting with those villege women, helping them to colour.

With his tredmark smile, he sat by her. Watching closly as she helped them n chat with them.

"waise chashmish kya main bhi madat karu?"

"tum? Tumhe ata hai yeh sab paint karana?"

"haan kyun nahi. Samrat kitno ko apne rang mein rang chuka hai"

"achha! To yeh lo" and gun handed him one of the matka and continued her work.

Sam hold that matka for a minute and an evil smile spread across his face.

"waise chashmish, mere hisaabse yahan red colour hona chahiye"

"to laga do na!" gun said without looking at him.

"to lagadoo?"

"lagadoo"

"sach mein lagadoo"

"haan, baba lagadoo".

And then suddenly gun remember something and look up. But it was too late, that something was happened. Sam had coloured her nose with red colour.

She had her mouth full open.

"chashmish tum purani baatein jaldi bhul jati ho"

saying this sam went back to see whether benji had finished or not, leaving behind gun still looking at him.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
It is very unique and interesting to see nupur walking for last 10 minutes without uttering a word.

And same thing bothered mayu, so he started discussion,

"to nupur tumne college fest ke liye koi theam sochi hai kya?"

"haan, sochi to hai. Par kya tum sunoge?"

"haan! Bilkul. Sunao!"

its like she was waiting that mayu will start topic and she will then start talking, coz as mayu said 'sunao', nups started,

"by god mayank agar yeh theam ok ho jae na to maza aajaega"

"tumhe maza aaega? Matlab koi khatarnak si theam hogi"

mayu said teasing her. Nups stopped mid way, placing her both hands on her waist.

"agar majak hi banana tha to pooch kyun? Main janati thi tum to sidhe muh mujhase baat kabhhi nahi karoge!"

mayu stopped laughing and turned arround.

"achha baba. Nahi hasunga, nahi chidhaunga aur sidhe muh tumse baat karunga! Ab to bata do?"

without paying any attention to what he was saying nupur continued to walk further, mayu shouted behind her,

"arey nupur bata bhi do! Main promice karata hoo tumhe nahi chidhaunga"

"main nahi bataungi"

and nups continued marching away from mayu.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
"achha thik hai mat batao" mayu said finaly accepting the defeat.

As nups heard this stopped and turned, she wanted to share her idea with mayu but was thinking mayu will plead her more. So to handle the situation nups changed her mind,

"haan mujhe pata tha tum meri idea pehle se hi sunana nahi chahate the, par ab main tumhe woh bataungi agar tum sunana nahi chahate phir bhi"

mayu knew exactly why she has changed her mind,

"achha baba batao main sunana chahata hoo"

and nups return to her original state,

"by god mayank kya batau tumhe agar mera idea final ho jae na to maza aa jae"

"achha? Aise kaunsa idea hai batao?"

"dekho mayank wo naach, gaana, fashion show vagera to hamesha tum sab bombay mein dekh chuke ho aur college mein bhi bohot baar ho chuka hai. Par asali maza to tab aayega jab saare students wo dekhenge jo shayad unhone pehle kabhi nahi dekha. Jo unhone kabhi experiance hi nahi kiya!"

there was lot of exitement sparkling on nups face, but to contary mayu had the puzzled look on his face.

"matlab?"

"matlab Mela"

"Mela?"

"haan Mela! Achha yeh batao tum kabhi Melemein gaya ho?"

"nahi to!"

"tabhi, tabhi tumhare chehre par koi khushi nahi hai jitni mere chehre par hai. Mele mein kitna maza aata hai, wahan kya kya hota hai yeh tumhe, in fact college mein shayad kisiko pata nahi hai."

"Wo to hai"

" to wahi na!!!!! Kuch alag ho jae is baar!"

Mayu just staired at her for a second.

" mayank kya dekh rahe ho?"

"pehle suna tha par ab dekh bhi liya"

"kya suna tha?"

"yeh ke, acchi sangat ka asar hota hai! par mera asar tum par itni jaldi hoga yeh pata nahi tha!"

saying this he started walking aways from nups. But nups stand there thinking of what he

was saying and fianly she got it,

"kya? tum kehna kya chahate ho?"

And run after him.

"kuch nahi nupur!"

"ruko abhi batati hoo"

n Tom-Jerry running started!

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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
A mela? wow! hope her idea gets selected! That'd be great 🥳
And i dont think i need to mention this because everyone knows that your MayUr scenes are always sooo brilliantly written! loved this one as well! 😆
keep it up! 👏 👍🏼
Hope this ff will be reallly lonnnnnnnnnng...you dont have plans of ending it sooon right?! Will be waiting for the next update!
Cant wait for the college festival and a whole lot of MayUr scenes! 😍

muaah! 🤗

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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
thnx ayesha!

well i will be writting till the mela fest!

after that the thing is this is my last year n got many things to do after dec!

so after dec i cnt acess net many times!

so will write uptill mela scenes!

nt thnx for mayur comment!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58

oh well on the bright side i still have the college fest to look forward too 😃

and best of luck with whatever you do....😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
Great going anwaya..liked the mela concept, it has a lot of potential..
Waiting for ur next update! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
thnx debby,
i too liked the mela concept!

hope u will lyk the actual mela scenes too!

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